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Posted: 5 years ago
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finally I am here, I am yet to comment in the earlier SS, that's my abs fav among Prerish FFs

coming to this thank youu for incorporating one my request into this story, I am just in awww of this Prerna and The Rishab Bajaj I am always in awww

Prerna is fire here just as how she has to be ..... inspiring trying to set her foot on ground despite lack of experience , the oozing confidence and nerves of steel , yet she is vulnerable and throws tantrums of a girl

this part is abs fun specially the traffic police and their banter , and the intrigue towards the end , she is upset him for bringing him ? whom ? sameh ?

waiting for this

and Mary you have such amazing narration skills and the flow , pace and screenplay writing is smooth 👏

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Super awsm update to gud.

Plzzzz cont

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Posted: 5 years ago
#73

Mary,

another amazing update. This is gorgeous.
I can picture the traffic and police station scene so perfectly.
so Sameh and prerna know one another? That’s a twist!

Bajaj is falling 😘😂

Update soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pori

Mary,

another amazing update. This is gorgeous.
I can picture the traffic and police station scene so perfectly.
so Sameh and prerna know one another? That’s a twist!

Bajaj is falling 😘😂

Update soon

Even I was wondering if there is some connection between Sameh and Prerna.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Mary, this is an amazing story. Your Prerna is amazing and I love how you have imagined her. Your story has everything that I would have loved to see on screen.

Waiting for the next update!

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Posted: 5 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: munnihyderabad

finally I am here, I am yet to comment in the earlier SS, that's my abs fav among Prerish FFs

coming to this thank youu for incorporating one my request into this story, I am just in awww of this Prerna and The Rishab Bajaj I am always in awww

Prerna is fire here just as how she has to be ..... inspiring trying to set her foot on ground despite lack of experience , the oozing confidence and nerves of steel , yet she is vulnerable and throws tantrums of a girl

this part is abs fun specially the traffic police and their banter , and the intrigue towards the end , she is upset him for bringing him ? whom ? sameh ?

waiting for this

and Mary you have such amazing narration skills and the flow , pace and screenplay writing is smooth 👏


Thank you so much, you are very kind. I am writing the next part and enjoying it. Your idea was so good! Hope the story meets your expectations. Stay tuned.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Such an interesting story 😲 Eagerly waiting for the next update! 😳

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: iheartarducb

Such an interesting story 😲 Eagerly waiting for the next update! 😳


I am delayed. Had a bit of a freeze and second guessing. Very near finish for the next part.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Very nice and interesting story

Please update soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
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awsm update

Plzzzz cont

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