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Posted: 18 years ago
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haha...that was great....plz cont soon!!! 😃 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Guys thanks again for the comments.


Chapter 4

UD sat alone in the crowded restaurant, drumming his fingers impatiently on the table. He checked his watch and sighed, she was late, again. He seemed to spend most his time waiting for these days. It was becoming a bad habit. They had reached an uneasy peace in their working relationship, knowing they had to finish on time but still unable to stop themselves from winding each other up. He didn't know why she got to him so much, why he took so much joy in getting to her. He suspected it had something to do with the fact that she was one of the few people he met who could actually match him.

He glanced round the restaurant and saw a woman sitting alone smiling at him. He grinned, got up and walked over to her. "Hi" he said "I'm UD and you're the woman of my dreams" he added with his most charming smile. She giggled and he knew he was in. He sat down to talk to her.

Shruti walked quickly into the restaurant knowing she was late again. It wasn't her fault but UD never understood that. She paused as she looked for him, finally spotting him chatting to some girl. I don't believe it, she thought, I'm a little late and he's flirting with some floozy, she got annoyed, they were supposed to be working. She started to stride towards him, ready to give him a piece of her mind. Suddenly she stopped; a perfect idea came to mind.

UD felt a presence come up to his side as he was talking to the girl "Hi jaanu, sorry I'm late" he heard. He looked up, shocked to see Shruti placing an arm over his shoulder and grinning down at him. " I had to talk to Bunty's teacher. Aren't you going to introduce to your friend?" She continued, all sweetness and light. He stared at her, not knowing or liking where she was going with this and definitely not liking the look in her eyes.

The girl, whose name he suddenly couldn't remember seemed a little speechless too, staring at him and Shruti in turn. "I'm Shruti, his wife" she continued in her happy voice "Did he forget to mention me and Bunty again?" she asked with a false laugh playfully tweaking UD's nose, wincing slightly as his hand on her waist pinched her side hard. "Bunty?" the girl croaked "Yeah, our son" said Shruti still grinning. The girl glanced at UD angrily before getting up "No, he forgot to mention that" she said through clenched teeth, then she stormed out the restaurant.

Laughing, Shruti sat down. "What did you do that for?" asked UD angrily "First you turn up late, then you ruin my fun. What did I do to you?"

"You're supposed to be working, not hitting on floozies" she said, "Besides consider it payback for what you did to my car"
"But that was funny," he countered, "This wasn't" he said. "I can't believe she fell for your crap story, no one would believe we were married" Shruti gave an odd look "Yeh, I have much better taste than that" she said somewhat cynically.
He looked at her a second but was too annoyed to take notice of what she said. "Look, I was just having a good time and you come along and mess it up. It's not on, you know. And now come to think of it who the hell would think I would name my child Bunty" he added suddenly.
Shruti looked at him both a little surprised and amused by the outburst. "First of all it's not my fault she fell for it. I'm just too good. Second, I dread to think what you would name your child UD." She said adding extra emphasis on his name "Poor UD Junior would get harassed in school"
That drew an involuntary snort of laughter from UD "Still better than Bunty" he said trying to look angry.........

TBC- I think...

Ok I know I stopped in a weird place, but I got a little busy and wanted to post what I already had.

Also, it's obvious I have no story yet so just writing random scenes til a plot comes to my head. If the plot comes to anyones elses head feel free to Pm it me too 😉 😆

Edited by dee150 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#43
😆 😆

yur rocking even w/o a plot! man its so much fun to read these updates..always luk forward to em 😛 😛 😉
hilarious part as always..keep it going... 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#44
never mind the plot your updates are awesome 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome update 😛 PS r hilarious can't believe shruti cam up with dat hole idea bout bein married to UD 😳 😆 luks lik UD has finally found his match 😳 update soon can't wait 2 find out wat happens next 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😆 bunty!! thats tooooo funny! wow i love what shruti did, u go girl! lol and did prem do to her car? your fanfic doesnt need a plot, the scenes are just great! continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😆 😆 dee dont worry bout the plots, just keep the scenes coming! 😆 im LOVING this crossover dee - the best of both worlds 😳 i LOVE UD and shruti!! 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ya man dont worry about the plot...it will come to you....just keep going like this.....its so much fun to read 😆 ....keep it up 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😆 😆 "Who the hell would think I would name my child Bunty?" 😆 😆 Too right....dee, forget plots, a few more hundred scenes like this and i'm sold! 😆 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: psawyer

😆 😆 "Who the hell would think I would name my child Bunty?" 😆 😆 Too right....dee, forget plots, a few more hundred scenes like this and i'm sold! 😆 😉

exactly!😆😆

after these are the days we miss...😍

yu really dont need a plot...ur doing so great w/o it!😆😆😉

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