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Posted: 17 years ago
#71
another wounderful part ...good going...keep it up..
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Posted: 17 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: AH01

thanx 4 the update

don't thank me.its my job to update..lolz
another nice part well done 👏👏
thanku

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Posted: 17 years ago
#73
~~~~part 5~~~~

Robbie ran towards Kasturi

Robbie:Tum meray ehsaan ka badla uttarna chahte hona.aur aggar mein kaho ke main tumhe mauqa detta ho to tum kya meray kaam ao ge???

Kasturi:jee zarur.

Robbie:great den because i need help

Kasturi:butaye ke mein app ki kis tarah se madad karsakti ho

Robbie:yaha nahe.undher chalo.

Kasturi:okay

& began walkin inside da house.When she got inside

Robbie:betho.

Kasturi sat silently

Robbie:The thing is that meray mom dad meri mangni kardena chahte hai & i don't want to marry.Mein apni is life se bohat khush ho.I m living v.happily alone leken meray mom dad ko ye nahe lagta.Dey want me to get married soon.They want me to take control of my responsibilties.

Kasturi who is quite confused

Kasturi:to mein is mein app ki kya madad karsakte ho.

Robbie:Tum he to sab kuch karsakte ho.Actually i am looking for a girl jis se mein shaadi na karo but she is ready to act as if we are married.I mean meri kal Vancouver ki flight hai.Mein apne mom dad se milne ja raha ho & dey told me ke is dafa woh meri mangni kardey ge.Aur mera plan kuch yu hai ke mein kisi larki ko apne saath leker jao ga aur apne mom dad se kaho ga dat ye meri patni hai, Mein app ko surprise dena chahta tha is liye mein ne app ko shaadi ka nahe bataya.& i am thinking if u could play da role of my wife for some while.

Kasturi didn't reply as she thinking dat what should she say.

Robbie:i get it!I totally get it if u say NO.I mean i understand its a difficult job and........

Kasturi:no!Its Okay.I think i m ready

Robbie:are u sure???Are u really sure?

Kasturi thinking:Inho ne meray liya itna kuch kiya.Apna ehsaan uttarney ka yahe mauqa hai.I'll Do it.

Kastuuri:yea,I m sure

A big smile appeared on Robbie's face.

Robbie:Oh my Gosh!!!I can't believe it.Jitni larkiyo se mein ne kaha all said no aur ab to meri umeed bhe khattam hogaye the.THANKU SOOO MUCH.Because of u meri shaadi ruk jaaye ge.Leken Kasturi,Tumhe meray saath thorey dinoo ke liye Vancouver jaana hoga & u'll have to act as my patni which is quite a difficult job

Kasturi:mein ne kaha na.Mein tayyaar ho.

Robbie lookin up & said:thanku bhagvan ke app ne mujhay shaadi karne se bacha liya.(& DEN LOOKING AT KASTURI)

Robbie:Kasturi!waisay aik sawaal pucho Y r saying yes.I mean jis kaam se thume koi faeeda nahe horaha us ke liye haa

Kasturi:Dats because app ne meray liye jo kiya woh bohat kam log karte hai,aur is baat ka mujh se ziada badnaseeb aur kon andaaza laga sakta hai.Neways I m ready to do whateve u ask me to do.

Robbie thinking:Kaisi larki hai.Sirf ehsaan ka badla uttarne ke liye itne mushkil apne sir le rahe hai.Dats quite sweet neways i think v shoulg get ready for tommorrow

Kasturi:woh um app se aik baat pooch sakti hoo.Can i make a call to India?

Robbie:yea sure.ub to tum meri patni ho.Do watever u feel like.

Kasturi went to the phone & dialled da number.Robbie could easily hear what Kasturi was saying on da phone

Kasturi:hello maa

Kaushalia:arrey!kasturi puttar.kitne dino baad teri awaaz sun rahe ho.Kaise hai tu.Mujhey to laga ke vilaayat ja ke tu humhe bhool gaye hai.Aik phone bhe nahe kiya

Kasturi thinking:ab app ko kya butao maa!!Rohan ne phone ki line katty wi the takey mein kisi ko phone na karsako.(with dis she started crying & her voice became shaky too)

Kaushalia:arrey kasturi puttar!kya howa.Tu ro rahe hai.Rohan tera khayal to rakh raha hai.

Kasturi:haan maa rakh raha hai.Bohat khayal rakh raha hai.Main bohat khush ho.Itni khush ke app soch bhe nahe sakti.meri har khwaish to aisey pori karte hai jaise mein koi malika ho.(she was cryin while sayin all dis)

Kaushalia:chalo ye to ache baat hai.Arrey Kasturi puttar,Tumhe aik baat batana bhul gaye.Chutki(Kasturi's sister) ka rishta aya hai.

Kasturi:maa!dhiyaan se.Larka dhek ke haan kahiye ga.please.

Kaushalia:haan dekhoo ge

Kasturi coudn't control her tears nemore

Kasturi:maa!!Rohan office se agaye, ab mein chalti ho.(& she hanged up da phone & started crying)

Robbie had heard all dis conversation & he was quite shocked to c Kasturi lying.He went to Kasturi.

Robbie:jhoot kuon bola.I don't know u dat well buh itna jaanta hoo ke app khush nahe hai.

Kasturi:to aur kya batate dat merey pati mujhay marta hai,mujh pe shak karta hai, aur ab to usney mujhey ghar se bhe nikaal diya.(saying dis,Kasturi quickly wiped off her tears)

Kasturi:i m sorry.I m sorry for dis rona dhona.I shall go & freshen up.

Kasturi went to the bathroom & robbie was left alone thinking about Kasturi

Robbie thinking:bechare Kasturi.Mujhe lagta hai ke is ke saath bohat bura hoa hai jis ka ishe bohat ghera sadma hai.Phir bhe is ne meray kaam ke liye haa karde.

Robbie was brought back to reality by Kasturi

Kasturi:tayyari nahe karni kal ke?

Robbie:haan karne hai na.First of all.i need you to take u to a market.U'll have to buy some clothes kuon ke aggar mein tumhe is halat mein apne mom dad ke paas leker gaya to woh mujhey ghar se nikaal de gey(Kasturi was wearing the same white shalwar kameez).Den i'll tell u about my likes/dislikes & u'll have to tell me about your likes/dislikes so that we don't face a problem in Vancouver.Is dat okay wid u?

Kasturi:Its perfectly okay.

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ye part kaisa laga???remarks please...

Edited by muneefah - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#74
wow i luved it but can u make da parts a lil more longer. waise weldone u did a very gud job keep it up.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: robbieluvr

wow i luved it but can u make da parts a lil more longer. waise weldone u did a very gud job keep it up.

more longer??????okay..wasn't dis long enuf..okay ill try incresin da amount/...ohh thanku 4 ur praises😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#76

mujhe tou parts ki length bahut achi lagI!!!!

wohoohhhooO!!...and muneeffah baby seriously i loVED IT!! i ahd not watched kasturi serial and was more looking forward to read ur FF!!!...seriously!! it was really mindblowing!! kasturi is soooo kewl really she dusnt even says nooo!! although i thought bahut nakhre karay ge!!...lOL!!..and robbiee tou kool hi hain!! hamesha se!! and bahut natkhat and cute bhi haiN!! LOL!!...man!! waiting for the next part and thanxx for quick update dear!!
sara!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#77
Parts 3,4&5............wow Muneefa you are really fast with ur updates.....Thanks...😊
Thank God Robbie found Kasturi........he seems to be really sweet!!!....😳
Poor Kasturi.......couldn't even tell the truth to her parents....😭.....she was so afraid for her sister as well....😔
I'm excited about what will happen when they go to Vancouver posing as a couple.....😉
Great FF........👏
Edited by swan20 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: sarareimoo1

mujhe tou parts ki length bahut achi lagI!!!!

well,i m glad dat sumbody likes my wrtin length😳
wohoohhhooO!!...and muneeffah baby seriously i loVED IT!! i ahd not watched kasturi serial and was more looking forward to read ur FF!!!...seriously!! it was really mindblowing!! kasturi is soooo kewl really she dusnt even says nooo!! although i thought bahut nakhre karay ge!!...lOL!!..and robbiee tou kool hi hain!! hamesha se!! and bahut natkhat and cute bhi haiN!! LOL!!...man!! waiting for the next part and thanxx for quick update dear!!
really!!!u were lookin forward for my ff,not da drama..gosh!!!u keep givin me gr8 compliments.yea i mean in da drama KASTURI is so nakaharaye dat in da ff i made sure dat she listens to ROBBIE.hena???i know robbie is sooooo cute like always...& thanks 4 the kind words..luv ya
sara!

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Posted: 17 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: swan20

Parts 3,4&5............wow Muneefa you are really fast with ur updates.....Thanks...😊

no problem.its my duty to update fast so dats its easy for u guys to keep track
Thank God Robbie found Kasturi........he seems to be really sweet!!!....😳
Robbie is always sweet 4 me & in da drama i jus luv him.
Poor Kasturi.......couldn't even tell the truth to her parents....😭.....she was so afraid for her sister as well....😔
yea!!!i mean her life is completely ruined & she was worried 4 her sis...(wat a gud sis)😉
I'm excited about what will happen when they go to Vancouver posing as a couple.....😉
Hope dat u like it
Great FF........👏
thanks

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: muneefah

more longer??????okay..wasn't dis long enuf..okay ill try incresin da amount/...ohh thanku 4 ur praises😃

I want it to be longer because its sooooooooooo interesting aur mujhse aglay din ka wait nahi hota yaar. Sorry for troubling you😳😳

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