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Posted: 15 years ago
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I was working in my shop, when the phone rang.
"kasturi, can you please get it?" asked Emily from the front of the shop.
"Flowercorner, what can I do for you?" I asked polite.
"You can go out for dinner with me this saturday." I heard a male voice answer.
"Who is this?" I asked confused."
"You forgot me? Ouch, that hurt." he cried.
"Sameer? Is that you?" I asked unsure.
"Yepp, its me. So, do you go out with me?" he asked again.
"Well, this saturday? I dont know." I stuttered, right then Emily came back into the room and grabbed the receiver from me.
"Hello? This is Mrs. Brown, kasturis boss. Of cource shell go out with you. Fetch her by seven and she will be ready. Ok....bye."
I stood there shocked.
"But?"
"What? Naina already warned me, that this young man will call you and ask you out and I just safed you from wasting another chance. Everything is fixed. Rohan will stay with Naina and Nikhil, so you can just have fun."
I shook giggling my head.
"I see, I have no chance against you."
She nodded smiling.

"Mum, we have to go!" called Rohan excited.
"Uncle Nikhil promised me to play soccer with me." he added.
"Ok, ready. Lets go, I cant take the risk of you not playing soccer with uncle Nikhil."
We took the tube, as Naina and Nikhil lived in another part of the town.
"Its so great, that uncle Nikhil will play with me. Dont get me wrong mum. you and aunt naina are really good, but its just different." bubbled Rohan in the seat next to me. I just looked out of the window into the black tunnel, suddenly I saw a reflection that made me jump.
-Could it really be?- I thought, but Rohan pulled me out of my seat.
"Mum, we have to go. Come on."
We walked the few minutes to Nainas house and rang the bell.
"Where is my champ? Come on, I already built up the goals." said Nikhil, lifted Rohan up and carried him into the backyard.
"Come in. Ive made us some coffee." Naina came out of the kitchen and walked into the livingroom.

"Thats so good, I really need a coffee now." I fell on the couch and streched my legs under the table.
"Whats up? You look like youve seen a ghost."
"Nothing, Im just tired. Rohan has such bad nightmares at the moment, its like hes missing something."
"A father." said Naina without looking at me.
I shot her a look, as I thought she was joking, but she was absolutely serious.
"Perhaps you are right." now she shot me a suprised look.
"You have to know, in the tube I thought I saw a reflection in the window. It looked like robbie." I told her, but she only shrugged her shoulders.
"That couldnt be. He is in London."
"He is in London? Are you sure? I mean, Ive been to our favourite caf a few days ago and Tom told me, that he still comes there from time to time, but I thought he was joking." I said shocked.
"No, he just called Niklhil yesterday and asked to come over, but we had no time."
"Why is he here, Naina? Why now?" I asked.

FLASHBACK:
"Im so nervous." I said, but robbie just pressed my hand and smiled.
"Dont be, my parents will love me as much as I do." We walked up to the door and rang the bell.
"Ah, there you are. Come in, come in. Im Mr. sabarwaal and you must be kasturi. Nice to meet you." Said an older man with a bald and a moustache happy and hugged me tight.
"Nice to meet you too; Mr. sabarwaal." I smiled shy.
"Come into the livingroom and meet my wife, shes waiting for you."
The livingroom was big and really nice decorated. Mrs. sabarwaal sat on the couch, stiff like a stick and watched me up and down. She was really beautiful but her eyes were cold like ice and her lips were small and hard.
"Mum, this is kasturi my girlfriend." introduced robbie me.
"Nice to meet you, kasturi. Ive heard so much about you." she said in a high pitched voice.
"Nice to meet you too, Mrs. sabarwaal. You really have a beautiful home."
"Thank you. Sit down and tell me a bit about you." I hesitated to sit down, as this woman in front of me really scared me but robbie pushed me softly.
"so tell me abt ur family." she said cold.
"my parents died wen i was 16."
"oh Yes, robbie told us about your parents. Im really sorry for you." she said but I didnt believe her.
"robbie, could you please help me with something? Well be right back." said Mr. sabarwaal and led robbie out of the room.
It was so silent in the room that you only heard the ticking of the big wallclock.
"Ok, kasturi. I want to be honest to you. I dont like you." said Mrs. sabarwaal cold. I jumped in my seat.
"But why, we just met." I said suprised.
"That doesnt matter. The name sabarwaal is a really meaningfull name in London and I dont want it to be destroyed by a little slut like you. So here are 100 pounds. Take it and leave him." she said and gave me the money.
I was too shocked to say something, but then I breathed deep and shook my head.
"No Mrs. sabarwaal. I love your son and he loves me. You want me to leave him? never. nad Ill never take anything from you, especially no money. You may think Im a slut, but Im not. Im just a normal young woman that has found the love of her life." I said serious.
"How sweet, you really impress me. You are stronger than I thought. Ok, 500 pounds. And dont even dare to hope that robbie will marry you, hell marry a girl he knows from his childhood on. Her name is Sonya and her engagement with robbie has just been decided." she laughed mean.
The tears welled up in my eyes and my mind was racing.
"Does robbie know about this engagement?" I asked.
"My husband is just telling him about it... So, take the money and leave."
I grabbed my bag and ran out of the house without looking back.

I ran directly home and into my room.
"kasturi, what has happened?" asked Naina concerned as she saw me on the bed crying.
"Hes engaged to another girl. And his mother wanted to give me money to make sure I leave him." I cried.
"What?! What are you talking about?" asked Naina shocked.
I told her about the meeting and what Mrs. sabarwaal had told me.
"This old dragon, Im going to kill her." called Naina, but I held her back.
"No, Naina. Perhaps its better like that."
She shot me a sympathic look and hugged me tight.
"Im so sorry kasturi." she whispered.
I cried for hours, but suddenly I dried my tears and got up.
"Where are you going?" asked Naina alarmed.
"Im just going for a walk... and no, you dont have to come, I want to be alone for a bit." I answered the question she was about to ask.

I walked around without looking where I was. I just thought about robbie and how much I loved him and how I wanted to be with him.
Suddenly I recognized the park where he kissed me for the first time. I walked to the tree and touched tenderly the bark.
"I knew I would find you here." said a voice behind me, it was robbie
"Listen, Im so sorry for what my mother did to you. But let me tell you, that I wont marry this girl."
I smiled bitter and looked at him.
"And what do you want to do? Run away, break up with your parents?"
"I dont know. Ill talk to them and make it clear to them how much I love you." he sounded desperately.
"robbie...." suddenly it began to rain very strong and we were all wet within a few seconds. robbie grabbed my hand and pulled me to a near little empty house where we could hide from the rain.
Luckily it was open. Inside it was really old and dusty, but we found a few blankets. I trembled from the cold and even the two blankets that I had wrapped around me wouldnt help.
"Youre freezing, come here." he said and hugged me tight.
It felt so good to feel him so near, I could feel his heartbeat and I saw his chest rise and fall with every breath.
"Believe me kasturi, I love you." he whispered.
"I love you too, robbie." I answered and looked into his eyes. I knew he was absolutely true.
He lend down and kissed me, first shy, but then more longing.
I knew it was wrong what we did, but at that moment I didnt care. I love robbie with all my heart and I wanted to feel him as near as possible.
He slipped the shirt over my head and began to kiss my neck. I shivered under his touch which he missunderstood.
"Im sorry kasturi, I didnt want to push you." he said and let me go. I was a bit confused and didnt know what I should do.
"No, you didnt push me. I also want it." I said shy and looked at the ground.
robbie made me look at him and asked:
"Are you sure? If not..." but I cut him off with a kiss.
"Im sure, just be careful."
He lay me down on the blankets and I got lost in his tenderness
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Posted: 15 years ago
#32
chapter 7
PRESENT:
"I dont know why he is here, perhaps only for work." tried Naina to calm me down.
"Yes, I think you are right."
"When will Sameer fetch you?" she asked now to change the topic.
"At seven." I looked at my watch and jumped.
"Shit, Im late. Sorry Naina, I have to get ready." I called and left the house.

"Wow, you look amazing, kasturi said Sameer as I opened the door.
"Thank you, but you look also good." I smiled.
"These are for you." he handed me chocolates.
"I couldnt take flowers, as you are working in a flowershop."
"Thank you so much." I put them inside and grabbed my bag.
"Ok, lets go."
We went to a lovely little restaurant and I really had fun with Sameer. He was so charming, funny and just a great accompany.
"So, may I ask you for another date?" he asked as he walked me home.
"This date isnt even finished and you ask for another one?" I asked suprised.
"Sure, I mean befor anybody else askes you to got out..." I giggled.
"And? What about another date?" he asked with a puppy look on his face.
"This would be great." I answered turning red.
"Great!" he called, at this moment my mobile went off.
"Hello?" I asked
"kasturi? Thank god. Naina here. Rohan had an accident, were at the hospital, come fast!" called Naina and hung up.
"What has happened, kasturi. You are so pale." asked Sameer concerned.
"Rohan is at the hospital, I have to go there immediately." I said in shock.
"I just parked around the corner, Ill drive you. But who is Rohan?" He offered a bit confused.
"Thank you, Sameer." We ran to his car and drove off.
In the car I could think about nothing but Rohan, Naina had sounded really desperate.
"Please god, safe him." I whispered over and over again.
"Calm down, kasturi. Im sure hes ok, but who is Rohan?" he asked again.
I looked at him and thought if I should tell him or not, but then I decided to be honest.
"Rohan is my 4 year old son."
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Posted: 15 years ago
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YAAAAA.........again me first...HAT-TRIC...

wow three parts together...great treat.😛

part-5


sameer character sounds sweet and decent...kahi kasturi aur robbie kay beech mai tho nahi aayeh ga..😕

dieing to know five years back's story😛.

woooooooo....robbie said i love U😳...ummm...kasturi reciprocated him..koi mana thodi karsak tha hai robbie ko😛

what a kiss yaar...ufff...😳

NOooooo....robbie is married to another woman...no way😭

it souns so cute when they call rohan little man😛

part-6

"Flowercorner, what can I do for you?" I asked polite.
"You can go out for dinner with me this saturday." I heard a male voice answer....hahaha...punch dialogue 👏


love the way emily answered sameer and supported him.

what?????????? she saw robbie!!!!!!!!!

robbie's mom gave her 100 pounds and told her to go out😡...she is so mean just like devika in the serial.

hahahaha naina called robbie's mom as
old dragon...so true yaar

the cottage scene was very beautifully written.for sure you deserve 👏

part-7

kasturi's date with sameer was lovely.

what???????😲 😲 😲 rohan had an accident...hope he is safe

yaar all three parts are like roller coaster ride ...enjoyed reading every bit of it.

Edited by shumi. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: tamannamalik

@shumi- i dont knw y but i cant edit ur comment, when i post i get a msg sayin newbies r not permitted to post links Wofo...😔 ....well gettin back to ur wonderful comments...... thats really sweet of u to be first😊 kassh nd robbie would have been the coolest dad😊 yeah kasturi has wonderful friends😊 i knw they really r hotties😳 more flashbacks in future i promise😊 wow....😍since karan singh had no serial in hand at the moment, he accepted a role in my fic😊 so kind of you dear...😃Atleast neev and prachi can be happily be married in here😊 sure sure...robbie's return might take a while....no probs.. thank u soooooooooo much come on yaar...reading u r ff is my pleasure will update in a while😊 hahaha...caught the first place again...😛

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow just came here by chance only to see you have posted another 5 chapters 😲
All of them were great 👏
Love the group of friends and their bond
Loved the way Emily answered for Kasturi when Sameeer phoned
Aww hope Rohan is ok
Cant wait to read more
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey tammana......... welcome to kasturi forum.................🤗

gr8.. superbly written yaar.. part one was really gr8 dear n the very fist thing i should say..... thanks for bring my karan here........ awwwwwwwe it was so good to c him here....

rohan is really gr8 son.... i wish robbie was there to too with kasturi
one more question .. is there any riddhima here for Dr Armaan or it would be sameer n kasturi.......
thanks dear.. for this lovely story......

pm me next time when u update




Edited by ishwariya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: shumi.

reserved

YAAAAA.........again me first...HAT-TRIC...

wow three parts together...great treat.😛

part-5


sameer character sounds sweet and decent...kahi kasturi aur robbie kay beech mai tho nahi aayeh ga..😕 hmmm he s sweet 😊

dieing to know five years back's story😛. will soon post it

woooooooo....robbie said i love U😳...ummm...kasturi reciprocated him..koi mana thodi karsak tha hai robbie ko😛 nobody can resist him

what a kiss yaar...ufff...😳

NOooooo....robbie is married to another woman...no way😭 he had his reasons.....

it souns so cute when they call rohan little man😛 yeah😊

part-6

"Flowercorner, what can I do for you?" I asked polite.
"You can go out for dinner with me this saturday." I heard a male voice answer....hahaha...punch dialogue 👏 thank u for so much encouragement


love the way emily answered sameer and supported him. emily wants her to move on

what?????????? she saw robbie!!!!!!!!! yes he will be back sooon

robbie's mom gave her 100 pounds and told her to go out😡...she is so mean just like devika in the serial. she can never change

hahahaha naina called robbie's mom as
old dragon...so true yaar

the cottage scene was very beautifully written.for sure you deserve 👏 thank u

part-7

kasturi's date with sameer was lovely. sammer really likes her

what???????😲 😲 😲 rohan had an accident...hope he is safe hope so too

yaar all three parts are like roller coaster ride ...enjoyed reading every bit of it. thank u thank u for the beautiful words

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Posted: 15 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Aaliyah01

Wow just came here by chance only to see you have posted another 5 chapters 😲

i want to finish it soon😊
All of them were great 👏
thank u
Love the group of friends and their bond kasturi s lucky to have them😊
Loved the way Emily answered for Kasturi when Sameeer phoned she s always there for kasturi
Aww hope Rohan is ok he will be fine😊
Cant wait to read more

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Posted: 15 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: ishwariya

hey tammana......... welcome to kasturi forum.................🤗hey and thank u

gr8.. superbly written yaar.. part one was really gr8 dear thank u😊 n the very fist thing i should say..... thanks for bring my karan here........ awwwwwwwe it was so good to c him here....ur welcome i like him too😊

rohan is really gr8 son.... i wish robbie was there to too with kasturi he had his own reasons....
one more question .. is there any riddhima here for Dr Armaan or it would be sameer n kasturi....... oh m really sry but ther s no ridhima m so very sry...
thanks dear.. for this lovely story...... i should be thankin u for ur wonderful words and encouragement..... thank u sooo much😊

pm me next time when u update yeah will surely...




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Posted: 15 years ago
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chapter 8
Sameer hadnt even stopped the car and I jumped out and ran to the entrance of the hospital.
"Fast, Im searching for my son, his name is Rohan..." I called out of breath.
"kasturi!" called Nikhil and walked towards me.
"Nikhil. What has happened? Where is Rohan, is he alright?" I was desperate.
"Come kasturi, the doc wants to talk to you."
Sameer just arrived and went with us to the room where Rohan lay in.
"Mum!" he called sitting on the bed.
"Oh my god, Rohan. Are you ok, babe? Damn you scared me." I rushed to him and hugged him tight.
"Im ok, mum. Nothing serious, really. Please let me go, I cant breath." he answered.
I cried of relief and let him go.
The doctor came in. He was around 50 years old, with grey hair, blue eyes and glasses.
"Ah, you must be his mother?" he asked as he saw me, Naina followed him, I saw that she has been crying which made me nervous.
"Yes doctor. Im kasturi chawla, nice to meet you." I offered my hand and he shook it.
"Nice to meet you Mrs. kasturi. My name is Doctor Smith, can you come with me, please? I need to talk to you." he explained.
"Sure, but please...just a moment." I said and went over to Sameer.
"Thank you, Sameer. And Im really sorry..." but he just shook his head and smiled.
"Its ok, kasturi. May I call you?"
"But...ok." he smiled at Naina and Nikhil and turned to leave.
"Come on, champ. We look for some ice cream, while mum and aunt Naina talk to the doc." said Nikhil, shot me a look I couldnt point at and left with Rohan.

Doctor Smith brought us into his office and asked us to take a seat.
"Well Mrs. chawla. Your son came in here, because he lost conscious while playing soccer, but he luckily wasnt hurt." he explained.
I shot Naina a look and she just nodded and looked guilty at her hands.
"Doctor, the way you talk there must be something more. Please, be honest. What is it?" I begged.
He put down his glasses and sighed.
"The fact that he lost conscious is very alarming, as he is only 4 years old. So we decided and made a few tests..."
I cramped inside as I saw the expression on his face. Intuitively I grabbed Nainas hand.
"Im sorry Mrs. kasturi, but your son has leukemia."
It hit me like a bullet.
"No, that cant be." I whispered, the tears welling up in my eyes.
"Im really sorry. But your son is a fighter and he has good chances to get well, I mean..." but I didnt listen to him.
My mind was racing and everything was spinning. That couldnt be, not him, not my Rohan, my sunshine, my love, my life.
I already lost my parents and robbie, I just cant loose him also.
Naina still held my hand and pressed it soft, she was also crying.
"Naina, please tell me thats not true, it cant be." I looked pleading at her.
"Im sorry kasturi, but I cant." she whispered.
"I think its the best you go home now and let it settle...but not too long, we need to start with the treatments and find a person who can give your son the fitting marrow." said the doc.
I looked at him and nodded slowly.
"Yes, doctor. Thank you." He nodded and got up.
"Ok, Mrs. kasturi Ill se you. Bye." he led us to the door.
I still couldnt believe this, but I knew I had to be strong for Rohan. So I sighed deep, straightened my shoulders and wiped the tears away.
"Ok, lets go."

We found Nikhil and Rohan sitting on a bench, each eating an icecream.
The way they looked together was so cute that I could have started to cry again, but I held the tears in.
"Ok, we can go. Its late and young men like you should be in bed for hours."
I said cheerful and smiled at Rohan.
"But mum." he whined. Nikhil shot me and Naina a look as he could see that we have been crying.
"Later..." I whispered, he nodded.
"Ok, lets go champ. You will stay at ours your mum and you." he said and lifted him up.
In teh car we were really calm, Rohan had fallen asleep on my lap and I stroke tenderly his head.
When we arrived at their house, Nikhil carried him into my former room and lay him down on the bed. I gave him a kiss and put the blanket over him.
"Mum, can uncle Nikhil and me play soccer tomorrow again?" he asked sleepy.
"Sure, honey, sure. But now sleep, its really late." He nodded.
"I love you mum." The tears welled up in my eyes, again.
"I love you too, I love you too." I whispered and left the room.

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