Rishu Prerna Anu ff Pt 19 update on pg 35

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Sam

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Posted: 18 years ago

#151

i m gonna update today for sure!!
but nothing compared to ur awesome ff!! 👏

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Sam

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Posted: 18 years ago

#152

Part 14
😉😆

Rishabh and Prerna are completely shocked. The doctor notices their shocked faces and smiles.

Dr: are u guys okay?
R: yea I am fine, doc, Prerna are u okay?

Prerna is tear- eyed. She is happy that she is not pregnant but at the same time, the thought of Rish not marrying her turns this happy moment into a sad one.

Rishabh touches her by the shoulder and she looks into his eyes, and Rish realizes that she is upset. She couldn't say a word and walks out.

Rish and the doctor are confused. Rishabh apologizes to the doc and goes behind her. A prerna walk to the car and Rishabh is just standing there, and Prerna looks behind her. RIshabh thinks that Prerna should be happy that this marriage won't have to take place.

Rishabh walks to her.

R: You should be happy Prerna, we won't get married.
P: Yea, I should be happy, but I am not.
R: Not happy about what?
P: Rish, why r you so?
R: So what?
P: So u gonna cancel the wedding?
R: Yea…we will have to, I mean now what's the point now, right?

(Rish loves Prerna, Prerna loves Rish, and idiots are still looking for a point)

P: Yea, what's the point (Prerna is dejected). Do you know how hurt our parents will be?
R: Well I don't want to hurt you…parents will be mad for now, but time will heal it…plus if we don't have a reason to get married now…Prerna, don't worry I will take the blame, but give me just tonight to think about it okay? Now let's go…
P: Listen to yourself…why are u trying to be mahaan?
R: I am not trying to be mahaan, I am just trying to be practical.
P: I don't know about you Rishabh, but I can't embarrass my parents…
R: Well we will think about this over dinner (He is so chilled out).
P: I am not going anywhere with you…just leave me alone. (With a fit of anger)
R: Dekho, Prerna give me one good reason we should get married.
P: why don't u answer that yourself?
R: I don't see a reason…
P: fine you don't want to marry me don't. I can't force you.

Prerna is absolutely devastated. She loves Rishabh, but is scared of his rejection, and Rishabh feels the same. Both are so oblivious to the fact that they both love each other. Prerna and Rishabh just look at each other with pain in their eyes, and Prerna's tears start rolling down her cheeks, RIshabh wants to wipe them off and tries to explain, he moves his hand towards her cheek when she stops him. Prerna is so angry.

Rishabh is hurt. He takes his hand away from her, but Prerna is also hurt…you know what I mean!!
The wind is blowing…no no don't worry about duppattas flowing the air, nope ain't happening here. Just the wind is blowing, Prerna starts walking away from him…and Rishabh just watches her walk away from him, with tears welling up in his eyes. He realizes that things will never be the same between them. Prerna looks at him once before she sits in a rickshaw…all the while both are staring at each other.

Rishabh takes his car to the beach for a walk and recollects all the moments he spent with her. He just walks in the sand and sees all these couples romancing and smiles. He has been there at the beach for the longest time, it is 2 am, his parents have been calling him, Prerna's parents call him, Gupta has been calling him, he sees all these people call him, when he sees his missed calls, and above all Prerna, she has been calling him like 40 times

She left him a voicemail…he listens to it.

"Rishabh, where are you? I am so worried here, please at least answer my phone, your anger is like totally out of control. I am sorry, I shouldn't have reacted the way I did, marriage is a life long commitment after all. And the reason you agreed to marry me, was because you didn't want me to go through that alone, and now that the baby is not there, you don't see a point in us marrying, and I will stand by your decision. You stood by me when I needed you and now it's my turn, now please answer my phone, please"

Rishabh smiles his dimple smile and goes to his car…he goes to Prerna's house, he is outside her building. It is raining…Prerna is still up, waiting for Rish's phone call and is so sad and thinks that this love is just one sided, she is worried about Rishabh. Prerna walks to the window to close it as it is raining…she looks down and sees Rish smiling at her, standing against his Merc with folded hands. Prerna's sees him with all the love and rushes downstairs with an umbrella, she wants to go hug him but then stops.

They look into each other's eyes. It is raining like cat's and dogs…but who cares, they are looking so hott in the rain..hehehe. Rishabh moves his hand over his hair, his katilana adda. Both don't have any words.

Prerna comes with her umbrella trying to cover him too. They are too close.

Rishabh finally breaks the silence…

R: Hi!
P: Hi…
R: Didn't sleep yet?
P: Was waiting for you to call me, I was worried.
R: Hmmm…
P: where were you?
R: I was thinking…
P: About?
R: us!!
P: Rishabh its okay…there is no us.
R: Agar main kahoon, mujhe tumse mohabbat hai, aur meri bas yahi chahat hai toh kya kahogi?

Prerna laughs…Rishabh get's out of that umbrella area LOL.

R: kyaa, what's so funny?
P: You like that song?
R: Yeh gaana tha…
P: Yup, from the movie Lakshya
R: Hmmm…see I didn't know that.
P: shut up Rishu!
R: I am serious…

Prerna is about to walk away…coz she thinks that he is never gonna be serious.

P: good night Rishu, now leave before you fall sick.

Prerna is leaving when Rish holds her hand. Rishabh comes closer to Prerna and holds her head with his two manly hands…and looks her in the eye

R: Tum shayad bhool gayi Prerna, but let me remind you again, ek baar Rishabh Bajaj ne haath thaam liya toh zindagi bhar nahin chodd taa.
P: Yeh kiss movie ka dialogue tha?
R: Prerna, I love you! Today when you walked away from me, I realized that a part of me is going away…and now that I thought about it, I realized…if I let you go, my life will never be the same, in fact there will be no life at all. Without you Prerna, naheee mera aaj hai aur hai naahi mera kal, Prerna whatever we share is nothing but love.

Prerna is shocked, her eyes light up, with tears of happiness.
Rishabh goes down on his knee, and

R: Prerna I have loved you all along, just didn't know what it was…thought it was just friendship…but I was wrong, I didn't say anything earlier because I was afraid of you not feeling the same about me, and I didn't wanna lose what we already have, but jab pyar kiya toh darna kya…right?

He laughs with his cute dimples and Prerna does too- two in one, laugh and cry…
R: I am still on my knees begging for love, I've been in love and know it's fun.. I know it's hard to trust a man - giving your heart, body, and soul, but know it's me that's on my knees swallowing my pride, begging you, please ... once again I say please; be mine. Prerna, I love you with all my heart, and there is nobody else for me in this world, who could make me happier than you can, you're the one for me. So what do u say, will you marry me and make me complete?

P: Yes Rishabh Bajaj, I will marry you…

Saying this she kicks Rishabh and he falls in the puddle of water on the road…and Prerna jumps on him. Rishabh is so alarmed hehehe, it is still raining.

R: What the hell was that?
P: What took you so long, to tell me that you love me?
R: You haven't told me that yet…

Saying this he rolls over and now this time he is over Prerna.

Prerna smiles…and so does he..

R: I am waiting…(gives her the cute look )
P: for what?

Rishabh is pissed now; he gets up and goes to his car.

Prerna comes from the back and hugs him.

P: rishabh I love you, mein tumse bepanha pyar karti hoon

Rishabh turns around

P: haan Rishu, and this is the reason why I walked away from you…you know I have loved you from the time you stood by me, I realized ke, my soul mate was right next to me, and I didn't even know, but it is so funny that what we couldn't say to each other, our destiny has done it for us. I was in love with you, but didn't know how u felt about me. Bilkul tumhari tarah, mein darr tit hi, ke tum na kehdoge…I thought now that we are getting married, you will eventually fall in love with me. But today, I was devastated, when I found out that the reason you were gonna marry me, never really existed. I thought you would lea ….

Before she could finish what she was saying… Rishabh pulls his closer by the waist and seals theirs love with a kiss. They kiss like there is no tomorrow…
Prerna feels like this is the best kiss she has ever had…it was just beautiful. They kiss and hug each other tight. Finally they realize that there are in the middle of the road and chances are people might be watching them, even though it is 3 am. Prerna blushes, she gives a peck on Rishabh's cheek and is about to walk away, when it thunders and Prerna is all frightened and hugs Rishabh even tighter…

Rishabh starts sneezing, Prerna is worried.

P: Rishu chalo let's go in, you will fall sick!!
R: No Prerna its okay…I will go home now.
P: No Rishu, we have been in the rain for quite sometime…thanks to you inconvenient timings of confessing your love.

Rishabh just smiles and Prerna holds Rishabh's hand and like a lil child she takes Rishabh inside.

Prerna opens the door…Prerna's parents are fast asleep. Prerna takes Rishabh into her room. She gets out a towel and wipes his hair off, while Rishabh is lovingly looking at his Prerna.

P: Don't look at me like that.
R: Like what?
P: You know what I mean…
R: So … tumhare baal kaun dry karega?
P: Mein khood karlungi.
R: are u sure..?
P: yea…

R: Where are you going?
P: To get you some clothes..
R: Prerna, its okay… I will go home now.
P: Rish its still raining…and plus, you can stay here tonight.
R: Prerna mein ladki nahin hoon ke mujhe bahaar iss waqt jaane se darr lagega.
P: Then don't blame me if u fall sick.
R: okay I won't.

Rishabh is about to leave when Prerna hugs him and he kisses her forehead.

R: love you!
P: love u too…
R: Now good night, and I will see you tomorrow, okay?
P: Call me when you reach home…

Rishabh finds it a lil silly, but smiles, as his love, cares so much abt him.

R: yea.. I will

Rishabh kisses her forehead again and leaves, Prerna blushes. 😳

Prerna shuts the door, and rushes to the window to see him go.

After Rishabh is gone, Prerna…thinks of it as the best night of her life. Rishabh too is very happy…now will these lovers …live happily ever after? 😳

Hope you guys liked it. Had to rush, since so many of u guys were waiting…I am sorry, I suck at writing romantic stuff, this proves it but I can imagine Rish Prerna romancing…its heaven!!

Edited by Garv_Kumud_4eva - 18 years ago

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Sam

@RonitPallaviNR

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Posted: 18 years ago

#153

will write the next part soon!! 😉

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nuts4kzk

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Posted: 18 years ago

#154

R u crazy, it was awsome and thanks jaaaan for atleast listening to my wish and fullfilling it for a change😆 😆 😆 You know what I m talking about 😉 😉 and you are very nice in writing ronatic stuff........ It was mind blowing 👏 👏 👏

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roneeta

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Posted: 18 years ago

#155

Wah wah! mazaa aa gaya Sammie!
Coool stuff:)

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Manasi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#156

FABULOUS STUFF sammie...its awesome 👏 👏

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Sara Bukhari

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Posted: 18 years ago

#157

Sammie thank god!!!U didnt make em seperate!!Yay!!And u dont suck at romance scenes i do...okay?U Sukhi,Namzy and Saru all ROCK at romance scenes and i suck