~**hote hote pyar hogaya~~** RaKa Fan Fic - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh how sweet!!!! great part...continue soon!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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~~~*** RAUNAK ENTERS THE OFFICE WITH A GREAT SMILE.. HIS CO-WORKERS GREET HIM GOOD MORNING HE WORKS IN FULL SWING WITHOUT NOTICING THE TIME.. AND ALL OF A SUDDEN IT'S 8:30pm ~~**
RAUNAK: Arey yeh kya time ka kuch pata he nahi chala sara din hogaya
MR Mehra (OFFICE ASST.):Lakin sir app to der tak kaam karnay kay used to hain.. toh phir ajj kyun
RAUNAK: Mr. mehra ajj say main der say kaam nahi karoonga akhir ab shaadi karli hain toh mera kuch waqt kisi aur ki amanat hain.. jaisey app ka kuch waqt Mrs. mehra ka hain
Mr. Mehra: Jee sir app theek kehrahey hain bas aik akhri sign chiyay then you may go.
Raunak: acha toh theek hain lai mujhay file dayde aur woh qoutation fax kardey.. thanks again
~~*** BY THE TIME RAUNAK FINISHED HIS WORK IT WAS ALREADY 8:30 AND HE WAS WORRIED THAT KASTURI WOULD BE MAD THAT FOR THE FIRST TIME SHE HAD ASKED HIM TO COME EARLY BUT OFFICE WORK KEPT HIM FROM DOING WHAT SHE HAD SAID... AND AT KASTURI'S HOUSE MAA AND BAUJI AND OTHER FAMILY MEMBERS WERE HAVING A BLAST JUST LIKE OLD TIMES... KASTURI'S SISTERS WERE TEASING HIM ABOUT RAUNAK AND HIS SHY WAYS...~~***
ANJU (KASTURI'S SIS # 1): Didi toh phir kaisey hain yeh jeejoo.. chupay rustam yeah phir mod apni family ki tarah
KASTURI: Arey anju yeh toh kya kehrahi hain parivaar wale toh sab
DHARA (Sis # 2): bas bas abb shuru mat hojana kay woh kitney achay hain.. app bhi na didi app toh kisi choor ya criminal main bhi achi cheez nazar agai gii..
TANISHA(youngest sis: UFF! tum loog bhi na didi isn't jeejoo soo hot i mena kya body hai aur looks amazing bilqual bollywood kay hero jaisee... hain na
KASTURI: ayee! BHAGWAN MERI BEHNOON KO KUCH AQAL DEY TUM SAB TOH MERAY PHEECHAY PAREY HOON.. MAIN TOH YHAAN SAY CHALI MAA KAY PASS... AIR TANISHA TUM APNI BOLLYWOOD KI FANTASIES BAND KARO AUR COLLAGE MAIN DIL LAGAO ... CHALO
ALL 3 OF THEM AT SAME TIME : AREY DIDI HUM TOH BAS.. YUNHII ...sharmai mat it's okay
KASTURI: ABHI BATAO MEIN YUNHI KI BACHI
~~** Kasturi picks up her sandal and runs after her sisters all over the house meanwhile raunak is headed towards the door and tanisha opens the door and kasturi has a bucket full of water which she plans to throw on tanisha but tanisha ducks and the water is thrown on RAUNAK by accident~~***
TANISHA: didi dekh yeh tu ney kya kiya...
Kasturi: WOH.. MAIN .. YEH KYA (WITH A VERY CONFUSED LOOK ON HER FACE)
Dhara: ahahhah!! didi mana kay app hygine freak hain lakin jeejo ghar ga kar naha leytay yeh kya.. app
bhi na..
ANJU: bas hogaya tum sab ka mazaaq arey jeejoo yeh ko app ki saliyaan hain bahut shetaan hain didi ko kab say cheer rahi thi yeh sab in ki galti hain didi humari bahut achi hain
RAUNAK: NO.. IT'S OKAY.. KOI BAAT NAHI MAIN
ANJU: koi baat didi app inhey apney kamrey main lay gai aur yeh bhiya ka kurta hain chage ka ley gay tab tak app jeejoo ka coat press kardey ga.. theek hain
KASTURI: haan theek hain app andar aii..
RAUNAK: yeh kuch flowers main laya tha lakin.. abb
YE
KASTURI: koi baat nahi mujhay deeayday bahut achay hain
~~** Kasturi and Raunak walk up to kasturi's room where it is decorated with girly stuff and some of kasturi's old pictures.. raunak is watching all of it with amazement~~**
RAUNAK: main abhi aya (he walks towards the bathroom but realizes he forgot the towel)
Raunak: ufho!! abb kya karoon towel toh bahir hi rehgaya.. shayad kasturi baher hain main kehta hoon aik min..
RAUAK: Kasturi.. umm woh main
KASTURI: KYA HUA SAB THEEK TOH HAIN NA
Raunak: haan main woh towel bahir bhool gaya
KASTURI acha main lati hoon app mujhay apna coat dee dain.. main press kar day te hoon.. yeh ligaye
~~** WHILE REACHING OUT FOR THE TOWEL RAUNAK ACCIDENTLY TOUCHES KASTURI'S HAND AND THEN WHEN HE WAS HANDING HER THE COAT THE WIND BLEW AND THE DOOR GOT OPEN LEAVING RAUNAK SHIRTLESS AND KASTURI WELL SHE WAS JUST SOO SHY AND FEELING AWKWARD... SHE STEPS FORWARD IN THE BATHROOM TO GRAB THE COAT BUT THE WIND CLOSES THE DOOR BEHIND HER AND SHE REALIZES THE DOOR KNOB IS BROKEN AND THEY ARE LOCKED INSIDE~~**
KASTURI: arey yeh kya hua.. darwaza band hogaya... hum yeh kya?
RAUNAK: (DEEPLY LOST IN KASTURI'S EYES)HAAN YEH WOH HUM KYA DARWAZA BAND HOGAY AHINA?
kasturi: jee woh meray bathroom ka darwaza kuch kharaab hain hum lock hogai hain..
RAUNAK: koi baat nahi abh kisi ko awaaz deylatey hain ahayad koi agai..?
KASTURI: sab neechay hain koi humari awaaz nahi sun payegaa..
RAUNAK: TOH PHIR INTEZAAR KARLEY TAY HAIN...
KASTURI: JEE ACHA
raunak: AACHEEE!!! (SNEEZES)
kasturi: AREY AP KO TOH SARDI LAG GAI HAIN.. MAIN AIK SECOND LAI MAIN APP KAY BAAL SUKHA DOON.. TOWEL DAY MUJHAY
raunak: nahi theek hoon main
KASTURI: Aisay kaisay theek hain app (she slowly take the towel away fom him) (and raunak is soo lost in kasturi and her beauty)
~~** WHILE DRYING RAUNAK'S HAIR KASTURI IS INCEHS AWAY FROM HIS ADORABLE FACE SAND RAUNAK JUST STARES AT HER AND
NOTICES HER BEAUTIFUL EYES HE ROSE LIKE LIPS HER CUTE NOSE... HER CHEEECKS AS SHE DRIES HIS HAIR HER MAGALSUTAR GETS STUCK TO HIS CHAIN wHILE tanisha HAS ENTERED KASTURI'S ROOM TO FIND OUT IF EVERYTHING IS ALRIGHT~~***


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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
awesome part! i just read ur ff and i love it! plz continue!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#14
Awsome, Please continue!!! I just read it and i liked it. it's so good. Keep it up!!!!!!!!!! šŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
#15
wow awesum ff šŸ‘
lookin realli gd
continue sooon 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#16
great part 😳 😳 do continue soon 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#17
Wow imane amazing FF šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘ just read all d 3 parts its very cute & i was blushing & blushing while reading it. it wud b such a treat 2 watch if dese scenes r incorporated in d serial.
com up wid next part ASAP.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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~~**** RAINAK AND KASTURI ARE BUSY IN THEIR CUTEST EYE LOCK WHILE TANU KNOCKS ON THE DOOR AND ASKS RAUNAK JEEJOO APNAY DIDI KO DEKHA HAIN.. KHAN HAIN WOH~~***
RAUNAK: OHH.. HAN MAIN AIK SECOND
kasturi: (whispering) abb kya karey main kaisey
RAUNAK: shhh! .. idea tum yhaan shower curtain kay peechay chup jao..
KASTURI: HAN.. yeh theek hain
~** while kasturi was going toward the curtain her mangalsutar which was stuck to raunak's chain pulled here back in raunak's arms and tanu's continues to knock so there is no time to untangle the chain and door is on the verge of opening~***
KASTURI: AHHH... AB KYA HOGa
RAUNAK:TUM.. MERAY PEECHAY CHUP JAO...
~~** RAUNAK GRABS KASTURI BY HER WAIST AND PULLS HER BEHIND HIM HIDING HER BEHIND HIS SOOO HOT BODY WHILE RAUNAK OPENS THE DOOR..~***
TANU:HEEHH!OH.. IAM SOO sorry app toh koi baat nahi main toh bas didi ko dhood rahi thi
RAUNAK: WHO PEECHAY HAIN...(HE BITES HIS TOUNGE AFTER SAYING THAT)
TANU: jeee.. kya..
RAUNAK: mera matlab hain kay woh neechay hain (kasturi laughs and thinks that inhey toh jhoot bolna bhi nahi ata
she felt soo secure in raunak's arms his tight grip it felt like she would never need anyone elses protection she was blushing)
TANU: ohh acha main neechay dektey hoon app ko kuch chiyay toh nahi hain...
RAUNAK: nahi main theek hoon.. thanks (TANU LEAVES AND RAUNAK CLOSES THE DOOR BEHIND HER)
~~~***RAUNAKS SLOWLY PULLS BACK KASTURI SO THAT SHE IS IN FORNT OF HIM BUT THE CHAIN AND THE MANGALSUTR IS STILL STUCK RAUNAK SLOWLY UNTANGLES THE CHAIN FROM HER MANGALSUTR WHILE KASTURI STARES AT HIM.. RAUNAK STILL HAS'NT TOOK HIS HAND OFF HER WAIST~~**
KASTURI: THANKS
raunak: AGAR MAIN AJJ TUM SAY KUCH MANGOO TOH DOOGIII?
KASTURI: JEE? LYA MATLAB
RAUNAK: NAHI BAS ITNA HE KEHNA HAIN KAY AJJ KAY BAAD APP MUJHAY KABHI SORRY YA THANKS YOU NAHI KEHNA
kasturi: jee SORRY ABB AISA NAHI HOHA
RAUNAK: PHIR SAY..
kasturi woh main... (she starts laughing and seeing her soo happy raunak too stars laughing)
KASTURI: ABB MAIN JAOO.. TANU MUJHAY DHOOND RAHI HOGII
RAUNAK: HAAN JAO...
KASTURI: app mujhay choorey gay tab na
RAUNAK: OHH SORRY
kasturi: phir se....
~~RAUNAKS SMILES LIGHTLY ANDS LETS GO OF HER WHILE SHE SHYLY RUNS FROM HIM. AFTER A WHILE RAUNAK AND KASTURI SITS FOR DINNER WITH KASTURI'S FAMILY~~**
RAUNAK: maaji app kay haat ka khaana bahut acha hain..
BABA: arey beta KYUN johotti tareef karrahey hoon
MA: APP bhi na putr meri tareef kar raha hain aur app ko to bas sikwa aur shikayat hee ka khayaal hain
BABA: acha aisi baat hain toh phir ajj raat sarey shikway shikayat door karo
MA: BAS BHI kejeyay.. bachoon kay saamney toh khayaal kar liya karely
~~***EVERYBODY STARS LAUGHING AND THEN KASTURI AND RAUNAK DECIDE TO TAKE A LEAVE~~**
RAUNAK: Acha baba, ma abb hum chaltey hain deer bahut ho chuki hain
MA BABA: THEK HAIN BETA CHALO BAHUT ACHA LAGA TUM LOOG AIII
~~~raunak and kasturi both take arsidwar from her parents and they leave~~~
NOW THEY ARE IN THEIR ROOM READY TO GO TO SLEEP
kasturi: main app say kuch kehna chati hoon
RaUNAK: kya?
KASTURI: woh ma nay app kay liye yeh taveez diya hain woh chati hain kay app yeh pehan lay hifazaat kay liye
RAUNAK: acha lain meray galey pehlay he yeh chain hain aur phir
KASTURI: koi baat nahi app yeh bazu per band lay..
RAUNAK: ACHA TOH PHIR YAAY LOON tum hi bando
~~***KASTURI TIES THE TAVEEZ AND RUNAKS THINKS THAT AS LONG AS U R WITH ME I DON'T THINK I NEED THIS TAVEEZ KYUNKAY TUMHI MERA THAFOOZ HOON.. THANKS KASTURI~~***
kasturi: yeh ligiye hogaya
RAUNAK: ITNI JALDI
kasturi: jee?
RAUNAK: NAHI kuch nahi raat bahut hogai hain tum soojao
~~**KASTURI SMILES AND GOES TO HER BED AND RAUNAK TO THE SOFA~~**
KASTURI thinking: ajj jo kuch hi hua woh shayad dosti say zayada par pyar say kam tha kuch aisa jo beech main hoon lakin raunak main jaan gai hoon kay app say behtar dost mujhay nahi mil sakta jise main apni dil ki baat bhi karsakti, apna thafooz bhi aur shayaad pyar bhi... shayad..(all of a sudden kasturi glances at raunak woh was shivering from the cold since he forgot to wear a blanket kasturi gets up and goes towards him and put the blanket on him... smiles softly and says good night raunak)
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Posted: 18 years ago
#19
guys thanks soo much for liking my FF i too enjoy writing it thanks if someone wants and has a better idea do continue where i left off but plz make raunak and kasturi center of attention it should be about them just them i am not saying don't use other characters but try focus on sweet relationship that they have we already have negative characters in kasturi the drama itself... so thanks again
Edited by imane568 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20
great track...i love this ff! continue soon pls! šŸ˜›

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