Tender Encounters (A PreRish FF) [Author's note on Pg 1] - Page 9

Originally posted by: Viswasruti

The title--'Tender Encounters' and the introductory note attracted me and increased my inquisitiveness after reading a few lines of the first chapter of your OS.⭐️

Want to read it leisurely and for sure will give my feedback soon, and I assure you, it will be praise for your writing skills!😊

I am a big fan of good writers and their great work.🤗 Just saw it while searching for some other thing!

Yes, I am not watching this serial, and have no idea about its storyline. So I am going to read it as your fresh work! 😊

Thank you so much. You're entirely too kind.

I hope you don't find any difficulty with certain references I have made. If so, I will only be pleased to help in any way I can. I'll eagerly wait for your feedback, positive or negative. I'm sure it'll only help me write better. Once again, thank you.

Originally posted by: komlika

He took her to secret treehouse

He did right thing by not letting prerna talk to Sneha

Poor Sneha 😭 she must be heart broken

Glad shiv cleared her doubts. How dare Anu implied that

Thank you for the update 🤗

Thank you so much for reading it ❣️

Ah! This was such a delightful read. Absolutely loved reading the walk to the secret tree-house with the narration of its origin. The romantic undertones and the unexpressed longing present in this update was so heartwarming. Mr Bajaj can be this fluffy only in her presence.

Are PreRish fated to unite in the same secret tree-house? They already replicated so much of what the former lovers did.

Amazing update. And, no, he isn't fluffy yet. Not in your story. He's just a man who's got desires. Like I always could relate, he still reminds me of Matt Farrell from Paradise. Bajaj in general, does. But in some stories, he reminds me of him a lot more. Lovely bro. I loved the tree house portion. I wanna know why he's gone off to Delhi and I like the fact that Prerna is affected by him. Continue soon?

Originally posted by: Wistfulness

Ah! This was such a delightful read. Absolutely loved reading the walk to the secret tree-house with the narration of its origin. The romantic undertones and the unexpressed longing present in this update was so heartwarming. Mr Bajaj can be this fluffy only in her presence.

Are PreRish fated to unite in the same secret tree-house? They already replicated so much of what the former lovers did.

Thank you.. I am so happy you liked reading it. I'm trying to infuse the story with a little symbolism and foreshadowing. And it's validation when the readers get it. Thank you once again

Originally posted by: najma123

Amazing update. And, no, he isn't fluffy yet. Not in your story. He's just a man who's got desires. Like I always could relate, he still reminds me of Matt Farrell from Paradise. Bajaj in general, does. But in some stories, he reminds me of him a lot more. Lovely bro. I loved the tree house portion. I wanna know why he's gone off to Delhi and I like the fact that Prerna is affected by him. Continue soon?

Thank you so much for reading it. I'm glad you liked it. And you didn't find Bajaj too out of character. That was my chief fear.

I'll confess I'm ignorant of Mr. Farrell but I'll surely check it out to see this Bajaj like character 😁😅

Originally posted by: aryapdane

Thank you so much for reading it. I'm glad you liked it. And you didn't find Bajaj too out of character. That was my chief fear.

I'll confess I'm ignorant of Mr. Farrell but I'll surely check it out to see this Bajaj like character 😁😅

Waitin to read more

A writer should be a reader long before start writing! Salutations to you for that good taste. An engrossing love-hate relationship was narrated here by a very talented writer who has a flair for poetry, which is making a mark in the movement of the storyline. The love of words made your writing lucid, clearly visible there and in a way added a new dimension to this captivating FF.

Great combination of elemental feelings and primal simplicities in love and life which has given a new voice to the inner feelings of the characters through your style of writing, which sounded too melodious to the heart! Excellent work is done by you.

What a great narrative, with brilliant words and fusion of love and longing which amalgamated in the psyche of the separated lovers in a big way! The words acquired life when they are issued from the heart of a good writer!! 👏

Dealing with a multilayered storyline like this is a tightrope walk to any writer, but you danced there with your utmost balancing skills while giving the collective visual statements of the two extremely contrasting personalities who shared a passionate bond but separated by destiny--- loved those primary characters' interactions !!!

Yes, got some doubts and questions regarding the other characters, but your narration covered up all such issues, as I told you earlier, I read it with a fresh perspective and appreciated most! 😊

Continue writing such worth reading FFs.

Originally posted by: Viswasruti

A writer should be a reader long before start writing! Salutations to you for that good taste. An engrossing love-hate relationship was narrated here by a very talented writer who has a flair for poetry, which is making a mark in the movement of the storyline. The love of words made your writing lucid, clearly visible there and in a way added a new dimension to this captivating FF.

Great combination of elemental feelings and primal simplicities in love and life which has given a new voice to the inner feelings of the characters through your style of writing, which sounded too melodious to the heart! Excellent work is done by you.

What a great narrative, with brilliant words and fusion of love and longing which amalgamated in the psyche of the separated lovers in a big way! The words acquired life when they are issued from the heart of a good writer!! 👏

Dealing with a multilayered storyline like this is a tightrope walk to any writer, but you danced there with your utmost balancing skills while giving the collective visual statements of the two extremely contrasting personalities who shared a passionate bond but separated by destiny--- loved those primary characters' interactions !!!

Yes, got some doubts and questions regarding the other characters, but your narration covered up all such issues, as I told you earlier, I read it with a fresh perspective and appreciated most! 😊

Continue writing such worth reading FFs.

Thank you for your kind words. I'm over the moon that you liked the story and the way I chose to write the characters. I'm glad that your unfamiliarity with the show didn't hinder your enjoyment of it. That is a huge compliment you have paid me. Thank you once again.