RishPrerna New Fanfic PART7- PAGE15 - Page 8

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Rabi, its not fair........ You have totally killed me by ur ff........ I just could not keep my eyes of it. 😆 😆 It was fabalous. Yeh wednesday kub aayega......
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Namzy di..wednesday is day after tomorrow..lol.Why am i crazy today??
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey Rabi just read all d 4 parts of ur ff n its AWESOME!!!me waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 5

At Bajaj House

In the farm house PRB were having time of their life,in Bajaj Mansion,Prem is sitting in the three seater swing in the lawn with his head down sulking,Vishaka comes and sits by his side...
Vish: Prem, what is it???
Prem looks at her and then lower downs his head again..
Prem: kuch nahi...kuch bhi to nahi..
Vishaka raises his head ...
Vish: Prem,ur a part of our family ,a part of BAJAJ FAMILY...and we keep our heads high...i m gonna say what i have been feeling...and correct me if i m wrong even if it is harsh..i'll take it..and what ever conversation we both are going to have is going to stay between us...
Vish: i have felt that u think that we don't think u are or take u as a part of our family..its not true... everybody loves u...tushaar and dad too...
tumhein pata hai,tumhara naam kisne Prem rakha tha..papa ne..
prem is extremely surprised...he always thought that it was either prerna or anu..
Vish:prem,tushaar is a workaholic...he is very possessive about his work..its not that he doesn't like u ...ur his younger brother...accept it ,it will be lot easier for him to do so too then...
tumhein aik baat bta doon,if u think that we don't love u,phir tumhein hamari her baat ghalat lage gii...do think about it...

she gets up to leave ..
Vish: ab ander aa jao barish hone wali hai...beemar par jao ge and another thing ,i won't mind u calling me vish mom...
smiles at him..he smiles back...
Prem: aap chalo ,main aata hoon...vish mom..

In THE FARM HOUSE NEXT MORNING...

Bajaj wakes up at the sound of somebody humming...
Prerna is humming the song...baahon ke darmiyan do pyaar mil rahe hein...
bajaj gets up,takes his shirt from the bed..finds a gift under it..he then remembers
Bajaj(thinking to himself and not aloud): oh! man i was suppose to give this to prerna last night(smiles thinking abt last night),wonder whats in it,...agar prerna nei mujhse kuch pooch liya ke ismei kya hai to main kya btaon ga....
prerna enters in his track suit ...
bajaj looks at her and his lips break into a beautiful smile as well as he hides the gift under the sheets..
Bajaj: prerna ,yeh kya...
Prerna:bas awain...mera dil chaha ke aaj aapke kapre pehan ke dekhtee hoon ke main in mein kaisee lagtee hoon...lag rahi hoon na MR.RISHABH BAJAJ...starts imitating..
Bajaj starts laughing...
Bajaj: prerna ..plzz,,mujhe ye itne khulley nahi hotey and i certainly don't walk like that,....
Prerna starts laughing...
her eyes lit up...and are shining like stars..
Bajaj looks at her cheeky smile...
Bajaj: prerna....prerna..why are u looking at me like that, what are u upto...
Prerna jumps over him...
Bajaj:prerna kya ker rahi ho....
Prerna:abhi main nei kuch kya hi kahan hai...
bajaj(remembring that he says that to her): acha to meri billi mujhi ko miaooo
prerna:or nahi to kya(starts making cat like sounds and rubbing with him like a cat does)
Bajaj is pleasantly surprised and enjoying every single moment ..
Bajaj(mockingly,lovingly ofcourse): pllzzzz ye jogging suit uttar do,,its making u hyper...
bajaj starts laughing...prerna makes an(fake)annoyed face and tries to get off the bed bajaj holds her back...she falls on the bed...
Bajaj:naraz ho gyaee...
Prerna just turns away her head like she is really angry..
Bajaj:ufff..itna ghussa..to tum mujhse nahi bolo gi...acha theek hai..mujhay bhi manana aata hai...
starts tickling her...
prerna starts laughing like anything...she is laughing and rolling all over the bed,,trying to get out of his strong hold but he is constantly tickling her...she
turns all red due to laughing...
prerna:Mr.bajaj ...nahin ,bas karein..plzzzz plzzzz,bas karein..main haaree aap jeetay ,hamesha ki tarah....
prerna is panting...
bajaj stops ...
he is leans over her...looks at her lovingly...
Bajaj:don't u dare go away from me ever...is that understood...my dear little MRS.RISHABH BAJAJ...or ur MR.RISHABH BAJAJ won't be able live without u...
prerna puts her hand on his mouth...
prerna:aap subah subah itnii apshugan baatein kyun kar rahey hain..plzzz.yun mat kaha karein.. mujhay acha nahi lagta or yun mat dekhein ,plzzz..mujhay ...(stops)..
bajaj: kya?
prerna:mujhay....
bajaj leans more..
bajaj:kya?
prerna:mujhay...mujhay...
bajaj:kya prerna???(keeps leaning over)
prerna: (hums)...kuch kuch hota hai...
both smile
he brings his face down ...moves his index finger from her forehead to nose and then lips...
holds her face in his hand and KISSES her...
she blushes and closes her eyes...
both heart beats racing...
he lifts his face up off of hers and looks at her with those firey eyes(fire of love)
prerna puts her arms around his neck and tries to change the topic(actually trying to bring him on THE topic)
prerna:aaj aapnay sara din bister mein guzarna hai kya?
Bajaj: tum saath raho gi to haan...
prerna:breakfast table pe thanda ho raha hai..jaldi se fresh ho ke aa jain main aapka wait kar rahi hoon...
Bajaj: ok...(gives a small kiss)...abhi aaya.
gets off from the bed and carefully taking with him the gift...in the washroom shakes the gift..trying to figure out what it is...gets irritated becuz he can't figure out what it is with out opening it...
Bajaj: a well!...lets see....
gets a shower and slips in his tracking suit(they don't have anything to wear on this farm house except tracking and jogging suit)(prerna has three spare sarees though)..
comes out and goes to the kitchen where Prerna is warming up the kettle...
he comes and hugs her from behind...
Bajaj:whats cookin....bohat mazey ki khushboo aa rahi hai...
prerna: aap ki naak tez hai...mujhay to koi khushboo nahi aa rahi..
Bajaj: main hoon hi bohat tez...
both laugh and bajaj goes and sits on the table..starts reading the news paper...
Bajaj:prerna jaldi karo hamein nikalna bhi hai....
prerna comes towards the table..
prerna: about that...Mr. Bajaj...i wanted to talk to u about something...
Bajaj:(dreading ..yahan bhi anurag aa gya)...haan kaho..
Prerna:woh Mr. bajaj main soch rahi thi ke agar hum aik din or ruk jaate yahan to...(looks at him)
Bajaj:(surprised) why....?
prerna: bas aise hee. (makes a face)..agar aap nahi chahte to theek hai..hum nashta ke baad nikal jain ge...

bajaj gets up from the chair...goes towards her and takes her face in his hands ...
Bajaj:meray liye tumharee khushi se barh kar kuch nahi(gives her a kiss on the forehead)if u want to stay ,,we will stay..khush...
prerna brightens up and hugs him tight....




will update soon.....
i need to sleep,hope u like this much...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#75
i wanna hug him tight too

Rabi ... this Prerna is one lucky wife!! 😳
excellent job, very romantic...awesome...continue soon...u sleep now and update tomorrow 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#76
Rabiii!!!!

That was just so cool!!!! Amazing job yaar- loved it loved it!!

Just edit the first page and write that the 5th part is on page 11- I never knew that your FF was updated!! It's just WOW yaar.. how I wish they'd show even 1/1oth of all this in the real thing!!!!!


GR8 going rabi!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#77
Yaar serisously...even if they 1/100000000000000% of what we ppl write it will make KZK a lot more bearable...fabulous stuff Rabi 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#78
Awwwww this is soo ammmmmmaaaaaazing 😳 😳 😳
Hai kash aisa ho kzk mein....life ban jaye gi 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I M DEAD AGAIN............lolz WOW Prerna was so romantic and so wild............. 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#80

g8. bajaj and prerna rock.

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