FRIENDS(ff) 'VERI BAD REASON' PG 20 - Page 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
#21
~i ma wating for the next part eagerly. this one was cute lz contibue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PREM STARTED PACING AROUND... THINKING INTENTLY...:-" BASANTI KA BOYFRIEND HAI?? TO PHIR YEH DO TEEN DIN MERE SAATH AISA KYU KIYA?? AUR JAB MEIN FLIRT KAR RAHA THA TO USNE ROKA KYU NAHI...Y DID SHE BLUSH?? AND WHEN I KISSED HER SHE DIDN'T RESIST OR PROTEST... SHE JUST GAVE IN... SHE DOES LIEK MEE... MAYBE SHE'S JUST ATTRACTED... BUT IS IN LOVE WITH THAT GUY...NOOOOO THAT CAN'T HAPPEN... I HAVE TO DO SOMETHING... BUT WHAT WHAT WHAT???"

S: HOW ABOUT YOU JUST TELL HER HWO YOU FEEL INSTEAD OF JUST STANDING HERE TALKING TO YOURSELF?
P: WELL...AND WTH... Y DIDN'T YOU TELL MEE SHE HAS A BYFRIEND...?
S: YOU NEVER ASKED... YOU WERE TOO BUSY IN YOUR WORLD...
P: WELL MY WORLD HAS COME APART NAD IW ANT YOUR HELP...
S: SORRY BROTHER... I WONT HELP YOU... THE ONLY WAY TO GET MUKTI NOW IS CONFESSING YOUR LOVE!
P: BUT...
S: AHHH... SHUT UP!

SAYING THAT SNEHA LEFT... HILE PREM JUSTS TOD THERE LIKE A STUBBORN KID STILL THINKING OF WHAT TO DO... HE PACED AROUND... ROUND AND ROUND AND ROUND AND ROUND... UNTILL HE STARTED FEELING DIZZY... THEN HE SAT DOWN...

THEYA LL WENT OUT AND MUKTI INSISTED ON OMI TO JOIN THEM... PREM WAS PRETTY PISSED BY THE TWO... THEY WERE ALWAYS HOLDING HAND... WALKING TOGETHER... FORGETTING ETH WHOLE GANG... FORGETTING HIM!... DAMN! WAS HE JEALOUS?? HE FELT LIKE THERE WERE STEAM COMING OUT HIS EARS AND HIS BODY WAS ON FIRE...ANDIT WAS LIEK BURNING...

SNEHA CAME THERE TO MOCK HIM AGAIN... SHE SNIFFED AROUND...

S: HEY PREM... DONT YOU SMELL THAT?!
P: SMELL WHAT??
S: UMMM SOMETHING IS BURNING...

SHE LEANED TOWARDS HIM...

S: OMG! ITS YOU... YOU ARE BURNING... (WHISOER) WITH JEALOUSY...

BEFORE HE CAN CATCH HER SHE SLIPPED AWAY... HE SCOWLED AND STARTED WALKING... THEY SAT IN THE TABLE TALKING...WHILE PREM HAD GONE TO CHECK SOME THINGS OUT... MUKTI EXCUSED HERSELF AND WENT TO PREM...

M: HI PREM...
P(DRYLY): HI...
M: ARRE YEH TUMHE KYA HUA???
P: KUCH NAHI...
M: Y THAT LONG FACE THEN?
P: Y DO YOU CARE?
M: WE'RE FRIENDS NA?
P(MUMBLES): FRIENDS MY FOOT...
M: WHY ARE YOU HERE??
P: CUZ I WANNA BE...
M: OHH...
P: Y RE YOU HERE?
M: CUZ I WANNA BE...
P: HMPH.!

MUKTI GIGGLED AND WALKED TOWARDS TEH GANG...

M: BECHARA PREM...
S: WAISE MAZAAA BAHAT AARAHA HAI USSE AISE IRRITATED DEKHNE MAIN...
SHR: HMM...HAMESHA WOH HUME IRRIATE KARTA HAI... AAJ USSE IRRITATED DEKHNE MEIN BAHAT MAZAA ARAHA HAI...
O: ACHHA... PARSO MERI GIRLFRIEND AARAHI HAI...USKE AANESE PEHLE PREM KO CONFESS KARWANA HOGA...
M: OHH... KYA KARE???
SH: HEY MERE PAAS EK IDEA HAI...
ALL: KYA????

HE ELANED ADN TOLD HIS PLAN..EVERYOEN GRINNED AND WINKED AT OMI... OMI PUT HIS THUMBS UP... AFTER HAVING THEIR LUNCH... THEY ALL WENT BACK TO HOTEL... WATCHED SOME MOVIE...HAD THEIR DINNER ADN SLEPT... NEXT DAY THEY ALL WENT TO SHOPIPNG... OMI SAID HE WAS BUSY ADN CANT GO... PREM WAS BORED SOO HE JUST STROLLED AROUND... PREM WAS JUST WALKING AROUND WHEN HE SAW OMI GOING TO THE JEWELRY SHOP...

P: ARRE YEH LOVER BOY JEWELRY SHOP MEIN KYU JAA RAHA HAI?? USNE TO KAHA THA KOI KAAM HAI... DEKHTE HAI...

HE WALKED IN THERE CASUALLY AS IF HE HADN'T SEEN OMI... HE SAT RIGHT BEHIND OMI... WHEN OMI TRIED TO TURN AROUND THEY BOTH BUMPED...

P: SORRY DUDE... OMI??
O: AH.. PREM... SORRY..
P: ITSS OKAY... WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE?? I THOUGHT YOU SAD YOU WERE BUSY...
O: YEA I AM BUSY... ACTUALLY... I...(SIGH) OK I WILL TELL YOU BUT YOU'RE NOT SAYING IT TO ANYONE...
P: OKKK(TO HIMSELF) THIS WILL EB TOMORROW'S HEADLINE OMI BETA...
O: ACTUALLY... I WILL BE GONE IN A FEW DAYS AND SHE WILL ALSO RETURN TO MUMBAI...SOO I WAS GONNA PROPOSE TO HER TODAY...

OMI SHOWED HIM A RING... PREM WAS SOOO SHOCKED...

P: WHEN?
O: TODAY... I HAVE CALLED HER TO A PRIVATE HALL IN TEH WEST WING OF TEH HOTEL... I HAVE ALREADY ASKED THEM TO DECORATE IT... ITS GONNA BE PERFECT... PLSS DONT TELL MUKTI... I WANT TO SURPRISE HER...
P: OKK... OKK

PREM BUD GOODBYE AND LEFT... OMI WAS GONNA PROPOSE... WHAT IS MUKTI SAID YES... THEY WILL GET AMRRIED...AND HE WILL JUST BE LEFT ALONE... NOOO HE HAD TO DO SOMETHING...YESS HE HAD TO TELL HER TEH TRUTH... HE HAD TO TELL HER HE WAS... IS IN LOVE WITH HER... HE WAS IN LOVE WITH HER WHEN SHE ALMOST BROKE HIS NOSE WHEN THEY WERE 4... HE WAS IN LOVE WITH HER WHEN SHE GAVE HIM A GOODBYE KISS WHEN SHE WAS LEAVING FOR CANADA... HE WAS IN LOVE WITH HER FOR AS OONG AS HE COULD REMEMBER... HE COULDN'T JUST LET HER GO.... HE HAD TO TELL HER BEFORE IT WAS TOO LATE...

HE RAN AS FAST AS HE COULD TO WHERE MUKTI WAS... HE SAW HER AND TEH OTHERS JUST TALKING... HE TOOK ADEEP BREATH...CLOSED HIS EYES ONCE...AND TOOK ANOTHER DEEP BREATH AND OPENED HIS EYES... HE WALKED TOWARDS THEM... AND STOOD INFRONT OF MUKTI... BEFORE ANYONE COULD SAY OR DO ANYTHING... HE GRABBED HER KISSED HER... INFRONT OF EVERYONE... SNEHA ADN KASAK ALMOST JUMPED... SHRAWAN GASPED... SHARAD GRINNED... FROM BEHIND OMI SHOWED THUMBS UP...

MUKTI FELT SHE WAS A FEATHER.... FLYING AWAY... JUST GOING WHEREVER TEH WIND AKA PREM WAS TAKING HER... AS HIS TOUNGUE TRIED TO PART HER LIPS... SHE WRAPPED HER ARMS AROUND HIS NECK AND OPENED HER LIPS... WELCOMING HIS TONGUE... THEY KISSED FOR A LONGG TIME... SHRAWAN GETTING IMPATIENT... COUGHED... BRINGING THE TWO TO TEH WORLD... THEY BROKE APART AND SAW THAT HALF TEH PEOPLE IN TEH MALL WERE STARING AT THEM...BOTH BLUSHED... AND PREM LOOKING STRAIGHT INTO HER EYES WHISPERED...

P: I LOVE YOU...
M(GRINNED BROADLY): I DIDN'T HEAR THAT...
P(YELLED): I LOVE YOU!!!!
M: I LOVE YOU TOOO...

THEY WERE GOING TO KISS AGAIN... WHEN SHRAWAN CAME RIGHT IN TEH MIDDLE... ADN PUT HIS RIGHT HAND AROUND PREM AND LEFT AROUND MUKTI...

SHR: LET ME TELL YOU... I DONT CARE WHAT YOU DO IN PRIVATE... BUT INFRONT OF MEE... YOU CAN CUDDLE, SNUGGLE, HUG BUT NOT KISS... OK YOU MIGHT KISS BUT NOT FOR MORE THAN 2 SECONDS... GET IT??
P: BUT...
SHR: I SAID... GET IT???
P+M: GET IT...
SHR: GOOD...

HE LEFT THEM... PREM PUT HIS ARM AROUND HER WAIST... AND THE SIX WENT TO SOME OTHER SHOP...

P: BUT WHAT ABOUT OMI? HE SAID HE WAS...
M: GONNA PROPOSE... YES HE WILL...NOT MEE HIS GIRLFRIEND...
P: AREN'T YOU--
M: NAAH... HE'S MY COUSIN...
P: OHH SOO IT WAS ALL A DRAMA??
M: YUP... TO GET SOME COURAGE INTO YOU'RE LITTLE CHOCKEN HEART...
P: HEY I DNT HAVE A CHICKEN HEART...
M: UH-HUH THATS WHY YOU COULDN'T EVEN CONFESS YOUR LOVE...
P: WELL YOU COULD'VE SAID IT FIRST TOO YOU KNOW...
M: I AM A GIRL... YOU ARE TEH GUY... YOU'RE THE FIRST ONE TO SAY...

EVERYOEN WERE GETTING FED UP OF THEM FIGHTING OVER THIS...

ALL: SHUT UP YOU TWO!!!
M+P: YOU GUYSS SHUT UP...CANT YOU SEE WE'RE BUSY FIGHTING!!!
P: SOO WHERE WERE WE? OH YEA...

AND THEY CONTINUED TO ARGUE ABOUT EVERYTHING AND NOTHING... WHILE TEH OTHERS JUST SIGHED... WHEN WERE THEY GROWING UP...WAS THE ONLY THOUGHT INSIDE THEIR HEAD....
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Posted: 18 years ago
#23
this piece of the fan-fic was just tooo funny. Loved the way Prem reacted when he found out that Omi was gonna proposed to Mukthi & then finding it out that it was all a natak & then he finally confessed. The kiss part was absolutely fabulous. please continue more scenes of Prem & Mukthi and hope it there will be more romance in upcoming pieces of the fan-fic
Edited by Patel 1993 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#24
excellent part...sooo happy prem admitted his love 4 mukti 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#25
THIS PART WAS JUST SOOO G-R-E-A-T...
i just love it..
plz continue soon..
Love
Aisha 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#26
finally prem confessed 😛 took him long enough 😆 luv da way their alwayz bickerin 😳 can't wait 2 read da next part update soon 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#27
omg omg omg 😳 that was soooooooooooooooo sweet! i loved this part! cant wait for more!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#28
very cute. please continue writting. loved it.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#29
could you please continue the fan-fic, waiting impatiently. Loved the previous one that you wrote. it was fantastic.

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Edited by Patel 1993 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#30
HEY GUYSS I FEEL REALLY LAZY RIGHT NOW..LETS SEE IF I WILL EB IN MOOD TO WRITE A PART TODAY.... 😳 😳 SOWWIE!

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