Love Notes....New FF-prt 12 pg 6 - Page 2

mukti still hasn't noticed that the guy she writes to is PREM!! ... 😆 ...
I really like ur idea for this FF! it's an original!
I think that mukti will find out that the guy she writes too is PREM the guy whom she's classmates with and will think he won't accept her if he finds out how low class she is compared to him! Prem will probably realize mukti is the mukti who he 'loves' AFTER mukti finds out herself.. 😃 ..plz do continue soon!

hey just found ur ff and i must say that i really like your u know iam a very big fan of PM and i am always looking for their ffs so thanks for starting this one update soon i will be waiting

Part 3

Soon Prem comes back and they both start to choose songs to dance too. Right when they started listening to music, Mukti's phone rang. Mukti looked and saw it was her dad,
Mukti: Prem turn off the music.
Prem does so.
Mukti: hello
Jeevan: hello Mukti beta, kidar hai tu, humne Jared ko bhi phone kiya, lekin usne kaha ke tu uske saath nahi hai
Mukti: oh, mein bas ghar hi aa rahi hoon, aap chinta maat kijiye...(she starts getting her things together to leave)
Jeevan: ok, bas, hum khana khane wale the, toh tu jaldi aa, phir hum khalenge...
Mukti: ji theek hai...bye
She hung up her phone then runs out of the house...

Prem stood at his door when he heard Prerna and everyone talking about Mukti...he opened his door more to hear...
Prerna: saach mein, bohot hi sanskari hai!
Mr. Bajaj: haan, uske maa-baap se milne chaiye...hai na Sneha
Sneha: of course, aur mama, agar humne bhaiya ke liye ek lardki doondhni hai, toh Mukti kyon nahi!
Prerna: haan! That's a great idea!
Then Prem closes his door
Prem: were they talking about me getting married to Mukti! No way, she is so low class, im never going to marry her! Im only going to marry My Mukti!
Prem then heads for the washroom to get ready for bed. Soon he comes out and starts looking around for something, suddenly he saw something...it was a picture...he picked it up, and saw it was a picture of him, but this wasn't his...the boy in the picture was him, but it didn't belong to him...he'd never seen it before...and the little girl in the picture...she was his best friend...they were holding hands and swinging on swings together...
Prem: whose picture is this..? This isn't mine...I've never seen it before...whose could it be...?

Next Day... (Weekend)
Bajaj house...
Prerna was downstairs and making breakfast. Soon Prem came down and sat on the sofa in the living room...
Prerna: are Prem uth gaye?
Prem didn't reply and headed back upstairs to get ready then come back downstairs...

Sneha: good morning mama!
Prerna: uth gayi...aur Prem toh upar ek ghanta pehle gaya tha...shayad phirse so gaya hai...tu jake usse utha, aaj humhe Mukti ko yahan bula na hai, toh usse uska number bhi lene hai!
Sneha: haan mama, mein abhi aayi!
Sneha runs upstairs...and soon enters Prem's room.
Sneha: Prem! Prem!
Prem: hmmm (sleepy)
Sneha walks over to him, and pulls his blanket off him: Prem mujhe batao, Mukti ke cell num kya hain?
Prem: uska num hai... (And he tells her the num) ab mujhe sone do please!
Sneha: thanks bye!
Sneha runs downstairs and Prerna calls Mukti...
Prerna: hello...?
Mukti: hello kaun?
Prerna: mein Prerna, Prem ki maa.
Mukti: haan ji boliye...
Prerna: voh kya hai, ke hum chate hai ke tum aur tumhare maa-baap humare ghar aye...
Mukti: uh kyon...
Prerna: bas khana keliye, please!
Mukti: theek hai, hum aayenge...
Prerna: aur sab ko lana...theek hai!
Mukti: hm...
Prerna: bye...
Mukti: bye

Later that day...

Prem: Sneha mujhe batao ke tum mere kamre mein kyon aayi thi!
Sneha: number lene keliye!
Prem: kiska number!
Sneha: Mukti ka!
Prem: lekin kyon..?
Sneha: tumhe pata chale ga, shaam thak wait karo!
Prem: what ever...fine...

That Evening Mukti's Family arrived at Bajaj house...
Jeevan: Mukti, yeh hai unka ghar...
Mukti: nods...actually papa, mein kal raat Prem Bajaj ke saat thi, humara project tha, toh usko hi karne aaye the...toh aaj uski maa ne humhe dinner pe invite kiya hai...chale???
Jeevan: chalo Gayatri...
Mukti then knocks on the door, and Prerna opens the door...
Prerna: namaste...
Mukti: namaste...
Prerna: andar ao...
Mukti nods then tell her parents to go in first.
Jeevan and Gayatri: Namaste...
Prerna and Mr. Bajaj (who just got there): Namaste...
Mukti then introduces her parents: Mrs. Bajaj, this is my dad, Jeevan and my mom, Gayatri..
Prerna: bohot khushi hai, ke aap log aaye! Aaye! Khana tayar hai!
Prerna shows them the way to the dining table. Once Prem saw Mukti he figured why they called her here.
Prem thinks: oh no! they actually called her! No way!
Prem: Tushaar bhai...um you know why Mukti is here?
Tushaar: nope, just wait, maa will tell us everything...
Jeevan took a seat by Mr. Bajaj, Gayatri took a seat by Prerna, and Mukti took the seat that was left, between Prem and Tushaar. Soon they all started to eat. After dinner they all went to the living room to talk.
Jeevan: toh aapne humhe yahan kyon bulaya?
Prerna: actually, humhe aap se ek cheez mangni hai...
Gayatri: humare paas kya cheez hogi, jo aa ko chaiye?
Prerna: tumhari beti...
Gayatri: kya?
Prerna: haan, humhe aap ki beti bohot pasand aayi hai, toh hum soch rahe the ke kyon na hum usse apne ghar ki bahu banaye...
Mukti and Prem looked up shocked...
Mukti thinks: nahi, yeh kya keh rahi hai, Prerna ji...mein toh apne Prem se shaadi karna chatiti, ab maa-papa ke khwaaish poori karni hogi...
Prem thinks: omg she is actually asking them this question!
Prerna: humare Tushaar keliye!
Gayatri: kya! Aap...saach bol rahi hai!
Prerna smiles and then nods.
Jeevan: humhe yeh rishte manzoor hai, agar aap ko hai...
Prerna: haan, haan...lekin ab mujhe bas bacho se poochna hai, meine Tushaar se bhi nahi poocha...Tushaar, sorry meine tumse nahi poocha, lekin kya tumhe yeh rishte manzoor hai??
Tushaar: um, yea...ok...but is it ok with Mukti?
Mukti: haan, agar mere maa-papa ko manzoor hai, toh mujhe bhi...
Gayatri smiles, so does Jeevan:
Jeevan: toh hum pundit ji ko bulaye?
Prerna: aap taiyariaan ke bare mein nahi soche, hum sab kar lenge...bas...hum kal hi pundit ji ko bulayenge...don't worry...
Gayatri: acha, ab humhe chalna chaiye, hum kal aapke ghar aayenge...phir hum pundit ji ko bulayenge...acha...namaste...

When Mukti gets home she goes on the computer to talk to her Prem. Once she saw his name, she clicked on it.
Mukti says:
Prem!
Prem...<3 says:
Yea!
Mukti says:
Prem...my parents...im getting married.
Prem...<3 says:
What! But how...who...?
Mukti says:
His name is Tushaar Bajaj, Prem...please come to Mumbai...I don't want to get married to him...I want to marry you
Prem...<3 says:
Mukti...don't worry, everything will be fine! I promise...for now I have to go...i'll talk to you later...Bye
Mukti says:
Bye...
Prem then logs off.

It was thundering and raining outside Mukti was sitting and going through her pictures of her and her friends when she notices that a picture she had in her purse was gone...she remember the other day when she was running out of the Bajaj House, she left it in Prem's room...Mukti then ran outside in the rain, and quickly went to her car to go to Prem's house.

Bajaj House:

Mukti runs inside
Prerna: are Mukti beta...kya hua???
Mukti: voh kya hai...mein kuch bhool gayi, kal shaam jab mein aayi thi...Prem kamre mein hai kya?
Prerna: haan, uske kamre mein giri thi kya?
Mukti: haan..
Prerna: toh shayad tum usse bhool jao, kyon ke jo bhi cheez Prem ke kamre mein girti hai, kabhi nahi milti...
Mukti: phir bhi, mujhe check karna hai...acha theek hai, mein abhi aayi.
Mukti runs upstairs and goes into Prem's room. She notices Prem was in the shower, then she starts to look around while she has time. She looks everywhere, and then she was looking in drawers, she notices a couple of pictures in Prem's drawers, which were exactly the same ones she has. Then she looks in another drawer and sees a couple of sheets of paper, on one it said Mukti...Mukti reached out for it, and was right about to touch it when...
"Mukti tum yahan?"
Mukti jumped and turned around, then she noticed it was Prem, who was standing outside the washroom door, just in a towel. She quickly turned back around and looked at the table.
Mukti: sorry Prem, voh mein...she noticed her picture on his desk...mil gayi! Sorry, bas ek tasveer bhool gayi thi yahan, toh voh lene aayi thi.
Prem: oh ok...ab tum jaogi ya nahi?
Mukti: haan, bye...
Mukti walked by Prem and left the room, closing the door behind her.

That night Prem was in bed, and was thinking about Mukti.
Prem thinks: im sorry Mukti, I can't tell you...ke mein hi tumhara Prem hoon,
Then he remember on msn when he was talking to Mukti, Mukti said she was getting married to Tushaar Bajaj.
Prem thinks: tum to janti bhi nahi, ke mein tumhara Prem hoon, aur tumhe pata hi nahi chale ga...aaj meine mom ko itni khush hue dekha, mein Tushaar bhai ki shaadi nahi rokoonga...Mukti I hope that you will be able to forgive me...
Then he cried himself to sleep.

thats all for now...hope you all like the update! and thanks for the nice an great comments!

omg!! prem found out about mukti!! aww! great update!

awwww awesome update umam yaar i loved it 👏 please continue soon 😳

Omg Prem knows shes his mukti n Awww shez gettin married to tushaar n prem cant do nething thts soooo sad...Poor PM!!

Newayz great update plz cont. soooon!
Love,
PoocHii

Part 4

The Next Day @ College in Calculus class:

Mukti was waiting for Jared to come and sit next to her, she was going through her homework, when she felt someone sit next to her...the whole class went quiet. Mukti turned and saw Prem sitting next to her.
Mukti: tum, yahan kyon beth rahe ho?
Prem: bas, I wanted to so I did.
Mukti: lekin yeh Jared ka seat hai...agar tum yahan betho ge toh phir Jared kahan bethe ga?
Prem: he can sit at the other table beside you!
Mukti: ok...
Soon Jared comes and takes a seat next to Mukti on the other table next to her. Then the professor starts to give them their next assignment. He starts telling them how to do everything then he assigns pages 610-615. Mukti starts doing her work, and Prem just stares at her. Whenever Mukti looks up to him, he looks down and does his work. Then Mukti finally catches him.
Mukti whispers: tum mujhe goor, goor ke kyon dekh rahe ho?
Prem whispers: sorry...ab tum kaam karo...
Mukti whispers again: wah! Tum toh hindi bohot ache bolte ho!
Prem whispers again: thanks, but do your work!
Mukti whispers: ok...
Soon they both are done their work, and the class finished. Mukti was heading out the door when Prem stopped her.
Prem: Mukti...
Mukti turned around: kya hai?
Prem: will you...can we...can we be friends?
Mukti: uhh...ok! but just to tell you though, to be my friend you have to follow my rules!
Prem: and what are the rules..?
Mukti: you can never break our friendship! And always be there for me!
Prem laughs: ok...but there is one rule in my friendship
Mukti: what is that?
Prem doesn't say anything and goes up to Mukti, and then he hugs her.
Mukti: yeh kya kar rahe ho Prem?
Prem: jab bhi mein chahoon, tumhe mujhe gale lagana hoga!
Mukti smiles, and then hugs him back: ok!

Then they both walk to the canteen, Mukti notices Jared wasn't at her table, and she didn't want Prem to sit with her, so she went to her table after saying bye to Prem and pretended to call Jared with her phone, then she turned around and saw Prem leaving outside, so she waved to him, and then smiled...Prem was soon gone, Mukti sat at her table and looked around for Jared, then something caught her eye, she noticed Jared was sitting with Amy and eating with her friends. She could totally tell that Jared wasn't her friend anymore. So she went to go get an Ice Cap from Tim Horton's. Then she seated herself at her table again. She started sipping her drink when she felt someone looking at her. She finished her drink then got up to put the cup in the garbage when she bumped into someone.
Mukti: oh, im sorry!
"Oh it's ok..."
Mukti: aw your nice, what s your name?
"Oh, im actually new here, my dad teaches in a class, im Edward Cullen"
Mukti: Professor Cullen's son...what's his first name...Carlisle![pronounced:Car-Ly-Al]
Edward: yea, you know much about him...
Mukti: yea, he's my calculus teacher!
Edward: oh that's nice...
Mukti: friends!
Edward: oh sure...really I don't know anyone here, but thanks you're the first to be nice...
Mukti: oh your welcome...by the way my name is Mukti...im from India...I came here for studies...
Edward: oh...so Mukti... (He said with difficulty)
Mukti: call me what ever you want...well c'mon, ill show you around...
Edward: ok...
Mukti: actually, which class do you have right now???
Edward: im in calculus...with my dad
Mukti: ok, um, how bout after your class you meet me here...like in the Canteen...well make plans sometime, but hey ill walk with you to your next class.
Edward: yes that would be nice...
Mukti: so where are you from?
Edward: well I was studying in London, but then my dad called me here...
Mukti: London! Wow! I wanna go there!
Edward: it's not really fun there; it's very boring, compared to here, I really like it here
Mukti: yea, but I wanna visit London sometime, hey if you ever go back, and then tell me, I will come with you.
Edward: but, ill only go back to visit, im planning to stay here.
Mukti: of course!
Edward: here is my class, you'd better head for your class, you might be late, ill beet you in the canteen...ok, bye...
Mukti: bye, talk to you later...
Edward then entered his class, Mukti walked to her class.'
Mukti thought: kitna acha lardka hai! Wow, aur itna pyaara bhi...

Professor: Miss. Mukti, why are you late?
Mukti: oh, oops, sorry, I was helping someone new to the school
Professor: oh ok, take a seat with your partner, have you guys chosen your song?
Mukti: no, not yet...but don't worry, we will soon.
Professor: ok...take you time.
Mukti: toh Prem, kaunsa gana chuna?
Prem: I don't know, I can't think of any good songs...
Mukti: kya hum koi mast gane pe nach sakte hai, like Bole Ole Ole...ha-ha, that would be too funny, because no one would be able to understand...nahi voh gana nahi...Mmm...idea!
Mukti then whispers something in Prem's ears...: ok!
Prem: no, voh toh itna slow gana hai...
Mukti: Please mujhe voh gana itna acha lagta hai...please...
Prem: theek hai...chalo, ab jab hum mere ghar aayenge toh phir hum kuch practice bhi kar sakte hai..
Prem just then remembered something, and his smile turned upside down at the thought of it.
Mukti: what happened Prem?
Prem: nothing...actually im very happy, you know why, mom called and told me that the pundit ji is coming, so after school I should take you to my house.
Mukti: oh...ok...
Prem; what happened Mukti, at my house you were all excited about the shaadi, and now you getting sad about it...I know, your gonna miss your parents right...
Mukti: nahi, Prem kyon ke tum mere sab se ache dost ho, toh mein yeh keh rahi hoon tumse, mein yeh shaadi nahi karna chati...
Prem: what! Kyon?
Mukti: kyon ki...mein kisi aur se pyaar karti hoon...
Prem: well, mujhe nahi pata, is mamle mein kya ho sakta hai...you know you should've told the truth right then...
Mukti: I know, lekin meri maa-baap itne kuch the, aur mein unki baat daal nahi saki...aur aaj kal, jisse mein pyaar karti hoon, uska kath bhi nahi aaya
Prem: shayad usse kuch hogaya ho...Shayad isiliye voh kath wapas nahi bej paya...
Mukti: nahi! Usse kuch nahi ho sakta...
Prem then noticed how much Mukti loved the Prem she knew...but if she ever figured out that he was her Prem, how would she react???
Soon the class was over, and Mukti headed outside towards to canteen to meet Edward...
Prem: Mukti kahan ja rahi ho?
Mukti: mein bas abhi aayi, I have to go meet my friend, you go home, ill be there soon...
Prem: ok...bye
Mukti: bye
Mukti then ran to the canteen and saw Edward sitting at a table alone...she slowly walked up to him...
Mukti: hi!
Edward: omg you scared me...hello...
Mukti: how was your class?
Edward: if was ok...I didn't like being in the same room with my dad, but everything is fine...
Mukti: oh, well today im kind of busy, so how bout you give me your number, and ill give you mine, then ill call you later ok!
Edward: ok...come let's walk to our cars...
Mukti nods then follows him. They walk to Mukti's car
Edward: you're parked right by my car...
Mukti looked at his car: you have a Volvo! That's so nice!
Edward: thanks, my dad gifted it to me when I got here.
Mukti: nice...just then Mukti's pone rang...hello...
"Mukti beta kahan ho tum?"
Mukti: oh Prerna Aunty, mein bas aa hi rahi thi...sorry...
Prerna: its ok, bas jaldi aa, pundit ji agaye hai...
Mukti: haan mein abhi aa rahi hoon! Bye
Prerna: bye....
Mukti: my aunt just called, I got to go...sorry, bye
Edward: that's fine, I should leave now too, bye! Ill call you...
Mukti nods and then smiles...then heads for her car.

Bajaj House:

Mukti entered and was looking for Prem, but she didn't see him anywhere.
Prerna: are Mukti beta, agayi, chalo beto
Mukti nods and goes to sit by her mom.

The pundit had made the engagement for the next month, and the shaadi in a year.
Prerna: Mukti tumhari parai kab khatam ho gi?
Mukti: bas 2 ya 3 saal mein khatam ho jayega...
Prerna: toh koi baath nahi...theek hai...ab aap jaa sakte hai pundit ji...
Pundit ji: namaste...
Mukti goes and takes her ashirwaad from the pundit, and so does Tushaar.
Prerna: ab Mukti ek kaam kar...
Mukti: ji, kya???
Prerna: mujhe aunty ji nahi bolao...mujhe Choti Maa bolao.
Mukti: ji choti maa...
Prerna and Gayatri laugh...
Gayatri: acha Prerna ji, ab hum chalte hai...
Prerna: are nahi, khana kha ke toh jaye...
Gayatri: nahi ghar pe kaam hai....
Mukti: maa, mujhe dance ke liye practice karna hai, Prem ke saath, toh mein baadh mein aaogi...theek hai...
Gayatri: acha theek hai...namaste...
Prerna: namaste...
Mukti: choti maa, Prem kahan hai?
Prerna: voh upar hai...
Mukti: theek hai, mein jaati hoon...
Mukti goes to Prem's room and when she enters she see's Prem shirtless on the bed...she quickly closes her eyes with her hand.
Mukti: sharam nahi aati!
Prem: oh god....tum knock nahi kar sakti?
Mukti: sorry, mujhe nahi pata tha, ke tum har roz aise hi kamre mein rehte ho...ab jaldi se shirt pehno...humhe practice nahi karni??
Prem: oh haan, ek minute...
Prem goes up to Mukti and removes her hands over her eyes...
Prem: tum dekh sakti ho...
Mukti: what! OMG...acha practice karo...

2 weeks go by and Prem and Mukti practiced very hard...every evening Mukti got a call from Edward, and just the day before the competition Mukti got a letter...when she read it she was in tears...
Prem: what happened Mukti?
Mukti: Prem... (She hugged him) yeh dekho...
Prem looked at the letter....
Prem thought: I had to do this Mukti, if you thought your Prem was alive then you wouldn't marry Bhai, im sorry, but I had to tell you that your Prem died....
Mukti: voh...voh aisa nahi kar sakta...nahi, mera Prem kabhi nahi mar sakta...
Prem then comforts Mukti...

Mukti then phones Edward...
Mukti: hi Edward...
Edward: hi Mukti, how are you feeling?
Mukti: im fine...omg im so tired, I don't think ill be able to perform tomorrow...
Edward: what? Why...you know I was gonna sing tomorrow at the competition, im really good at singing
Mukti: but I thought it was a dance competition
Edward: but I asked if I could sing...im really good, so I thought why not share my talent...
Mukti: ha...ok....ill perform tomorrow...
Edward: that better, anyways aren't you dancing with Prem?
Mukti yea...but it's a slow dance...
Edward: well that's...nice...ha
Mukti: ha...
Edward: Mukti are you ok..? It seems like your upset...
Mukti: nothing...its nothing...anyways, I wanna invite you to my engagement next weekend...
Edward: oh, who's the lucky one?
Mukti: its Tushaar Bajaj, you know Prem...his brother...
Edward: well you don't seem happy about it...
Mukti: yea, because I don't want to marry him, I am in love with someone else...
Edward: really, then why don't you tell everyone?
Mukti: because, now I can't marry him, I just got a letter from his family, he died in a car accident yesterday...
Edward: oh, what was his name?
Mukti: Prem...
Edward: Prem isn't dead though...
Mukti: of course not, my Prem...is someone else, we wrote notes to each other, and well he never wrote back to me, and today I got a note from his family saying...
Edward: oh...well don't worry, ill come to your engagement next weekend, where is it?
Mukti: at Bajaj House...
Edward: ok, ill be there...well Mukti, I have to leave now, I have to practice once more...so ill talk to you tomorrow...
Mukti: ok, bye
Edward: bye...

thats all for now, hope you all liked it....

nice update umam..continue soon please 😳

very nice update!
Poor mukti..just wondering b4 prem was like he would never fall for a middle class girl..and now that he found out about mukti he didn't react the way i thought he would!! 😆
luv reading this ff! plz continue soon..great job btw 😛

Oh tht was superb!!!
Omg Mukti still dooesnt know tht her frend is her love...her Prem! It must b really hard 4 Prem to do all this after knowing tht she is his love hes helpless! Hmmm Edward seems to b a really nice person i wonder if he help Mukti in this situation!

Neways great part...Nice story!
Plz cont. sooon!

Love,
PoocHii.