~**hote hote pyar hogaya~~** RaKa Fan Fic - Page 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
#21
wow dat was awesum 👏 👏
continue soon 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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HEY GUYS! what's uppp i have a treat for all raunak kasturi fans made an amazing video with two beautiful songs so why wait treat urself with it but don't forget to comment i luv ur comments.. thanks again

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6NjvfiC0n-8
Edited by imane568 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#23
Yaar..I just read your whole ff and what can i say..its mindblowing!!How i wish all this could happen in the show too! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#24
what a gr8 FF, 👏 beautiful do continue 😳 😳
only Rakattas the best thing about it.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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SETTING: it's early morining in Raunak's house Kasturi is up for morning prayers she sees raunak asleep but decides to wake him up after the morning prayers since he was up late last night.. Kasturi is wearing a light blue sari with light zari/glitter on it.. she has the kangan which were given by raunak in her hand and simple jewelery on ..
KASTURi (whhile offering her prayers): Bhagwaan ajj app ney mujhay sab kuch diya hain bas aik aur cheez app say maagti hoon app mujhay iss pariwaar kay laik banadey.. yhaan per sub bahut achey mujhay app sab kay dillon main aik jaga dilwa dey.. maji babuji, bua, aur..aurr woh unkay dil main bhi.. app ney mujhay pati kay roop main aik aisa insaan diya hain jo mera dost pehlay aur pati baad mein hain.. mainey hameesha pp say kuch aisa hee maanga tha ... app ka bahut bahut shukriya...(she turns around and finds maaji standing behind her)
MAAJI: are beta.. tum apne bhagwaan say jo maanga hain woh tumhey bahut pehley he woh deechukay hum sabney apne dil main tunhari liye jaga banali hain aur tum kbahi yeh nahi soochna kay kya tum humarey laik ho ya nahi.. balkay kabhi kabhi toh lagta hain kay shayaad hum tumharey laiak nahi.. humarey ghar main to chand jaisey beti aii hain... bahu nahi
KASTURI: aur mainey bhi app ko apni maa jaisa shamja hain.. iss liye app ka arshidwaar laakay he meri shubha hogi ajj sey
BAUJI: ahem... yeh kya saas bahu main baatein chail rahi hain.. koi hameey bhi toh batai??
KASTURI: bauji.. hum toh yahi baat kar rahey thay kay kya p ko apna waada yaad hain.. ajj say kara peena parey gaa... appko uss din bahut pharatey khaithay naa..
BAUJI: Uffoh1 aik toh yeh tumhari ma bhi na na mujhay chain say jeenay deaygii na ... bas abb main kara shara nahi piyon ga putr.
KASTURI: aisay kaisey nahi piyay gay app.. app nay mujhsay waada kiya hain.. aur beti ko waada dey kar toortey nahi..
BAUJI: theek hain putr theek hain. main kara piyoon ga per yeh ajj raunak khaan hain usey office nahi jana
MAAJI: arye app ka laadla toh soraha hoga woh uski adat hain kay main hameesha usay uthati hoon...lakin ajj say yeh kaam kasturi ka.. akhir patni ahin uski jaa putr toh usay uthala...
KASTURI: jee main bas unki coffee lajati hoon
MAAJI: Arey wah tujhay kaisey pata kay woh coffe peta hain.. aur woh bhi shab say pehlay uth kar
BAUJI: arey raunak ki maa jab do loog aik bhandan mian badtey hain na toh phir aik doosrey ki psand napasand sab smajh jatey hain..
MAaJI: haan yeh toh hai
(kasturi was listened silently but smiled to herself and said)
"ABHI KITNEY SARICHOOTI CHOOTI BAATEIN HAIN JOO MUJHAY NAHI PATA LAKIN WAQT KAY SAATH SAB JAAN JAO GII...SUB KUCH RAUNAK KAY BAREY MAIN"
~~***kasturi enters her and raunak's bedroom... she find raunak on the couch still asleep goes towards him..."
KASTURI: suniye app uth jaiyeye office jaaney main late hogai gay warna...(she opens the curtains which led the sun shine in the room as well as raunaks eyes)
RAUNAK: ohh..HMMMM SUBHA hogaii itni jaldi..
KASTURI: Nahi toh itni jaldi toh anhi hui lakin haa ab apko jaldi karni parey gii kyunkay buji is already ready to go to office aur app toh abhi tak...
RAUNAK: oh no!! kya kehrahi ho tum.. uff kasturi tum meri maddad kao gii
KASTURI: jee kya hUA
RAUNAK:meri coffee muJHAY
KASTURI: jee yeh rahi appki coffe
RAUNAK: wow u r .. tum toh bahut achi hoon sab kuch janti hoon.. acha toh aik kaam aur karo mera suit wardrobe main hang hua hain.. nikaal doon main jaldi say shower leta hoon...
~~**RAUNAK RUNS IN THE BATHROOM TO GET READY WHILE KASTURI GOES TOWARDS HIS WARDROBE TO FETCH HIM HIS CLOTHES~~**
KASTURI(opens the wardrobe): Arey yhaan toh itney saarey suits hain konsa wala chiyay main poovh layti hoon (she knocks on the bathroom door and raunak says "kua hua" kasturi says "woh main kuansa wala suit nikaloon" Raunak says " apni pasand ka koi bhi")
KASTURI: JEE ACHA
RAUNAK GETS OUT OF THE BATHROOM AND SEES THAT HIS FAVORITE SUIT IS WAITING FOR HIM SO HE STARES AT IT
KASTURI: kya hua mainey kuch galat nikal diya lai main abhi aisey change kardoon
RAUNAK: nahi perfect perfect bilqual sahi nikala hain yeh tumen (he picks it up and goes to get change in to it but thinks how could she know that this suit was exactly what i wanted to wear "woh itni.. achi itni perfect kaisey hosakti hain")
RAUNAK COMES OUT BUT SEEMS CONFUSED HE IS SEARCHING FOR SOMETHING
kasturi: kkya DHOOND RAHEY HAIN APP?
raunak: nahi kuch nahi.. woh mera
KASTURI: Mobile yeh ligiyay
Raunak: arey wah .. thanks (but he gain lokks for something)
KASTURI: abb kya hua..
Raunak: nahi woh main
KASTURI: YEH RAHA WALLET AUR YEH RAHA APP KI watch.. aur kuch
RAUNAK: kasturi.. tum tum toh maha devi hoon tum toh bas main kya kahoon bahut achi hoon woah.. mera sab kuch jaisey tum jaati hoon.. khan say aii hoon tumm.. itni achi kyun hoon
KASTURI (shyly smiles): bas main aisey he hoon... aur
phir ap
~~~***RAUNAK WITHOUT SAYING ANYTHING CUTS HER OFF AND HUGS HER.. BECUZ HE FELT THAT HE COULD'NT EXPRESS HIS HAPPINESS IN JUST THANKS.. SO HE HUGS HER AND SOMEWHERE IN THE MIDDLE KASTURI TOO HUGS HIM BACK BUT THEN THEY BOTH REALIZE WHAT JUST HAPPENED SO THEY QUICKLY BACK OFF EACH OTHER~~~**
RAUNAK: acha toh phir main chalta hoon mera cell hain merey pass kuch baat ho toh phone karlena.. aur apna khayaal karna
KASTURI: jee theek hain app bhi apna khayaal karna..
~~*** kasturi watches raunak leave from the balcony window and raunaks sees kasturi in the rareview mirror of teh car he waves at her and she waves back~~~**
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awww.. what cute chapters!👏😊 i like the part where raunak observes kasturi & her eyes, lips & stuff like that. it is soo romantic!😛 and the part where raunak sees kasturi from his rearview & waves at her & she waves back.. heehee.. a very typical & cute husband & wife behaviour! really cute!😳😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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aww...thats sooo nice...i just hope they realize their feeling for each other in the real show! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Imane Amazing chapters i luuuuuuuuuuuved it d scenes in FF r awesom dey just set me in blushing mode ;d last scene was so cute 😳 ur FF & Raka rox !i really wish creatives include such scenes in serial.it wud b a treat 4 RaKa fans.
nt able 2 see videomixes som prob wid my pc .wil watch it later

one request imane venever u update d FF please mention it in ur FF's title lik updtd pg #..den one can easily knw d FF has being updated. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome chapter. 😊

love reading every scenes of raka. 😉

its just too cute love the part when raunak wants to express his joy and hugs her.

the bye scene was too good..kasturi on balcony and raunak looking at her in the rearview. 😳

waiting for next chapter..

good job... 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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'~~~** RAUNAK LEAVES AND KASTURI DECIDES TO GET A HOLD ON HOUSEHOLD CHORES... HELP MAA WITH KITCHEN AND STUFF... SO SHE GOES DOWNSTAIRS where she sees her mother in law in the kitchen ~~**
Kasturi: MAA ajj say kuch kaam merey.. main bhi khaana pakao gi app kay saath
MAA: arey nahi beta main hoon na sab shambhal loongi tum bas aisa karoo kay apney pati yaney maeray laadly betay ki zimadari layloo..
KASTURI: jee main kuch shamji nahi
MAAJI: abhi shamjahti hoon dekho baat yeh hain kay raunak ki pasand na pasand ab sab tumharey naam.. jaisey ranak ko luch main sirf ghar ka khaana pasand hain.. woh hameesha main usey tiffian bhejwati hoon office main ajj say yeh tumhara kaam ... aur diiner per woh aksar late hogata hainlakin merey bagair khana nahi khata per abb jab tum agai hoon toh tum he usey serve karna.. aur aik aur baat raunak apna pyaar dekhaney main tohra shy hain lakin woh jatana janta hain iss liye us ki kisi baat ka bura nahi maana... i hope u understand
KASTURI: maa apney mujhsay jo kuch kaha main sab karoongi bas jhan tohri confuse hogi app say madad maanglogi.. toh phir luch main kya bana hain app batadey main horida say keh kar bhejwadeti hoon
MAA: nahi beta horida ko toh maine kaam mein lagaya hua hain tum raunak ka tiffin bana kar lagao khud.. aur luch saath main he karlena.. aur office bhi dekh layna
~~~** KASTURI MAKES THE LUNCH FOR TWO WHICH INCLUDED RAUNAKS FAVS SUCH AS ALOO PURI.. FRUIT SALAD AND HOMEMADE FRESH JUICE SHE PACKS UP EVRYTHING GETS READY AND DRIVES TOWARDS RAUNAKS OFFICE...UPON ENTERING SHE GOES TOWARDS THE FRONT DESK AND ASK FOR RAUNAK AND RECEPTIONIST GUIDES HER TOWARDS RAUNAKS CABIN~~***
KASTURI (knocks on the door)
RAUNAK: maine kaha na main abi busy hoon shela... no calls no visitors
KASTURI THINKS MAYBE HE IS VERY BUSY SO IT'S BEST NOT TO DISTURB HIM... SO SHE DECIDES TO WAIT... FOR HIM TIME PASSES BY 12 TO 1 THEN 2 THEN 3 NOW IT'S 4 O CLOCK KASTURI IS HUNGRY SHE HAD'NT EATEN ANYTHING ALL DAY SO SHE WAS ABOUT GETS UP TO LEAVE BUT ALL OF A SUDDEN RAUNAK COMES OUT OF THE CABIN~~***
RAUNAK (surprised): Arey kasturi tum yhaan.. kaisey
KASTURI: woh main lunch lay kar aioithi maa ney bataya tha kay app bhar ka khana nahi kahtey iss liye
RAUNAK: toh tum 12 bajey say yhaan behti hon.. had karti hoon ander ajati main bhi na kaam main itna busy hogata hoon kay bas..
KASTURI: nahi koi baat nahi.. ap kuch pareshaan lag rahe thay main ,kuch help karo
~~*** BOTH ENTER RAUNAK'S CABIN AND HAVE A SEAT~~***
RAUNAK: nahi bas woh aik advertisement ki offer aii hain na ... toh staff may say koi bhi koi creative tagline nahi ba paya BAS AISI KAAM BHI BUSY THA
KASTURI: acha toh ad kiska bana na hain.. I MEAN product kya hain?
RAUNAK: aik juice drink hain... fresh kay naam say
KASTURI: acha... app yeh sab churiyay aur khana shuru kigiye..
RAUNAK HAS JUST STARTED EATING BUT THE PHONE RINGS AND HE IS NEEDED URGENTLY IN THE EMPLOYEES LOUNGE
RAUNAK: main abhi aya kasturi yeh file dey kar u just wait aur khana kahloo
KASATURI: JEE (RAUNAK LEAVES) HMMM JUICE DRINK kya tagline hosakti hain.. fresh.. zindagi ko refresh karey frsh kay saath... hmm yeh achi hain she takes a piece of paper writes it down puts it front of raunak's desk while he comes back... they both have lunch and raunak says " AJJ MAA NAY TOH kamal he kardiya lagta hain sab kuch kisi new recepie say banya it tastes amazing"
KASTURI decides notv tos ay anything about how she is the one who made his lunch... but smiles softly she wraps evrything up and says that she'll leave since it's late and that she'll see him at home.. after kasturi leaves raunak gets back to eork but notices the piece of paperr in front of him which has the tagline on it by kasturi.. he reads it says "wow1 yeh isney likhi hain... main toh file denay gaya tha tab toh yeh nahi thi.. zaroor kasturi ney.. yeh bhi na... kitni achi hain sab kaam khud hee karlaytey hain kisi aur ko bina batai.. phone rings.. "
RAUNAK: HELLO
MAA: hello raunak beta kasturei whaan hain kya.. ABHI TAK GHAR NAHI AII
RAUNAK: nahi maa woh abi abhi nikli hain actually main bahut busy tha iss liye lunch der se kiya toh.. woh bas puhuchti hogii.. maa waisey app ney lunch bahut acha banaya tha.. sab kuch bahut acka tha maza agaya
maa: maine lunch nahi banaya tha!
RAUNAK: kya toh phir kisne..?
MAAJI: kasturi nay banaya tha... ACHA main rakhti hoon tumse phir baaat karongii..bye
RAUNAK: bye maa(hangs up) kya l,unsh kasturi nay banya tha.. aur kuch kaha bhi nahi yeh larki toh waqi koi farishta hain... lakin bahut achi hain. . bahut pyaari.. yeh mujhay kya hone laga hain.. khaein main use.. mera matlab hain.. woh mujhay pasand to thi pehley say lakin abb shayad aik dost say zayada shayad main mujhay.. pyaar hain use...haan mujhay pyaar hone laga hain... use ki saadgi say uski massomiyat say uski.. har aik baat say~~~*** [:$] [:$] [LOL]

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