Maahi Ve...!!! part 17 updated - Page 15

Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!
I like the pace of ur storyline and again u have nailed each and every character perfectly👏 👏 👏
I like the fact dat ur givin Kasturi time to fall in love wif Robbie and didn't rush it.
Eagerly waitin for the next part
Cheers 😃

all ur parts were superb. they made me laugh, blush, sad, just got all emotions out. loved all of them. and the dialogues are just amazing. specially what robbie said to his mom. i wish this happened in real serial too. i started reading ur scenes today. and read all of them. my mom got fed up because i'm sitting in front of the computer for so long. 😆 i'm ur new fan. 😃 and my name is harman. i just wanna tell that continue with your fanfics. i love them all. please continue. ur new fan will be waiting for them. 😛

Originally posted by: knumnum

ohhhhhhhhhhhh my goooodddddd Soniaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa....

I luved it... I totally luved it..... magar kya yaaar, Ab tak tu ne RK ko mauritius nahin bhejaaaa 😆 ... theek hai, its ok... ab is part itniiiii achchi thi ki main pray kar rahi thi ki yeh khatam hi naaa hoooo....

But it has ended😕....as they say na ki, all gud things come to an end...

So dear this part is wonderful👏👏👏.... at the beginning of this part, i was kinda angry at Kasturi [thinking abt the Kasturi's character in the serial nowadays]... So i wasnt giving importance to her... Lekin sonia, tumne thoooo mujhe phir se RK ki magic mein phasaaa diyaa yaaar😉😳... Toooo gud, And i liked all RK scenes, all Kasturi dialogues and Robbie Dialogues....

Man, how much i luv Ronak in ur Fanfic👏.. the perfect one which we dreamt before... I hope Robs clarifies to Kas abt his relation with Anjali in an intense scene 😳 ...

I have already started dreaming abt them in mauritius 😍

Continueee ssoooooon dear.... Ab rahaa nahin jaayegaaa 😭

Krishi

Thank you so much Krishi.... Even I'm in love with this Raunak in my ff😳.... I hope you like the further parts too....

Coming to them going to Mauritius... yes they'll be going there in the next part.... Away from Devika and Gang🤢..... had thot of setting them off in this part itself but then yehi itna lamba ho gaya....

Will try to continue tomm.... coz then otherwise I'm out of town on weekend.... Keep commenting....

Originally posted by: anjali10

anjali 😳😳, mere naam ki kaun hai ye ladki, jo robs ke saath hai 😆

Anjali zyada uddo mat.... She is just Robbie's friend!!! Well on second thots ye bhi kya kam hai... to be real good friends with both Robbie and Raunak😉.... Now Anjali aap ye batane ka kasht karengi ki aapko part kaisa laga??

Originally posted by: white star

😃 wow that was really a long part though u did made us wait really long but as it is said sabar ka pal meta hota hain ( 😳 thats for sure 😉 )i hope u dont let devika create any evil dhamka 🤢 🤢 🤢 ........ohhh cant wait for their honeymoon ...continue soon plzzzzzzzzzzzz

love benfsha 😃

Thank you so much dear.... So good to know that you are liking it.... Devika😡.... She'll play her dirty games but will end up bringing RK closer😉.... Till then I hope you enjoy their Mauritius trip.... Keep commenting!!!

Originally posted by: pop77

thanks sonia for awsomwe part..
waiting for maritus..i hope robbie can confess his feeling for her..

Thank you so much payal.... I hope you like the upcoming parts too.... Keep reading and keep commenting!!!

sonia, thanks dear, it was awesome,
i am just waiting for the trip and when R will tell his feeling to kastu.
all dialogues looks so good with characters that is in the serial
liked it where the kastu is much on the softer side 😃

Originally posted by: RK_fan111

That was an amazing long post! Thanks so much!! 🤗 I am so looking forward to their trip and please write fast cant wait for too long when we know that some intense and passionate scenes are coming up!! 😉

Thank you RK_fan.... So good to know that you are liking the story line... Will try to update soon.... Keep commenting!!!

Btw wats ur name??

Originally posted by: pragalbha

WOW!!! SOnia, totally awesome!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏
I LOVED it. Every bit. But I can't wait for them to go to Mauritius and have a romantic trip!!! It will be great there. Koi unke beech nahi rahegaa!!!!! I am dreaming!!!!!

Seriously, I can't wait for the next one.
Lambaa part, kahan lambaa tha??? Mujhe toh abhi bhi chotaa lag rahaa hai 😉

Thank you so much Pragalbha.... I know all of us are suffering from a same syndrome.... no matter how much are we fed RK we can't get over them... thats thereason I just can't get enuf of ur ff as well....

So glad to know that you are liking it.... Keep reading and keep commenting and keep updating ur ff too😉....

Originally posted by: Pretz

Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!
I like the pace of ur storyline and again u have nailed each and every character perfectly👏 👏 👏
I like the fact dat ur givin Kasturi time to fall in love wif Robbie and didn't rush it.
Eagerly waitin for the next part
Cheers 😃

Hi pretz.... So good to c ur comments..... Thanx dear..... I'm glad that you are liking the story and the characters too.... I hope you like all the further parts too.... Keep commenting!!!

Originally posted by: Herman_4u

all ur parts were superb. they made me laugh, blush, sad, just got all emotions out. loved all of them. and the dialogues are just amazing. specially what robbie said to his mom. i wish this happened in real serial too. i started reading ur scenes today. and read all of them. my mom got fed up because i'm sitting in front of the computer for so long. 😆 i'm ur new fan. 😃 and my name is harman. i just wanna tell that continue with your fanfics. i love them all. please continue. ur new fan will be waiting for them. 😛

Hermuuu,

So sweet of you to say all those things re.... I'm humbled😳..... I've just put what i wanted to happen... i'm so happy that you are liking it so much.... You know even my mom gets fed up of me coz i spent so many long hours on my pc..... thank ku🤗for appreciaiton.... Keep commenting!!!

Originally posted by: lwfw

sonia, thanks dear, it was awesome,
i am just waiting for the trip and when R will tell his feeling to kastu.
all dialogues looks so good with characters that is in the serial
liked it where the kastu is much on the softer side 😃

Thanx Shara.... I'm glad that you are liking it.... Even I love this Kasturi re... I just can't take Kasturi as a bhashan queen🤢.... I'm happy that you are liking the characters and the dialogues😃.... hope you keep liking them in the future too.... Keep commenting!!!

Sonia

wow ... fantastic just luvin it ..!!!
just how much much long u try to make ur update ... but it lukz too small 2 me ... 😳 wht a treat it waz on independence day ...!! 👏 keep up da work ...!!

great part 😊

sorry i m late . Sonia i Luvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvved it .brilliant part.
d moments btwn RK were mindblowing .just d gestures,luk explained everything no wrds were neeeded. Also i luved RA-R moments my Raunak 😳 is so happy in ur FF or else in serial 😭; i m just waitin 4 him 2 flash his killer smile.
⭐️

Originally posted by: robinblue91

wow ... fantastic just luvin it ..!!!
just how much much long u try to make ur update ... but it lukz too small 2 me ... 😳 wht a treat it waz on independence day ...!! 👏 keep up da work ...!!

Thank you so much Robinblue for your sweet comments.... I'm so glad that u r enjoying the story.... Keep reading and keep commenting!!!😃

Originally posted by: ramsha247

great part 😊

Thank you Ramsha..... Hope you like upcoming parts too... keep commenting!!!

Originally posted by: biotechboom

sorry i m late . Sonia i Luvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvved it .brilliant part.
d moments btwn RK were mindblowing .just d gestures,luk explained everything no wrds were neeeded. Also i luved RA-R moments my Raunak 😳 is so happy in ur FF or else in serial 😭; i m just waitin 4 him 2 flash his killer smile.
⭐️

Its fine dear.... I'm so glad that you are liking the storyline.... and all the three R/K/Ra and the scenes too.... Thanks you so much for ur rocking comments!!!

Sonia

heyyyyyyyyyy sonia that was a really gr8 part 👏
omg da devil devika is back 😭
all da cute sence between rob/kas were so romantic 😆 😆 😆
man i love it how u write moti moti parts 😆 😆 😆
continue soon plzzzzzzzzzzzz 😃 😃 😃