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DISHA MAIR

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Posted: 16 years ago

#141

hey.......................this time i m the first one.the story is going really interesting and awesome.thanks for posting

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shumshad parveen

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Posted: 16 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: Harlowdqueen
hey.......................this time i m the first one. omg😃...so sweet of you.i was thinking to pm you.the story is going really interesting and awesome.thanks for liking .thanks for posting.mention not.i too enjoy while writing.so it was my pleasure too.😃

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missindia26

@missindia26

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Posted: 16 years ago

#143

Awesome part Shumi 👏
Oooh they were very awkward in the car 😕
Robbie's right this Kasturi's the only girl who's not fida over him 😳
But I understand why 😕
Poor Kasturi felt sorry for her when she realised she had to leave her house 😭
But Mera Pehla Pehla Pyar song was very cute, totally fitted with the situation, loved how he was playing with her bangles 😛
Aw again that meanie Robbie took the food 😆
Great update cant wait to see where the story goes next 😊

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swan20

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Posted: 16 years ago

#144

Shumi so sorry for the late response........was caught up in a few things for the past few days.....didn't get the chance to log on.....😭

awesome parts........all the wedding rituals were so beautifully described.....👏

there's such a stark contrast to what robbie & kasturi are feeling.........he is so happy that his dream has come true......and she poor thing is so sad & lost....😭.......i can understand how difficult it is for such a young girl to leave her home & settle somewhere else esp with a person she is not comfortable with............i liked how you showed robbie respecting & acknowledging the fact that kasturi is still very young & deciding to give her time.....👏

the last scene is interesting.......it clearly shows that robbie will have to work very hard to earn kasturi's trust & love......looking forward to reading how he does that.........i'm sure you are going to handle it very sensitively & maturely......😊

great going.......waiting for next part....😊

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meepha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#145

awwwww

Robbie is so janu janu

lub him

Update soon

n again thnx 4 da pm

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Jazz Rocks

@JasminBhasinFan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#146

Oh....Robbie is tooooooo sweet as usual! HE ROCKS!

Great part.........Please update soon!!!!!!

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Pepsi

@Savvy

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Posted: 16 years ago

#147

omg the song is so good...n as alwyz robbie rocks...😛

again robbie ate the food himself n didnt give to kasturi..😆

well the part is awesome n nw m eagerly waitin fr RoKa moments want to see hw kasturi behaves with robbie....😍

plz update soon..........😊

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Innocent02

@Innocent02

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Posted: 16 years ago

#148

awesome part
I wonder when Kasturi will start loving Robbie
I didn't listen to the song coz my net is very slow but I'll listen the song later.
that last scene was superb!
feeling sorry for KA coz she has to leave her house so early
shez just in college.......loved the scene when robbie was playing with her bangles and his hold was just................... no words !!!

I loved it completely.
great job👏

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shumshad parveen

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Posted: 16 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: missindia26
Awesome part Shumi 👏thanks dear
Oooh they were very awkward in the car 😕i know this awkwardness all the newly wedded face initially😳
Robbie's right this Kasturi's the only girl who's not fida over him 😳 yep,other all go ga ga with him😳
But I understand why 😕heeee...will be soon disclosed
Poor Kasturi felt sorry for her when she realised she had to leave her house 😭every single girls feels when she leave her house after marriage😭, look at me not only my house and family i left my mother land too😭
But Mera Pehla Pehla Pyar song was very cute, it was a lovely song.thanks for listening totally fitted with the situation,yep.that is y i selected that song😃 loved how he was playing with her bangles 😛cute na?
Aw again that meanie Robbie took the food 😆hahaha....i don't want my robbs to lose in front of a little girl😳
Great update cant wait to see where the story goes next 😊 wait for the next part😉