Kaarvan - AA & RK romance...pg 92 & 93

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Krishi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#131

Oyyyyyeee ppppp, Sat night bhi khatham hone waala hai and u still didnt post the next part?😆

Wen u posting it??????????????😃

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pragalbha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#132

Rosy......Jangli billi!!! 😆 😆 She sure seems like that...but Robbie hai na to train her?? 😉 😆
Yes, you are also right in your guess! That is what part of the issue is!

Mannu and aksn : Thanks guys for the support!!! I will try to update more frequently but 2 FFs are a lot and then ghar ka kaam, office ka kaam!!! Ufff...
And then my brain needs time to come up with ideas too, right??? 😆

Krishi : Tu khaan chali gayee?? 😡 Tere comments kaa kab seh wait kar rahi thi!!!!

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pragalbha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#133

Re-cap : Robbie and Kasturi keep meeting at the bus stop. Everytime they meet, they end up in a quarrel!

PART - 6 : 5 AGAINST 1

The next day, which is a Thursday, Robbie is back at the bus stop and so is Kasturi! Robbie completely ignores Kasturi as he feels he had enough of her arrogance. But today, Kasturi is the one who walks up to him. Robbie is turned away from her and looking for his bus on the other side when he hears an 'Excuse me'. Robbie turns to see that girl standing next to him. He decides to mess with her a little and says
Robbie : You are excused! ( 😆 )
Kasturi looks at him surprised and again says "EX...CUSE ME" questioning his reply!
Robbie seizes the opportunity and says : Good start.....keep it going! 😉
Kasturi is infuriated and this time with a lot of attitude, questions : I am sorry??
Robbie says : You should be, after your behavior from yesterday!!!
Kasturi rolls her eyes and says : Kya bakwass hai? Mei aapseh sorry nahi keh rahi hun!!! 😡
Robbie replies back : Jaanta hun......But I figured that is the closest you will ever get to being sorry, isliye...chalo, maaf kar diyaa! 😃
Kasturi is mad and says angrily : Mei bas aapke paise lautaane aayi hun! 😡 Yeh leejiye!
And she extends a 100 rupees bill towards him. Robbie looks at the note and then looks at her and says
Robbie : Meine aapki madad kee thi, rupaye udhaar nahi diyaa tha, jo aap lautaane aa gayi!
Kasturi : Lekin mei usse madad nahi samajhti. Isliye isse le leejiye!
Robbie : Aap jaisa chahe waise samajhiye. Lekin mei ek baar madad ke roop mei diye paisen yaa shram, waapas nahi leta!
Kasturi makes a face and says sarcastically: Oh really?? Kis desh ke Rajkumaar hai aap??
Robbie replies with a smile : Jis desh ki aap prajaa hai! 😉 😆
Kasturi is furious and says : Mei bhi kisikaa 'ehsaan' apne sar peh nahi rakhti......specially money!!! Yeh aapko lenaa hoga! 😡
Robbie : Mei nahi loonga!
Kasturi : Lenaa hi hoga! 😡
Robbie : Nahi!!
Kasturi : Haan!! 😡
Robbie : NEVER! 😡
Kasturi : YOU HAVE TO!!! 😡
Suddenly they both realize that people have started to stare at them! They both shut up but are fuming!!! 😡 Finally Robbie clams down a little and says
Robbie : Theek hai. I have a solution for both of us.
Kasturi looks at him as if asking..."What is the solution?"
Robbie suddenly grabs her hand and forces her to walk with him! Kasturi is not sure what is going on and is trying to wriggle her arm out of his hand. He takes her to the side of the bus stop where an old beggar is sitting and begging. He bends down, pulling her with him and makes her drop the 100 rupee note in the beggar's bowl!! Then Robbie straightens up and leaving her hand says
Robbie : Jiski hum donon ki zaroorat nahi, usse lene ke liye iss duniyaa mei bahut se log hai, unfortunately!!
He looks at her for a moment and walks away. Kasturi stares after him very suprised! 😲 This has never happened to her. She turns to look at the beggar who is thanking her profusely and blessing her that may God fulfill all her wishes!! She had never given money to a beggar in her entire life. This was the first time!!! She slowly walks towards where Robbie is standing and stares at him. But Robbie does not pay her any attention. A few minutes pass and his bus arrives and he boards and leaves. He turns to look at her as the bus leaves. She has not boarded the bus. Instead, she was chatting with some guy who seemed to have approached her with some question.
Next day is Friday. Robbie gets a little delayed in reaching the bus stop. He reaches a little late and though he does not want to, he scans the crowd to see if she has left or is still present. She is present and she was chatting away with a guy......it was the same guy from yesterday!! Robbie thinks maybe he is a colleague or a friend. And then he thinks, why should I care? 😕 Its none of my concern! He stays as far away from them as possible but today it was Kasturi's turn to look at him! Every few minutes she checks up on him and she is thinking how come he does not look towards her today?? Is it because she is talking to someone else or is it because she was rude to him throughout?? She keeps wondering. Soon Robbie's bus arrives and he boards it. Kasturi and the guy are continuing to talk. As usual Robbie turns to look at her just as the bus is pulling out. But what is not usual is that, today Kasturi is looking at him too!!! For a couple of seconds their eyes meet 😳 and he thinks he saw her smile and then......Robbie is gone.
As Robbie is riding home, he can clearly hear the song blaring out of the mp3 player of the guy sharing a seat with him......

My life is brilliant. My love is pure.
I saw an angel. Of that I'm sure.
She smiled at me on the subway.
She was with another man.
But I won't lose no sleep on that,
'Cause I've got a plan.

You're beautiful. You're beautiful.
You're beautiful, it's true.
I saw your face in a crowded place,
And I don't know what to do,
'Cause I'll never be with you.

Yes, she caught my eye, As I walked on by.
She could see from my face that I was, Flying high,
And I don't think that I'll see her again,
But we shared a moment that will last till the end.

You're beautiful. You're beautiful.
You're beautiful, it's true.
I saw your face in a crowded place,
And I don't know what to do,
'Cause I'll never be with you.

You're beautiful. You're beautiful.
You're beautiful, it's true.
There must be an angel with a smile on her face,
When she thought up that I should be with you.
But it's time to face the truth,
I will never be with you.

(Guys, awesome song by James Blunt!! Here is the Youtube link to this song... You're beautiful ......Enjoy! 😃 )

The weekend arrives as it always does. On Sunday morning, Robbie is in deep slumber, sleeping on his stomach at an angle with one leg and one hand hanging down from the bed ( 😆 ) He is woken up by Shivani. He almost never remembers Shivani bothering him that early in the morning, it was usually Divya! He blinks at her......his eyes trying to gain focus. Finally in a few moments he is able to look at her and sees that she was looking very tensed and worried. Bells of concern star ringing in his head and he asks her in a coarse voice
Robbie : Kya baat hai Shivani?
Shivani says : Bhaiyaa....Bhaiyya, yeh aapne kya kiyaa??
Robbie does not understand and he says, clearing his throat : Kya matlab? Kya kiyaa meine? 😕
Shivani : Mujhse kyaa pooch rahe hai?? Aapko pataa nahi aapne kya kiyaa?
Robbie looks at her confused while she continues.....
Shivani : Aur aapne kaise soch liyaa ke hame pataa nahi chalegaa? 😲
He looks at her shock-stricken face and is utterly confused and he says to Shivani
Robbie : Paheli bujhaana band kar.....aur jaldi bataa, baat kya hai?
Shivani gets up and walks away from him and says
Shivani : Mujhe bataane mei hi sharm aa rahi hai, aur aapko aisa kaam karne mei sharm nahi aayi?? 😔
Robbie is at his wits end and is getting a little impatient too! He quickly gets up and reaches for his T-shirt that is lying on the nearby chair ( 😉 ). He wears it and swinging his feet onto the floor says a little loudly to Shivani
Robbie : Shivani! Bataayegi bhi kya hua hai???
Shivani blurts it out : Aapne kal Chitra seh shaadi kar li????
Robbie shakes his head vigorously to ensure that he heard her right and says : I am sorry...Kya???? 😲
Shivani looks very offended and she says : Aapko ek baar bhi maa aur bauji ka khyaal nahi aaya? 😒 Ke unpeh kya beetegi.....
Robbie cuts her sharply and says : WHOA WHOA WHOA!!!! Kya bakwass kar rahi ho? Mei, aur Chitra seh shaadi?????
He looks at her incredously and continues : What nonsense is this??? Aisi baat tum soch bhi kaise sakti ho??? 😲
Shivani looks at him and says angrily : Mei kaise soch sakti hun?? 😡 Meine kuch socha nahi hai....Khudh Chitra ne yeh baat hame bataayaa!
Robbie gets up shocked and says : Chitra ne????? 😲 😲 Yeh baat tumhe Chitra ne bataayi?
Shivani replies : HAAN!!! Sirf mujhe hi nahi, poore parivaar ko ussne yeh bataaya! Living room mei baithi hai apne suitcase ke saath!! Maang mei sindoor, gale mei mangalsutra aur zubaan par aapka naam!!! Keh rahi hai ke kal aap donon ne mandir mei shaadi kar li!!!
Robbie is livid with rage 😡 and cursing under his breath says : Itnaa badaa ilzaam mujh par??? Uss Chitra ki bacchi ko abhi dekh letaa hun!!!! 🤬
Robbie storms into the living room with Shivani in his tow, yelling...."Yeh sab jhoot hai!!!" His uncle, aunt, Divya and Alaana are sitting in the living room. Robbie stops in front of them and looks to see Chitra. There is no Chitra in the living room and all of them scream loudly....."APRIL FOOL!!!!!!
Robbie stares at them dumbfounded 😲 😲 and before long everbody is besides him, pulling his leg!!! Robbie stumbles to a chair and sits on it. Oh my God....they all had fooled him today!!! For 8 years he was the one who fooled them every single year and today all of them came together to take their revenge on him!!! He cannot help but smile!!! It was a brilliant plan and the best move was to send Shivani to him!!! 😃 If Divya had come to him, he would have guessed in a second!!! Shivani was never interested in bugging him but apparently this is one of those unexpected times when Shivani agreed with them!! And she had given a brilliant performance!!! All of them are laughing at his situation!!! 🤣 [:D/] 🤪 Finally Robbie also joins them in their fun and congratulates them!!! He had been so busy with his exams and with his busy schedule that it had completely slipped his mind that it was April 1st!!!
While the Sabharwals are thus enjoying themselves....at the Chawla residence....Kasturi's phone rings. After 8 rings she picks it up lazily in her sleep and says....."Hello?"
Gia says into the phone : Kas!!!! Kya hua?? You never called me??
Kasturi replies : Kal raat time nahi milaa, Gia!
Gia expectantly : Toh??? Toh kua hua? Did it work out??? What's the plan???
Kasturi : Oh yes!! Everything is fixed. He will be at the M.G.Road extension at 11.00 AM!
Gia says satisfied: Great!!! Thanks Kas!!!
Kasturi says : No problem dear! He is all yours! I have done my part in getting him to that place, baaki tu jaane tu kya karegi!! I have done my job and I am out of it! The rest is your call!!!
Gia says : OK!! Thanks again Kas! Mei baad mei baat karti hun! Bye!!
Kasturi also bids goodbye, switches off the phone and goes back to sleep.

Edited by pragalbha - 16 years ago

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Krishi

@knumnum

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Posted: 17 years ago

#134

Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Ppppppppppppppppp

Iam so sorryyyyyyyyyyy yaar... Iam really forgetting things off late and Iam really very sorry for the delayed reply😃....

Parts 4 and 5: Are u serious ki Kas hurt his toe but even then she didnt say sorry to him??? Upar se she said ki itni si chot to him???🤣🤣🤣 Aaaaawww my poor Robbieeee, I can imagine his plight of anger in this moment.....

Woooowwww Ppp, U built up a nice suspense around this guy and Kasturi. I kinda guessed ki she is trying to fix up some guy for her frnd Gia😆.... I really luved how u made Ronak as the sweet rich guy. I totally luv him in ur FF. He is soooooooooo classy and neat and values his f'ship with Robbie so much....

Iam not so much into liking Ajay. I guess he is going to be the much needed villain in RK story😆😆 Theek hai, No problemo... I trust u in uniting RK in this FF atleast😆

Y do I feel ki u ll fix Shivani with Ronak and Alaana with Ajay?😆😆 I wud definitely luv Ronak-Shiv and I wud want to see how u take Alaana-Ajay story if anything like this happens😃

Part 6:

Ahaaaaa, So madam Kasdidnt even say sorry now?? Stupid girl😆.. I luved how u made Robbie soooo witty in ur FF yaar... I luved the comic part initially😆😆😆

Aaaaaawwww, So Kas didnt give charity at all in her whole life... Iam sure this is first step for her to become Mrs. Robbie😳 and she sure is going to fall head over heels in luv with Robbie even before him😳 and Iam soooooooooo looking forward to it yaar😃

Iam luving the family bonding shown in Sabhawarwals family. They are soooooo cute and united and I luv how they adore Robbie to death😳😳😳

I feel ki something is surely going to happen today between RK... Soo keep it coming Ppppp, This is soooooooooooo much fun to read😳

Wen u gonna post next part???😆 Iam sooooo looking forward to see how u gonna make this attitude-arrogant-handsome-emotional-sensitive-lonely Robbie fall for Kas😳

P.S: Iam soooooooooooooooooooo sorrrry yaaar... We are really keeping u away from sleep and ur free times.. Please maaf karde for pressurizing u soooo much all the time😃

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aksn

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Posted: 17 years ago

#135

nice party..fighting in the busstop..kasturi likes robbie..aprilffool achacha tha..kya after kasturi helps her friend she going to busstop to see robbie..

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Zuzana

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Posted: 17 years ago

#136

This is fun yaar..I am loving their fights! I liked the way Robbie was pulling her leg😆! I liked the dialogue'
Kis desh ke Rajkumaar hai aap??😆 ' So she is slightly getting interested in him😳…I could feel the heat when she was looking at him ☺️!What a pair they make 😳. She is doing charity for the first time😲😆…she sure has to learn a lot from Robbie. Its opposite the show where they show as if kasturi is teaching him everything!😡

I am not too much into English songs but I liked this one yaar..and my son was advising me to buy James blunt album! 😆I cannot fathom still the Sabharwal family being so closely knit..it's a far far reality from the show. OMG so kasturi was helping her friend Gia😃..I am so relieved yaar….You still have to intro JP and kaush!😆

Pragz sorry yaar..I can understand how presurrising both the ffs must be. But this is so interesting that I cant help but ask you when will the next part come!😳

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PrInCeZz07

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Posted: 17 years ago

#137

WOWWWWWWW!!!
Another gr8 part, keep it up 👏

I lov this part how Robbie instead of taking the money gives it to the begger making Kasturi surprised & how now she starts looking at him. so sweet 😳 😳 😳

Wel April foolz huh. That was funny a was going to say this Chitra girl spreading rumours or something but really funny. 😆

So Kasturi was chatting to that guy for her m8. Now wonder what's going to happen.

Post the next part soon. 😳 😳 😳
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Rosy

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Posted: 17 years ago

#138

Wonderful part Pragz diii 👏 👏 👏 .

April fool was sooooo funny 😆 .I can imagine Ro's face at that time 😆 .

And Ro making Kastu give that money to beggar was so touching 😳 and them sharing a look soo romantic too 😳 .

Waiting for next part .There is no hurry . We knw u r very busy . But dii update as early as possible 😃 please .

Rosy

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pragalbha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#139

Krishi!!! Ajay and Alaana.....hmmmm I did not plan anyting for them, but now you suggest, I can think of something along those lines!! 😆 😆
You know, it is so easy for me to imagine Robbie in all those situations and his anger!!! That's why I am able to write it! And yes....Raunak is very classy!
Yes, I want her to be crazy about Robbie too! I am sure Mannu, Paddu and everyone else will also like that!!! 😆 😆
And you described Robbie very well!!!

aksn : Yeh toh dekhna hoga ke Kasturi aage kya karegi! Next part mei pataa chal jaayega!!

Paddu : Next part will introduce JP and Kaushi and a couple of others!! I wanted to keep the RK meeting series continous and not break it! Yes, there was heat between them in that busstop!!! 😳 Kas was helping a friend out....that's it!!!! 😃

Humaira : Thanks dear!!! You will come to knwo Chitra in the next part 😃

Rosy : I could totally imagine Robbie going crazy when they all pulled that fast one on him!!! 😆 😆
Thanks for liking the needy person situation! I just wanted to show him as a very sensitive person!!

Jima : 😆 😆 Was it really over that fast??? Thanks a lot for liking it!!! 😃 As for another FF, I write one more called Bhagya Rekha in the "Raja ki aayegi baraat' section. Do check it out if you can, but it is a completely different kinda story!!! 😃