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Posted: 16 years ago
heyy TJ...that was super romantic😍...loved how kasturi sang robbies fav song...now he would demand her to sing lullaby for him every night i guess😆..hehe...he was so memerised by her voice...which was full of love for him
aahh..my michi..hehe...loved meher-preet too...too cute...
and woah! devika nearly knocked over my senses...she wass actually in tears?!!! 😲hailaa...am i dreamin or wat?! pinch me TJ...fasht fasht!! i hope that its like that....and wait a minute! is this ff goin to end?! everythin is gonna me like OKAY now...no tension at all...does that mean u are gonna end this?! dont end this so soon TJ...love this to the core!! want to see more of RoKa romancin☺️
fab update ya! continue soon🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: hmughal1

me first me first me first!!!! lol 😛 lol
my next dose of relief is here!!!! 😉😆 aw how lovely 😳
aww TJ i absolutely adored this part!!!!!!!!! 😛 too good man!!! 🤗 thanks Hinna 😃
hehehe the whole cake fing was so cute and funny!! 😛 lol 😆
robbie and kasturi arguing to have the cake of each other's choice jus adorable!! 😳 i know so cute, nah 😊
btw my fav cake is chocolate too dont yu fink me n robbie shud b a couple ☺️....that way there wont be any arguements as to which cake to have 😉 hahahaha a girl can dream! 😉 😆 lol Hinna that made me giggle of course of course 100% perfect match 😛 😉
and awwww kasturi singing chura liya hai.....shoo shweet 😳 lovely song 😊
i could picture all of it....this part seemed so realistic (all of yur parts do jus this one i felt was sumin more...had sum sort of spark ⭐️) i could imagine all of it happening!! wow thanks cool that you thought that 😊
aw a nice mother - son convo!! nice 2 see devika showing her motherly side!! 😊 yeah 😊 devika is now going to be lovely and positive for once
geez iv lyk almost written an essay lol 😆 good practice
cant wait 4 the upcoming functions!!!! 😛 me too there will be lots of detail 😉
fantastic part sweety!! 👏 thanks again
update soon!!! keen 2 read next part!! asap 😊
yu kno wha....i liked it soo much im gna go read it again 😉 aw Hinna you're too sweet lol 😳
Hinna xx

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: siya..

heyy TJ...that was super romantic😍..aw thanks 😊
.loved how kasturi sang robbies fav song...now he would demand her to sing lullaby for him every night i guess😆..hehe...he was so memerised by her voice...which was full of love for him ... aw Kasturi's so sweet btw idea not bad 😛 but Robbie is the pro...and I'm sure Kasturi would prefer that...and me too 😍
aahh..my michi..hehe...loved meher-preet too...too cute...lol glad you liked it 😉
and woah! devika nearly knocked over my senses...she wass actually in tears?!!! 😲hailaa...am i dreamin or wat?! pinch me TJ...fasht fasht!! lol 😆 😵 hehe it si true devika is now positive 😊
i hope that its like that....and wait a minute! is this ff goin to end?! everythin is gonna me like OKAY now...no tension at all...does that mean u are gonna end this?! dont end this so soon TJ...love this to the core!! want to see more of RoKa romancin☺️aw thnx siya well...there are a few more parts 4 sure after that i dunno im rly enjoying it being happy n problem-free but im running out of ideas...so may have 2 end soon...will see 😕
fab update ya! continue soon🤗 thanks for your lovely comment siya will do asap 😊

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Posted: 16 years ago

fantastic part😃😃 great going....... wish robbie had such friends in kasturi too and not friends who waited for an opportunity to marry kasturi.... waiting for their wedding..... pls update sooon....

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: nehaaa nawab

fantastic part😃😃 great going....... thanks 😛

wish robbie had such friends in kasturi too and not friends who waited for an opportunity to marry kasturi.... lol neha too true 🤢

waiting for their wedding..... pls update sooon.... cool will do 😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey everyone
Thanks for your sweet comments
Heres the next part
Tell me what you thought
P.S. Sorry if its hard to read my computer's formatting is going crazy
Love TJ xx


Chapter 24 - Yeh bandhan toh pyaar ka bandhan hai


Her skirt, full, pink and silken, swished as she turned so Prachi could tie the stings of her cream blouse, heavily embroidered with gold thread. Meher folded the dupatta and draped it over Kasturi's right shoulder, pulling the loose end behind her back and pinning it to the front of the skirt, creating a crescent shape at the side. Gauri adjusted the veil, raising it above her face. Mahi fastened the heavy and elaborate "kundan" necklace; Divya arranged the red and white plastic "choodiyaan" onto her wrists, followed by the heavy gold "kangana". Mahi hooked the "sehr" from each "jhumka" into her hair; Gauri gently clipped in her "nakni". Ragini dabbed a small amount of red lipstick on her lips, and smudged shimmering eyeshadow over her eyelids. Prachi placed a shiny bindi in the centre of her forehead, painting a row of red and white dots at each side. Finally she was ready. The six girls crowded round her, "ooh"ing and "aah"ing and "haai"ing and "waah"ing.
"Kitni soondar lagrahi ho, Kasturi. Sach mein," observed Meher appreciatively.
Kasturi smiled, glancing in the mirror. Her smile faded as she remembered. Raunak. The others became concerned as Kasturi's expression dimmed. Prachi realised the problem. She hugged Kasturi and gently reassured her:
"Chinta mat Kasturi. Ab woh bura saaya hamesha ke liye tumhari zindagi se chale gaya hain. Tum bas sapne dekho, Robbie ke saath ki. Chalo, smile. Aaj finally woh din aagaya jiski khwaish har larki ko hoti hain. Shaadi, uski sapno ka rajkumar ke saath. Aur hum sab ki dua hain ke hamari rajkumari hamesha khush rahengi."

Kasturi smiled, her distress slightly assuaged. They enveloped her in a circle of warm hugs, comfort and sisterly love.
***
Robbie was looking equally striking. His "sherwani" was of cream brocade, patterned with gilt "zaari" work and decorated with rows of maroon beading. Clean shaven, with his hair fluffed up, his face was radiant with excitement.
"Waah Robbie, tum toh pehle se bhi zyaada handsome lagrahe ho," whistled Milind.

"Sach mein, mujhe toh yakeen hi nahi ho raha hain ke hamara "rockstar" shaadi kar raha hain," marveled Preet.
"Dehr se, magar pyaar to ki. Aur pyar ke aage jhukna parta hain. Hain na Robbie?"
"Haan, Kasturi ki pyaar ke saamne mein jhukgaya," he agreed seriously. Then flashed a grin and continued: "Par yeh mat sochna ke mein sab shararat aur chehr-chaat chod doonga."
"Haan, haan, dekhte hain. Ab chalo, sehra pehnlo," ordered Milind, helping Robbie put on the turban, the flowered veil swinging in to cover his face.
***
Devika was delighted as she escorted them both to the mandap. Kasturi's face was glowing in contentment; Robbie was so excited that he was having trouble appearing serene.

"Ek minute, Robbie jeeju. Aapko intezaar karna parega. Aap apne jhoothe waapas nahi chahte?" teased Prachi, brandishing Robbie's slipper.
"Tum bhi na, Prachi. Dedo mujhe."
"Aise nahi, Robbie bhaiyya. Aapko humhe kuch dehne parege," insisted Meher.
"Kya?"
"Paanch sor ek rupaiye. Sabko," demanded Gauri.
"Sabki? Woh toh teen hazaar se zyaada hoga."
"Kya na Shabd bhaiyya, itne khanjoos mat banno. Bechara Robbie ko dekho, kaise besabar horah hain."
"Theek hain, theek hain, Chalo, dehnge tum sab ko," conceded Milind, presenting each girl with 501 rupees. "Chalo, pandit ji, ab aap shuru karsakte ho."
"Pehle dono ek doosre ko angoothi pehnaao."
"Preet, angoothi dedo inko"
"Nahi, nahi, usko angoothi dhoondhi paregi," announced Preet.
"Kahaan?"
"Bahut hi simple hain, Kasturi bhabhi. Tumhari angoothi yahaan is bowl main hain. Tum aur Robbie kohshish kijye, aur jo ring pehle dhoondenge uski hukoom chalegi tum dono ki zindagi mein."
He placed the bowl of water, filled with rose-petals between them. "Ek, do, teen: go!"

They began to search. Underwater, Robbie chhekily grabbed Kasturi's hand tightly. Her eyes widened.

"Yeh kya kar rahe ho, sir? Chod de," she whispered.
"Nahi toh. Humhe toh bahut mazaa aa raha hain," he murmured back with a wicked smile. One hand trapping both of hers, he found the ring with the other and held it up triumphantly.
"Aw Kasturi bhabhi, yeh kya kiya, Roobie sir ko jeetne diya?" moaned Meher.
"Chinta mat kar Meher, main yeh khel jeetgaya par hamari zindagi mein sirf Kastrui ki marzi chalegi," promised Robbie. Kasturi smiled at him demurely.
"Ab dono dulha dulhan ek doosre ki gala mein haar pehnaao," continued the priest. Kasturi reached forward first, quickly placing the flowered garland over Robbie's neck. Robbie rushed to reciprocate. Preet then performed Kasturi's "kanyadaan" and Devika tied Robbie's scarf to Kasturi's dupatta.
"Ab phere shuru karenge. Pehle pati aage. Yeh phere, agni ko sakshi maankar, dono pati-patni ko dharma, karma, artha aur moksha paane ke liye hain."
Kasturi followed Robbie round the sacred fire, eyes fixed upon him devotedly. For alternate rounds, she led while Robbie followed. Kasturi then placed her palms in Robbie's cupped ones. Preet poured rice into them and they offered it to the fire.
"Ab dulha dulhan saat kadam saat lehnge." As the priest read each vow, they took a step together.
"Pehla kadam, ek doosre ko izaat dehnge. Doosra kadam, ek doosre ko such, dukh baatenge. Teesra kadam, ek doosre par vishwaas karenge aur isse thodenge nahi. Chotha kadam, sanskaar aur sewa ki zindagi jeeyege. Pachwa kadam, dono pavitra bandhan nibhaayenge aur aulad paayenge. Shaasth kadam, lambi zindagi ke liye. Saatwa kadam, dono dosti aur pyar ki bandhan mein rahenga."
"Ab larki ki gale mein mangalsutra pehnaao, aur uski maang mein sindoor lagaao." Kasturi sighed in satisfaction as Robbie fastened the black-and-gold beaded chain around her neck, then lifted her veil to fill her parting with vermillion powder.
"Ab tum dono pati patni ho. Badhaai ho. Aashirwaad lijye." They bent to touch Devika's feet, seeking her blessings. She smiled, embraced them and sanctified the marriage.
***
"Ek minute, Kasturi. Pehle mein tumhari swagat karlu." Devika stepped in front of her and circled the "aarti" plate in front of the couple. She then swept her hands towards them.
"Ab aao.."
"Ek minute, Kasturi. Bhoolgayi kya, dulha ko apni dulhann baahon me leke ghar ke ander aasakta hain. Uthalo Kasturi bhabhi ko," ordered Milind. Amidst cheers, Robbie scooped Kasturi up in his arms and crossed the threshold. Once they were inside and he had set her down again, the women escorted Kasturi into the bedroom and closing the door.
Inside, the sumptuous bed was beautifully decorated. Ropes of roses were hung above to form a canopy, scented petals were scattered on it. They sat her down on the bed and covered her face with her veil. Giggling, they wished her luck and scurried out. Torn between anxiety and anticipation, she waited. Outside, Robbie was being held back by his friends.

"Ek minute, Robbie. Itni bhi jaldi kya hain. Kuch toh intezaar kijye," teased Preet.
"Haii dekho Robbie jeeju ko, itna besabar ho rahe hain. Dekhiye, jeeju, andar jaane ke phir se paanch sor rupaiya," explained Meher.
"Kyun bichare ko tang kar rahe ho?" scolded Preet. "Lo, yeh lelo apne paise." He brandished the money and they dutifully moved inside. Robbie strode through the door, which the others locked from outside. Robbie halted, gazing in wonder at Kasturi, patiently waiting, beauty and sweetness exuding from her.
"Kasturi..." he breathed.
***
Edited by missindia26 - 16 years ago
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Chapter 24 - Yeh bandhan toh pyaar ka bandhan hai (english)

Her skirt, full, pink and silken, swished as she turned so Prachi could tie the stings of her cream blouse, heavily embroidered with gold thread. Meher folded the dupatta and draped it over Kasturi's right shoulder, pulling the loose end behind her back and pinning it to the front of the skirt, creating a crescent shape at the side. Gauri adjusted the veil, raising it above her face. Mahi fastened the heavy "kundan" antique necklace; Divya arranged the red and white plastic "choodiyaan" (bangles) onto her wrists, followed by the heavy gold "kangana". Mahi hooked the "sehr" from each "jhumka" (earring) into her hair; Gauri gently clipped in her "nakni"(nose-ring). Ragini dabbed a small amount of red lipstick on her lips, and smudged shimmering eyeshadow over her eyelids. Prachi placed a shiny bindi in the centre of her forehead, painting a row of red and white dots at each side. Finally she was ready. The six girls crowded round her, "ooh"ing and "aah"ing and "haai"ing and "waah"ing.
"You're looking so beautiful, Kasturi. Honestly," observed Meher appreciatively.
Kasturi smiled, glancing in the mirror. Her smile faded as she remembered. Raunak. The others became concerned as Kasturi's expression dimmed. Prachi realised the problem. She hugged Kasturi and gently reassured her:
"Don't worry Kasturi. Now that evil shadow has left your life forever. You just dream of Robbie and his company. Come, smile. Aaj finally that day has come which every girl aspires to. Her wedding to the prince of her dreams. And all of us pray that our princess will live happily ever after."
Kasturi smiled, her distress slightly assuaged. They enveloped her in a circle of warm hugs, comfort and sisterly love.
***

Robbie was looking equally striking. His "sherwani" was of cream brocade, patterned with gilt "zaari" work and decorated with rows of maroon beading. Clean shaven, with his hair fluffed up, his face was radiant with excitement.
"Wow Robbie, you're looking even more handsome than before," whistled Milind.
"Honestly, I can't even believe our rockstar's getting married," marveled Preet.
"It was late but finally he loved. And in front of love everyone bows down. Isn't it Robbie?"
"Yes, I bowed in front of Kasturi's love," he agreed seriously. Then flashed a grin and continued: "But don't think I'm gonna stop all her mischief and jokes."
"Yeah, yeah, we'll see. Now come on, put the "sehra" on," ordered Milind, helping Robbie put on the turban, the flowered veil swinging in to cover his face.
***

Devika was delighted as she escorted them both to the mandap. Kasturi's face was glowing in contentment; Robbie was so excited that he was having trouble appearing serene.
"One minute, Robbie jeeju. You'll have to wait. Don't you want your shoes back?" teased Prachi, brandishing Robbie's slippers.
"You too, Prachi. Give them to me."
"Not like that, Robbie bhaiyya. You'll have to give us something," insisted Meher.
"What?"
"501 rupees. To everyone," demanded Gauri.
"Everyone? That would be over 3000 rupees."
"Come on Shabd bhaiyya, son't be so stingey. Look at poor Robbie, he's so impatient."
"OK, OK, come, we'll give it to all of you," conceded Milind, presenting each girl with 501 rupees. "Come, priest, you can start now."
"First, put the ring on her."
"Preet, give him the ring."
"No, no, he will have to look for the ring," announced Preet.
"Where?"
"It's very simple, Kasturi bhabhi. Your ring's here in this bowl. You and Robbie try, whoever finds it first will rule in this wedding."
He placed the bowl of water, filled with rose-petals between them. "One, two, three: go!"They began to search. Underwater, Robbie chhekily grabbed Kasturi's hand tightly. Her eyes widened.
"What are you doing, sir? Let go," she whispered.
"But no. I'm having lots of fun," he murmured back with a wicked smile. One hand trapping both of hers, he found the ring with the other and held it up triumphantly.
"Aw Kasturi bhabhi, what have you done, you let Robbie jeeju win?" moaned Meher.
"Don't worry Meher, I might have won the game but in my life only's Kasturi's will matters," promised Robbie. Kasturi smiled at him demurely.
"Now bride and groom garland each other," continued the priest. Kasturi reached forward first, quickly placing the flowered garland over Robbie's neck. Robbie rushed to reciprocate. Preet then performed Kasturi's "kanyadaan" and Devika tied Robbie's scarf to Kasturi's dupatta.
"Now begin the rounds. Husband leads first. These rounds, with the sacred fire as witness, are for the bride and groom's religion, duty, prosperity and salvation." Kasturi followed Robbie round the sacred fire, eyes fixed upon him devotedly. For alternate rounds, she led while Robbie followed. Kasturi then placed her palms in Robbie's cupped ones. Preet poured rice into them and they offered it to the fire. "Now the bride and groom will take seven steps together." As the priest read each vow, they took a step together.
"With the first step, promise to respect each other. With the second step, promise to share your happinesses and sorrows with each other. With the third, promise to trust and be loyal to each other. With the fourth, always live with morals and values. With the fifth, promise to keep this pure relationship and hope to be blessed with children. With the sixth, pray for logetivity and success. With the seventh, promise to always maintain a bond of friendship and love."
"Now put the "mangulsutra" round her neck, and fill her forehead with vermillion." Kasturi sighed in satisfaction as Robbie fastened the black-and-gold beaded chain around her neck, then lifted her veil to fill her parting with vermillion powder.
"Now you are man and wife. Congratulations. Take blessings." They bent to touch Devika's feet, seeking her blessings. She smiled, embraced them and sanctified the marriage.
***

"One minute, Kasturi. First let me welcome you." Devika stepped in front of her and circled the "aarti" plate in front of the couple. She then swept her hands towards them.
"Now come.."
"One minute, Kasturi. Did you forget, the goom has to cross the threshold with his bride in his arms. Pick up Kasturi bhabhi," ordered Milind. Amidst cheers, Robbie scooped Kasturi up in his arms and crossed the threshold. Once they were inside and he had set her down again, the women escorted Kasturi into the bedroom and closing the door.
Inside, the sumptuous bed was beautifully decorated. Ropes of roses were hung above to form a canopy, scented petals were scattered on it. They sat her down on the bed and covered her face with her veil. Giggling, they wished her luck and scurried out. Torn between anxiety and anticipation, she waited. Outside, Robbie was being held back by his friends.
"One minute, Robbie. Why are you in such a hurry? Wait a little," teased Preet.
"Aw look at Robbie jeeju, he's so impatient. Look, jeeju, 500 rupees again to go in," explained Meher.
"Why are you teasing the poor guy?" scolded Preet. "Here, take your money." He brandished the money and they dutifully moved aside.
Robbie strode through the door, which the others locked from outside. Robbie halted, gazing in wonder at Kasturi, patiently waiting, beauty and sweetness exuding from her.
"Kasturi..." he breathed.


Thanks for reading x
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Posted: 16 years ago
😃😃😃wow wow wow they are married great.......... lovely part, u described the marriage rituals beautifully..... i just loved the part..... pls update sooooon.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
omg..😲...i am far behind dear.i don't want to skip any part.give some time i will catch up.
part-12
Mohabbat se zyaada...i love this song .perfect for RoKa
omg...again he called her.beechaara baychain jo hai...
they are talking in song...so sweet
whose call that is...😕. it doesnot sound as a good omen.
this part was beautifully written.i enjoy reading each and every word of it.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: nehaaa nawab

😃😃😃wow wow wow they are married great........yeah 😛
.. lovely part, u described the marriage rituals beautifully..thanks 😊
... i just loved the part..thanks again im glad u did 😃
... pls update sooooon...will try 😉
..




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