Laal Ishq -- AnuPre FF *Part 2 Page 3*19/11

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Chapter 1!!!

Prerna sitting on her bed is remembering Anuraag and she is feeling blessed to have a friend like him.

Her phone rings and it is Onu.

Prerna: hello, Anuraag

Anuraag : hi, woh prerna...I am sorry but main tumhara book wapas karna bhool gaya tha...so if u don't mind can I give it to u tomorrow in college?

Prerna: it's okay. Haan tum mujhe kal de dena.

Anuraag: thank u...waise...

Prerna: hmm...

Anuraag: mujhe tumse kuch puchna tha..If, ..If u don't mind

Prerna: hmm pucho...

Anuraag: kya tum sach mein naaven babu se pyaar karti hoo

Prerna: (silent)

Anuraag: phir tod do Yeh shaadi...

Prerna: after shaadi apne aap pyaar ho jata hai...phir love phir family and all. And hum dono khushh hai ... ek duje ke...

Anuraag: ek duje ke bina!!! Prerna plz shaadi karne ke baad ka mat socho...because naveen babu is disgusting...

Prerna : tumhara liye honge disgusting mere liye nahi...and Anuraag plz tum jante ho that it's my personal matter and tumhe yeh sab jane ki interest kahan se aati hai?

Anuraag: (whispering)tumhara liye kuch bhi.

Prerna: hello,Anuraag kuch bola tumne?

Anuraag: no...okay bye good night..

Prerna: okay bye good night and Anuraag dreams!!

Anuraag: haha

Prerna: bye...

Anuraag: bye...

The phone call ends. Prerna sleeps.

Anuraag is still unhappy with the conversion. He wants to know what is in her mind but she is not at all interested to share anything with him. He stands in front of his room's window and talks to himself

"Yeh selfishness thi unki ya meri bewakhoofi? Kyun woh mujhse chidh ti hai? Kya main itna bura hai?"

Mohini enters.

Mohini: Onu, abhi tak tum soye nahi?

Anuraag: woh actually need nahi arahi thi..

Mohini : tumhe ayegi bhi nahi...jab tak tum apne biwi ne nakhre nahi utha the Ho.

Anuraag: sorry...main samajha nahi...

Mohini: budhu...Onu...main komolika ke baare me

Anuraag: mom plz mujhe kisi komolika tomolika ke bare discuss ya koi baat nahi karni hai.

Mohini: but beta...

Anuraag: mom I feel ki mujhe soo jana chahiye..

Mohini: okay then u sleep.

Precap: Anuraag feels something strange for prerna.

Sorry I can write only this much in each chapter as I am not that great writer

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Basilisk thumbnail
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Posted: 6 years ago
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That was a really great start Rose!
Keep it up and looking forward to the next chapter :)
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Are you kidding me , you sound like an amazing writer .
Do continue soon , hope Anurag rubbishes mohinis Komolika on the serials also like this .
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Komoloka tomolika🤣 you had me cracking there, and dont underestimate yourself, you seems to be an amazing writer and that piece of writing is its proof, i know this ff would be great, till then best of luck..
Love
Saumya
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It was really great!!! But the higlight of the update was Komolika Tomolika 🤣
Cont soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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It's lovely , do continue
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Moonstique thumbnail
Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Basilisk

That was a really great start Rose!

Keep it up and looking forward to the next chapter :)


Thank u 😛
Moonstique thumbnail
Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: AdyaXoxo

Are you kidding me , you sound like an amazing writer .
Do continue soon , hope Anurag rubbishes mohinis Komolika on the serials also like this .


No dear...not kidding...
Yes,even I hope the same...

Thank you 😛
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sparklle801

Komoloka tomolika 🤣 you had me cracking there, and dont underestimate yourself, you seems to be an amazing writer and that piece of writing is its proof, i know this ff would be great, till then best of luck..

Love
Saumya


Thank u so much...
Even I was laughing while writing that Komolika and tomolika😆
Edited by MeervanSJ - 6 years ago

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