FF: Guzarish*Ka fall in Rob arms* Upd PG.9 :) - Page 2

Hey Just spotted ur FF

hi aisho one more ff writer...great

hmmmmmm just read that part1
hmm looks interesting
buh laddooo plz write longer parts
it was an apetizer wherez my hot n saucy part
me hungry

Originally posted by: FunkyChick

Hey Just spotted ur FF

I really liked the video you made to go with it.

Character sketch was great

Part 1 was great 👍🏼cant wait to read next part

Love Mariam xxx😃

Btw i like the name of ur FF

Originally posted by: robbii

hi aisho one more ff writer...great

lol i know u r a excellent vm maker.

i hope soo u will be a excellent ff writer too.

both your siggy and titile track vm are very good.i just loved it.

character sketch-i love they way you mix and match the names.

first part is short and sweet.i loved the relation between the mom and son.

good start👏.keep it up👍🏼

Originally posted by: cutykoo20

hmmmmmm just read that part1
hmm looks interesting
buh laddooo plz write longer parts
it was an apetizer wherez my hot n saucy part
me hungry

hi aisha......
great to see u in this line also.....
i m sure u will rock here as well.....
the title video was awsome.........
the characters seems to be promising.........
your first part was very nice......
hope to see your next part soon

love
dimple

Originally posted by: tv star

hi aisha......
great to see u in this line also.....
i m sure u will rock here as well.....
the title video was awsome.........
the characters seems to be promising.........
your first part was very nice......
hope to see your next part soon

love
dimple

ur ff seems goooood..............
ok waiting for next part.....
best of luk....
this will be the 1st ff which i'll read frm part one
otherwise i start reading when 20 30 parts are completed....

very very gud ff.