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Posted: 17 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: robbieluvr

I want it to be longer because its sooooooooooo interesting aur mujhse aglay din ka wait nahi hota yaar. Sorry for troubling you😳😳

ohhhh dat is sooooooooooooo sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet.!!!luv u 4 dis comment😃
no no u haven't troubled me at all.........i m happy..really happy n now i'll surely work on ur request
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Posted: 17 years ago
#82
nice part well done👏
it will be interesting to see how they act as a couple in front of robbie's parents
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Posted: 17 years ago
#83
thnaks for update ang long part it was a minblowing part now understood where u r leading the story ut smart without roka marriage u made them married it will be very intersting to seethem in this complete different manner
i wish in the real show atleast they must be acting like husabnd wife what we can do of so clled creatives
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Posted: 17 years ago
#84
dis part is really short-sorry robbieluvr buh i only had 10min as i had to go sumwhere & dis was da maximum i cud produce in 10minutes. ~~~~PART 6~~~~

Robbie:we have alot of work to do.We should leave for shoppin right away

Kasturi:as u wish.

Robbie:okay.Let's go.

They left the house & sat in da car.Robbie noticed dat while robbie was driving the car,Kasturi was lost in her thoughts & was staring out of the window.

Robbie:chale.pauhanch gaye hai.

Kasturi:huh..hmmmm..haan chale..

They enterd a huge shoppin mall(desi shoppin mall in mississauga as Kasturi had to buy shalwar kameez).When They entered,dis song was bein played in da mall

So baby I will wait for you
Cause I don''t know what else i can do
Don't tell me I ran out of time
If it takes the rest of my life

Baby I will wait for you
If you think I'm fine it just aint true
I really need you in my life
No matter what i have to do I'll wait for you....

Robbie:Kasturi!u'll have to buy from dis shop.Choose watever u want to wear.

Kasturi quickly bought the first shalwar kameez that came into her hands.She didn't look for her favourate colour or something.

Robbie:arrey!apna favourite colour to choose karlo

Kasturi:nahe it's okay.Ab chaley.

Robbie:haan chaley.

They were on there way back from the shop.Robbie again saw Kasturi lost in thought so instead of going home he went to an ice-cream parlour.Kasturi didn't noticed it

Robbie:chaley

Kasturi:haan!

She looked up & saw that they weren't home.

Kasturi:ye kaha aye hai?

Robbie:Ice-cream parlour

Kasturi:acha.(Kasturi thought dat Robbie was byin an ice-cream 4 himself)

Robbie:acha kya?apna fav flavour batao.

Kasturi:nahe mein nahe khao ge.mera mann nahe kar raha hai.

Robbie:okay!

& he started to drive his car again

Kasturi:ye kya kar rahe hai.U wanted to have an ice-cream.Have it.

Robbie:tumhse kisne kaha ke mujhey ice-cream khani the.Mein to yaha is liye laya tha kuon ke tum mujhey depressed lag rahe the aur mein ne socha ke ice-cream khao ge to tumhara mood acha hogaye ga

Kasturi:Ice-cream khaney se kya meri kismat bhe ache hogae ge.Nahe na to phir ye fazool dil mein khushfehmian dalne ka kya fiada.Ice-cream khaney se kya mujhey woh miljaye ga jo mein ne khoya hai.Nahe na aur jab mera mann bhe nahe kar raha to phir mein kuon khaoo.App khana chahte hai to zarur khaye.

Robbie:nahe!it's okay.

He started driving back home & on his way he said:

Robbie:tumhey khana pakana aata hai?

Kasturi:jee

Robbie:great!mom will be v.happy ke mujhey aik aise patni mili jis ko khana pakana ata hai.

Robbie:aur tumhey woh sarey kaam atey hai jo larkiyan karte hai?

Kasturi:jee

Robbie:great!tum se ache nakli(fake) patni to mujhey mil he nahe sakti the.

They arrived home.Both got off the car.

Robbie & Kasturi opened the back door of the car to take out the shopping bags.Kasturi opened the door form one side & robbie from the other.Both grabbed the same shopping bag at the same time.There hand touched each other's hand but Kasturi quickly removed her hand & robbie too.

They went inside the house & both went into there seperate rooms just to freshen up themselves.

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comments please😳....how was dis part?acha ya bura?
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Edited by muneefah - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#85
Hey muneefah the part was very good especially roka moment .anyways its okay for the short part i know your busy so its okay. Looking forward to reading the next part and i hope its longer next time LOL!!!!!😆 just kidding. Update soon!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: robbieluvr

Hey muneefah the part was very good especially roka moment .anyways its okay for the short part i know your busy so its okay. Looking forward to reading the next part and i hope its longer next time LOL!!!!!😆 just kidding. Update soon!!!

thanks robbieluvr...ohhh yea,,its okay wid u,,,,,my short part os ok wid u.yayeeeeeeee..dun't worry it will b longer
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Posted: 17 years ago
#87
muneefah!!! gonna kill u yaar!! LOL!! itna romantic likhti ho aur then i feel sad ke kash aisa koi real main scene hota haiN!! and kasturi ke dialogues mindblowing!! bilkul filmy eH??? ice cream khanay se meri kismat nahiin badal sakti!!
wah wah!!!
gud gud keep it UP!!!
sara!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#88
no prob sor short ,thnks for updating
agian nice part
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Posted: 17 years ago
#89
just finished reading part 5 and here r my thoughts:

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! roka 2 pretend 2 be married...i hope they relli fall in love

this is gonna be gr8!!

anyways gonna read part 6 now...bye
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Posted: 17 years ago
#90
nice part i give u...............................................................................................................................another standing ovation!!👏👏👏

and i cant say anything else...u hv left me speechles!!

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