Love Notes....New FF-prt 12 pg 6

hey guys, this is Umam again with a new FF, the main characters again are Prem and Mukti, but the story concept is that they don't know who each other are, but they are in Love with each other....they always e-mail each other but they don't know how each other look, its kind of like Love on the Net...so yea, this whole FF is not gonna be based on the net, but part of it is, Prem and Mukti will gradually get to know each other over the net...that is all ill say for now, but hope you guys will enjoy this FF, and ill be starting it maybe on Monday, but ill be starting to type the first part right now! hope you all will enjoy! and please comment!

Umam

interstin carry on iam with u 👏 😛

ohhh.. Im looking forward to reading it.. 😛

great..luv pm jodi please contnue soon 😊

NIce story concept...looking forword to read a new PM FF!!!
Carry on hun!!!
Love,
PoocHii

Part 1

In Canada...

We see a 2008 Lexus come to a stop outside of a building, 3 guys come out, and with them one girl each...They all walk towards the college.

Then we a see a girl come out of a 2007 Toyota, she wore a light pink and black kameez shalwar, with a light pink and brown purse, and heads towards the same building.

The girl was walking when suddenly she bumped into someone, and she fell, but suddenly she stopped mid-air, she felt a arm around her back, she couldn't see the persons face because her hair was in the way. Then she moves her hair, and gets shocked to see a guys face right in front of hers. The Guy looked at her in confusion for 5 minutes, when suddenly he heard someone call the girl from behind, "Mukti!" Mukti blinked, and then the guy quickly helped her up. Mukti walked away, but on her way she turned to look at this guy...the guy smiled and turned away. That evening still at the building in a room...
"Everyone turn to page 504 in ur note books, read up to 514, then answer the questions on page 515"
Everyone in the room opens there notebooks, then start working...
"Mukti, can I borrow a pencil...?"
Mukti: yea sure...one minute...
She soon hands the guy a pencil, then looks through her bag for something when suddenly she felt someone's eyes on her, she looked behind her and saw the same guy who helped her, sitting a seat behind her.
"Miss. Mukti, Is everything alright?"
Mukti: haan, sorry...
Then she starts her work, after class she goes to the canteen, and sits at a table were she knew only a couple people...
Mukti: Jared, do you know who that guy was, you know is our last class, the guy who was sitting behind me...
Instead of Jared someone else answered her...
Amy: yea! You don't..?
Mukti: um...no...who is he, what's his name?
Amy: he's Prem, he is so popular here you know...but he doesn't fall for anyone that looks poor though...
Mukti could so tell Amy did not like her. But how could she call her poor...Mukti was about to talk back when...
Jared: c'mon Mukti, lets go...
Soon Mukti and Jared were outside...
Jared: Mukti do you need a ride?
Mukti: nope, I drove here, but thanks for asking...oh my goodness, I can't wait to get home, you know how I've been sending letters to that guy, and well his letter is coming back to me today! I have to go get it from my office...I've gotta go, bye! Ill phone you!
Jared: ok, bye!

Mukti soon leaves the college, and get s to another building, she runs inside. She runs to the metal boxes in the corner, then pulls out her key, and takes out a white envelope from there, closes the box, and goes to her car. She opens the envelope right when she gets in the car.

Dear Mukti,
You would never guess what happened today! My parents bought me a new 2008 Lexus, its awesome, when we finally see each other you should ride in it with me! Well yesterday at our today at our school, a new girl was here, she reminded me of someone, like someone I've talked too, I don't know why...but I've never seen her before. But anyways I dn't care about her, I only love you! You know even at my college everyone thinks im still dating, I've never told anyone about you....oh my god! Im late gotta go now, love you! Bye

Your Prem <3
p.s. come online at 3:45 sharp!

Mukti smiled and put the note down...she looked at her clock and noticed it was 3:50...she started her car and quickly drove home...

Mukti turned her computer on, and quickly signed in, she noticed Jared was online, and right at the bottom is said Mukti's nickname for Prem...Prem...<3. she quickly clicked his name and right then...
Prem...<3 says:
Hi...what took you so long?
Mukti says:
Sorry, just got your note; I totally forgot what time it was....
Prem...<3 says:
Its ok, so what's up?
Mukti says:
Nothing much you...?
Then they talked for hours, when Mukti's parents called her for dinner she ran downstairs grabbed her dinner and then went back up stairs...they talked all night...
Mukti says:
Toh kya baat hai, is lardki ka naam kya tha?
Prem...<3 says:
Its amazing, uska naam bhi Mukti tha...
Mukti says:
Aur tum log kaise mile???
Suddenly Prem's conversation exited, and Mukti looked around, "are yeh kya hogaya?"
Mukti's parents call from downstairs "Mukti beta! Light baandh hogayi hai!"

hope you all loved this update, and love further updates...i will continue as soon as possible, but i need to know if i should continue...please comment! and hope you all enjoyed!

great update umam!!!! 👏
continue can't wait 4 the next part!!!! 😊

Part 2

The Next Day At College:

Mukti runs to her first class and sits next to Jared.
Mukti: hi...
Jared: hi, Mukti..???
Mukti: hmm???
Jared: you said you would call yesterday, I was waiting...why didn't you call?
Mukti: oh, sorry, I was talking to Prem last night!
Jared: oh, you mean Prem Bajaj?
Mukti: no, the Prem that I send letters too....
Jared: oh, ok...Muk...
Professor: everyone show me your work from yesterday...
Jared quickly turns away and opens his books. The Professor walks around, then soon goes back to the front of the class and soon gives everyone their new assignment.
Mukti: thank god, he didn't tell everyone I didn't finish my work...you know the whole night yesterday I was talking to Prem, and I didn't finish my work...
Jared: oh, you do know that he will talk to you later...
Mukti: I don't care about that; at least he didn't say it in front of everyone....
Jared smiles, and then turns back to his work.

After class everyone starts walking out, when the professor stops Mukti.
Professor: Miss. Mukti: you will have to come back after school, and finish your last nights work, and today's work...ok...
Mukti nods then heads for the Canteen, Mukti then see's Prem and his gang staring at her, then Jared comes to her table.
Jared: Mukti, why do you look scared?
Mukti: oh nothing, I look scared???
Jared: yea, like you saw a ghost...? Are you panicking about something?
Mukti: no, I don't think so...
Jared: why don't I get you a drink, ill be back.
Mukti nods, and stays in her seat.

Soon someone puts a bottle of water on her table, she looks up and see's its Prem. Prem bends his head down too look straight in her eyes...
We hear this music come in the background, its very slow, the wind blows...
Humko Humhi Se...Chura Lo... Dil Mein Kahin Tum...Chupa Lo...
Prem gives her a bottle, while smiling...then he kisses her on the forehead...Mukti moves her hands to hug him, when she realizes that she was only thinking that.
Mukti(thinks): what was I thinking...he can never be my Prem....

Soon Jared comes back.
Jared: here you go.
Mukti: thanks...
Mukti took a long sip from the bottle.
Jared: there you look much better now...
Mukti smiles then looks at then looks to where Prem and his gang were and notices he was long gone.
Mukti: c'mon, lets go to our next class...
Jared nods, then gets up, both Jared and Mukti walk to there next class.

Professor: everyone, we will be starting a new project today, you all will have to get into groups which I will decide, then you will have to perform in front of the whole school, our school is competing with the worlds best dancers, so we will need the best dances, I will get you into groups, and then you all will show me the new dance, and if I like it you will be part of the competition.
Mukti didn't take notice of who was in the class.
Professor the professor was saying everyone's names and when he came to Jared's he said some other name with him
Professor: Mr. Jared you will be partnered with Miss. Amy. And Miss. Mukti...you will be partnered with Mr. Prem...
Mukti and Jared looked at each other with shocked expressions...Mukti then looked around the class and noticed Prem sitting at the back with his gang. The Professor was talking all this time.
Professor: now, all of you get together, and talk about what you will be doing.
Mukti: Jared, I can't dance with him...
Jared: Mukti we can't change anything now...
Mukti: c'mon lets go talk to the professor...
Jared: no Mukti...(whispers: your ruining my free time with Amy...)
Mukti: oh yea...yeh toh Amy se bohot pyaar karta hai...ok you go, I'll go with Prem...
Jared: thanks a lot!
"Jared, c'mon..." Amy said as she approached.
Jared smiled and they went to some place else to talk.

Then someone tapped Mukti on the shoulder.
Mukti turned around, and saw Prem.
Mukti: oh, sorry, you can sit...(Mukti jumped out of her seat)
Prem: no need, I have a chair.
Mukti: oh(she sat back down slowly)
Prem: toh, did you think of anything?
Mukti: no...but, I was thinking, if we are going to practice, where are we gonna practice, cause I have a very small house, and If my parents see a guy at my house, then they get very superstitious.
Prem: we could talk everything out at my house, just follow me home after school...and just say you're going shopping with that Jared dude.
Mukti: do you always think of plan this easily...??
Prem: yea...
Mukti: but what if my parents phone Jared...to ask him if I m with him...?
Prem: tell Jared about this too...
Mukti: ok got it....
Mukti then looked at the clock and noticed it was 3:00, the mail man was supposed to be at the office to pick up her letter at 3:15, but she didn't give them her letter, she had to leave right away...
Mukti: oh no, mein bhool hi gayi...
Prem: what did you forget???
Mukti: something I have to go, you tell the professor that ill come back...bye!
Then Mukti runs out of the class.

3:30 Mukti comes back and goes to her calculus class, and see's Prem there already doing his work. Mukti comes and sits next to Prem.
Professor: Miss. Mukti, why so late?
Mukti: sorry, I actually had to go to my office, I had to send someone a letter, and I was very urgent...I promise I'll stay longer...
Professor: ok...you sit, I actually have to leave early today, im going when you both are done your work, the door is locked just turn off the lights and leave.
Prem and Mukti both nod, and then the professor leaves.
Mukti: omg, you know the mailman was about to leave, thank god I got there on time.
Mukti then took out her phone and went on the web and turned on her MSN to see if her Prem was online. He wasn't so she turned off her internet.
Prem: are you waiting for someone?
Mukti: yea, my friend, were both supposed to be online at this time, but he's not online...
Prem: oh...
Then he checked his phone for something...but then made a sad expression, and turned to look at Mukti again...
Mukti: what happened?
Prem: nothing...we should finish our work so then we can o to my house to choose the songs...
Mukti nods, and ten she finishes her work in like 20 minutes...she turns to looks at Prem and he was only on the 3 page...
Mukti: do you need help?
Prem: no im ok, you done?
Mukti: yea, I have to phone my parents...ill be right back...
Mukti walks to the back of the class room
Mukti: hello mama, haan mein university mein hi hoon, mujhe kuch kaam khatam karna tha, toh uske baad...mama, aaj mujhe Jared ke saath kuch shopping karni hai, toh mein raat...8 baje ghar aaogi...ok...haan, haan mama, theek hai, bye...
Prem: so you told her...
Mukti: yea...don't you have to phone..?
Prem: yea...ill be back...he walks out of the class room...
Soon Prem comes back, finishes his work then both Prem and Mukti walk to their cars.
Prem: ok just follow me, but I have to pick something up from somewhere, so just keep following me...ok
Mukti nods and then gets in her car, while they are driving Mukti notices Prem have a Lexus, she remembers reading in (her) Prem's note, that he got a new Lexus. Soon Prem's car comes to a stop in front of an office. Prem gets out and heads for the door, and then Mukti also gets out and goes to Prem's car, and pens the door and goes inside. She sees a couple pictures of him and a couple of lose paper, Mukti picks up one sheet, but right then Prem comes and knocks on the door.
Prem: what are you doing in my car...?
Mukti: oh sorry, I just wanted to see your car...
Prem: ok, now just follow me, my house is straight ahead
Mukti nods and heads to her car.

Bajaj House:

Prem drives in and then Mukti does too. Mukti is stunned by the beauty of this place. She couldn't get out of her car.
Prem then comes and knocks on her window.
Prem: will you get out yet??
Mukti gets out: Prem, what a beautiful house, I never knew you lived here!
Prem: thanks for the compliment, but can we get inside?
Mukti nods, and soon they both are inside. Inside Mukti saw a big living room, and a kitchen next to it, she saw a staircase leading to the bedrooms upstairs, there was one bedroom downstairs that had 2 doors opening to the room, Mukti guessed that belonged to his parents. Mukti then saw a beautiful woman standing at the door, dressed in a beautiful sari.
"Prem beta, yeh kaun hai?" the woman said.
Prem: Mom, this is Mukti, and Mukti this is my mom...
Mukti: namaste...she went and touch her feet.
"Jeeti raho" said his mom.
"Prerna kaun hai?" yelled someone from upstairs.
Prerna: Prem agaya, aur uske saath ek dost bhi...!
"Oh My God Prem, tum college ke baad hi kyon Doston ko late ho??" Said the man as he came downstairs...
Prerna: Mr. Bajaj, koi lardki nahi hai, lardki, aur voh bhi itni pyaari!
Mr. Bajaj: lardki!
Then he was downstairs
Mr. Bajaj: are Prem, yeh kaun hai?
Prem: omg, why don't you call everyone downstairs then I will introduce her, so I don't get asked all these questions...
"Don't worry were all here, now tell us who this is"
Prem: oh my god, ok Mukti this is everyone, everyone this is Mukti! Ok, c'mon now, we have to get to work...
Prem grabs Mukti's hand, the takes her upstairs. Soon they get into Prem's room.
Prem: sorry about that, my family is a little wacko when I bring a friend over...actually when I bring a girl over.
Mukti laughed, and then looked down at her hand, which was still held by Prem.
Prem: oh sorry (he quickly lets go) ok, c'mon lets get to work...
Mukti: actually Prem could I check something quickly on he computer...
Prem: yea sure, let me get it started for you...
Prem turned on his laptop...
Prem: here you go, and ill be back ok
Mukti nods, Prem then leaves the room, and Mukti checks her MSN.
Mukti: kya voh abhi bhi online nahi hai...? usne toh kaha tha, har roz 3-4 baje online aana, aur abhi toh 4:45 hi hai, toh voh online kyon nahi hai???
Then she signed off and waited for Prem to get back.

thats all for now, hope you all liked the update, please comment!

Oh hey its brill yar!!! nice FF...very different i like it sooo much!
Plz cont. sooon! cant wait!!!

Love,
PoocHii

nnice part umam..yaah i agree with poochi very different story ,please continue soon 😳