Am I in love???Updated on Pg:26 ;) - Page 18

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Posted: 18 years ago
thanks rakshu..tum point pe aake part khatam karti ho..
that's not fair...we have to wait for next part..
abhi jaldi se next part likh do..
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Posted: 18 years ago
Thanks once again to all the sweet and cute comments and emoticons thrown at me,,I treasure both 👏 as well as😡 and also's as the best copliments...😳

Part-18

Story So Far: Robbie comes to know that K's parents are fixing her marriage and he wants to get her out of that, but K wants to sacrifice her love for her parents and family...

R: Kasturi, are you coming or not???

K: Sir, koi aaye, isse pehle please aap yaha se jaayiye.

R: No way Kasturi...What is this nonsense...I am going to go to your dad right now

in the meanwhile someone from inside calls K...

Kasturi puttarrrr, jaldi se tyaar ho ja beta, wo log aate hee honge...

K shouts out..: Jeee, jee mein ready ho rahee hu...(her voice is very emotional)

R: tum tyar ho jao, lekin mere liye..kisi aur ke liye nahi..Hum aaj aur abhi shaadi kar lenge...

K: helpless...sighhh

R: (goes and hugs Kasturi again)Kasturi please tum ye zulm mat karna..tum 3 zindagiyo ko barbaad karoge, agar aisa kiya tho..Wo shaadi bhi kya hi, jisme pyar na ho...I can't live without you, and know very well that its the same with you as well..So why all this sacrifice...Your parents also would want you happiness only ultimately..Just lets go and tell them everything...

K: Nahi sir..Bohot late ho gaya hi...(she is also crying and not able to resist hugging back R and their hug is not the romantic types but the one between 2 soul mates who can't stand any distance between them)

R: (he holds her face in his hands and looks into her eyes)Look at you stupid, there is so much love in your eyes for me and you, you are talking about forgetting my love. you????How are we going to live Kasturi??If we have to die anyways, why don;t we die now itself???Kasturi, this is absurd my sweetheart..Your sacrifice doesn't make any sens..How do I convince you about that???Look into my eyes Kasturi..How are you going to ever be looking into anybody else's eyes in the same way???Kasturi, how am I going to live without you...

(by then both of them were crying bitterly)

They hear some movement outside K's room door, so they both hush down and Kasturi silently pleads Robbie to leave before someone comes there...

Robbie isn't willing to let go of her from his embrace, let alone leaving from there...

Robbie gets really emotionally carried away and starts kissing her all over her face and finally on her lips....At first Kasturi is taken aback with the move of Robbie but slowly she too gets completely taken in by that and both get lost in eachother and become really quite....

When they both were getting dangerously close, they get rudely awakened by the cell phone ring of Robbie...

Both of them get snapped out of their embrace and get really stunned by what they were going to do..Kasturi feels ashamed of herself, and feels that she was cheating her parents by doing that..

K: Sirr, chodiye mujhe..(pushes him away rudely)

R: (is also a bit shocked and embarrassed when he realized what was going to happen)Kasturi can you still say that you can live without me???This is not right my dear this is not right...

K: sir aap agar yaha se nahi gaye to mera mara hua muh dekhenge...(She throws in her trump card as a last move)

R: Kasturiiiii...he gets really hurt at that and turns away from her to leave..Kasturi...This is the last thing I want to tell you...You are probably thinking that I will let you go..but I am just leaving from here, not from your life..Just remember that...(And then he storms out of her room)

Kasturii breaks down as soon as Robbie left

I am soo sorry Sir, I am sorry to hurt you like this..I don;t know what is right, and what is wrong..But I know one thing, God is seeing from up there and he only help us now....😭😭😭

Robbie is driving back home and looks at the missed call that he just got and it was from Raunak...He is no mood to call him backk so he lets it be..

Raunak calls Robs again..This time Robbie takes the call

R: ha bol yaar..kya baat hi

Ra: yaar tu kaha hi...I was waiting for you, to give you a good news...Tu aaja na jaldi

R: hmm, sorry yaar..I have a couple of friends with me and it wuld be late before I come home..Tell me, what is it?

Ra: arre..theek hi, I will tell you only in person..But as soon as you come home, look for the note that I would have left for you in your room and reach that address...

R; alright...Main phone rakh raha hu

Ra: ise kya hua hi, achaanak...

Robbie goes home really late and straight away he goes to his room just to retire for the day, he forgets what Raunak told him in the evening...

Robbie enters his room and just collapses on the bed...And keeps reflecting on the things that happened with him in the last 48 hrs..He still can't believe how he got his first love and already on the verge of loosing it...He is mad at Kasturi and in the same breath, he is very sad also about her..Because he knows that she is only being driven by the sense of her duty towards her family...

Suddenly his phone rings again and its Raunak again..

R: Yaar, mein abhi aaya ghar pe..Tum log kaha ho???

Ra: yaar maine bola tha na, that I will leave a note for you..Have you checked it???

R: ha yaar..Abhi check karta hu..waise bolna, baat kya hi???

Ra: tu kyo itna maayoos lag raha hi??

R:kuch nahi..tu abhi phone rakh, I will check the note and listen, I may not be able to come yaar...I am kind of tired...

Ra: arre..how can you say that...😕

R: acha chalo, I am keeping the phone down...

Goshh ye Raunak bhi na, bas peeche hee pad jaata hi..🤢

He somehow drags himself to the table where the note was kept and opens it only to get shocked to at the contents of that note...

Its Kasturi's residential address that's written there....

Robbie is astounded to find Kasturi's address there..He quickly runs everything in his mind and puts 2 and 2 together and understands with whom Kasturi was going to get engaged....His heart breaks and he is very angry with Raunak for not even letting him know about it in advance...He realizes that Raunak had no clue about his love for Kasturi, and so he could not blame him also...He remembers how Raunak always said that without Robbie his happiness is never complete...So he decides to strengthen his heart and attend Raunak's engagement with Kasturi and take part in his happiness...For friendship sakes...

😭

End of Part-18


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Posted: 18 years ago
😲

Yeh kyaaaaaaa hai????? 😡

Tune Ronak ko aane diyaaa beech mein???😲 😲

😭 .. My Poor Robbie... Isnt it enuff tat he is suffering in the serial soo much becos RaKa... And u have satrted this here also 😡

Now, write the next part soooooooooooooooon and give us some gud news... Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Rakshuuuuuu 😆

Krishi
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Posted: 18 years ago
Rakshu awesome part 👏 👏 👏

I really love ur writing way 😳 👏 👏

i love this diol..Tum tayar ho jayo mere liye kisi aoor ke liye nahi kitna apna pan hai ismeh 😳

also love this scene kissing on the lips 😳 par yee phone ki bell hamesha kyo baj jati hai 😡
really yaar am fed up this phone

and raksha tum hamesha suspence par aa kar kyo end kar deti ho 😕
raunak and kasturi engagement 😕 but i thinks u give us a big surprise 😉

contineu plzzzzzzzzz

manpreet 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
Rakshuuuuuuuuuuuuu 😡 😡 😡......

I was having problem with Kasturi's sacrifing mode and you made Robbie take a 180 degree turn and follow Kasturi's path 😡....

Okay now you send your Robbie to my Robbie.... HE'll take care and teach him how to get his girl by hook or by crook.... Arre romance and acceptance ke liye saari zindagi padi hai 😉

I knew who the guy was.... yeh Raunak har jagah beech main kyun aata hai?? aur Kasturi ke ghar wale nahin sudherenge 😡 Rakshu I wanted you to construct a great wall of China between Ra and Ka until you get RK married.... but you let my poor baby on the other side 😡

Yeh Robbie bhi na 😭 😭 😭.... Khud itna lamba chawda bhashan Kasturi ko suna ke ab khud wohi karne chala hai.... *sniffing* Ra/Ka ki engagement bhi attend karne ja raha hai 🤢...

Hoping for some pleasant twist....

Continue soooooooooooooooooon

Sonia

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Posted: 18 years ago
awsome part..poor robbie...has too cry to..ronak ne tera kya bigada to uski kasturi se sath engagemnet...
aur ronak want to robbie & kasturi to gether...
waiting for next part..
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Posted: 18 years ago
i knew somthing like dis was gonna happen 😡
lovely part do continue soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz 😳
me cant wait u no 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
oyeee Raksha, tune bhi ekta ki mode pe chali gayi!! 😉
Haan, haan, pata hain ki tumne kuch bhu karke dono ko mila denge....tab tak humara kya haal hoga 😭 😭 😭 !

That was a brilliant move...and thanks atleast you gave them a kiss! 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
it must the plan to make thme confeess.
pls continue soon
davia
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Posted: 18 years ago
raksha 😡 😡 😡 main abhi aaoongi belan leke!
😭 😭 😭 yeah kya kardiaya tune 😭 😭
now dont tell me you will update the part in the weekend 😕

the part was good till the kissing scene 😳
what happened later 😭

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