FF(PRB,udi) ( Pt 18 updted on Pg 33) - Page 13

Originally posted by: ronitian

wowowowowowowow...THis is just wowoww...i love UD kya baat ki usne 😳 mera pati sirf mera hain!!
😉

He he he chalo, i am glad sm1 liked ud's entry in d story. I added him for the dual role that he plays- of a comedian+ a trouble maker. should i gv him footage or focus only on rish n his women?

Prerna is getting despo hehehehe, i loved it Neha
RIshabh is just too hott, Niharika is a phool 😆 😆 😆

very nice...continue soon please!! 😉 whenever u get the time!! 😃

Originally posted by: nehavarun

Originally posted by: ronitfan

Yeah..
when Karan was being tried- no reaction.. bt when MIHIR was being tried...baaaap re!!

that was awesome !

Mihir-Nandini forver ❤️

(Manasi and Devanshi are going to kill me now 😆)

Originally posted by: nehavarun

Ek baar Mother India ko Daddy Cool ke is chakkar ke baare pata chal gaya, to unke dande mujhpe nahi, Daddy Cool pe padenge! What a scene that would be- woh kya kehte hain Hindi main- Mera pati sirf mera hain!"

"Maine kuch nahi kiya hai is baar. Lekin aap jara Daddy Cool pe nazar rakhna. Aap to Basu House mein yun din bhar padi rehti hain, aur Daddy Cool sochte honge- main aur meri tanhai-"
Prerna could again sense the cold wall between them but she didn't know why it was happening. Mr Bajaj had not put his arm around her and pulled her close as usual, even though he saw her crying for Prem. This was unusal. Rishabh came back to the bedroom after some time, and slept without speaking a word to her.

Prerna felt extremely alone and insecure even though he was with her in the same room. She turned to him, and pulled his hand over her waist. He got up and said- "Yahan pe kisi ne paani bhi nahi rakha." He opened the small refrigerator in the room and drank some water. Then he went to his study, and slept on the large comfy couch there. Prerna was unable to understand what was going on..

I read it thru my fone ysterday night and whole nigh i kept on thinking abt it......... I love ur ff........

bus aur tarif karungi to sukhi and sammie will come after me😆😆

Originally posted by: nuts4kzk

😳 I loved it neha.............. I nearly fainted yaar. these were my fav part. I loved ud in this and u know I actually could visualise him like this........ and I felt very fuzzy reading bp part😳😳😳

I read it thru my fone ysterday night and whole nigh i kept on thinking abt it......... I love ur ff........

bus aur tarif karungi to sukhi and sammie will come after me😆😆

aawww thanks yaar namzy :) I am so glad u r liking it :)