Maahi Ve...!!! part 17 updated - Page 46

gr8 part... im sooo glad u continued... and also dat all misundersandings r clear... cnt wait for the nxt ROKA part!!!!

OMG OMG...........Yeahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh 😃

Sonishhhhhhhhh 🤗 I cant tell you how much its good to see you come back with this,...........truly truly missed....... 😳

Aye ki kiitaa..... 😳 Actually I am more thrilled you did this than even the part 😆 😳

But what a part...Sonu, I am so glad the misunderstanings are cleared.....phew 😃 .....I really loved the dialogues you gave Anjali ...to the point and effective 👏 .....and apni Kastoo akhir mein line par aa hi gayi........

Achha ek main baat bata....mera Rockstar thik to haina....full form mein waapis aayega na 😳

Sonu........your my favorite writer and inspiration yaar.....for multiple reasons🤗

Love

JW 😳


PS: Kaun tujhe danda phek raha hai bol.....Wohipech tapka daalte hain....kya ..... 😉 😆

Hi Sonia dii.😃.Its Jaanu here.I was a regular reader of ur FF, ages before i landed here.Infact the firat thing i read from IF is ur FF..😃And from that day i became a fan of IF...But whn i landed here finally, i fond that u are nomore writing.. But now i am sooo happy dii u continued it after abt 1/2 an year..

Coming to the part 👏 this is for Puru, Anjali,And Raunak.... and 👏this is for Devu.Excellently written dii.All emotions, all feelings, everything was perfect..infact it was more interesting than the other part.So pls dii continue it😃

jaanu

gr8 ff...alot of emotions in it..mkes your emotion stirr..ur a good writer..cntinue wiz ur gr8 writing 😊

finally!!!!!!lolz 😆
devu nd puru dialouges were stunning 👏 OMG it was awesome 👏 da emotions were so beautifull 😉 now da misunderstanding is clear so dat means we can see roka romantic scenes 😉
continue soon 😳

Originally posted by: JWMRK

PS: Kaun tujhe danda phek raha hai bol.....Wohipech tapka daalte hain....kya ..... 😉 😆

Iam going to give her dandas, not one but many..... Why??? r u going to tapka dalofy me now????😉😆😆

Kyun Sonu, tu mujhe tapka daalogi kyaa???😆

Krishi

Originally posted by: knumnum

Iam going to give her dandas, not one but many..... Why??? r u going to tapka dalofy me now????😉😆😆

Kyun Sonu, tu mujhe tapka daalogi kyaa???😆

Krishi

Kishu yee kaun hai jo humhe tapka rahi hai ?🤓....keh de isse maine kaha hai sonu ko ..ki dande khayegi😉😆 ......aur kisi ki Majal nahi jo mere sur sonu ke beech aa sake 😉...

and Sonu tell me ..aggar teri Mannu di tujhe kuch kahegi toh tujhe uss baat se inkaar hai?😉

Manpreet

Hey Sonia!!

How was the looooooooooooooooong vacation??? 😉 😆 I swear the re-cap was a life saver 😆 😆

I loved the part.......every single emotion of every single character was beautifully shown!! I specially loved Puru's monologue and I could really picturize him!!! And to see him as such a strong man is a pleasure, I tell you!!!! 😆 😆

So Devika also started to repent??? I am very shocked!!! 😲
But I am glad the misunderstandings have cleared and seems like a romance is starting up between Raunak and Anjali!!! Would love to read that!

Well.....very good to see you back and since you are back, how about starting to post in the ED thread too???? 😆 😆

Wow.....I loved it!!!So beautifully their love story grew!!!Please update fast!!! 😊

ahh ...!!!
after such a long tyme ... 😆

asusual it waz rockin 👏 but cant wait more for next part ...!!! 😛