kmph updated pg65....lovers apart! - Page 8

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Posted: 18 years ago
#71
great fanfic yaar! please update soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#72
wow, liked ur update!hp u continue sn!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thank you guys for the luvly comments will update in an hour! šŸ˜›
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Then mukti drops kasak home
Kasak- mukti come inside
Mukti- no maybe next time
Kasak- no please come no mom will be really glad to meet u after all u thought a lesson to prem
Mukti- ok
Mukti and kasak go inside the servant opens the door
Kasak- kaka call mom please
Kaka- yes
Prena comes downstairs she sees mukti and mukti looks familiar same with mukti she sees prena and prena looks very familiar
Prena- mukti
Mukti- choti mom
Mukti and prena hug then mukti touches Prena's feet
Prena- wow u finally learned sanskar
Mukti- no but If I did not touch your feet then u would give me a long bashan and tell mom and mom will give me a long bashan and then my head will hurt and….
Prena- ok k ok now I am really mad at u?
Mukti- why?
Prena- when gauri told u to stay at my house u disagreed
Mukti- sorry but I wanted to stay alone
Prena- why?
Mukti- just wanted to feel like how it is to stay alone
Prena- and how is it
Mukti- to tell u the truth it is very boring
Prena- then it is final that u will stay here
Mukti- but…
Prena- no ifs no buts
Mukti- ok
Kasak- mom I think u forgot that ur little daughter up here is really confused!
Prena- oh sorry kasak do u remember gauri my best friend who u use to call choti ma
Kasak- yeah and ohh this the mukti
Prena- yes
Mukti- and this is the little chasmish kasak
Kasak- yeah
Prena- ok mukti when r u going to move in
Mukti- choti ma how about t weekdays I will stay at my house but Friday Saturday and Sunday up here
Prena- ok as u wish I will tell gauri
Mukti- ok choti mom now I have to leave
Prena- no wait I have made your favorite alo ka paratha
Mukti- no I am on a diet
Prena- itni to patli hai or kitni patli hona hai
Mukti- but
Prena- no arguing
Mukti- ok
Kasak- so mukti ready for the torture
Mukti- what do u mean?
Kasak- I mean in the weekends prem will torture u so much!
Mukti- like I am scared
Kasak- anyways do u remember when almost every summer we use to come to America prem and u would fight like crazy
Mukti- yeah no wonder we still fight like crazy
Kasak- anyways how is anjali
Mukti- she is fine
Kasak- ok till mom is making more alo ka paratha's come on lets go meet sneha
Mukti- k
They go upstairs
Mukti covers sneha's eyes
Sneha- who is it
Mukti- guess
Sneha- kasak
Mukti- seriously
Sneha- omg mukti!
Mukti- finally
Sneha hugs mukti
Sneha- so u r the same mukti the one in college 2
Mukti- yes
Sneha- man u have changed a lot u don't wear ur hair up now
Mukti- yeah I stopped
Kasak- ok sneha mukti can u please tell me now what is this seriously u both never tell me
Mukti- ok I will tell u I always use to say seriously so whenever I say it she knows that its mukti
Kasak- oh
Mukti- but I am really upset why did u all stop coming to U.S. 5 years ago
Sneha- well we were starting to take summer school so we could not come anymore
Mukti- so sad but now we can enjoy to the fullest
Sneha- yeah
Kasak- well mukti u noe prem is really going to be mad when he finds out u r the same U.S. mukti
Mukti- why
Sneha- because u use to call him khados
Mukti- oh yeah I remember
Prena- kasak mukti sneha come downstairs the parathas r ready
They all went downstairs and ate
Kasak- mom u will not believe what mukti did in college today
Prena- what?
Kasak told prena all about the dare and how mukti won and also about the airport incident
Prena- good job
After the ate
Mukti- ok now choti mom I will leave
Prena- ok
Mukti- see u all in college
As mukti was about to walk out prem came inside and saw mukti
Prem- tum
Mukti- ha main to
Prem- how dare u come to my house?
Mukti- I can come here anytime I want
Prena- yes she can
Prem- but mother India
Prena- don't u remember this is the same mukti who u use to fight with
Prem- the U.S. one
Prena- yes
Prem- god chipkali
Mukti- whatever khados
Prem- shut up
Mukti- u shut up
Prem- don't tell me what to do
Mukti- well then u also don't tell me what to do
Prem- u
Mukti- d
Prena- stop fighting
Mukti- well u noe what choti mom if I stand here any longer I will land up in jail
Prem- same here
And they both walked away (like they always do in kzk when they fight)

hope u liked it! šŸ˜›
please leave comments! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#75
šŸ˜† still can't stop laughin at em bickerin even though i've read it lik 5 times rite now there so cute 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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šŸ‘ MINDBLOWING šŸ‘
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PLZZZZZ CONT SOON
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Posted: 18 years ago
#77
i think i neva told u this... but now i will... ur an AWSOME writer!! šŸ‘

it was realli gud...the cats and dog fight between PM is sooo sweeet 😳 ...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: simrin

šŸ‘ MINDBLOWING šŸ‘
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PLZZZZZ CONT SOON

thank you😳

will try to cont tonight!šŸ˜›

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Posted: 18 years ago
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mindblowing... great job yaar! šŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pori

i think i neva told u this... but now i will... ur an AWSOME writer!! šŸ‘

it was realli gud...the cats and dog fight between PM is sooo sweeet 😳 ...

i know i know i am the greatšŸ˜† (just kidding)

thank u!😊

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