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Posted: 17 years ago
oh my god, i can't believe, i came back from india, and the story is still there. c'mon soniaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!! !!!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
i read in the last 2-3 pages that u're not well....but that was written on 7th dec....c'mon yaar kitna time lagaogi theek hone mein.......itna time to shahrukh ne 6 pack banane mein bhi nahi lagayein honge šŸ˜†

i cant wait cant wait cant wait cant wait cant wait........plzzzzzz continue soon yaar.....
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Posted: 17 years ago
Heyyy, jus caught up wid ur ff, it is absoluely amazin, only the last part made me upset, poor robbie n kasturi, n i wonder when robbie n kasturi will reunite n admit their love... cnt wait for u to cont!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
dear i am confuse this story is complete or not.



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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: rikzz

i read in the last 2-3 pages that u're not well....but that was written on 7th dec....c'mon yaar kitna time lagaogi theek hone mein.......itna time to shahrukh ne 6 pack banane mein bhi nahi lagayein honge šŸ˜†

i cant wait cant wait cant wait cant wait cant wait........plzzzzzz continue soon yaar.....

I am totally agreee with ušŸ˜† ,and sonia plzzzzzzzzzz continue sooonnnnnnnnn😭

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Posted: 17 years ago
im waiting from da last 134 dayzz ..
cum on yaar its been 134 dayz ..
n u styll havnt update it ..
i hope u didnt forge about it >>> did u ????
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Posted: 17 years ago

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im waiting from da last 134 dayzz ..
cum on yaar its been 134 dayz ..
n u styll havnt update it ..
i hope u didnt forge about it >>> did u ????

Hey dear and Everyone who waiting for update šŸ˜†..jo last part tha usmeh robbie ka accident huya tha ..mujhe lagta hai .sonu Wait kar rahi hai ki kab uske pran nikle aur main Update post karu 🤣

Aur ek good News aap logo ke liye hai ...ab sonu Part jaldi hi post karne wali hai 😳...lekin aapko utna hi wait karna hoga ..jitna aap sab kar chuke hai 🤣🤣🤣

Sonu Hurryup meri jaaaannnn ab bahut ho gayaaaaa...ab toh karde 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
Heelllooooo!!!! Okay okay kitne log khade hain joote dande haath main lekar meri khabar lene ke liye?? Maafi ki koi umeed hai?? Okay no more bak bak direct recap… a little elongated as I has posted the last part long back!

Recap: Kasturi goes to her parent's house to spend sometime with them on her b'day. Robbie is upset over the fact that Kasturi didn't wait for her and as usual Devika adds fuel to the fire. When Kasturi returns back home they have a small confrontation after which Robbie goes to Mumbai without telling her a word. Kasturi gets to know of the trip and is further shocked to know that Anjali has also accompanied him. Robbie's show is a big hit in Mumbai. Here in Delhi Devika and Alaana insults Kasturi. Kasturi decides to leave until Robbie returns. While packing her stuff Kasturi finds Divorce papers in her cupboard on which Robbie has already signed. Kasturi is shocked to find this out. She decides to talk to Robbie and asks Raunak to make necessary arrangements for her. Nandini is tensed and helpless. On the other hand Robbie tells Anjali everything who then tries to knock some sense into Robbie's head. They are in their friendly embrace when Kasturi reaches there and sees them. She immediately leaves for Delhi and then makes her way to Chawla house. Nandini and Raunak are trying to track Kasturi but to no avail. In the meanwhile Puru and Dushyant enter home and Puru takes the charge of the situation. He threatens Alaana and gets the entire truth out of her. There is again an argument between Devika and Puru. Raunak gets a call from Ajay to know whats wrong with Kasturi. The SS clan is relieved to know Kasturi is safe. Robbie enters the house and is devasted to know the doings of his Mom! He says he'll get Kasturi back and then both of them will leave the house for good. He reaches Kasturi's house but Kasturi refuses to listen to him. Dejected, he leaves and drives to nowhere and meets with an accident.

Part 17:

(Devika, Alaana and Nikhil in Devika's room... Devika is tensed while Alaana is complaining and Nikhil is standing in one corner)

Alaana: Mom dekha aapne Dad ne us Kasturi ki wajah se mujhse kiss tarah se baat ki… Mom Dad ne mujhe… mujhe ghar se nikalne ki baat ki… (realizing that she's not listening… shakes her a bit) MOM…. Kya soch rahi hain aap?? Kuch toh boliye….

Devika: Shut up Alaana! Is waqt mujhe Robbie ki fikar ho rahi hai… Yeh Purushottam bhi na… last moment par aakar mera saara khel bigad diya!

Nikhil: Aap sahi keh rahi hain Mom… ab sochna yeh hai ki Robbie ko is ghar main rukne ke liye convince kaise karenge!

Devika: Robbie ko yeh ghar chodkar nahin jaane doongi main… chahe mujhe kuch bhi kyun na karna pade. (Camera focuses on her determined face)

In Anjali's room:

(Anjali is packing all her stuff in the suitcase. Tears are flowing down on her cheeks. Raunak enters)
Raunak: Anjali yeh tum kya kar rahi ho?

Anjali: Please Raunak… yehi theek rahega…. Mere is ghar se chale jaane main hi sab ki bhalai hai…. So just let me go!

Raunak: Oh! Toh tum bhaagna chahti ho?

Anjali: Tum jo bhi samjho…

Raunak: Please Anjali kum se kum tum toh impulsive mat bano… Relax yourself first!

Anjali: (loosing her patience) Relax! How can I?? Raunak main yahan Robbie ki shaadi tootne ki wajah ban rahi hoon… Main jaanti hoon ki Robbie Kasturi se kitna pyar karta hai aur humesha yehi chaha hai ki Robbie aur Kasturi ke beech aur koi na aaye… lekin yahan toh main hi unke beech aa gayi… Please Raunak please (crying bitterly) jaane do mujhe…

(Raunak is not able to see Anjali in this condition… he somehow wants to take all her pain…. He just shuts his eyes to compose himself and then places a hand on Anjali's shoulder who is back facing him… she immediately turns around and hugs him… Raunak too protectively throws his hands around her back to save her from all the bad things in the world… just then his cell rings and both of them come out of the embrace… Anjali is a bit embarrassed while Raunak steals his gaze from her and receives the call)

Raunak: Raunak Singhania here... WHAT???... Oh My God!!! Kahan hai woh?? Main abhi aata hoon…. Haan main bas pohaunch raha hoon….

Anjali: (alarmed with Raunak's anxiety) Kya hua Raunak?? Sab theek hain na?? (Raunak just gives her a worried look) Please Raunak bolo na….

Raunak: Anjali mujhe abhi hospital jaana hoga….

Anjali: Hospital??

Raunak: (with a lot of effort) Robbie ka accident ho gaya hai….

Anjali: (shocked) Ac…ci….dent….

Raunak: Haan….. Main tumse baad main milta hoon… (saying this he rushes out of Anjali's room… Anjali follows him and they go downstairs… In the seating room Puru, Nandini and Dushyant are still sitting and discussing the day's events while waiting for Robbie to return… Raunak comes over to Puru) Uncle chaliye mere saath….

Nandini: Baat kya hai beta?? Tu itna pareshaan kyun lag raha hai??

Raunak: Maa Robbie ka accident ho gaya hai….

Devika: (who by then had also come there) What?? Robbie ka accident…. Kahan hai woh?? Yeh sab us Kasturi ki wajah se hua hai….

Puru: (restlessly) Shut up Devika! Raunak jaldi chalo beta….

(The entire clan leaves for the hospital)

At the hospital:

Doctors are bandaging Robbie's wounds. He's in ICU and nurses are constantly rushing in and outside the room… Sabarwal's and Singhania's enquire about Robbie from the reception desk and Raunak literally runs to the ICU… He barges into the ICU but then is shoved out but there is a lot of commotion and anxiety among the family. Doctor comes out…

Doctor: (sternly) Yeh kya kar rahe hain aap… yeh hospital hai and I expect you to maintain the decorum of this place.

Devika: Doctor Robbie kaisa hai??

Doctor: Dekhiye unhe sar per chot lagi hai…. Unki reports aane tak hum kuch nahin keh sakte… tab tak aap humme apna kaam karne dijiye. (He goes back inside)

Devika: (tensed) I think inse kuch nahin hone wala humme specialists ko bulana chahiye… Nikhil go and arrange for the best doctors in the town…

Puru: Devika doctors apna kaam theek tarike se kar rahen hain unhe karne do…. Sambhalo apne aap ko… yeh aag bhi tumhari lagai hui hai afterall!!

Devika: what rubbish! Main apne bete ka bura chahoongi…

Nandini: Bhabhi…. Bhaisahab please yeh waqt in baton ka nahin hai…is waqt humme Robbie ki fikar karni chahiye

By the time media has started buzzing around the hospital… despite various attempts by the guards to keep them at bay, they have found a route for themselves and made their way towards the ICU… They tried getting exclusives from the SS clan but none spoke a word… Raunak gives them a piece of his mind and soon the guards come there and provide them a cover….. Nandini is praying while Dushyant is giving support to Puru… Devika is pacing around and Raunak looks on…. Meanwhile Anjali gets up with a determined face and gets out from there… Raunak catches a sight of her and follows her….

Raunak: Anjali… Anjali… (catches up with her) ruko Anjali… kahan ja rahi ho??

Anjali: Robbie ki is halat ki zimmedar kahin na kahin main bhi hoon Raunak….

Raunak: Stop blaming yourself anjali… yeh tum bhi jaanti ho aur main bhi ki is main tumhari koi bhi galati nahin hai…..

Anjali: Nahin Raunak… main aisa nahin maanti… Robbie ki yeh halat Kasturi se door rehne ki wajah se hui hai aur undono ke door hone ki wajah main ban gayi… so ab main hi Robbie ko uska pyar uski Kasturi se milwaungi…. (Raunak looks at her) haan Raunak main Kasturi ko wapis lane ja rahi hoon….

Raunak: Main bhi tumhare saath chaloonga

Anjali: Nahin tum yahin ruko…

Raunak: Lekin Anjali… (before he could say a word she sits in an approaching cab and goes away) Anjali….

Chawla House

Chawala's are very tensed for Kasturi…. Despite of making various attempts Kaushalya has not been able to get to the root of the situation as Kasturi is not ready to speak a word about it. And as usual Alka doesn't leave this opportunity as well to taunt Kasturi and JP's family…

Alka: Dekh liya Bauji… aa gayi yeh musibat phir se humare sar par….

Beeji: ALKA… Kasturi is ghar ki beti hai… Musibat nahin!

Alka: Haan haan… bohut hi sanskaron wali beti hai aapki… pati ka ghar chod kea a gayi phir se yahan… arre main poochti hoon jab who Robbie yahan aaya tha toh kyun nahin gayi woh uske saath….

Kaushalya: Bas karo Alka… jaroor koi nok jhonk ho gayi hogi…

Alka: Wah bhabhi wah… job hi ho jaye aap Kasturi ki tarafdari karma kabhi nahin chodti… arre chotti moti si baat pe koi ghar chod ke aa jata hai kya? Arre yeh bade ghar ke log hote hi aise hain… maine toh pehle hi kaha tha ki Kasturi ka wahan basna mushkil hai.. lekin meri suntan hi kaun hai…

Bauji: oye bas kar… ghar main sab se badi musibat toh tu hai! Jab bhi bolti hai kadva hi bolti hai…

Alka: Kya….. main musibat.... haan…. Arre mujhse badi musibat toh aapki woh sanskaron wali Kasturi hai… jo…..

Ajay: (cutting her) Ma please… hum sab yahan Kasturi ke liye waise hi pareshaan hain aur aap… agar gharwalon ko dilassa nahin de sakti hain toh koi baat nahin lekin yun kadvi baatein karke sabki pareshaaniyan aur mat badaiye….

Alka: Ajay… tu bhi…. (Alka is about to answer Ajay when she's interrupted by the doorbell…. Tanu goes and opens the door to find Anjali…

Tanu: Arre aap… aaiye na… (Tanu gives her the passage to walk in)

Kaushalya: Tanu… kaun aaya hai??... arre Anjali (a little surprised to her) aao na puttar….

Kasturi is shocked to see Anjali standing in front of her eyes… She doesn't know how to react… she is hurt and sad and Anjali standing in front of her is all the more increasing her pain… she turns away to walk back upstairs but Anjali calls her….

Anjali: Kasturi…. (Kasturi though stops midway but doesn't turn back) I want to talk to you…

Kasturi: (still doesn't turn back) lekin mujhe nahin lagta ki ab mujhe aapki koi baat suune ki zaroort hai… aap ja sakti hain…

(all the members of her family are shocked to see Kasturi behaving so rudely to someone…)

Kaushalya: Kasturi puttar?? Yeh kya tarika hai baat karne ka?? (turning to Anjali) puttar aap bura nahin manna… Kasturi toh bas aise hi….

Kasturi: nahin maa… main jaanti hoon main kya keh rahi hoon… aur kyun?

Anjali: (cutting everyone) Kasturi plz… (desperately amidst tears) yeh waqt in baton ka nahin hai…. Main tumhe apne saath le jaane aayi hoon…

Kasturi: (a bit perplexed) lekin main kahin nahin jaana chahti… maine Robbie se bhi…

Anjali: (now crying… literally shouts) Robbie ka accident ho gaya hai!!!

(Everyone present is shocked…)

Kasturi: (blank… tryin to interpret wat Anjali has just mentioned… as Anjali's words get in her system she gets totally hyper) kya hua Robbie ko…. (comes in front of Anjali) bolo Anjali kya hua 'Mere' Robbie ko…..

Anjali: (crying) Uska accident ho gaya hai… aur woh serious hai… chalo Kasturi… jaldi chalo….

Kasturi: (tryin to hold herself) haan… (turns to look at her family…)

(Ajay and JP both come to her side… Chalo beta hum bhi chalte hain…)

Kaushalya: Lalaji main bhi chaloongi…

Bauji: Haan eh theek rahega… Ajay tum dono bachchiyon ke saath abhi jao… JP puttar tum dono taxi se chale jao….

(Ajay, Anjali and Kasturi leave for hospital…)

Alka: Bauji main bhi jaati hoon na JP bhaisahab aur Kaushalya bhabhi ke saath…
Bauji: Nahin… JP puttar tum dono nikalo aur phone karte rehna…. (they both leave as well… Bauji looks at Alka) koi mele main nahin gaye jo main bhi jaaongi… aspatal gaye hain… huh! (Alka makes a face)

Beeji: chal Tanu puttar… suniyeji main Tannu puttar ke saath gurudware jaa rahi hoon… babaji se Robbie ki lambi umar ke liye ardaas karane…

Bauji: bilkul theek kaha… chal main vi chalda haan… Babaji ki kripa se kuch nahin hoga humare Robbie nu… (so they leave as well)

(in the car… )

Ajay: lekin Anjali yeh accident hua kaise?

Anjali: yeh toh main bhi nahin jaanti bas itna pata hai ki woh bohut upset tha….

(Kasturi is crying….)

Ajay: Kasturi kyun fikar kar rahi hai… musibat aayi hai toh uska saamna toh karma hai na… tu fikar mat kar sab theek ho jayega….

(Kasturi is now repenting her rude behaviour with Robbie… she feels guilty and blames herself for his condition… Anjali looks at Kasturi and places a hand on her shoulder… Kasturi just looks at her and turns away…. In the mean time they reach the hospital and the trio runs inside… Anjali guides them and they reach the ICU… Everyone is present there… Puru and Nandini are relieved to see Kasturi… Nandini runs to her….)

Nandini: Kasturi beta achcha hua tum aa gayi….

Kasturi: Aunty Robbie kaise hain??

Nandini: Beta doctors usse examine kar rahe hain…

(Kasturi walks over to the ICU and looks inside thru the transparent glass window… Robbie is in bandages and doctors are chkin his nerves… one of them asks the nurse to get something soon… nurse nods and rushes out… Kasturi tries to speak to her but she rushes past… Kasturi feels a hand over her shoulder look back to see Raunak….)

Raunak: sab theek ho jayega Kasturi…

Devika: Yeh sab issi ki wajah se hua hai… kya zaroorat thi isse yahan lane ki? Mera beta aaj ICU main hai toh iski wajah se… (in tears) kya kaha tumne Robbie se jo aaj uska yeh haal hai?? Zaroor tumne usse kuch kaha hoga jisse woh bardaasht nahin kar paya… bolo kya kaha tumne mere bete… kyun jaan lena chahti ho mere bete ki?? Main pehle se hi jaanti thi ki tum kabhi Robbie ke liye theek nahin thi… lekin yeh nahin socha tha ki tumhare wajah se mere bete ki jaan par ban aayegi…
(Puru now looses all his patience and forcibly turns Devika to face him… His eyes are fiery red with anger… Devika looks at him and looses all her words… she has never seen Puru so angry…)

Puru: Ek lafz aur nahin Devika… ek shabd nahin! Yeh sab kuch jo ho raha hai na aaj iski zimedaar tum ho… (Pointing a finger at him) sirf tum! Shayad tum woh duniya ki pehli maa hogi Devika jisne aaj apne hi bete ko zindagi aur maut ke beech lakar khada kar diya hai… Na tum Robbie aur Kasturi ke beech uljhane badati aur na Robbie ka yeh haal hota…

(Kasturi who was quiet and cryin all this while now looks at Devika and Puru… trying to figure out what puru means by what he just said… )

Devika: Purushottam aap kehna kya chahte hain ki main apne bete ki dushman hoon…

Puru: Haan Devika… bilkul theek samjha tumne… tumne bachpan se Robbie ko apne haath ki katputli banana chaha… Robbie ko apni kamyabi ki seedhi banana chaha… kabhi yeh nahin poocha usse kya chahiye woh kya chahta hai… aur Robbie humesha apne khushiyan bhoolakar tumhari umeedon par khare utarne ki koshish karta raha… ek faisla usne apni marzi se kiya Kasturi se shaadi ka… lekin woh bhi tumhe raas nahin aaya… (Disappointment trickling in his every word) tumne jaan boojhkar Robbie aur Kasturi ke rishte main galatfehmiyan paida ki… apne lalach main tum itni andhi ho gayi ki tumne teen masoom zindaiyon ke saath khel khela… Robbie aur Kasturi ke beech Anjali ko lane ki koshish ki… Kasturi ke mann main shak ke beej boti rahi… (Kasturi is more than shocked at the revelation of the facts… she looks at Anjali… Anjali is crying and is sad… Kasturi now understands the entire thing and feel guilty… Guilty of mistrusting Robbie… guilty of hurting Anjali… guilty of disrespecting her own love towards Robbie by not believing him…) afsoos ki baat hai Devika ki ek maa ho kar tum apne bete ki khushi nahin jaan payi… tumhe Robbie aur Kasturi ka rishta sirf isiliye gavara nahin hua na kyunki is shaadi se tumhe koi fayda nahin hua… lekin Devika ek baar agar tum ek businesswoman ki jagah ek maa bankar dekhti toh tumhe ehsaas hota ki is shaadi ne tumhare bete ki zindagi ko kitne maayne diye hain… Robbie ki yeh halat Kasturi ne nahin tumne ki hai Devika… tumhari lalach aur tumhari zidd ka natija hai jo aaj humara beta ICU main hai… chehh (with disgust) tum aaj har gayi Devika… haar gayi tumm…

(Devika never expected that her plan of separating Robbie and Kasturi will land up Robbie here… she knew Robbie would be hurt but then thought would make a new start but today she was proven all wrong… she knew she was to blame to but was not able to accept but whn Puru said these things to her she knew he was right… he knew if it wudn't have been for her stubbornness and the desire to control Robbie all the time Robbie would have been fine today… It was her ego that was not allowing her to accept Kasturi and whatever she did will now never allow her to meet the eyes of her own son… she knew she failed… failed as a mother! She was shattered… and falls back on the chair… Nandini goes upto her and tries to clam her… By that time JP and Kaushalya has also come there and have seen and heard everything… they now understand the whole issue with Kasturi and gets very angry with Devika… Ajay is also disgusted with all that his sister has to go thru but whn he sees JP and Kaushalya he moves to their side to refrain JP from creating anymore scene in the hospital)

Dushayant: Kya kar raha hai purushottam… yeh kya waqt hai in baton ka… yeh baatein baad main bhi ho sakti hai…

Puru: Lekin Dushyant….

Dushyant: Purushottam please….

(just then the doctor comes out…. And everyone starts questioning him abt Robbie…)

Doctor: Dekhiye itna bada accident hua hai… ghaav bharne main waqt toh lagega…unki condition abhi stable hai aur unke pair main fracture hua hai… jo ek mahine ke andar theek ho jayege lekin unke sar par jo chot lagi hai uske bare main hum abhi kuch keh nahin sakte… uske liye humme unke hosh main aane tak ka intezar karna hoga…

Raunak: Lekin doctor usse hosh kab tak aayega….

Doctor: we'll hv to wait and watch… abhi main kuch nahin keh sakta…

(Everyone is quite tensed for Robbie… Kasturi slowly moves towards the door of ICU and peeps inside it… A tear drops from her eyes… she slowly moves out of all the commotion and enters the adjacent terrace and cries her heart out… Kaushalya runs to calm her daughter…)

Kaushalya: Bas kar beta bas kar….

Kasturi: Is sab main galati meri bhi hain maa… maine kabhi sach ko dekhne ki koshish hi nahin ki… jo doosron ko nazar aaya woh main nahin dekh payi… nahin dekh paayi Robbie ki aankhon main apne liye pyar ko…

Kaushalya: theek keh rahi hai puttar… apne rishte ko banana ya bigadna apne haath main hota hai… Galati sirf Devikaji ki nahin teri bhi hai… agar do log apne rishte main kissi teesre ko aane de na tab hi koi unke beech aa sakta hai… aaj Robbie tujhse baat karne aaya lekin tune us ki baat nahin suni na? (kasturi nods her head in no) is main galati kiski hai? Tune Robbie ko ek mauka nahin diya... ab rone se kya hoga Kasturi? Aur phir tune Anjali ko bhi galat theraya… hai na? (Kasturi lowers her eyes) puttar aaj jo hua woh tala ja sakta tha… khair jo hua ab usse ek sabak le… aur apni galati ko sudhar… ja kar Anjali se maafi maangle…. Puttar kabhi kabhi hum kissi se koi baat kehna chahte hain lekin nahin kehte dil hi main rakhte hain… aur phir aisa bhi waqt aata hai jab woh baat hi be maiyne ho jaati hai… apne rishte ko bemaiyne mat hone de… samajh rahi hai na main kya keh rahi hoon (Kasturi looks at Kaushalya and nods in affirmative)… Jaa puttar… waheguru sab theek karenge….

Kasturi: Maa Robbie theek ho jayenge na?

Kaushalya: Puttar mujhe yakeen hai ki Robbie ko kuch nahin hoga… kuch bhi nahin… dekhna usse jaldi hosh aa jayega… ab jaa…

Kasturi: (wipes her tears and leaves to meet Anjali… Anjali is standing at one corner in the lobby… Kasturi goes from behind and places a hand on her shoulder… Anjali looks back and gives kasturi a faint smile….)

Kasturi: Anjali main is layak toh nahin hoon… lekin kya tum mujhe maaf kar paogi?

Anjali: (her smile fades) Kasturi khel toh tumhare saath bhi hua… jaane anjaane main tumhare aur Robbie ke beech aa gayi… Maafi mujhe tumse maangni chahiye…

Kasturi: Nahin Anjali… aisa kehkar mujhe meri nazaro main aur mat girao…

Anjali: (holds Kasturi's hands in assurance) Jaane do Kasturi… bhool jao… jo baatein dil ko dukhaye unhe yaad rakhkar kya fayda?? Dost banogi meri? (puts her hand forward… Kasturi smiles and takes it… everyone sees it and are happy… Devika feels guilty as well) Ek baat kahoon Kasturi… Robbie tumse bohut pyar karta hai… aaj se nahin tum dono ki shaadi ke pehle se… (Kasturi gets another shock) Haan lekin usne kabhi kaha nahin… jaanti ho kyun… kyunki pehle jab usse apni feelings ka ehsaas hua tab tumhari shaadi Girish se honi wali thi… (Tears are falling down from Kasturi's eyes)

Raunak: Anjali theek keh rahi hai Kasturi… main jaanta tha ki Robbie tumse pyar karta hai lekin Robbie ne kabhi mujhe yeh baat tumhe batane nahin di… Woh tumhe yeh baat batakar tumhe kissi mushkil main nahin daalna chahta tha… aur doosri taraf apni aankhon ke saamne tumhe kissi aur ka hote bhi nahin dekh sakta tha isiliye usne faisla kiya ki woh concert ke bahane us din is shehar main hi nahin rahega… lekin jab usse Girish ki sachchai ka pata chali toh usne tumse shaadi karli kyunki tumhari shaadi ko rokne ka aur koi tareeka nahin tha uske paas…

Anjali: Haan Kasturi… shaadi ke baad bhi usne yeh baat tumhe nahin batai kyunki tab woh yeh nahin chahta tha ki kissi ehsaan ya rishte ke dabav main aakar uske pyar ko accept karo… woh chahta tha ki tum dil se is rishte ko accept karo aur tab woh apne pyar ka izhaar kare… lekin usse pehle hi yeh sab kuch… Kasturi Robbie tum se bohut pyar karta hai… nahin reh sakta woh tumhare begair…

(Tears are falling from Kasturi's eyes… just then the nurse comes out from ICU and calls…)

Nurse: Excuse me… (everyone gets attentive) yeh Kasturi kaun hai??

Kasturi: (goes upto the nurse) Ji main hoon Kasturi…

Nurse: Patient ko hosh aa raha hai… woh aap hi ka naam le rahe hain…. Achcha hoga ki aap unke paas baithiye… main doctor ko bula kar laati hoon….

(She goes from there… and Kasturi goes inside the ICU and sits beside Robbie… As she remembers the moments she had spent with Robbie and Raunak and Anjali's words tears keep rolling down on her face… )

Kasturi: Mujhe maaf kar dijiye Robbie… main toh kabhi soch bhi nahin sakti thi ki koi kissi se itna pyar bhi kar sakta hai… aur woh bhi mujhse… ek baar kaha toh hota… sirf ek baar… meri liye kitni takleef uthani padi aapko… (she holds Robbie's hand and softly kisses it…)

Robbie: (opens his eyes) Kasturi…. (As soon as his eyes fell on Kasturi a smile appears on his face… Kasturi too smiles looking at him but then he closes his eyes again and doctors come in and ask Kasturi to wait outside… Kasturi goes outside and a doctor examines Robbie… and comes out)

Doctor: there's good news for u all… Robbie ab bilkul theek hai…

End of part 17

Chalo ab fatafat batao ki kaisa hai…. I know ki compensate nahin hua but next part will be full of RK…

Sonia
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Posted: 17 years ago

Sonuuu Monnuuu Very niceeee Part dear 😳

I love yaar ..jis tarah tune sab ke expression Explain kiya šŸ‘...sab kuch essa lag raha tha ..jis tarah sach meh hota hai ..jab essa problem kisi ke ghar ho ...samaj rahi hai na main kya keh rahi hoon ?

Andd thank god tune iss part meh kasturi ko sachai se agga karwa diya ...aur robbie hosh meh aa gaya😳 ..nahi toh main teri bahut Pitayi karti šŸ˜”šŸ˜†....tu baal baal bach gayi šŸ˜‰

and u know sonu jab main pehle read karti thi na teri FF ..tab mujhe devika se bahut hate hoti thi ...lekin ab nahi huyi ...balki ab raunak se hate huyi šŸ˜† ..i think shayad yee isliye huya na ..cos hum hamesha characters ko dhyan meh rakh kar FF read karte hai šŸ˜†

and puru bhi ab man ban gaya šŸ˜†.....so dear ..very Well written šŸ‘..Best toh tu hai hi 😳..kehne ki Jaroorat nahi šŸ˜‰

and Tarif teri kya karu ...kaash tu mere samne hoti ..toh tu khud meri Eyes meh dekhti ..ki aaj teri FF read karke main kitni khush hoon 😳...kab se wait tha ...jo aaj khatam huya ..Loveee u šŸ¤—

So ab kab likhegi Next part ..kahi phir se & month wait toh nahi karne pardega šŸ˜†..and next part meh love secene dena .😳

aur haan dande tere maafff 😳

Manpreet

Edited by sahib29 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sahib29

am first šŸ˜† ..par dande toh tujhe jaroor pardenge šŸ˜‰

dande baad main pehle part toh read karošŸ˜†

Sonia

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