Maahi Ve...!!! part 17 updated - Page 16

Sonia its me sonali .changed my id .eagerly waitin 4 next part .update it as soon as u get time 😊

Originally posted by: white star

heyyyyyyyyyy sonia that was a really gr8 part 👏
omg da devil devika is back 😭
all da cute sence between rob/kas were so romantic 😆 😆 😆
man i love it how u write moti moti parts 😆 😆 😆
continue soon plzzzzzzzzzzzz 😃 😃 😃

Thank you so much white star.... So sorry to make you all wait for so long.... I'm happy to know that you are liking the RK scenes....

Updating the next part in few minutes... keep commenting!!!

Originally posted by: biotechboom

Sonia its me sonali .changed my id .eagerly waitin 4 next part .update it as soon as u get time 😊

Sonali.... dear putting up the next part in few minutes.... sorry to keep you waiting.... I hope you like this part too...

Sonia

Thank you so much everyone for lovely responses…. Here goes the next part completely dedicated to RK lovers!!!

Recap: Devika comes back and is shocked out of her wits to know about RK marriage…. Robbie promises Ajay and Kaushalya that he'll always keep Kasturi happy…. Kasturi is tensed about Devika so she goes to meet her while Robbie is chatting with Anjali… Devika accuses her of trapping Robbie and slaps her…. Robbie is very angry at Devika yet on Puru's advice goes back to console Kasturi…. RK spends some moments together and then Robbie puts Kasturi to sleep…. He goes to meet Devika and tells her that Kasturi means everything to him and he loves her….. Devika is stunned at this…… Raunak and anjali goes to pick her luggage from the hotel…. They send some friendly moments…. Kasturi doesn't feel comfortable in the presense of Anjali…. Meanwhile at the breakfast table Puru breaks the news of RK going to Mauritius…. Devika is angry but can't say anything…. Both RK are happy…..

Part 8:

Robbie is very happy and is softly humming to himself and enters his room and stops mid way looking at Kasturi…. Kasturi is standing on the stool and trying to remove the suitcase that's kept on the cupboard…. She is weaing a saree and her hair she has taken in front… She is tiptoeing to take the suitcase…. Robbie just leans against the door and keeps looking at her struggling…. He is smiling to himself…. After sometime he goes towards her…..

Robbie: Kya kar rahi ho Kasturi??

Kasturi: (startled to see Robbie there and steps down from the stool) woh… woh main…. (pointing at the suitcase) suitcase utarne ki koshish kar rahi thi…

(her excitement is quite visible and Robbie notices it and is happy too)

Robbie: Toh??

Kasturi: (making a cute face that is completely irresistible for Robbie) toh ye ki mera haath nahin pohounch raha hai na….

(Robbie finds this as a positive sign for their relationship and smiles at her and then goes and stands on the stool and removes the suitcase himself…. Kasturi smiles at him…. And takes the suitcase from him and thanks him and turns around…. But Robbie holds her hand… she looks at him and comes and stands in front of him…)

Kasturi: Ji… Kuch kehna tha aapko??

Robbie: (very slowly) haan….

Kasturi: Kya??

Robbie: Apni aankhen band karo??

Kasturi: (looks puzzled) ji??

Robbie: apni aankhen band karo…..

Kasturi closes her eyes…. She is standing in front of Robbie… Robbie holds her by her shoulders and leans on her…. Kasturi feels him close to herself and his breath on her face and gets nervous…. Her lips tremble…. Robbie just gives her a small peck on her cheek…. Kasturi shuts her eyes tight and her lips part…. Robbie smiles at her and then slowly moves away from her and leaves the room….. Kasturi slowly opens her eyes and finds Robbie has left the room already…. She touches her cheek trying to comprehend what had just happened… She's flabbergasted herself….

Kasturi: (to herself) yeh kya ho raha hai mujhe?? Aaj Robbie ka mere kareeb aane par kya ho gaya tha mujhe??

She brushes past all her thoughts and gets back to her work…. Robbie who was standing outside the room and gauzing at her reaction also feels happy and just goes away from there….. Kasturi is packing her and Robbie's stuff in the bag…..

Devika's room….

Devika: Aap yeh theek nahin kar rahen hain purushottam…

Puru: main achchi tarah se jaanta hoon ki main kya kar raha hoon…. Tum mujhe sikhane ki koshish mat karo…. Maine jo kiya apne bete ki khushi le liye kiya hai aur ek baat yaad rakhna mere bete aur bahu ki khushi ke beech main kissi ko aane nahin doonga…. Yeh baat samajh lena tum!!!

(He leaves the room leaving behind a fuming Devika)

Rk's room….

Kasturi is busy with her packing stuff when Anjali enters….

Anjali: Hey Kasturi…

Kasturi: Hi…

Anjali: Kya main tumhari kuch madat kar sakti hoon??

Kasturi: no thanks….

Anjali: arre thanx kis liye… hum dost hain na toh phir??

Kasturi: (to herself) Dost?? Ab maine is se dosti kab ki?? Kaise ladki hai??

Anjali: Kuch kaha tumne??

Kasturi: Nahin… Nahin toh….

Anjali: Lao main tumhari help karti hoon…. Waise Robbie kahan hain??

Kasturi: Woh bahar gaye hain….

Anjali: Oh k….

(Both of them finishes their packing together…. Now they both are sitting… Anjali is chattering non-stop about her family… her house…. Her friends…. But Kasturi is least interested….)

Anjali: Tumhe pata hain Kasturi mere dad, Puru uncle aur Dushant uncle have been very close friends…. Aur bachpan se hi hum teeno mera matlab hai main, Raunak aur Robbie has also been very close….(Kasturi's ears perk up at this…. Anjali and Robbie have been close… She doesn't like this at all) Tum ruko main tumhe hum teeno ki photos dikhati hoon….. (Anjali gets up and opens Robbie's closet…. Kasturi is stunned to see this…. She then removes an album from one of the drawers and gets it to Kasturi…. Kasturi is stunned to see the familiarity with which Anjali is touching Robbie's stuff…. Kasturi knew that Robbie doesn't like anybody going through his stuff but it seems Anjali knew each and every nook and corner of his room…. Soon Anjali comes with the album and starts showing her the album….. looking at the album anybody could say that Anjali and Robbie were indeed close…. Raunak was also there but Kasturi just can't see anything else except Robbie and Anjali….. She slightly felt her heart aching but ignored it and Anjali got a call) Excuse me Kasturi…. Papa ka phone hai…. I'll talk to you later…

(Anjali left but Kasturi was still sitting with the album placed on her lap… She was staring at the picture but was lost in her own thoughts…. Devika who was passing by their room stopped in tracks when she saw Anjali in RK's room…. Devika could see the insecurity in Kasturi's eyes and then the lost look when Anjali left the room…. She gave an evil smile and left the place when she saw Robbie coming…. Robbie entered the room and saw kasturi lost….)

Robbie: Kasturi…(nudging her) kya hua?? Kahan khoi hui ho?? (He sees the album in her hand and looks at the pictures… Kasturi by now is looking intently at Robbie trying to guaze his reactions….) Arre ye photographs….. Tumhe Anjali yeh pictures dikha rahi thi na?? Yeh Anjali bhi na… (He takes the album and looks the the picture getting nostalgic… He smiles and then keeps the album... and comes back to Kasturi…. ) Tumne bataya nahin tum kya soch rahi thi??

Kasturi: (upset…. She doesn't know what to say to Robbie…. She felt like asking Robbie about Anjali but then decide against it) kuch nahin… woh bas Maa-Bauji ki yaad aa rahi thi….

Robbie: Bas itni si baat…. Toh unhe phone karlo….

Kasturi: Hmm…

Robbie: Waise tumne packing kar lee??

Kasturi: Ji… Sab rakh liya hai….

Robbie: Thik hai toh ek kaam karte hain… mujhe thoda office main kaam hai… toh tum bhi apne ghar ho aao… tumhe achcha lagega….

(Robbie felt glad that he said that becoz as soon as he said he was rewarded with Kasturi's smile…)

Robbie: Main driver se kehta hoon….

(just then Raunak enters)

Raunak: Driver se kyun?? Main ussi taraf ja raha hoon…. Main tumhe chod doonga aur phir aate waqt pick bhi kar loonga….

Robbie: Thanx yaar….

(So Raunak drops Kasturi and she spends some time at her home… all the while she is chattering about Robbie….)

Navneet: Di aap jab se aayi hain tab se Robbie Robbie hi kiye ja rahi hain…

Kasturi: Navneet (sternly)…. Unhe naam se bulate sharam nahin aati… Jeeja ji hain woh tere….

Navneet: Theek hai theek hai… toh Di lagta hai aapko JEEJAJI kuch zyada hi pasand aa gaye hain… hai na Tanu??

(Kasturi gets shy and gives a glare to Navneet)

Tanu: Arre yaar main toh soch soch ke pagal ho rahi hoon…. Di apne honeymoon par ja rahi hain…. Woh bhi Mauritius aur woh bhi Robbie ke saath….. Lagta hai jaise koi fairytale ho….

(Navneet rolls her eyes… and Kasturi smiles…. Kaushalya gets some snacks which they all enjoy… then Raunak comes to pick Kasturi… Everybody blesses her and she leaves…. At night at Robbie's place everyone have their dinner.... Everyone bids them goodbye…. Devika also comes and wishes good luck to Robbie but doesn't speak at all to Kasturi….. RK leaves for the airport and Raunak goes to see them off…. Soon the formalities are finished and RK board their flight…..)

RK in flight:
(Kasturi is sitting in the flight for the first time and this is also the first time she is going so far from her parents… She is nervous and scared too…. Robbie sees this….)

Robbie: (placing his hand over hers….) Kya hua?

Kasturi: Woh pehli baar flight main travel kar rahi hoon na…. toh thoda darr lag raha hai….

Robbie: don't worry kuch nahin hoga…..

(Robbie smiles at her….. he sees that she hasn't even ties her seat belt so he bents towards her and leans closer to her…. Kasturi remembers what he did in the morning so she just lowers her gaze…. Robbie ties the seat belt and then sits back looking staright…. Kasturi realizes and feels like a fool for thinking anything of that sort…. She smiles but then the flight is about to take off and there is a sudden jerk…. Kasturi shuts her eyes and involuntarily holds Robbie's hand tightly…. Robbie at once looks at her….. She is looking really cute… Robbie places his other hand on her hand…. Kasturi looks up at him)

Robbie: Kasturi tum kabhi Mauritius gayi ho??

Kasturi: (looks at him as if u r crazy) Mauritius?? Robbie main toh kabhi Punjab se aage gayi hi nahin…. Aur usse bhi ab 3 saal ho chuke hain….Aur aap Mauritius ki baat kar rahen hai….

Robbie: Oh k…. Tanu aur Navneet bhi tumhare saath gaye the??

Kasturi: Haan…sabhi saath gaye the… Sab ke saath jane main hi toh maza aata hai… aur aapko pata hain tanu aur Navneet wahan jakar bhi din bhar jhagadte rehte the…. Ma toh un dono se pareshaan ho jaati thi….

(Kasturi continues her talks and Robbie is patiently listening to all her chatterings… He is smiling at her….At length Kasturi stops and turns at the window… she notices the plane is already in the air... she then looks at Robbie who's still looking at her and holding her hand in his…)

Kasturi: (smilingly) Thanx….

Robbie: Kis liye??

Kasturi: Aap jaante hain… kyun….

(Robbie just smiles at her and then looks straight and closes his eyes…. Kasturi is still looking at him… He is looking very cute and Kasturi feels a sudden urge to ruffle his hair and give him a small peck…. Robbie opens his eyes and looks at her… and asks her what with just his eyes… Kasturi snaps out from what she was just thinking and shakes her head…)

Kasturi: (blushes at her thought) ye kya soch ne lagi thi main…. (She then remembers the morning kiss and touches her cheeks with her hand and then smiles to herself…. She lightly hits her head and then closes her eyes too… as soon as she closes her eyes Robbie open his….. He looks at her and smiles too… Both of them fall asleep…. Kasturi stirs up a bit and tries to move but can't do that…. She gets up to find Robbie too close to her… While sleeping she drifted on Robbie's shoulder and now Robbie's head was resting over hers….. It was time for their landing and so the announcement was made… Robbie gets up too and at once sits straight…. Both of them feel awkward…. Just then an Air-Hostess walks upto them…)

Air hostess: Aap Robbie Sabarwal hain na??

Robbie: Aapko koi shaq hai??

Air Hostess: Nahin actually main aapki bohut badi fan hoon…. Recently aapki shaadi ki news sunni thi… If I'm not mistaken then she's the lucky girl….

Robbie: (throwing an arm around Kasturi proudly) She's my wife Kasturi….

Air Hostess: Ma'am you make a very cute pair….

Kasturi blushes and Robbie smiles and thanks her….. The flight lands and they step out in the Grand Bay city of Mauritius…. It's a beautiful city….. The organizers of the show comes to pick them up and they are escorted to the best hotel of the city… Hotel Royal Palm where Puru has booked an exquisite Honeymoon suite for them… Kasturi is completely awestruck by the beauty of the place….

Organizer: I hope ki aap apna stay enjoy karen…. Mr. Robbie aapki rehearsals ki arrangement humne karwa di hain….

Robbie: Thanks….

Organizer: Now I'll take my leave…. Aap dono aaram kijiye…. Have a nice day….

Robbie: You too…. (turning towards Kasturi and moves forward his hand to Kasturi) chalen…

Kasturi:(slowly placing her hand over his) Ji….

RK are escorted to their room….

End of Part 8

I know I know after so many days… this was a small part… but promise to continue soon…. Tab tak yeh batao ki yeh part kaisa raha….

Sonia

amazing update....loved the "peck scene" :)
am sure their stay in Mauritius is going to be action packed :)
really love the detail that you give to each scene...i can imagine the scenes as i read along...wonderful update

soniaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa 😡

ok, tumne pehle se kah diyaa ki yeh chota part hai.... so iam giving u maaafi 😆

It was such a cute scene darling... wen i was reading tat suitcase taking scene, i thought she will fall and he will hold her.... but then u wrote it different... iam so glad tat its just not a repetition of the classics... Wonderful at tat 👏 👏 👏

And Robbie giving a peck on her cheek.. haayeeee main marjaaavaaaa😍 😍 😍

And now y do i think u are going to land this Anjali in mauritius tooo 😆 ... chalo dekhte hai 😉 ... It was soo cute of Kas to actually feel jealous....

And Kas telling Navneet to call Robbie as Jeeju... wow 😍 😍 😍 ..... atleast we had this happiness in the serial wen Tanu called Robbie as jeeju😍 😍

Ok, now u know the drill.... continue soooon and hum apne comments tumhe aise hi dete rahenege.... Khush rahooo baalike 😆

Krishi

it was so sweet
kasturi is so lucky to have a hubby like robbie
i hope people like him are always in the world 😳
sonia don't you want a husband like robbie
just asking 😉

Dat was such a cute part, very sweet. 😃
Kasturi gettin jealous of anjali & Robbie keeping her busy talkin in the flight 😊 😊
I loved it and now i'm even more interested to kno wat happens nxt wif them.
Once again well done, beautifully written 👏 👏 👏
Cheers

sonia, wonderful part. some parts of this scenes made me blush too. 😳 please don't make us wait for so long. and write the next part soon. tumhare scenes itne acche hote hai ke i can't just wait.

👏 👏 👏

good job 😃 as usual it was amazing and sooo cute, keep writing i love ur story

Oh sonia i love you... 😳
thanks so much for giving us those cute romantic scenes between Rk...
keep up the great work...continue soon dear..!! 😳