RishPrerna New Fanfic PART7- PAGE15 - Page 6

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Posted: 18 years ago
#51
Yeahh.. khairiat means well-being..

Greatttttttttt update Rabi - it was super cute as usual.. loved the butter-wiping part.. *awwwwW*
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Posted: 18 years ago
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It was mind blowing. I will love if mrs. Bajaj is actually even 1/10 romantic of this in kzk 😳

Btw Rabi its a request, pls when ever u update, just gp to 1st post and press edit button and change the title by adding that like 4thpart in 8th page..... this way we will know where to see
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Fantabulous stuff Rabi..continu soon 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey whoever edited the first page- there aint no 4th part on this 8th page!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Aw...sukh i thot it was ure FF lol 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: nuts4kzk

It was mind blowing. I will love if mrs. Bajaj is actually even 1/10 romantic of this in kzk 😳

Btw Rabi its a request, pls when ever u update, just gp to 1st post and press edit button and change the title by adding that like 4thpart in 8th page..... this way we will know where to see

Actually I just copy pasedt from Namita di's post😆

Edited by Manasi_16 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 4

At office..
Bajaj walks in with Gupta who had met him on the reception waiting for him...

Gupta: hello bajaj,aaj itnee der kyun ho gyaee???khairiat?
Bajaj: hello Gupta,han khairiat or der honay ki wajah main nahi btaon ga..
looks at him with a smirk and Gupta starts laughing..
Gupta: in that case i don't want to know...
both walk into the meeting room...where they are greeted by Mr.Sharma,(not related to prerna)...
Mr. Sharma: Hello sirs
Bajaj and gupta smile at his ingenuity
Bajaj and gupta: hello
Mr.sharma: sirs i m sorry you have to wait but i was suppose to give you the breifing but madam this morning told me that she will attend this meeting herself and discuss about the project herself,she will be joining us shortly...

Mr. Rishabh Bhanuputra Bajaj....
Bajaj and Gupta turns around to c who had called out his name and the voice also seemed familiar..
Bajaj: sheetal.......
sheetal:mr. sharma will u plzz excuse us for a while..
mr.sharma:ok ma'am..
after he leaves
sheetal now jumps (literally) with joy and walks swiftly towards him and hugs him tightly..
Sheetal:rishu...rishu rishu...i missed u sooo much, (kisses him on his cheek)
Gupta is dumbfounded...guess who walks in...its mr. anurag basu...
anurag is thunderstruck somebody kissing and hugging bajaj and even gupta is there...
Bajaj noticing anurag:aye mr. basu,(separating himself from sheetal)(she turns around to c anurag)
anurag on the other hand is surprised to c bajaj hugging somebody else(except prerna).no matter how he had his differences with him but he knew one thing that he would never ever cheat on prerna..he never looked at any woman no matter how beautiful she is..and now he is hugging a beautiful woman ..what is this all about and decides to find out who she is for his friend's sake(here we go again,but don't worry,PRB r meant to be together)
Anurag:i m sorry main nei aapko disturb kar dya(sarcastically,bajaj feels it & feels offended)
Bajaj(with a straight face): kehyay Mr. basu what brings u here ?
Anurag: main prerna se milnay aaya tha...(bajaj gets uncomfortable,sheetal is noticing every expression of his ..notices the coldness between anurag and bajaj)
Bajaj: aaj wo office nahi aayi...
anurag:is she ok,....looking at sheetal...
bajaj doesnot bother to introduce him to sheetal...that makes his(anurag's) suspicion more strong ...he leaves
gupta:aaakhhmmmm
bajaj turns around and looks at Gupta ,who is giving him ,im also here kinda look...
Bajaj:this is sheetal and sheetal this is Gupta my bestest friend ,he is more like a brother to me...
sheetal:hello mr. Gupta ,shakes her hand with his and turns again to bajaj
sheetal: as it is me who u'll be working with and i m here to stay so why not have lunch today...
GUpta:but what about the important business lunch??
sheetal: oh! come on mr. gupta ,,u were to have that lunch with me,so it doesn't matter if we dicuss business on this luch or not,i m here to stay ,business lunches hotey rahe gey..
gupta still looks uncomfortable...
sheetal: ok,if u want it that way then u(gupta) and mr. sharma have busniess lunch and me and rishu will have our personnal lunch...ciao
drags bajaj outside...he looks back at gupta who gives him a don't look at me look..

both reach a resturant and sit in a quiet corner..

sheetal:its so good to c u again rishabh,i really missed u,there were so many times when i wished that u where there with me but u were not ,,(she gets a bit emotional)
Bajaj:i missed u too...really i did..
sheetal: jhoot,agar miss kya hota to aik fone to ker hi sakte the na..
bajaj:tumne bhi to koi rabta nahi rakha...
sheetal:(laughs) ok ok ,,behas karney ke liye main nahi lai tumhein yahan,,,ab mujhay chakron mein mat dalna and tell me abt this Mr. basu,,who is he and what is with u two,,and why was he asking abt prerna,she is ur wife na...?/??
Bajaj looks really uncomfortable..he looks at sheetal who looks determined...
sheetal:agar tum ye soch rahe ho ke main tumhein itnee asani se chor doon gi then think again... i m sheetal and u shud from all the people shud know that,,or main aaj tumharee life history jaane baghair tumhein nahin choron gii...
Bajaj sighs...and starts his life history...

its evening...

prerna had cooked bajaj's favourite dishes,wore a yellow colored saree...looked herself in the mirror,satisfied with her attire...thought about bajaj...smiled..

prerna is anxiously waiting for bajaj his cell is off and he is not at office..where is he..she thinks...
prerna is waiting for him,banging almost everything she can..
sneha: mom,what is it why r u so angry..?
prerna:dekha tumnei apnay papa ko,,aaj phir mujhay intezaar karwa rahe hein jaise kal ka intezaar kam tha...do ghantay se intezaar kar rahi hoon..
tushaar and prem come from behind ,tushaar smiles and prem wonders why everybody loves mr.bajaj soo much...even his own blood sister..sneha..even though he is not her real father..
sneha:imagine mom,,how long he waited for u..not hours but years..and never said a word ...(realizes what she just said..stops....)
prerna is thunder struck at this and so is tushaar and prem...
sneha: mom,i m so sorry i didn't mean too...i m so sorry..
prerna:(recovers a bit from the shock),,its ok,,u are rite..
sneha:im really very sorry mom...
prerna raises her hand signalling her to stop...goes to her room..
tushaar:sneha u shudn't have said that...its their personnal matter,,though we are their kids but we shud not comment on it...
prem gets surprised at the fact that even though tushaar is not prerna's son he and his sisters talk of her as their real mom,they love her and respect her,,,they never mention their own mom..
tushaar goes to his room...sneha sulks and goes outside to sit in the lawn on her favourite bench..
prem follows her...asks her what she just said inside...
prem:what were u talking about inside??
sneha:choro..i 've already hurt mom alot...
prem:no,sneha i want to know plzz. tell me..
sneha tells him the whole story...
sneha:prem tumhein andaza hai, ke yahan jis bachey ke paas baap ka naam na ho uski kya halat hoti hai,usko kitnee zillat or badnami ka samna karna parta hai,...us aurat ko kitni zillat or beizzati uthani partii hai,wo kisi se baat karney ke laiq nehi rehti,papa saved us,,mom,u and me from all that,,,who ever tried to raise a finger on us ,he stood against that person for us..saved from all the humiliation...he loved us,gave us shelter and biggest thing he gave us his name...or ihsaan jaan kar nahin,he really really love us...
we(prem,sneha) are not even his own children but he was always there for us,u know,bachpan mein tumhein aik dafa bukhaar ho gya tha,mom also had a head ache,he gave her pills and send her off to sleep and sat beside ur side all night long,,not even sleeping a wink,he loved u so much,he even gave u his chain which he had got from a guru g ,it was his prizely posession...(sneha leaves,getting emotional)
prem wonders if anybody(bajaj) can love someone(prerna) soooo much..that he waited for her for years..knowing that she might not return...he bears that guy(anu) everyday...even though he(anu) is our dad, but bajaj did so much for us,he felt his heart melt...he kept thinking about him(bajaj),he was so different from what he had been told by aparna and komolika...he started walking as he felt so bad,what he did with bajaj,he remembered so many bad things he said to bajaj,but he didn't say anything back,he wondered even if was a human...he then thought about the triangle(bajaj,prerna,anu)..he wondered if mukti had a friend like anu with whom she had a past then how wud he have reacted...he really felt for bajaj...

bajaj returns at about 6:30pm,,,
walks in the lounge when he sees sneha sitting there and sulking and tushaar sitting next to her trying to console her...
Bajaj: hello,where is ur mother(sees sneha crying) ,,kya hua sneha beta,(walks towards her,hugs and she hugs him back ,starts crying bitterly,bajaj gets really worried, )
prem walks in and sees bajaj and tushaar trying to console sneha,..he really feels bad ,all he did to bajaj and still he is there for them,,he wished he wasn't like that, he wished that bajaj had said something bad to him so that he wudn't feel this bad now,..
Bajaj:sneha beta kuch btao to sahi kya hua hai,..
tushaar tells him,,
sneha: papa i m really sorry i didn't mean to hurt mama..i m so sorry papa..
Bajaj:(holding her by her arms)beta let me tell u one thing,all of u kids ,i love u kids more than anything in the wold but i will allow u to hurt ur mother even for my sake ..is it clear to everyone..(looks at all his kids ,who have come out of their rooms hearing sneha cry,everybody shake their heads in affirmative)
prem walked swiftly towards the lawn and sat on the three seater swing..(if anaita sat on it,she probably fit alone ...barely,,lolz)

In the room
prerna had come into her room, took out all the old fotographs and video tapes and was watching them carefully,with a different perception,which her daughter had just given her,,she noticed that in all the videos,though there were other beautiful(more beautiful than her)women but bajaj never looked anyone ,he didn't dance with anyone except her,
(i hope u guys remember the video,when prerna and bajaj where dancing and anu was dancing with aparna,bajaj and prerna where not married then, prerna slipped and anu held her and they stare at each other and bajaj watching this left ,i so felt for him that day,,(i hated AP for that),i even felt for aparna,,lolz..i like the lady who plays aparna,,sorry for this paragraph but i had to tell u what i was writing about)
she saw that video and saw bajaj's expression and she felt somebody crush her heart,he loves her soo much and she gave him so much pain,she started crying,and saw the rest of the videos,..with teary eyes,but she cud see him only watching her or dancing with her...

Bajaj enters the room sees the fotographs spread all over their bed,and prerna sitting on the corner of the bed and watching the videos and crying...he closes the door and locks it...
Bajaj: prerna...
prerna runs towards bajaj and hugs him tight and starts crying bitterly...bajaj holds her back, and gently strokes her hair..
bajaj:shhhh,,its ok prerna, pagal mat bano, chup kar jao...shhhh..commme on..shhh
prerna: nahi Mr.bajaj,aaj mujhay roney dein ,,i have given you so much pain,i have hurted u so many times that i can't give account of and u still held on to me,you still loved me, u were always there for me,held me when i was down,kissed my tears away, stood by my side always,u covered me and what did i do, i gave u nothing but pain, i distrusted u many a times,i said so many bad things to u,u never said anything bad about me,u did everything i wanted u too, u ...(gets ot of her breath...a big ball of tears are choking her..)
bajaj holds her still stroking her hair gently with her one hand and cleans the tears with hanky...smiles at her reassuringly..
she starts crying even more...
prerna: i m so sorry Mr.bajaj,main agar saat janam bhi aaapke pyaar ka badla chukana chahoon to nahi chuka sakti,mujhay maaf kardein Mr.bajaj,,i m so sorry...
Bajaj:(tears in his eyes)sshhhhhh...chup,hugs her again,...
bajaj:i m glad that i did all i did,and there were many times when i hurted u prerna,and u forgave me...i guess i hurted u alot and i m sorry for that or jahan tak baat rahi,tumharay saath or tumse pyaar ki, to mujhay agar saat janam yahi karna para to main khush khushi karonga,...
prerna looks at him in disbelief...
Bajaj:I LOVE U PRERNA...i love u more than i can imagine,agar koi kahe ke apna dil nikal ker usko de doon ,i will do it happily and i have no regrets what so ever what i did for u,it was nothing....
Prerna:Mr.bajaj,,apnei janay anjanay mein mujhay jo bhi takleef di wo us takleef ke mukablay mein kuch nahi hai jo main nei aapko di hai...
bajaj : prerna...(softly,almost a whisper)
kisses her tears away,kisses her softly and still holding her into his strong arms
she is now sobbing...he separates her ...
Bajaj: jao ja ke fresh ho ke aao,we are going soemwhere...koi sawal nahi,bas jao jaldi se fresh ho ke aao...

Bajaj and prerna left for somewhere and bajaj did not tell her to where they were going ,when he came back home he had plans to take her to meet sheetal,it was a suprise ...

In the car

bajaj was driving and prerna was looking outside ,she saw THE house,she loved that house ,it was the PERFECT house she thought, she had talked with the contractor but he told her that it was sold and the owner will not sell it for anything in the world..(guess who the owner is..)
she used to look at whenever she went by ,she was still looking at it,wishing she cud have it..
Bajaj:why do u always look at that house like that?
prerna surprised that bajaj always noticed when she thought that he was driving and wasn't noticing her..
prerna:aapp....(stops,) kuch nahi,,i just like the house,i think its perfect,...
bajaj:kya tumhein bajaj mansion (construction) nahin passand...
Prerna:ye baat nahi hai,,i think that this house is perfect for us ,just the two of us,i thought we cud make a home out of it..u know its perfect for our runaway trip...smiles
bajaj laughs ...but thinks something....
they reach the farm house,,outside the gate,he gets a txt...
its from sheetal, she had some urgent business so was not able to join them and as an apology had done something for them....bajaj is not to tell her(prena) that she did it...

In the farm house.

its 9.00 pm
The table is set for two ...their favourite food, ready to eat...with beautiful slow music playing and candles lit..
prerna is more surprised than him,,she looks at the settings and is pleasantly surprised,everything according to her taste...
she just gives him a hug,a big tight hug..
bajaj gets a txt..
there is a gift in the bedroom with a bouquet with it,that is for prerna from u,spend the night here.turn ur cells offimedietle..have a good time..don't tell her about me yet..will meet u tomorrow..bye
He turns their cells off...
They both sit down for dinner..a beautiful candle light dinner,they talk and laugh,its been ages since they had their last candle light dinner,just two of them.they feed each other..bajaj opens a bottle of vine and they go at the back yard which is decorated with lights and the song Humtum from humtum is playing.he looks at prerna who is wearing a yellow shaffon saree with a deep(almost backless) back with her hair open....they finish their drinks and bajaj offers prerna a hand..
they both start dancing...both of them are very close...prerna puts her arms around his neck and bajaj holds her by her waist.his hands are on her backless back(lol)which is making prerna feel weak all over..both are dancing.there is nothing in this world except two of them,eyes are doing all the talking..
bajaj rubs his cheeks against hers and kisses her on her neck .she closes her eyes..he kisses her on her fore head ,then cheeks then he gives her a PASSIONATE KISS ...after the kiss they stare at each other, it begins to rain,Bajaj tries to run inside for cover but prerna stops him..
they both continue their dance in the rain ,,it is raining heavily...they are enjoying everything,the music,the rain,and specially the dance...prerna shys away,as she cann't bear the look in bajaj's eyes anymore...he pulls her close and with holding her face in his two hands he kisses her again..she feels her body getting numb all over,,he picks her up and takes her into the bedroom,she sneezes...
he puts her down and lights the candles in the bedroom,,she gets a towel and is drying her hair when bajaj comes from behind and holds her ..kisses on the back of the neck, the towel drops from her hands....
he picks her up keeps looking at her and lays her down on the bed...the night fades away(u know what... :) ).........

i'll update on next weekend...
sorry for the late update,had assingments to finish...hope u like it..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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It was MINDBLOWING.. simply superb stuff!!
Ohmigoshhh.. now we have something to look forward to on the weekend!!!

Thanks so much for this FF Rabi!!!

Gr8 job!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow Rabi...i think its even better than MY FF!!!!Its Amazing yaar!!Cont Soon and Sukhi tell Pavan to cont the second part k?
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Posted: 18 years ago
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shit i thought i wud be the first one to comment. but u beat me, sukhi !

ok now this was BRIlLIANT, SUPERB, EXCELLENT, CLASSY, SENSUAL and SWEET.
Who is Sheetal? Give some description of hers.
and what is rabta? contact?wow my urdu is also going to improve reading this FF.

Absolutely rocking Rabi, looking forward to the next part. How much i wud love to see such stuff in kzk..especially loved the farmhouse bit :)

hey and the lady who played anurag's wife...which wife actually?there are 3 anurag-wives. 😆
anyway aparna was played by geetanjali tikekar. she is fabulous. even i like her a lot :)

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