FF-DDH-PreMukti-Prt 20-PARTH!!!-pg25

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Posted: 18 years ago
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This is my second fan fic and i hope u guys like it.

So it will start after Mukti's death


You see Prem laying on a bed and Prerna enters

Prerna picks Prem (like from the arm) up and says to herself :Today we are going to the doctors to find out if u can get better.

Doctor's

Prerna and the Doctor have a mute convorsation(you will find out what they talked about)

Prerna and Prem leave.

Bajaj House(oh ya the bajaj house belongs to Prerna now,she still hasn't met Mr.Bajaj yet)

The Basu's are at Bajaj house

Anurag:What happened Prerna?
Prerna:the best cure for Prem is in London(thats what they talked about)
Anurag:Oh so are you going to go or should I come along?(Sam get a jealous)
Sam:Anu you don't have to go Prerna can handle...
Anu:your right Sam ,But still I want to know from Prerna,Should I come along?
Prerna:Its okay Anurag I will go by myself.(She knows how Sam feels)
Anu:Ok When are you going to go?
Prerna:Tomorrow...
Anu:Tomorrow! I will come drop you off...
Prerna:Its ok Anurag! I have a driver he will drop me off at the airport.
Sam and Anu: Ok fine you can go...

So the next day came quickly and Prerna got up early ans started to pack
Prerna woke Prem up and took him to the airport.The took the fight to London and went to the hotel that was reserved for them.

Prerna sits Prem down and goes to the receptionist
receptionist:Yes Are you Prerna Bajaj?
Prerna:Yes I am.
receptionist:Oh here is your rooms key...(she gives her 1key)
Prerna: I need 2 keys.
receptionist:Oh here you go ma'am

Prerna and Prem go to there rooms,But Prerna takes Prem to his room before she goes to her own room

Prerna:(to herself)Oh god I need to take some rest.

Then it switches to Prem's room

The you see Prem laying on the bed with the dupatta in his hand
and the song Kyun kisi koh goes on

Next day

Prerna takes Prem to the doctors and the doctor comes out saying:Prem is saying someones name"Mukti"...

Prerna:Kya!Kya Ker aha hai mera beta?
Doctor:Haan...


Prerna goes toward the room Prem is in and you can hear Prem saying:Mukti....Mukti...Mukti....MUKTI!(he wakes up)

Prerna:Prem tu utgaya!
Prem:Ma...Mukti Kahan Hai!?
Prerna:Mukti Humaay chord kar chaligay
Prem:NAHI...Yeh nahi hosakta,Agar Mukti is dunya main nahi rahegi toh mein bhi nahi rahunga

as he says that he gets out of the bed and runs out side and get into a taxi,the taxi starts to drive while Prerna is running out saying:Prem roko Prem roko.Prem dosnt listen Then you see Prerna stop! she sees that Prem's car got into a accedint

Prerna is PURE shocked she starts running toward the car when she sees someone running toward the car from the other side.

The girl runs toward the car and holds Prem,She then screams:PREM!!!!!!!!!


When we see the girls face its none other than Mukti!

Prerna comes there and she sees Mukti she is soooooo shocked!



Im ending it here today cause i've writen to much
Edited by Manoj&Tina#1fan - 18 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey cool a pm fic if u want me to putit on the first page of the prem sticky do pm me the link and the name of the fanfic
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Posted: 18 years ago
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don cry hon😳

i loved it!👏...can't wait for d next part😳

--thankzz Julu for puttin it in d first pg of MPKDH😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow..its awesome..plz continue..pm me whem u r updating the next
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great fan-fic continue soon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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a great start do carry on soon 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Here is the next part

Part 2

Prerna is dead shocked that she saw Mukti

Prerna: Mukti Mukti looks up

Mukti: Choti Maa

Prem:(uncossious)Mukti...Kya tum Mukti ho...?

Mukti is unable to talk

Both Prerna and Mukti take Prem to the hospital and they are waiting and waiting until the doctor comes out and say:Who is Prerna Bajaj here?

Prerna:I am Prerna bajaj,What is it??????

Doctor:Mr.Prem is calling you.

Prerna goes inside to Prem's room and sees him there a silent and when she says "Prem" Prem turns around

Prem:Ma,I think I saw Mukti

Prerna:You did Beta ek minute(Prerna calls Mukti)

Mukti enters the room but then stops and turns around

Prem:Mukti...(as he walks up to Mukti)

you can see tears forming in her eyes,Mukti turns around and just hugs Prem!

Mukti:Prem Im so sorry,Im so sorry

Prem:Whats the sorry all about?

Mukti:That I left you😭.

Prem:Its ok so now u can come home with us right?

Mukti:I dont know because everyone thinks im dead.

Prem:Its ok i can come home noone will say nething they will accually be happy

So Prem Mukti and Prerna go back to India...

I will be ending it here cause i have to get off the computer
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yeah its really good..i wanna know how mukti got there!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Oh Mukti when she "so called" died she lost her memory and ended up in London
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thats is really gud continue soon 👏

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