MY FIRST FF on KASTURI

hi guy its my first ff hope u guys will like it.and the name is Piyarr ki Rahi

robbie= ro

kasturi=ka

raunak= ra

devika =devi,and many other characters

part 1

the story is like that that robbie starts loving kasturi but cant propose her

and there is no girish kasturi is working hard quietly and she also feels that she love robbie but she thinks that robbie is a bad guy like before

robbie is rehalsing and kasturi comes

ka;sir wih apki sighn chahiya thi in papers par.(she was discussing the file but robbie was lookingg at her and suddenly kasturi realise that he is looking at her )

ka;sir kiya huwa?

ro;nahiin kuch nahii tum kuch keh rahi thi

ka; sir wo apki sighn chahiya thi

ro;ok (he sighn the file without reading)

ka;sir ek bar check to kar litti

ro;there is no need to check i trust u

(kasturi goes back quietly)

and raunak comes in the room

ra;robbie kiya huwa?

ro;kuch nahii

ra;dek main tere bachpan ka dost hu mujhe achchi tarah paata hai ki tu kasturi si piyarr karta hai.tu to ussi batta kiyon nahiin deta

ro;kiya batao ki ROBBIE sabarwal piyaar karta hai ussi .main .taki woh mujhe chor kar chli ja,ai.nahiin ra yeh muj si nahiin hoga.wo yha har roz atti hai main us si milta ho yahi kaffi hai mere liye.sachchai bata kar main ussi kohna nahiin chahta

ra;aur tujhe lagta hai ki sach chupa kar tu ussi pa liga.Hai na?sachchai chupaai to wo tum si door hoja ai ggi aur aggar is dawran wo kissi aur ki hoga ai to(before ra finishes ro cuts him)

ro;issa mat keh tu janta hai na ki ussi kitna piya karta ho

ra;to ussi bata di

ro;mujhe thoda waqt chahiya

ra;raunak wents out without saying anything and puts a hand on ro shoulder)

IN SS MANSION

alaana;baby what should i wear forthe kittie party

nikhil;kuch bhi pihin loo na (thinking in his mind hey baghwan yeh kis jannam ka badla li raha mujh si jo mujje isi biwi di hai )

ala; kiya matlab kuch bi pihin loo

nik;achcha wo red wali pihin lo

ala;us main buhut moti lagongi

nik;(in his mind moti ,moti nahiin to kiya lagi gi )theek hai to blue pihin loo

ala ;thanks baby

IN CHAWLA HOUSE

jp;arri kasturi puttar agai tu

ka ;ji bauji

kaushalya;arri puttar ja kar fresh ho ja thaak gaai hogi main kana lagati hoo

ka;nahiin maa boohk nahhin hai

kaush ;kiyon beta kiya huwa tabiyat to theek hai tere?

ka; ji mmaa bass sar main thoda dard ho ra ha hai

kaush;tu arram karli main dawa,ai latti hoo

ka;ji maa

(actually kasturi is depressed after that call.)WHOSE CALL SUPENSE!

IN THE OFFICE

devi;i am really happy that robbie ka naya album itna hit raha.

manager;ji ma,am robbie sir ka to har album hit hota hai

devi;(giving a happy smile and wenr to her cabin)

IN CHAWLA HOUSE

kasturi is sitting in her bedroom and thinking about the call. and tannu came

tannu;kiya huwa didi ?

ka ;kuch nahiin

tannu;didi jab ap jhoot nahiin bhol sakti to kiyon bolti hai.main apko bachpan si janti hoo aur aap ni kabhi mujh si koi baat nahiin chupa ai to ajj kiyon.batao na didi

ka;wo us ka phone aya ta(with hesitation)

tannu;kis ka phone aya ta?

ka;woh uska(and tells tannu everything in silens)

tannu;dont worry didi woh kuch nahiin kar sakta

ka; mujhe buhut dar lag ra ha i tanu

tannu;darni ki koi baat nahhin hai sab theek ho ja ai ga aur ap kana ka liji ok warna ap ki tabiyat kharab hoja ai gi.

ka;theek hai

IN THE SS MANSION

robbie is still in thinking about kasturi and (say that kiyon jab tum paas hoti ho to kuch nahiin keh paata aur jab door hoti ho to buhut kuch kihna chata ho tumsi)😭and in backround music is playing ;{JIS pi hum mar mitti us ko patta bhi nahiin ,kiya gilla hum kari woh bewaffa bhi nahhin}

raunak i watching him from the window and(says kiya robbie katuri ki liya sahi hai kiya wo sach main kasturi i piyaar karta hai ya sirf badla lina chahta hai purani bato ka;

thats it for today hope u guy liked it plz send some GOOD comments plz

ok bye

NEHA

a gud start 👏 continue soon

plz dont take long i cant wait

www it was reallt good plz continue

very nice beganing 😳
continue soon hun 😃

Neha,

Once you posted your second part, I went searching for your first part to read it!! 😃

Great start!! I loved Nikhil's dialogs 😆. They seemed so natural!!!!
And I think that suspense is also very interesting.
I just wanted to make sure that I leave my comments for this part too!!!

hmm ...
luv da startin ...!!
u made robbie fall for KAs in da begining only ....cool...!! 😛

heyy peeople..can any1 please plz plzzzz tell me dat whch movie is dis song from,"madhoosh dil ki dhadkan"plzzz...i luv dis song veryy much...and i am sorry 2 talk off da topic but cudnt help it bcus i dunt know where 2 post if we have 2 ask somthing off the topic...and yea i wanted 2 ask dat is kasturi married in real life??n wht about raunak?? waiting 4 ur sweet reply...thanks buddies... luv ya all :) :)

Neha,

Post your second part in this thread so we all can read and comment.

Since you had posted it as a separate topic, the moderator has closed that thread. You are supposed to post it in this thread.

i wanna read the next part were is it whats it called?

hello guys
here is the next part and wanted to thanks pragalbha for guiding me

PART 2
next afternoon ka working in the office and ro enters
ro;hiiii..... kasturiii kiya huwa
ka;kuch nahii sir bas u hee
ro; kuch to hai agar tum batana nahii chahti to koi baat nahii
ka;nahii sir issi koi baat nahii woh bas sar main thoda dard hai
ro;kiya?tu tum office kiyon ayii
ka;nahii sir mamolly sa dard hai theek hojaiga
ro;likin....achcha yeh batao ki tum ni lunch kiya?
ka;bas abhi karni wali thi
ro; tum ni abhi thak lunch nahii kiya 3 baj rahi hai
waise lunch tu main ni bhi nahii kiya
ek kaam karti hai lunch ki liya bahir chalti hai
ka;nahii sir mujhe abhi buhut kaam hai
ro;kaam wamm ba,ad main kar lina
ka;nahii sir main nahii ja sakti
ro; kiyo per (foot) main bhi dard hai kiya
ka;smiles and says no sir woh actually(pointing at her lunch box)main kahna ghar si layi hoo
ro;oh!
ka;likin agar ap chahi to mere saat kahna kaa sakti hai
ro;not a bad idea
kasturi serves the lunch they start eating
ro;hhmmmm...delecois waise tumhari maid kahna achcha banati hai
ka;sir humari ghar maid nahii hai
ro;tu maa ni bana yi hogi
ka;no sir woh maine
ro;tumhi kahna banana bhi atta hai
ka;ji sir ladkiya to apni har kaam main mahir hoti hai
they both smile and eat the lunch and in bacround music plays
EK TEEKI TEEKI SI HOOF KARKARARI SI LADKI
MERE DILMAIN DIL MAIN JISSI BIJLI KARKI
THODI CHIHIKTI HAI WOH
THODI MEHEKTI HAI WOH
MUSKURA KI JAAL BICHTI HAI WOH

SOME WHERE IN DELHI
TANNU,VIIKAS,AREEV,AND DIVYA WENT OUT FOR PARTYINGAND VIK DECIDED THAT TODAY HE WILL PROPOE TANNU
AREEV;JANA VIKAS
DIVYA;HA JA NA ITNA DARTA KIYON HAI
VIK;AGAR US NI NA KAHA TO
areev;darpoohk kahi ka ja ab
vik;ha
vik went to tan and say tannu
vik;tannu
tan;ha vik bolo kiya baat hai
vik;tannu main tum si ek baat karna chahta hoo
tan;ha bollo
vik;tan woh woh aj mausam achcha ha na
tan ;tum muj si yeh kehna chahti ti
vik;nahii woh woh....(he was very nervous)woh.... ladki piyari hai na
tan;kiya
vik;nahii wo main tum si kehna chahta hoo ki i think i mean i ..ii ..i have a headache
tan;achcha main dawai lati hoo
(vik with him is saying bewaqoof ek ladki ko apni dil ki baat bhi nahii karsakta
vik;tannu roko
vik;tannu i.. ii.. i.. i love u
tannu is very shocked and surprise
vik;tumhara jawab kiya hai i promise main tumhai humesha khosh rakonga plz na mat kehna
tannu;smile and says ;ha vik i love u too
they both hug each other and smile
IN THE SS OFFICE
ka is busy in work and her phone ring she pick the phone and she ggot very shocked.

sWHO IS ON THE PHONE
if u want to know then wait till next part
i know it was a short part but i have some work to do now bye
NEHA

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