Kaarvan - AA & RK romance...pg 92 & 93 - Page 42

@praggz... loved this part ... Gia is such a sweet friend 😳 ... loved the four types 👏 .. soooo true... 😆 ...
robbie's anday wala joke was hilarious... 😆 ... so Kasturi is totally determined to take up the challenge... love the turn the story is taking... brilliant dear.... do update soon

FAri

Dee I just wanted to tell you that I'm not going to be active for the next two weeks..I'm having my exams from Monday !
So I'm going to read all the parts when I come back and then comment !!
Love you loads 🤗 🤗

Sofia

awesome part dii 👏 👏 👏 lved it 😳
4 types of men 😲 was funny 🤣 nd true lolz 😆 dat loke cracked me up 🤣 🤣 🤣 lolz 😆 it was hillarious 🤣 🤣
i must say gia is a nyc frnd lolz 😆
waiting 4 nxt part 😉 😆

awsome parts..robbie abhi bhi nightmare aata hai..kasturi and robbie do ek dusre ko yyad karte hai..i like gia's updadesh..
this time you get too many gurudakshina 😉 ..

i likeMurga anda nahi deta..
waiting for next part..

hey Pppp di,
fantabulous part 🤗 i totally loved it. wen i came home, that i had feeling that u must have posted the part by now, so came online to check. i love the way u developed ur storyline. it was great. thank god there's someone in kasturi's life who has brain. 😆gia's plan was really gud. u know, this is wat i exactly wanted to happen, and i was thinking about it since i read the last part that kasturi kinda pretending that she's like over with the past and doesn't care about it anymore. and was gonna give u pm giving u new suggestion 😆 but then i thought i should just wait and see wat Ppp di has in her mind. since ur wayyyy smarter than me in writing the ff. so now robbie kinda runs after her, she have had enough now. it's his turn.and robbie ke baare mein sochte sochte kasturi lost weight 😕 so sad. did the idea of kasturi's family having her own jet come from the ambanis cuz they also have it in india that was in news or just had it from before. and really liked how robz was honest to kasturi about him traveling in plane. liked ur theory of type of men in this world. seems like u did phd in this field 😆 u know wat i mean by phd that u have experience. and i loved the last dialogue by kasturi about becoming mrs. sabharwal. 😉 know wat for some reason i don't like galz running after guys, i like wen guys run after galz. 😆 , which is pretty typical but then for change u had kastu running after robz and now i think it'll robz. that was brilliant thought. as i always say that ur hindi is really gud, which was evident in the first paragraph of this part. and u remember wat i told u about kasturi's dance, i was wondering wen that will it happen, seems like u will do it in this phase of ur story, u know for wat 😉 but if ur not then u don't have to. do everything the way u want. oh yeah Pp di, i wanted to say that why don't u change the font size when writing ff, has less affect on ur eyes. they have to work less to focus.

love
harman 😛

hiya pragalbha, okay after reading i took a break cause i was sooo on a high from reading your new part... that is a compliment by the way, your writing really moved me, made me die laughing took me to euphoria and back again... 👏

the 4 types of guys, were lol funny and bang on baby... and men say women are complicated,😕😆

and i too luv the hard shelled types who are warm on the inside, its gonna be awesome reading how kasturi breaks this hard but cute nut..sorry for the bad anaolgy.😳

I am enjoying pretty much all the characters in this fanfic, they are are weaving a niche into my heart..so hats off to you for your extremely talented way of writing..its very unique, and beautiful...

the JOKE was AWESOME!!!!! had me ROTF(god am i the only one having problems with posting emoticons) and the fact the male chicken was able to defy nature out of fear, i see the samething happeneing to robbie in a way, for he will have to conquer his nature of fear to face his true love,(i hope i got it right here).

Robbie's fear is soo understandable and justified, i hope kasturi can help him see the light of luv.. for that instant one realizes the love of another is truly a magical moment...wishing you all the best pragalbha keep it coming your on fire... girl

robina😃

oh pragz...ha ha ha...still lauging abt the joke...he he he....it was hilllllarious~!...n the four type of guys...hm...never really thot abt it dat way, but now i can actually fit all the ones i klnow into one category or the other!.... 😆 ......aww...n the title..i was like whaaat?...but then u explained it which was gud...coz im not gr8 @ hindi!... 😳 ....n kas is trying to stay away frm him...awww...dats sad...n cute...n uff...n robbie talling her the joke to ease her mind...cho cute...n u still think u can ignore ur feelings for her robbie??...ha ha ha...welll..brilliant part...hope u update soon n i c sparks flying frm both sides...ta for now...

luvvv
STAR ⭐️

Kay.....Thanks! 😃 Its lways these men who categorize us and I have wanted to do that to them for a long time! 😆 😆 Yep....things have started to work in her favor a little! 😉
And I agree the joke is too much, a friend had sent it to me long time ago! 😃

Sorry Mannu......tere pet dard ke liye 😆 😆 lekin waqai mei woh joke bahut he accha hai! Mere ek dost ne woh mujhe bheja tha, incidentally woh Mumbai mei hi rehta hai 😆 😆 😆
Tune sahi kahaa.........Gia jaisi dost toh honi hi chahiye!!! 😆 😆 Tu confuse ho gayi hai, meri FF mei Sia nahi Gia dost hai....star ke FF mei Sia dost hai! 😆 😆 😆
Actually, in this FF I am trying to concentrate on all the characters...not just RK. Phir story mazedaar hoti hai, aur zyaada der likh sakte hai.....Agar hamesha main couple peh hi concentrate karenge, toh phir boring lagtaa hai, isliye meine Gia ko yahaan ek important role diyaa hai!

Jima....Thanks a lot! Glad you were able to enjoy it! And thanks for taking the time to read it! 😊

Aah Krishi.....so you are going to implement this upadesh??? 😆 😆 Good Luck, dear!!! I have a lot of other advice too which I can pm you if you want!!! 😆 😆
Vikram-Betaal stories.......that was too funny!!! 😆 😆 😆 She is set out on a mission, lets see what she does! And thanks for explaining the term, Gyan-Upadesh.

Wajiha.....Krishi has explained it well, I will just add to it....it means giving Knowledge. Our teacher teaches us in school, right? She/He is giving knowledge to us and so he is giving Gyan Upadesh to us...and so Gia here is teaching/transferring her knowledge to Kasturi! 😊 Hope it is clear now.....

Originally posted by: pragalbha

Sorry Mannu......tere pet dard ke liye 😆 😆 lekin waqai mei woh joke bahut he accha hai! Mere ek dost ne woh mujhe bheja tha, incidentally woh Mumbai mei hi rehta hai 😆 😆 😆
Tune sahi kahaa.........Gia jaisi dost toh honi hi chahiye!!! 😆 😆 Tu confuse ho gayi hai, meri FF mei Sia nahi Gia dost hai....star ke FF mei Sia dost hai! 😆 😆 😆
Actually, in this FF I am trying to concentrate on all the characters...not just RK. Phir story mazedaar hoti hai, aur zyaada der likh sakte hai.....Agar hamesha main couple peh hi concentrate karenge, toh phir boring lagtaa hai, isliye meine Gia ko yahaan ek important role diyaa hai!

so sorry yaar ..confuse ho gayi naam meh 😆...cos tum toh janti ho na itne saare FF meh ..some time yaad nahi rehta

haan isliye toh mujhe tumhara FF bahut aacha lagta hai ..cos tum har characters ko ek saath rakhti ho 😳 ..aur haan hum long time tak read bhi kar sakte hai 😳

aacha ab yee bata ki next part kab post kar rahi hai ??..and jo tumne colour use kiya hai aaj type ke liye aacha lag raha hai wahi use karna 😳

Manpreet