FF-DDH-PreMukti-Prt 20-PARTH!!!-pg25 - Page 11

Originally posted by: brainychild92

great update.. that was funny.. UR DAD IS SO YOUNG!!

i feel bad, i never heard anyone say that to me.. 😆 😉 😉

well continue soooooooooooooooooonnnnn

and remind me how old the kids are.. i cant seem to remember.. (they were quintupeliets or somthing right)

Well im going to do a leaps so they are right now...the quadruplets are 14,Amit and Adi and their friends are 12,Fabeha is 10 and Raghu is 6 but after the leap u will find out how old they are.😛😃

Part 17

Tanner:Your dad looks so young!
Adi:everyone says that!
Prem:thats true.
Tyler:really?
Amit:yeah!
Alex:LOL!
They stay ther till 10:00 and then go home.

8 year leap

By the way Shurti,Haseeb,Alsihba,Parth and Shabir are 22,Amit Adi Tanner Tyler and Alex are 20

Pram:Hurry up ur late for school!
Alex:Sorry we were late, I mean us boys because we were chosing what the girls would like us best in.
Prem:you guys and girls.Where is Fabeha?
Fabeha:Right here!She comes out in this this...This is also how Fabeha looks


Prem:what about Raghu?
Raghu:Im here to lets go!were late already!
Prem:Ok they all got in the extended van and drove off.
Prem droped off the kids at school and went back home

Prem:Mukti!?
Mukti comes wearing this(just to let u know i only put girls piics up so no boys pics will be up)

Mukti:what?
Prem:Where are the otehrs?
Mukti:Shurti Said she will be here soon.right when Mukti said soon The door bell rang.

Prem opened the door and saw Shurti
Shurti looks like this and she was wearing this

Shurti:PAPA!
Prem:SHURTI!
Mukti:SHURTI!
Shurti:MAMA!
Mukti comes down stairs and hugs Shurti.
Shurti:Guess what!?
Mukti:What?
Ahurti:I GOT THE JOB!
Prem:really?
Shurti:yeah!
Mukti:But this means...
Shurti:this means i have to leave all of you guys...Paar mama i dont wanna leave.
Mukti:does this effect ur job to stay here?
Shurti:yea ofcourse.iIf i want to keep the job then i have to stay there.
Hearing all the crying and screaming Parth Shabbir and Haseeb came downsatirs
Haseeb:What is all this comotion!?
Parth:look!
Shabbir:Its shurti!
Parth Shabbir and Haseeb go and hug her
Parth:WOW i must say u look so different after these years.
Shurti:you to!
Haseeb:How many years has it been?
Shabbir:About 5 years!
Shurti:OMG I cant believe it!
Shabbir:lets go upstairs and u can tell us all aout the trip.
Shurti:ok come on.
Haseeb:like the old days we always used to talk and talk!
All the kids laughed(that were there)They left.

Prem:Mukti I think our Shurti has grown up.
Mukti:What about the otehr what did they do?
Prem:Nothing but Shurti acts more mature!
Mukti:yeah your right.
Prem:I think we shoud get her married.
Mukti:NO WAY! not yet.
Prem:IT WAS JUST A SUGGJESTION!
Mukti:still ur suggjestions turn to reallity real quick!
Prem:What ever they donot!
Mukti:I think we should just stop this topic.
Prem;True because i dont want our relationship to turn bad.(but were they wrong something might happen)
Mukti:Ok im going upstairs to clean up bye.
Prem:Mukti!Not in these clothes i bought these for u u cant get these dirty
Mukti;Ok then i will change.
They day came to an end of school and the kids came home
Shurti told them everything.
Tanner:Are you serious?
Adi:I think she is.
Fabhi:No that cant be!
Alex:But it is.
Tanner:When are u going?
Shurti:This weekend.
Tanner:THIS WEEKEND ITS LIKE IN @ DAYS!
Shurti:I noe im sorry.
Alex:Wait Saturday or Sunday?
Shurti:Saturday.

This is where im ending it today bye!

👏
awsome job hun!....plz cont. soon! 😳
can't waitt to read the next part! 😃

Part 18

By the way before i start writing i want to tell u guys a lil about the 3 aka Tanner Alex and Tyler.I used these names from my elementrey school and my junior high school.So heres a little about them.

Alex:He has complete blonde hair, no glasses, the grade hes in right now (in real life)grade 5.Hes not that small for his age but he is small.

Tyler:He has Black hair,No galsses, the grade right now(real life)grade 6.He is way to small for his age but he looks like a grade 6 kid.

Tanner:His has Blonde hair withs fery light brown strikes, he has pale skin, no glasses,regular size for his age, grade 7 right now.

Thats all about them.

So on with the update?

Alex:Saturday!
Shurti:Im really sorry.But i have to go.
Who knows how the week went by, It was already time for Shurti to go.
They all go to the airport

AirPort

Shurti:Bye Mama Bye Papa
Prem:bye as he looks away.
Mukti:Bye as tears are rolling like crazy down her soft cheeks.
Shurti:Papa if u look away from me then i wont feel good there, and I would want to come back.
Prem turns to her and his eyes are red filled with tears.
Prem:Dont worry.
Shurti starts laughing.
Haseeb:Whats so funny?
Shurti:Look at Papas eyes.
the rest of kids start laughing.
Mukti:Prem i think u should look at ur self in the mirror.
Prem:Mujhe Pata hai.
Mukti:tho.
Tanner:Go put some water in ur eyes it will make them better.
Prem leaves to the bathroom.
Mukti:Shurti take care.Ok?
Shurti:dont worry.I will take very good care of my self.
Tyler:If u dont then Aunty will get mad at u.
Shurti sticks her tounge at Tyler.
Mukti:Ehm Ehm Ehm!Dont stick ur tounge at people.
Shurti:Sorry Mama.
Mukti:OMG its time for ur flight.
Shurti:But i dont want to leave without saying goodbye to papa.
Mukti:Shabbir go call ur dad.
Shabbir:ok.
He leaves and gets Prem.
Shabbir:Here he is.
Mukti:Shurti neh goodbye kehna tha.
Prem:But she already did.
Shurti just goes and hugs Prem and starts crying.
Shurti:Bye Papa.
Prem:Bye sweetheart.
Prem kisses Shurtis forehead and wipes off her tears.
Prem:You shouldnt cry. It doesnt look good on you.
Shurti smiles.
She hugs Mukti and her brother and sisters, says her goodbyes and leaves.

Mukti is quiet all the way home.
Tyler:Hey aunty can we also call u mom?
Mukti is quiet.
Alex:Aunty?
Mukti is still quiet.
Tanner:...Au..Aunt...Aunty???
Mukti:No more aunty from ur n=mouths if i hear another aunty then mein tum long koh marugi.
Alex Tyler and Tanner:Sorry aunt...Oppss Mom.as they put there hands on their ears.
Mukti:Thats how i do my stuff.
Alex tyler and Tanner:lol
Tanner:Hey man...s lets go ask uncle too.
They ask Prem and he says yes.
Now they feel like a "Full House", get it the show "Full House"

thats where im ending it today bye!

GOOD JOB SIS ITS REALLY FUNNY (WELL TOO ME IT IS) 😆

Totally awesome part!!!!!!!!!
Keep goin soon! 👏

I will be posting soon so yeah! lol

Part 19

The Next Day

Mukti:Do u have the gifts?
Prem:Yeah.
Mukti:Ok lets go..
So they walk upstairs to a room...In the room...

we se someone sleeping but the blanket is covered...

Prem:HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!
Tyler jolt out of bed.
Tyler:OMG what was that...
Mukti:Happy birthday beta...
Tyler:OMG i forgot, thanks mom...
Mukti:No problem ur dad always acts like this when its someone birthday.
Tyler laughs and then:Omg what about m birthday party...
mukti dont worry ur party isnt until 5:oo and it is...OMG its 5:00
Tyler:WHAT!!!
Mukti:i joking beta its only 12:00, by the way u slept in today.
Tyler:i know but i dont know why i woke up o late...
Mukti:Its ok come down quick we rent eating bf before u come.
By the way Bf means Break Fast.

Table.

Raghu:mom where is Bhai?
Mukti:dont worry he will be down oon...
Shabbir:Not oon right now... HEY ZEBRA BOY...
Tyler comes and wearing black and white.
Tyler:how do I look?
Everyone starts laughing!
Tyler:WHAT DID I DO NOW?!!!!!

thats it for today im sleep thats why its short.

u finallie updated...YaY
but it was a short update:(.....update soon plz

Part 20

Tyler:What did i do now???
Tanner:Look at what ur wearing Zebra Boy!accually MAN!(starts laughing)
Tyler:GESH ill go and change!!!
He comes back wearing red t-shirt and Blue pants.
Mukti:Thats much better.Now you look mcuh cuter...
Tyler:thanks m...
Prem:I THOUGHT I WAS THE CUTE 1 HERE!!!
Mukti:You are but inbetween teh kid, i was talking about.
Prem:oh sorry.
Mukti just smiles
Parth:Arent we going to call...
Shabbir:Arent we going to call Shurti today because of Tylers birthday?
Mukti:GREAT JOB SHABBIR! thanks for reminding me i have to call.
Parth(in mind):i was going to say that not him,thatsit ive realized that NO1 loves me in this hiouse i guess i will have to do what i was planning.

Tylers Party

Tyler is greeting everyone
Prerna comes
Tyler(english accent):DADI!!!
Prerna(english accent):BETA HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
Tyler:Kya dadi app bhi nah!
by the way he noes hindi and so do Alex and Tanner.
Tyler:By the way thanks.
Mr.B:Tyler beta happy birthday(in his usual tone)
Tyler:Thanks
Mr.B and prerna leave, Sneha, Krrish and Soha come.
Sneha:TYLER!!!
Tyler:SNEHA AUNTY!!!
Sneha:happy birthday.
Tyler:THANKS SNEHA AUNTY, You noe what aout of all my aunts your the best 1 ive got,event out of my canadian aunties.
Sneha:Tyler, i am your only aunty, are you saying this to make me happy?
Tyler:NO!!!...Maybe...(sneha gives him a face)Yeah.
Sneha:AWW THATS SO SWEET!!!She gives him a hug.
Krrish:tyler HAPPY BIRTHDAY MAN!!!
Tyler:THANKS UNCLE.
Soha is looking around when...
Tyler:hey Soha
Soha:yeah...hey where is Adi?
tyler:over there --->
Soha:thanks she is about to leave when Tyler stops herand says"arent you going to say something?"
Soha:like what?
Tyler:like maybe happ..
Soha:Oh yeah, happy birthday and she leaves.

Soha:HEY ADI!
Adi looks at Soha
Adi(to himself):WOW she looks gorgeous!i wouls like marry her right this minute
Soha(to herself):WOW he looks so dashing!I would marry him right now!
Adi:he...you...I...she...mom...
Alex:What hes trying to say is that you look beautiful today.
Soha:thanks and she kisses Adi on the cheeks.
Scene Switches

Parth:COME ON PARTH YOU CAN DO IT COME ON!!!
we see Parth is standing on top of his,their,Prems, Muktis house/Mansion.
Parth:COME ON WHY WONT YOU DO IT!!!
The scene switches
Mukti:Shabbir Have you sen Parth?
Shabbir:No i havent seen him scince lunch
Mukti:oh ok she is going to prem...
Mukti:Prem have you seen...
She hears a noise out side.
tshumme!!!(if u guys and girls dunt understand{gun shot)
She is about to leave when someone comes to the door.
Prem:KRIS!!!
Kris:PRAM.Man! How are you?
Prem:fine you?
Kris:fine.
Prem:rember Mukti this is my bussiness partner Kris Lemche.
Mukti:Oh yeah I will be right back.
She goes outside and is shocked to see...
Mukti:PARTH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Everyone isnde hears this and runs outside
prem sees Mukti sitting beside a fullycouvered Parth.
This is blood on the ground aswell all around him.
Mukti:PARTH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Prem just stands there in shock.All the kids come out Tyler, Tanner, Alex, Adi, Amit, Fabhi, Raghu, Shabbir and everyone else.
Noone was moving any musle until Tyler came up to Mukti.
Mukti:PARTH WAKE UP PARTH!!!!!!
Parth opens his eyes slightly and says:A MAN and closes his eyes.
Mukti:PARTH OPEN UR EYES PLZ FOR ME PLZZZ.
Tyler comes and sits next to Mukti, Mukti put her head on Tylers chest.
Mukti:tell him nah to open his eyes, to wake up.
The scene goes dark,Truely that was a mother and son moment.

Hospital

Mukti:DOCTOR!!!DOCTOR PLZ TAKE MY SON IN PLZZZ!!!
Doc:What happened?
Mukti:I dont know all he said was "a man" and closed his eyes plzz take him in plzz.
Doc:Murse take him in.
in 3 hours the doc comes out and says...

thats where im ending it today cya.