Ahista Ahista (Ch 2(Part 2 on Pg 3)

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey Guys!I'm back but with a New FanFic,you'll probably like this.And my other 2 fanfics(Kaise Mein Kahun and Chand Sa Roshan Chera) they are pending,I'll try to continue those fanfic as soon as i can.But it will take time.It is sad at the beginning,but the rest won't be.

Ahista Ahista!



Prologue
She looked dead.
For a second Anurag Basu's heart beat uncontrollably again his chest cavity.When he leaned forward and placed a trembling hand on the exposed arm and felt her warm flesh,a breath of relied seeped out of him.Thank God she wasn't dead.Not yet anyway,he reminded himself as fresh tears dribbled down his face.
This was the first time he'd seen his daughter since she'd been whisked away to surgery several hours ago.His precious sixteen-year old lay like a beautiful corpse on the sterile hospital bed.
He pulled a chair close to the bed,his eyes never leaving her face.Anurag took several deep gulping breaths,then whispered in a garbled voice,"Please Mukti,hang on.I can't bear loose you,too".She didn't respond.Anurag had lost everything he loved the most,his wife,his son and more,but now he didn't want to lose his goddaughter.
His goddaughter,his only way to live was to see her happy,just to see her smile lit his own smile on his face.She meant the world to him.What had he done to deserve such an awful tragedy?His twisted,angry face looked toward the ceiling,silently cursing God for his destiny.How was he going to survive if she dies?
"Oh God,why?" Deep sobs racked his body.
If only Mukti's father had been driving instead of Mukti,who had just gotten her beginner's license and was testing her moxie behind the wheel for the first time.If only she;d had more experience,then maybe she could have dodged the car that barreled through the stop sign as if it owned the road.As it was,Mukti had plowed into the side of it.His best friend and his wife(Mukti's parents) had died on impact while his Goddaughter had flown through the windshield,her lower extremities ripped to shreds by the broken glass.
She was like his own daughter,he was her best friend whom she shared every secrets of her instead of telling her own parents.Mukti was a great kid,a popular teenager whose many friends were now gathered in the main waiting area,solemnfaced and afraid.Not only was she well liked,but she was a straight A student an was involved in various school activities.She was born when he had first moved from India to New York.He was the first one to held her in his arms,it was a great moment for him,just perfect to forget his sad past.She brought him happiness.He was taken out of his thought,when someone tapped his shoulders.

"Sir,the doctor wants to see you in his office"said the nurse.Few minutes later he was sitting in the doctors office.Doctor started off the conversation

Doctor-I'm sorry for your lose Mr.Basu
He didn't utter a single word.
Doctor-Are you all right?
Before Anurag could force a reply,the doctor went on.
Doctor-Sorry.Forget I asked that.Of course you are not all right"
With all the encouragement he finally asked.
Anurag-is my daughter Mukti going to be all right.
Doctor-She is going to live
Anurag-But? He knew there was more to come,and it wouldn't be good
Doctor sighed-You're right.There is a but.
Anurag-Doctor please don't waste the time
Doctor-okay.She won't be able to walk in the next two years,it will take time for the wounds to heel
Anurag didn't knew what to say,he just sat there as a statue.
Doctor-And one more thing Mr.Basu.It's a good possibility that she will never have children.
Anurag-How can God do this to her?She loves children's.
Doctor-Mr.Basu,please be strong.She needs you the most right now,she has already lost her parents.
Anurag-When will she wake up?
Doctor-Mr.Basu ,Mukti will sleep for most of the remainder of the day,so don't get worried.
Anurag blew out a harsh breath and said-And when she wakes up,I.He couldn't go on.
Doctor-When she wakes up,you will have to tell her the truth,but only if she asks.

Once he was alone,he walked back to Mukti's room.For the longest time he stood beside her bed while wave after wave of anger,pain and remorse wept through him.He finally got control of his emotions and sat beside her.Yet the words were so hard to come by.Reaching for her hand,he whispered,"No matter what happens,I'll never let you down again".She squeezed his hand.

The next day,Anurag told her every single thing.He couldn't lie to her,their relationship was full of with trust
Mukti-Oh Anurag Uncle.Her tears filled up her eyes.
Anurag-I understand,but everything will be fine beta.
Mukti-No,ab kuch bhi nahi sahi ho gah.Mom dad,they left me.It's all my fault.Oh God Why me?
Anurag-Relax Mukti..And it wasn't your fault.Yeh sab kismat ka khel hai .Sab kuch sahi ho jaye gah
Mukti-No nothing won't be all right.I won't be able to have kids,can't walk for two years,and i have just lost my parents.Everything is ruined.How am I going to live?
Anurag-You will and I promise you.Just trust me,bharosa hai na mujh pe
Mukti nodded and hugged him as tight as she can and let her tears flow in a puddle.The only thing now she had was him,her godfather.She knew with him everything will turn out to be fine,she loved him like her own father.They both loved each other dearly.

Chapter will be here in five minutes.Don't forget to leave comments!I would love to hear them!๐Ÿ˜Š




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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwwwwwwwww dat was sooooo sad can't believe mukti can't hav kids ๐Ÿ˜ญ luv da relationship dat both anurag/mukti share ๐Ÿ˜ณ would luv 2 read da next chapter hope u update soon ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Chapter 1

8 years later!

Man,did he ever have a great tush.
The way he swaggered when he walked merely accentuated it,and the white shirt,sneakers and baggy pants added style.She figured he was an uninvited guest,as no one else at part was dresses so casually.No one knew dare.This man was either a country bumpkin who didn't know any better or he had so much self-confidence he didn't give a rip.He seemed to be totally at ease with himself and his surroundings.
For a moment Mukti Basu was held utterly captive by this stranger's rear-a first for her.Oh she'd admired men's looks and physique,but never had she been blatantly fascinated by a specific body part.Suddenly realizing where her mind was what she was doing,Mukti was about to look away,when his gaze locked with hers.
She had seen movies and read books where 2 people met and eyes held across a room-but never had such a thing happened to her.Swallowing,she jerked her head around.Her cheeks and body suddenly stung.Thankfully she realized that she was alone.At least she could regain her composure without an explanation.Taking several slow,deliberate breaths,she still found it hard not to sneak another peek at the man."Stop it,"She muttered to herself just as her insides settled back to normal.This was out of character for her.It was bizarre behavior.
Dismissing the entire episode from her mind,Mukti concentrated on the party around her.It was given in her honor at The Garden Room of the luxury hotel in Mumbai.She moved to India last year,because of Anurag's business,even thought none of them wanted to but they had to.The room was abuzz with a sound of voices laughter and music and redolent with the smell of flowers flowing from the glasses-in section out onto the patio.
Mukti took great pleasure in the fragrances that encircled her,inhaling scent from time to time.She loved being the center of attention.Being named Woman of the year was an honor as intoxicating as the strong floral scent.She had successfully launched a modeling agency last year,an accomplishment that hadn't been easy.She was taken back from her thoughts,when her friend came over to her.

Naina-Kahan ko gayi Mukti?
Mukti-no where
Naina-Chalo andar chalte hain.She dragged her back to the party.Mukti adored Naina.Without Bade Papa(that's what she calls Anurag) and Naina,Mukti's career wouldn't be nearly as successful as it was today.
Naina-You were probably enjoying the peace and quite.You've been covered up all evening.I know how tired you are.
Mukti quirked an eyebrow and smiled-You know Naina,khabi kabhar mujhe dar lagte how well you know me.
Naina grinned-Not to worry
Mukti-I can't believe this is happening to me....to us,my dream is finally coming true
Naina-Hum nahi sirf tum.Aaj ki raat tumhari hai.Tonight is all about you and your successful career.
Mukti smiled with a sigh-You know that's hard for me to do
Naina-Get over it.Being in the spotlight for one evening is not hard
Mukti laughed and Naina joined her too
Mukti-What?
Naina-You look great tonight.Actually,i don't think i've ever seen you look better.Red looks good on you.

Giggling,Kaylee rolled her eyes.
Naina-Koi baat hai jo mujhe nahi pata,what is going on Mukti?

Mukti froze as thoughts of that stranger's ass came to mind.Grappling to regain her composure,she looked down and pretented to smooth a wrinkle out of her dress.

Naina-And the gold in your black hair,I've never seen it shine so much.
Mukti-Now I know I'm going to throw up
Naina-tum hasan(laughing) rahi ho meri compliments pe
Mukti ordered with another laugh-Get out of here
Naina squeezed Mukti on the shoulder-Ja rahi hoon baba,baad me miltey hai dear

She disappeared into a throng of people when Mukti looked up and saw one of her model headed toward her.The model wasn't alone.Walking beside her was none other than the guy Mukti had eyed earlier.Despite her efforts to remain calm,Mukti's heartbeat quickened.Before Mukti could find her next breath,they were in front of her.

Model-Mukti mera yeh dost tum se milna chata tha. The model looked at her companion before turning her gaze back to Mukti.
Model continued-Mukti Basu yeh Prem Sharma hain.

Though she was loath to do so,she held out her hand.When his calloused one took hers briefly,a tingle shot up her arm.She didn't understand what was going on.

"I'm honored to meet you Mukti Basu"said Prem in a low drawling voice,his eyes eyes inspecting the length of her even thought she remained seated."God,she has a lovely.Ravishing to eat"thought Prem.Finally Mukti said

Thank You,Mr.Sharma said Mukti
Prem-Make it Prem
She nodded,feeling the flush deepen in her cheeks
Model-I'll leave you two alone.You'll get to know each other better.

Mukti could cheerfully have strangled the model.For the longest time neither said a word.Then someone came up to Prem and tapped him on the shoulder.When he turned to speak to the man,Mukti took the opportunity to give the close look.

Prem-Would you care to dance?

Mukti gave a start,worried she'd been caught staring.The fear actually took precedence over the fact that he hadn't notice her staring.

Mukti-No thank you
He shrugged-Okay Mind if I join you?
Mukti-Of course not

As if he read between the lines,a grin more in keeping with a smirk,crept across Prem's lip.He eased down in the chair in front of her and said "I understand congratulation are in order.Sorry I wasn't here when you received the award"

Mukti-Thanks.

Could he see her heart beating?she hoped not.That would be the final humilation.His lips twichted again.

Prem-Relax Mukti,I'm harmless.Mein tumhey kataau gan tora
Her eyes widened-Excuse me
He chuckled-It's obvious you wish I'd get lost

Mukti opened her mouth to deny his words,but when nothing came out,she tightened her lips.His chuckle sounded like a low rumble.Who is this man anyway?And where had he come from?Once again he seemed to read her mind.

Prem-I can read people easily,since i meet new people everyday for business
Mukti-Smart
Prem grinned-that's the first compliment
She didn't said anything,stayed quiet.
Prem-I like your style
Mukti-thank you.SO tell me about business?
Prem-I'm the best man for business
Mukti-How do i know that?
His eyes drilled her,and his voice dropped a pitch-You don't,but you will as soon as you get to know me better

Mukti sucked in her breath.Was he flirting with her?No,her imagination must be working overtime.

Mukti-Dekho Mr.Sharma
Prem-Prem

His gaze didn't waver and for a moment hers didn't with either.

"Excuse me for interrupting,Mukti,but i have some people I want you to meet"

The voice of the chamber president,Sumit Wadwa,brought her back to reality with a jolt.Prem suddenly stood and moved aside.Pulling her gaze off him,she forced a smile.
"I'd be delighted to meet your friends".

Sumit-Mr.Sharma,you're welcome to remain.In fact,I insist
Prem-Thank you,par mere khayal se ab chalna chaiye.Kyun Mukti? He winks at her the continues again "I've taken up enough of Mukti's time".Then he leaned down and for her ears alone,he murmured "I'll see you later" he kissed her cheeks.

Feeling shell-shocked,all she could was watch him stride off.

Please leave comments!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwwwwwwwww luved da last bit where he sayz i'll c u later n when he kissed her omg i was lik blushin ๐Ÿ˜ณ god i must hav had a huge grin while readin both prem/muktiz part they're really cute luv da way he was flirtin with her ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜† would luv 2 c em bickerin with 1nother n partz where prem tries flirtin with mukti ๐Ÿ˜ณ is prem by any chance anuragz son ๐Ÿ˜• update soon ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Aww such a sweet part. ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ok what happened to anurag's wife n children they died or left him?
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: mandy07

awwwwwwwwww luved da last bit where he sayz i'll c u later n when he kissed her omg i was lik blushin ๐Ÿ˜ณ god i must hav had a huge grin while readin both prem/muktiz part they're really cute luv da way he was flirtin with her ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜† would luv 2 c em bickerin with 1nother n partz where prem tries flirtin with mukti ๐Ÿ˜ณ is prem by any chance anuragz son ๐Ÿ˜• update soon ๐Ÿ˜‰



Mandy,thnx for the wonderful comment.Yes Prem is Anurag's son.๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: badgal4eva

Aww such a sweet part. ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ok what happened to anurag's wife n children they died or left him?



No they didn't died,but What i can tell you is that Prem is Anurags son!๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Guys Hopefully I'll update again tomorrow!I have only 2 comments. ๐Ÿ˜•.I guess no body likes it,if u want me to stop,then I'll stop.Just let me know!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yay your back with anbother fanfic! this is great! i love it so far! the characters are soooo good! you should definately continue! and try to update the other fanfics too! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow its really gud!cant wait for the next part!

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