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Posted: 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#42
cont soon yaar, baysabri say wait ker rahain hai!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ok, guys really sorri i'm updateing late, i came from skool, watch KZK, went ot doc for shot 🀒 and just came running home cuz i wanted to update my fanfic. ok. sorri once again.
Note: i'm not really prepared for the update today cuz loaded with HW and skool stress. Sorri.
Recap:
Ok, so basically, Kajal is acting like Mukti infront of Prem, and she asks Prem to forgive her (Mukti) and Prem just gives her a weird stare. Tht's basically wht happened.
Continued:
Prem is still deep in stare with Kajal, but Kajal looks at Prerna seeking for help.
Prerna breaks the silence: Mukti beta hum saab bahaar jaa rehe hai, tum Prem ke paase rehena aur uska kehaal rakhna.
(Sum help Prerna)
Kajal: kkkkya? i mean, je Choti Maa.
Prerna, and ever1 else in the room leave and there is pin drop silence between Prem and Kajal.
Then Prem starts coughing, Kajal pour water in the glass from jug, and gave the glass to Prem, Prem's hand was shaking so he cudn't drink it, so Kajal had to hold Prem's head from one hand and the other hold the glass and help Prem, and Prem was done drinking water then Kajal was taking the glass to the desk and it almost slipped, so Prem support Kajal hand and once Prem touched her, Kajal dropped the glass.
Prerna hears it and runs upstairs, then up she cum upstairs Prem was sitiing up and Kajal was picking up the broken hand,
Prerna: Kajal.
Kajal's hand hits the broken glass and her hand starts bleeding, Prem see Kajal's hand bleeding, gets up gets the bandage, and by then Kajal put the broken glass in the dustbin
Prem walked up to her, and Kajal hid her hand behind her dupatta. Prem grabs her hand pulls her to sit down and then he put bandage on her hand, Prerna watched with amaze to see her son, gettin better. once done, prerna and kajal go downstairs leavign Prem asleep.
when Kajal Prerna arrive down the stairs the police officer come in the Bau house, knocking on the door...
To Be Continued... Hope u like it, Enjoy
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i'll try to update tom. or today if i can think of sumthing
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thats really gud plz continue soon πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
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tht wasss niiceee...and he is gettin betta..koooll..cont soon.. i love it...see yaz byezz
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Posted: 18 years ago
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will try laterz 😊 glad u all like it πŸ˜‰ 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#48
GREAT!!! thanks alott amazzing as per usualll πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 18 years ago
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continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! πŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi guys, i decided to update my Fanfic, i won't pm anyone, cuz its really late, well in Canada, tht is.
Note:This is very short cuz i just thought of it so i typed it so i won't forget tom.
Recap: Prem is getting better, Kajal ka jaadoo chalnee lagaa hai πŸ˜† , yeh and the police cum to the Basu house...
Continued:
Anu: Inspecter sahab, aap yahan?
inspecter: Mr. Basu, soory meine apko disturb kiyaa hai, lekan mein Mukti Murder Case ki Bari Main baat karnaa chahta hoon.
Anu: Kya baat hain inspecter sahab, koi kahbar hai?
inspecter: nehi, yehi to baat karnaa chahata hoon, augaar Mukti Murder Case pe koi inprovement nehee hoga, to mukhe yeh case bandhe karna pari ga.
Prerna: nahi inspecter, meri beti ka katal hua hai, aap aysa nahe kar sakde (u can't do this.)
inspecter: aap ki paas naa hi koi saboot hain ki unka murder hua hai, aur nahi aap ki paas koi lawyer hai.
Kajal: inspecter sahab, aapko kisne kaha hai ki Mukti Murder case ki paas koi lawyer nahi hai.
Prerna and ever1 else is confused, who is Kajal talking abt.
To Be Continued Tom... Enjoy short update!!!!!

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