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Indulekha00

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Posted: 6 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Vini4ever
Beautiful. Loved it. Hope we get the next instalment very soon.

Thank you 😊

I thought of it as an OS and was in a hurry to post it before yesterday's Adan pradan episode

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Indulekha00

@Indulekha00

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Posted: 6 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: xoanyaxo
You have penned down a beautiful os
Would love to read more of it

Thank you 😊

i liked yours too, very much, especially was it for Keeps

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Indulekha00

@Indulekha00

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Posted: 6 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna
Amazing! Will you continue?

thank you 😃

About continuing I am not too certain

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Indulekha00

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Posted: 6 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: 3dancelover
Loved it especially the last paragraph! Nice play on debt and who is for, to come to that conclusion. Only if that actually happens on the show!

Thank you 😃

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Indulekha00

@Indulekha00

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Posted: 6 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: c85rie
I loved it. I used to watch the original of course before it became a joke. The chemistry between Cezanne and Shweta was off the charts. But somewhere along the line Anu was too sentimental. This is how I wanted him to be. I hope you make this into multiple part story. It is too good to be left here.

Thank you 😊

Even I had watched season one for a limited period of time. since that was the 'hiding M&B inside the books' period, I gave up active viewing once Anu married Nikka. I couldn't just accept him ditching her for whatever reason and then he ruined the second chance too! What is love without trust?

this time around Anu seems to be more sensible and having the ability to think logically, I hope he stays this way 😆

I did consider this to be a One shot though

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Indulekha00

@Indulekha00

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Posted: 6 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: AdyaXoxo
Loved it

thank you 😃

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Indulekha00

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Posted: 6 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Mishti_Dahi
Wow, loved it! With the most logical, befitting twist in the end.
I hope you continue!😳

Loved your portrayal of her agony and his shock.
That song and that entire paragraph flowed so well!⭐️

Please continue.
Cheers!

Thank you 😃

For me, It is always a song that inspires an OS ... when it gets linked to a story line in the show.

this one was completed with super speed coz i wanted it posted yesterday itself.

Hadn't actually thought of continuing it when I penned this down.. but yeah may be I will add something more.