FF: Guzarish*Ka fall in Rob arms* Upd PG.9 :) - Page 3

Originally posted by: DREAM GIRL

ur ff seems goooood..............
ok waiting for next part.....
best of luk....
this will be the 1st ff which i'll read frm part one
otherwise i start reading when 20 30 parts are completed....

Originally posted by: Alisha_01

very very gud ff.

keep it up

everything is gud loved ur vm n title.

its gonna be 1 of da best ff

cnt wait for ur next prt.

Originally posted by: swan20

Aisho what a pleasant surprise.....u r writing a ff.......👏..........i'm so happy........😃...........i'm sure ur ff is going to be as rocking as ur VMs.........really looking forward to reading it.

loved the character sketch & the 1st part...the VM & siggie are great...😃

waiting for friday for the next update..........well done sweetie.......😃

Originally posted by: jaan 234

hi aishoo jan .............congrats yar ke tum ne ff likha shoro kiya ..... i am so happy yar ..................aur haan yar hum sab hai tummaray sath .......mein read karo gi har part tummara jan .......................

first part ........jo tum ne start kiya very sweet nice ........................keep it up ................meri best wishes tummaray sath hain ...............all the best aishooo ...............

mehak .......................................................... i am back

Originally posted by: robbieluvr

Okay aisha,

Pehle vms ab FF, That's great😃😃

Aww yeah,Honey because i stopped making VMs till Robbie comes back ..!! Uske baad ek naya VM banega RoKa ka ..?? 😳

Im soooo excited for your ff to move on

First of all the title montage, it's fantastic!!!

the picture is just perfect 👏👏

and the name "GUZARISH" Fantastic

Aww that's sooo Sweet of you Jani =) 😳🤗

I m sooo GLAD you liked =)

Your comment's really mean to me...You know why ??

Because you my BEST VM MAKER in Kasturi section ...?? 👏⭐️

Lets get to the characters, all are aesome

but im a little worried about divya,

but wo sab baad ki baatien hain, but im really excited

I really like the way you mixed up the names

Aww Thanks sooo much Imao Jani 😳🤗

Don't worries...It will be more Fun FF in Kasturi section =) 😳🤗

like robbie patel and kasturi atre 😃😃

even though it seems wierd to hear, but great

Aww...Iknow,Thanks Honey =)😆

Okay now the title song,

wow yaar it was really very very wonderful

i loved it all soooooooooooo much

You have done a fantastic job with the whole thing

It's just amazing, Mindblowing 👏👏

Aww you sooo Sweet Imao ..!!

Am speeches to read all ur comment's here ..?? 😳🤗

You made my DAY Honey ..??

So touched Jani 😳🤗

Okay now the comment on part 1:

It was awesome, i loved how you started it

Gayatri remembering God, BEAUTIFUL "sobs"

And then i loved how she was excited to see robiie

I was also excited, thanks for entering him in the first part

Aww really,Robbie is my Heart so imust put his entry 1st 😆

You loved , Am sooo Touched Honey 😳🤗

usaually sab log pehle kasturi ko enter karte hain

you know what? meine soche tha ke agar mein kabhi ff likhon gi,

To mein pehle robbie ko enter karon gi

but again mein karoon ya tum aik hi baat hai na, right?

Okay moving on, when robbie came in OMG

Aww thanks Jani...I am so Excited , I hope after gettin tired from VMs you'll start writing ?? 😆🤗

How sweet is that, how he greeted his mother

soooo sweet na, just like our karan!!!!

And last but not the least, i loved the dialouges

The whole thing was written fantastically!!!!

Aww thanks sooo Much Jani .!!

Imao you made my DAY yaar with ur words...I feel sooo SPCL today =) 😳🤗

Amazing, mindblowing, superb, out of this world

and '"FANTASTIC" in my karnoos words

Aww How sweet you are Jani 😳🤗

So i congratulate you on your first FF

Aww , Thanks sooo Much😳🤗

im sooooooooooo proud of you my koochee(thats what im calling you from now on, i hope you dont mind, if you do, tell me, LOL. I know it's kind of wierd but i like it, cz it's sweet like you.)

Aww Imao,You sooo Sweet you touched my SOUL yaar😳🤗

All your loves to me was sooo Honestly,Also i loved the name Jani 😃

It's toooooooo Chwweeeeet !!!😳🤗

Love you koochee!!!

Yaay,Iam sooo Happy😃😳🤗

Originally posted by: reenbana

hey aisho good job yaar seems interesting good waiting for next part!😊