FF:RISHTA. - Page 2

Originally posted by: muneefah

seems like i suck

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Originally posted by: shanu333

wow muneefah!! ure ff seems interesting...i just cant wait 2 read it!! plz jaldi update karo😊

luvs,
shivani

PS.plz PM me whenever there is a new part

PPS. aww cutypie aisi baatein nahin kehteh!!😊 u DONT suck!!

Originally posted by: sarareimoo1

OYE HOYEE!!

muneefah sweetTYY!!! gud yaar!! loved ur characters descriptioN!! nad i am being very honest with u sweettY!! i realllllyyyy loved kasturi in the benaras avatar so wheneve u will ryte the FF i would be in a dreamland for sure!! it reallly adds to the mystery how two ppll one living in benaras and other in toronto (canada) will meet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

omG!! i am reallllyYYY waiting for ur FFF!! and this is the best tyme to start a ff becus there is less activity goin on in this foruM!!

wishing u best of luck for ur FF

and now something for U!!

kya khoob ff banaya tuneh

parhay gey hum hamesha yeh vada raha tumseh!!

WAITING !!!

sara!!

Originally posted by: robbii

lol this is for u r characters sketch👏👏.....very very gud start

omg...robbie owns gym in mississaga!!!!😲...belive me from tomorrow onwards...y tomorrow... from today onwards u will miss me on the IF.😉

Originally posted by: annu08

thanks for starting ff i think ff will distress wahever happening in the serial. Its really nice sktech of characters

Originally posted by: AH01

Awww u dont suck!!!😃

sometimes people dont add comments, i read alot of the topics but i am too lazy to comment😆😆

He grabbed Kasturi's hand & twisted it

kasturi:stop it!mujhay chorey.Its hurting.

Rohan:(😡)kya kaha?dard!!Tumhey dard tab nahe hoa jab tum mujhay market bahane se le gaye aur asal mein u wanted to meet ur yaar,ur boyfriend.Bolo jawab do.....

And he slaps Kasturi hard on her face & continues to talk:

Rohan:ub chup kuon hogaye.bolo!

He hits Kasturi hard on her back.

Kasturi:(crying bitterly😭)Mujhey choriye.Mein market kisi se milney nahe gaye the.App ne kaha market chalo to mein gaye the,aur app mujhay waha chor kar agaye.I m new in dis country,mujhay raasto ka kuch pata nahe hai.I was lost & frightened.A guy was passin by,he saw me & helped me out.Dats it.mein nahe jaanti woh kaun hai kuon hai,mein sirf itna jaanti hoo ke he helped me out.Mera yakeen kijiye.Hum aik doosre ko nahe jaante.

Rohan:wah larki!!wah!ajj to tumhary zabaan bohat chal rahe hai.beghairat(its an urdu word meaning bad) aurat.Chori chori larko se milte hai..

Kasturi:please app ko jo kehna hai kahey,leken kujh phir aisa ilzaam matt lagaye..isey behter hai ke app meri jaan le ley leken aisa ilzam matt lagaye

Rohan:ohhh!!!to ye baat hai.Mujhay kya pagal samajh rakha hai ke mein tumhari jaan le lo takey mujhey jail ki chaki peesni paray(dis means 2 go to jail)..nahe kasturi chawla,nahe

& he slapped her once again

Kasturi was frightened & was shivering

Rohan:Nikal jao..abhe ishe waqt meray ghar se nikal jao..mein tum jaisi manhoos aurat ka saaya apne ghar per nahe parne desakta.Dafa hojao aur ainda apna chehra mujhey matt dikhana.suna tumne.nikal jao.

Rohan grasped kasturi's hand,n pulled her out of the room & when he reached da main gate,he threw kasturi out & kasturi fell & her head hit da wall & her forehead started bleedin()

Rohan:ainda apne manhoos shukal mujhey matt dikhana.

& he shut da door on Kasturi's face..