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Posted: 16 years ago
thank u for the pm and sorry for commenting late as had some problem with the internet connection...... loved the parts, happy that all the problems are solved..... the parts were really very romantic and loved robbie's dialougue while proposing, that was really cute...... pls get them married soon..... pls update soon.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
heyy TJ....oooh how i love this part...completly awsome and soo dreamy...can really imagine robbie singing for her...how romantic...
and my michi...haey they are too here...thanks buddy...its like din khatam nahin hota jab yeh nahin aate toh...lol...anyways...i so love this...finally RoKa is goona get married...i hope all goes well...i stil cant digest the fact that devika is being so good to them...i hope she has changed for good!
fab part yaar...continue soon🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: nehaaa nawab

thank u for the pm and sorry for commenting late as had some problem with the internet connection...... lol dw no problem its not even that late 😊

loved the parts, happy that all the problems are solved..... yeah i know at last 😃
the parts were really very romantic and loved robbie's dialougue while proposing, that was really cute...... aw glad you liked it 😛
pls get them married soon..... soon soon lol 😉
pls update soon.....

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: siya..

heyy TJ....hi siya 😊

oooh how i love this part...completly awsome and soo dreamy...can really imagine robbie singing for her...how romantic...aw how sweet i know i can just sit here daydreaming 😳
and my michi...haey they are too here...thanks buddy...its like din khatam nahin hota jab yeh nahin aate toh...lol...lol glad you enjoyed it 😛
anyways...i so love this...finally RoKa is goona get married...i know...at last 😃
i hope all goes well...i stil cant digest the fact that devika is being so good to them...i hope she has changed for good! hmm yh cant promise all goes well 4 now but promise that devika has accepted kasturi, after all it was a big step 4 her 2 publicly support and praise her 👏
fab part yaar...continue soon🤗thanks will do

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Posted: 16 years ago

Hi everyone 😊

Thanks again for taking the time to read and give your lovely comments 😃

Heres the next part 😉

Hope you enjoy it 😛

P.S. My computer is completely mucked up so sorry if I'm slow replying to PMs or posts, do comment anyway 😕

Chapter 22 ? Chala Pawaade Mahi

"Namaste, Robbie sir. Kya dekhna chahte ho?"

"Ring, mere honewali patni ke liye."

"Oh, badhaai ho. Usse kaisi angoothi pasand aayegi?"

"Mujhe white gold ki angoothi chahiye, diamond ki."

"Yeh?"

"Nahi. Kuch bhara nahi. Kasturi ko simple cheez pasand hain. Aur diamond "emerald" cut hona chahiye."

"Yeh? Ya yeh?" Robbie's eyes sparkled. The second one was perfect. The diamond, rectangular and dazzling, was nestled between two intertwining strands of white gold.

"Jee haan, yeh. Yeh bilkool sahi hain. Mujhe yehi chahiye. Kitne ka hain?"

"10, 000 rupaiya."

"Theek hain." He tore off a cheque and signed it as the shopkeeper packaged his purchase.

***

"Arre yaar itna bhi mat muskurao. Aaj toh bas engagement hain, shaadi toh nahi, na?"

"Arre Milind kyun tang kar rahe ho, bichare ko?" admonished Meher in mock reproach.

"OK, OK sorry Meher. Par tum yahaan kar rahi ho? Kasturi ko nahi tayaar karna?"

"Haan, haan, jaati hoon. Bas chooriyaan lehne aayi hoon. Devika aunty ne galati se Robbie ke capre ke saath rakdiya. By the way, Robbie jeeju, aap toh bahut acchhe lagrahe ho. Laal sherwaani, waah, Kasturi toh dekhti rehjaayengi."

"Nahi toh, hamara Robbie toh usse dekhte rehjaayenga."

"Lagta hai dono ek doosre ko dekh dekh kar khoye rahenge," she predicted, finally finding the bangles and hurrying out of the room.

***

"Hai Kasturi tum kitni pyaari lagrahi ho," marvelled Prachi. Kasturi shyly looked up into the mirror. Her hair was coiled into a bun, over which her cherry-red net dupatta had been artistically draped. The blouse was made of crimson silk, embroidered with gold thread in curlicues and swirls, dotted with glass beads, the sleeves reaching to just below the shoulder. The skirt was of the same design, slashed down the middle to reveal the gilt underskirt.

"Kisi ki nazar na lage," hoped Meher, dabbing eyeliner from her eye onto the corner of Kasturi's.

***

"Ab dono ek doosre ko angoothi pehnaade." Kasturi shyly slipped the ring onto Robbie's third finger, then stretched out her left hand so Robbie could do the same.

"Yay!!! Badhaai ho badhaai Robbie aur Kasturi. Ab hum sab dost tum dono ke liye surprise rakha hain. Music?" announced Preet.

The introduction of "sajan tumse pyaar" began to play. Gauri stepped into the centre of the room and began to sing and dance.

"Saajan tumse pyaar ki laraayi mein Saajan tumse pyaar ki laraayi mein
Toot gayi choodiyaan kalaayi mein, kalaayi mein
Toot gayi choodiyaan kalaayi mein
Toot gayi choodiyaan kalaayi mein"
Samar joined her, continuing the song.
"Jaanam tumse pyaar ki laraayi mein
Jaanam tumse pyaar ki laraayi mein
Jaaga main akela rajaayi mein, rajaayi mein
Jaaga main akela rajaayi mein
Jaaga main akela rajaayi mein"
The pair moved to the side as Preet and Meher entered. Preet declared his fellings:
"Pal pal har pal teri lagan
Teri ada ne le gayi man
Gore gore haathon pe mehndi ka rang
Us pe yeh sharmaane ka dhang
Us pe yeh sharmaane ka dhang"
Meher answered Preet with her sweet words:
"Haan main sharmaayi pyaar ki laraayi mein
Toot gayi choodiyaan kalaayi mein, kalaayi mein
Toot gayi choodiyaan kalaayi mein
Toot gayi choodiyaan kalaayi mein"
Finally, Milind and Prachi skipped on. Prachi sung melodically:
"Bechaini tadpaati rahi
Chaandni dil dhadkaati rahi
Seene pe bijli si chali
Karwat leke raat dhali
Karwat leke raat dhali"
Taking his turn on the dance floor, Milind complained:
"Nindiya na aayi pyaar hi laraayi mein
Jaaga main akela rajaayi mein, rajaayi mein
Jaaga main akela rajaayi mein
Jaaga main akela rajaayi mein"
All three couples returned for the final refrain, accompanied by Shabd, Mahi, Amar, Divya, Ranvir and Ragini. The men chorused:
"Jaanam tumse pyaar ki laraayi mein
Jaaga main akela rajaayi mein, rajaayi mein
Jaaga main akela rajaayi mein
Jaaga main akela rajaayi mein"
The girls echoed:"Toot gayi choodiyaan kalaayi mein
Toot gayi choodiyaan kalaayi mein"
Edited by missindia26 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
me furst...hehe now go and edit the title😈😆

edited***

wow TJ that was just beautiful.☺️..can simply visualise the beautiful engagement ceremony of RoKa....simply dreammyyy😍....cant wait for the next! continue soon🤗
Edited by siya.. - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Chapter 22 - Chala Pawaade Mahi(english)
"Greetings, Robbie sir. What would you like to look at?"

"Ring, for my wife-to-be."

"Oh, congratulations. What kind of ring would she like?"

"I would like a white gold diamond ring."

"This one?"

"No. Nothing huge. Kasturi likes simple things. And the diamond should be an "emerald" cut."

"This? Or this?" Robbie's eyes sparkled. The second one was perfect. The diamond, rectangular and dazzling, was nestled between two intertwining strands of white gold.

"Yes, this one. It's completely right. I want this one. How much is it?"

"10, 000 rupees."

"OK." He tore off a cheque and signed it as the shopkeeper packaged his purchase.

***

"Whoa mate don't smile so much. Today's just the engagement, it's not the wedding yet?"

"Oy Milind why are you teasing the poor guy?" admonished Meher in mock reproach.

"OK, OK sorry Meher. But what are you doing here? Don't you have to get Kasturi ready?"

"Yes, ok, I'm going. I just came to get the bangles. Devika aunty left them with Robbie's clothes by mistake. By the way, Robbie jeeju, you're looking very nice. Red sherwani, waah, Kasturi will be left staring."

"But no, it will be our Robbie left staring at her."

"It seems that they'll both be lost watching each other," Meher predicted, finally finding the bangles and hurrying out of the room.

***

"Wow Kasturi you're looking so lovely," marvelled Prachi. Kasturi shyly looked up into the mirror. Her hair was coiled into a bun, over which her cherry-red net dupatta had been artistically draped. The blouse was made of crimson silk, embroidered with gold thread in curlicues and swirls, dotted with glass beads, the sleeves reaching to just below the shoulder. The skirt was of the same design, slashed down the middle to reveal the gilt underskirt.

"Hope you're saved from the evil eye," hoped Meher, dabbing eyeliner from her eye onto the corner of Kasturi's.

***

"Now both of you put the ring on the other." Kasturi shyly slipped the ring onto Robbie's third finger, then stretched out her left hand so Robbie could do the same.

"Yay!!! Congratulations Robbie and Kasturi. And now all us friends have a surprise for you. Music?" announced Preet.

The introduction of "sajan tumse pyaar" began to play. Gauri stepped into the centre of the room and began to sing melodically and dance.

"My love during the quarrel of love My love during the quarrel of love
My bangles broke on my wrists, in my wrists
My bangles broke on my wrists
My bangles broke on my wrists"
Samar joined her, continuing the tune.
"Darling during the quarrel of love
Darling during the quarrel of love
I stayed awake alone in the night
I stayed awake alone in the night
I stayed awake alone in the night"
The duo moved to the side as Preet and Meher entered. Preet declared his feelings:
"Every moment I'm attracted to you
Your charms have stolen my heart
The henna on your fair fair hands
Your way of shyness
Your way of shyness"
Meher answered Preet with her sweet words:
"Yes I felt shy in this quarrel of love
My bangles broke on my wrists, in my wrists
My bangles broke on my wrists
My bangles broke on my wrists"
Finally, Milind and Prachi skipped on. Prachi sung melodically:
"Restlessness continued to torment me
My moon-like heart continued to beat
In my chest lightning struck
The night took a turn and faded away
The night took a turn and faded away
Sleep evaded me in this quarrel of love..."
Taking his turn on the dance floor, Milind complained:
"I stayed awake alone in the night
I stayed awake alone in the night
I stayed awake alone in the night"
All three couples returned for the final refrain, accompanied by Shabd, Mahi, Amar, Divya, Ranvir and Ragini. The men chorused:
"Darling during the quarrel of love
I stayed awake alone in the night
I stayed awake alone in the night"
The girls echoed: "My bangles broke on my wrists
My bangles broke on my wrists"
Thanks for reading 😊
Edited by missindia26 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: siya..

me furst...hehe now go and edit the title😈😆lol done 😛

edited***

wow TJ that was just beautiful.☺️..can simply visualise the beautiful engagement ceremony of RoKa....simply dreammyyy😍....cant wait for the next! continue soon🤗

thanks for your lovely compliment continue daydreaming and i will update as soon as i can 😛

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Posted: 16 years ago
Ohh Second
Will read and comment ass soon as
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Posted: 16 years ago
Aww that was such a sweet update
The engagment party was nice
Cant wait for the next part! 😃😛

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