PreRish OS : Haq Mohabbat Ka! - Page 2

it's wonderful Mystic! the divorce angle made it really interesting. 😃

please write more.

This was so beautifuldo write more 🤗

I loved the way you characterized it. The plot was 👏 And the way she bashed him and called beast😆

I love the way you have written dialogues . Beautifully penned❤️

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THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS OS

I know you have been writing after such a long time and man it doesnt look like so! PreRish inspire you and it is very evident. It has to be your first work that i read of yours, apart from those LONG LONG comments at Bheegi aka Sangita di's post. (which i never got but now I do so no complaints )

The best part of this OS is the fact I GOT TO READ IT FIRST

and it made me as happy as this

I like the fact that Shivi calls our collective pyaar Bajju Jeejz not old jeeja ji though even that has lots of teasing elements. And HO HO HO furious Mrs Bajaj in the rain stomps off to Bajju Office and demands for questions.

my most favourite part of the OS follows next

"Ok if you want me to spell it out to you, the divorce deed will give you freedom from this farce wedding you are stuck in. This life. And once you sign them you will be free of me forever” He continues to speak maintaining a straight face, but the words he was saying was like self-slashing his wrists a hundred times over dying a slow death.

“Ohh, I see and who told you I wanted freedom. Mahatma Gandhiji? Or let me guess Bhagat Singh? ” She speaks sarcastically.

“I know so” Bajaj answers with an air of confidence

"Ohhh, wow you know so... Is that why you haven't signed the papers yet. Come on sign them now. ” Prerna snatches the papers from his hand, places it on the table along with a pen with a thud and looks at him to sign.

“I will do it later” He hesitates.

“Later my foot. Sign them and I will do too. I challenge you, Rishabh Bajaj. Do it” She was in no mood to back down. Shoving the pen in his hand, she waits for him to sign, while he stares at her blankly.

As the minute passes by, Prerna's patience thins away. “Ok, you are not ready to sign them, let me do what I want to then”.

Prerna starts looking around, searching for something and ultimately she puts her hand in Bajaj's coat pocket and retrieves the cigar and the lighter.

“Prerna, what are you up to. Wapas karo mujhe yeh”.

“Bas... Nahi sunni mujhe aapki ek bhi baat. Aapne wo kiya, jo aap chahthe hai aur ab main wo karungi jo main chahthi hoon. ”

Prerna giving two hoots to the cold she is feeling despite being soaked in water, manages to light up the lighter and holding the papers in her hand lights it to flames.

Oh I so love it she takes the lighter and burns the papers off Totally could imagine Bajju's horrified face! And then they resolve the entire masla. She with her child like behaviour and he in his over perfect matured adult like behaviour. I loved the fact they both stuck to their povs buy Bajju loves her more and he had to relent not that she didnt. I loved the fact that she stood up for herself and I WANT THIS PRERNA IN THE SHOW thats it!

Awww they kissed to. its sending fireworks everywhere!

this is SOOOOOOO sweet and intense at the same time. The age gap him matured she immature, him resolute she even more resolute and how they complimented each other was a treat to watch! There were elements of fun intense romance pain and in short TOTAL PAISA VASSOOOOL!

and oh the fact that you shared the os first with me and mentioned me

All this is for you so that you write more and give us treats x3 times every week

p.s. you have to write more buss!

This story is absolutely beautiful !!!!! Loved the concept and the dialogues ..please do write more on PreRish

This was so so wonderful!

I loved her authoritative attitude and Bajaj literally turned meek! Ooo yeah! Awesome!

And then, their final deal. Awww

I could imagine that head touch ❤️

Such a feel good OS in the end with the right amount of action and turbulence and peaceful end

Loved it.

Honest to god, this was perfect PRB. Loved it a lot.

Just like a man to think he knows everything. And RB sometimes do take things quite literally. Loved the dialouge.

PS: Have I seen you in the IB forum by any chance?

Such a awesome update dear

Totally loved it☺️

Please keep writing👍

Lovely OS keep up the hard work 😳

Having a horrible exhausting day at college, cribing about the story line and Bajaj's screen space and I come across this. I have fallen in love with this story. I see Prerna taking a stand for herself which is a achievement in itself!

"Ohhh, wow you know so... Is that why you haven't signed the papers yet. Come on sign them now. ” Prerna snatches the papers from his hand, places it on the table along with a pen with a thud and looks at him to sign.

“I will do it later” He hesitates.

“Later my foot. Sign them and I will do too. I challenge you, Rishabh Bajaj. Do it” She was in no mood to back down. Shoving the pen in his hand, she waits for him to sign, while he stares at her blankly.

This scene shows how far they have come in their relationship.Prerna knows he wasn't happy with the divorce and she is fighting for their relationship.

Prerna giving two hoots to the cold she is feeling despite being soaked in water, manages to light up the lighter and holding the papers in her hand lights it to flames.

This was BADASS I so want to see her do somethind like this on screen!

He wraps her in the cocoon of his arms, holding her close to his heart. While their heart finds a little peace, he consoles her.

“Shhhh, Priyu.. I am right here. I am not going anywhere. Stop crying darling…"

^^This is my favorite part It was just so perfect and I have no words to describe it.

“Mohabbat hogayi hai aapse, Prerna Rishabh Bajaj, khud se zyada, sabse zyada aur hamesha karta rahunga… I love you”

“I love you too Rishabh..”

Their confession was simple and heartwarming

This so well written please do write more! 🤗🤗😘😘😘for writing this!