PreRish ss 'TWO PATHS ONE DESTINATION' author's note page 16 - Page 4

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Interesting take..

Continue soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
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By what time is the update expected tomorrow? Morning, afternoon, evening or night? 😃

An impatient reader 😛

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Interesting story. Do include me in the PM list.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovelife235

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For getting a pm of the story like this post of pm list or you can let me know in the comments

Thank you for adding me. There's an extra L by mistake. 😁
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Thank you everyone for reading the story and sharing your valuable time with me. I was overwhelmed seeing the reactions that the 'Prologue' got😳😳😳.

So here is the first chapter of this SS.

HAPPY READING 🤗

CHAPTER 1

In BASU BARI (PRERNA).....

Prerna is sitting in her room in Basu Bari. She is thinking about what happened that day. The words of Anurag were haunting her. ""Sorry mom we got married without your permission." ; " She is my wife Sonalika." ; "She saved my life then we fell in love and got married."

As if that was not enough for Prerna's torture Anurag was happily kissing Sonalika in his room. Finally Prerna's patience broke and she started crying drawing her knees to her chest.....

FLASHBACK STARTS>>>>>

Prerna is thinking and trying to come in terms with Anurag's marriage but could not help herself in anyway to do that, so she decided to confront Anurag.

When she was about to knock on the door, she heard some noises coming from the room. She hid herself behind the door to listen what happens inside the room.

Sonalika:"Baby I am feeling scared. What if your mother does not accept me as your wife, then what will I do? Though she behaved nicely with me still she looks very much traditional and I am not much traditional."

Anurag:"She is my mother. I know her. Do not worry Sona. She liked you and also accepted you. Moreover you have saved my life and we both also love each other so there is no questioning of mom not loving you. And I am there to help you right. Now give me a sweet smile."

Sonalika could not help but smile at his endearing ways. She was about to turn back she she felt a strong pull at her waist and before she could comprehend what was happening she felt herself getting crashed on a hard chest which belongs to her gentleman husband Anurag. The desire in his eyes was all the hint Sonalika needed. She rose on her toes and his lips met hers in the midway. They kissed unaware of the two eyes filled with rage watching their romance.

FLASHBACK ENDS>>>>>

No matter how hard Prerna tried she could not clear the image of their kissing out of her head. There is only one way to save herself from this torture. That is to go to the orphanage where she joined after Anurag left her alone in her wedding night.

As Prerna knew the kids were waiting for their beloved Prerna didi to come and spend time with them.

As soon as Prerna reached the kids surrounded her from all the sides and before she knew she was dragged by the towards the center of the courtyard where she was sitting on the chair and the kids were sitting around her eagerly waiting for Prerna to complete the faity tale. After Prerna completed the story, the kids went for their art practice.

Suddenly after so many days Prerna felt a void of a girl whose first ever words were "Prerna MAA". She is none other than her ex-daughter Kukki. She never gave a second thought of how Kukki would have felt when out of nowhere She decided to leave her. She was so busy in dreaming about her life with Anurag that she forgot about the little girl who has nothing but pure and undivided love for her. She also remembered her ex-husband Mr. Bajaj who was a ruthless, cold, rude businessman for the world but he treated her with respect and dignity. He not only saved her from the poisonous words of Mohini Basu but also fought for her against the basus whenever they insulted her.

All of a sudden she felt a lump in her throat. " I always told Mr.Bajaj that he was wrong but not only him even I was wrong. But he never ever stopped me from hurting him even if I am hurting him for something when he was not responsible for that."

Prerna felt herself getting dizzy. She quickly left the place and reached Basu Bari almost in a daze. She locked herself in her room and she remembered something " If you don't respect yourself then no one will ever respect you" "You are right Mr.Bajaj. Anurag for whom I fought against the world, for whom I did not even consider the feelings of a little girl whose first ever words were "PRERNA MAA".

With these thought in mind Prerna slowly drifted into sleep.

PRECAP= Rishabh's life in london

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Posted: 5 years ago
#36

Amazing Start, Prapti.❤️

Waiting for next.



Just a suggestion, please update the chapter name and page number in the topic name. 😳 it will be easier for the readers to read your stories.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Amazing Start, Prapti.❤️

Waiting for next.



Just a suggestion, please update the chapter name and page number in the topic name. 😳 it will be easier for the readers to read your stories.

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Yes, I have updated the index. Thank you for giving me your time.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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By what time is the update expected tomorrow? Morning, afternoon, evening or night? 😃

An impatient reader 😛

Hi, Discolights I have updated the first chapter

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Posted: 5 years ago
#39

Congratulations and best wishes for beginning your journey as a writer on this forum. 🤗

THANK YOU SO MUCH DEAR.

I wish show makers only had an idea about the power of their own creation 'Bajaj' (KSG for me), that made people like us explore a new side. I am not sure if it is the same for you but fact is only if they put in a little effort this show could have touched heights. But seeing new stories coming up so frequently makes for all that loss. Show mein na sahi, yaha hi sahi

YEAH I COMPLETELY AGREE WITH YOU.

PS- You are being generous when you say that made suggestion when all I did was share my questions as a reader. Thank you 🤗

DON'T BE TOO HUMBLE MEENAKSHI. THE MONOLOGUE THE RAAT ME ROTI INCIDENT WAS YOUR IDEA NOT MINE😳

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Great beginning Prapti👏

Sonalika first


I love Sonalika 😛 She genuinely seems to be in love with Anurag. I don't know if you plan to make her evil but their little moment was nice and Prerna hearing and watching them 😎Liked it.

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