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Posted: 18 years ago
#51
it was another gr88 update!!!... plz plz plzz continu soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: mandy07

r u serious r they lik gonna be all u no wat r u doin here😆 would luv 2 c mukti doin sumthin dat would really irrate prem 😆 aaawwwww when will there be romantic scenes between em 😳 can't wait 4 da romantic scenes but ur gonna drag da romantic scenes aren't yah😡 jus kiddin 😆

yeah mostly they r going to fight friendship but not love yet maybe after a little while but u see muja logo ko tarpana bohut acha lagta hai!😆 just kidding but i must warn u beware i can do anything (except seperate pm)

anyways i am so glad u like my fan fic!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pori

it was another gr88 update!!!... plz plz plzz continu soon

thank you!😳

will for sure cont tonight!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: prem-mukti#1

yeah mostly they r going to fight friendship but not love yet maybe after a little while but u see muja logo ko tarpana bohut acha lagta hai!😆 just kidding but i must warn u beware i can do anything (except seperate pm)

anyways i am so glad u like my fan fic!

wats not 2 lik bout ur ff itz awesum i luv this ff cuz it seems it 2 be more so about teenagers 😆 u no wat i mean da characters personalities r lik teenagers itz lik i can imagine my friends bein da characters 😆 will be waitin 4 da update😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: mandy07

wats not 2 lik bout ur ff itz awesum i luv this ff cuz it seems it 2 be more so about teenagers 😆 u no wat i mean da characters personalities r lik teenagers itz lik i can imagine my friends bein da characters 😆 will be waitin 4 da update😛

thats very sweet!

i understand what u r talking about after all i wanted it to be more funny and the charactors to be a little immature but then as the story keeps on going they became more mature!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Mukti gets in her car and starts driving in her mirror she sees a car following her first she panics than she remembers that her dad told her that 2 body guards will always follow her
Mukti- I am so dumb
Then she reaches college she parks her car as soon as she gets out of the car everyone stare at her the boys start talking about how hot she is all the girls are jealous then u see prems gang
Omi, debonita, dev, sneha, and prem
Omi- look at that hotie
Sneha- what u think she is hot
Omi-not like u though
Prem- lets see he sees mukti at first he does not recognize her but then he remembered her from the airport
Prem- isse to maza Chaka na hi hoga
Dev- but why after all she is so hot
Prem- because and he tells them about everything that happened at the airport
Dev- I can't believe it a girl called u a driver!
Prem- she did now would u shut up lets see how we should bother her
Everyone thinks
Prem- idea
Prem whispers something
Everyone- yes
Prem- get to work
Mukti is walking trying to find a room
A guy taps on her shoulder
Guy- do u need help?
Mukti- yes can u tell me where room 306 is
Omi- yes it's on the other dome
Mukti- thanks
Omi- welcome
Mukti goes on the other dome but she doesn't find room 306 she comes across a guy
Mukti- excuse me
Dev- yes
Mukti- can u tell me where room 306 is
Dev- yes it is downstairs
Mukti- thanks
Mukti goes downstairs she still does not find the room and she comes across a girl
Debonita- do u need help?
Mukti- yeah actually I was looking for room 306
Debonita- it's on the third dome
Mukti- thanks then mukti spots somebody behind the door she recognizes him but can't remember who he is then she remembers she saw him at the airport then she finds out that he is getting revenge by misleading her
Mukti thinks "wait and watch what I do now"
Now mukti is walking and she bumps into somebody
Mukti- I'm sorry
Girl- its ok
Mukti- can u tell me where room 306 is
Girl- yeah I am going there 2 come with me
Mukti- thanks hi I am mukti
Girl- hi I am kasak
Mukti- nice name
Kasak- thanks
Then mukti and kasak enter the room the professor's name is professor mehra
Prof- Ladies where were u
Kasak- we we…
Mukti- I was trying to find my way here and kasak helped me
Prof- Ok come inside look at the board there is a sitting chart there please take your seats
Mukti sits right in front of kasak and she sits beside some guy named prem and kasak sits beside dev
Mukti then finds out that prem is the same guy who made her go around the whole campus and also the guy at the airport
Mukti sits beside him not even looking at him
Prem thinks
"Man what attitude she has"
Prof- Ok guys since this is history class I am handing u your first project and u will be divided in groups of 4 listen carefully to the groups
Ketki, omi, debonita, and sneha
Rahul, rohit, anjum, and ronit (these names don't matter)
Sonia, lakshya, sweety, and mishti (these names don't matter)
Dev, kasak, mukti, and prem
Prof- u will have to work at each others house and also in class this project is due in 6 weeks
Prof- you have a three part project u have to make a timeline about a famous person from history and u make it on a poster it should be neat the second part is a 3 paragraph paper about that person's achievement and the last thing is a skit u have to make a 15 min skit about that person
Now to make it more fun I decided that u can write about an actor/actress who is alive and the skit would be from one of their movies
Everyone- yes!
The bell rings and everyone leaves
Kasak- man I am so excited
Mukti- why?
Kasak- ok don't tell anyone but I like dev
Mukti- what
Kasak- yeah
Mukti- ok u can trust me on that but just to tell u I hate prem
Kasak- why?
Mukti- she tells kasak everything that happened
Kasak- man u have guts but just to tell u for new comers there is a rule that they have to do a dare at lunch
Mukti- I don't care I am so not afraid of dares anyways I am so glad we have all classes together
Kasak- yeah
Then second and third period goes by fast and now it is lunch time kasak and mukti sit at the same table mukti is not eating she is reading a book
Kasak- why don't u eat
Mukti- not hungry
Kasak- ok
Mukti is reading and the suddenly the whole cafeteria falls dead silent
Mukti can feel that something is wrong she puts her book down and sees that prem and his gang are in front of mukti
Mukti- do u need help
Prem- no but just to tell u there is rule in this college that newcomers have to do a dare
Mukti- so
Prem- so u have to do a dare 2
Mukti- and name one reason I would
Prem- if u want to survive college than yeah u would
Mukti- ok what is the dare
Prem- the dare is u have to beat me in tennis if u win than we will never bug u again if u don't then u have to kiss that boy right there
Prem points at a boy rahul he looks so ugly he wears glasses he has braces he is so skinny he wears nerdy clothes
Mukti- ok I agree
Prem- after college
Mukti- whatever now get lost
Prem and his gang leave
Kasak- mukti are u crazy prem is really good at tennis
Mukti- I don't really care because I am 2
Kasak- u might be but if u lose how the hell will u kiss that loser
Mukti- mukti kapoor never looses
Kasak- ok best of luck
The rest of the time goes by fast then after college mukti changes into more proper clothes for tennis she is wearing a white mini skirt a whit shirt and whit hair band
Prem is wearing white pants and white shirts and something on his wrists (don't know what u call it)
The match begins prem scores one point then mukti then prem then mukti then prem then mukti then prem then mukti they keep on scoring points now 1 more point left to go and whoever gets that point wins
It's a tough one but finally mukti scores and she wins
Mukti is so happy but she shows a lot of attitude
Then she gets changed and meets prem and kasak outside
Kasak- congrats
Mukti- thanks
Prem- congrats
Mukti- thank u now next time don't dare bug me
Prem- whatever and he leaves
Kasak- mukti can u drop me home
Mukti- sure

i hope u liked it i will cont tommorow! 😛
please leave comments! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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it was gr888... 👏

umm... i guess their frndship starts frm here 😛....

newaizz... plzz cont. soon 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pori

it was gr888... 👏

umm... i guess their frndship starts frm here 😛....

newaizz... plzz cont. soon 😳

thank u!😳

whose friendship prem and mukti's or mukti and kasak's?😕

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Posted: 18 years ago
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awsome update Jaan! 😳
plz cont. soon! 😳

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