PREM-MUKTI FAN FIC CONTINUED part 6 pg 2

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scene 1(morning prems house)

mukti wakes up early in the morning to make breakfeast for prem prem wakes up and sees that mukti is not beside him he gets worried then he looks for her everywhere then he finds her in the kitchen

mukti- tum yahan

prem- i got scared when i didnt see u beside me

mukti- u care so much

prem- i lost u once dont want to loose u again

the both hug and the song is played kabhi na sukhoon aye

mukti- o.k now go get ready fat

prem- o.k

scene 2(breakfeast table)

prem comes down and mukti gives him breakfeast he doesnt eat it he is still not over that incident in the morning mukti then thinks he is still worried about morning she puts her hand on his shoulder and says

mukti- no matter what i will always be with u

prem feels satisfied

scene3(prems house)

o.k basanti i am leaving

mukti- what r ur plans today

prem- umm not much

mukti- o.k came early today

prem- as u wish

then indro cames hello prem

prem- hi indro

mukti- whatz up

indro- well i just came for breakfeast

mukti- o.k came sit i will give it to u

prem- bye

mukti- bye

prem comes back in again to get his keys

prem- mukti where r my keys

mukti- oops in the room i will get it

prem- i will come 2

they go upstairs

indro thinks- oh yeah dakho romance karna chala gaye bagwan main yeh sab dakhna se phela mar kyu nahin gaye kisi ko mere shaadi ki nahi padi hai

scene 4(prems room)

mukti gives him the keys he holds her by the waist and says

prem- arent u forgetting something

mukti- no i dont think so

prem- k i s s

mukti- prem just leave

prem- not before the kiss

mukti- what if koi dakhla ga to

prem- kuch nahi kiss me baby

she gives him a kiss

then he leaves indro has breakfeat and then leaves

scene 5(conversation)

mukti calls prena

prena- hello

mukti- choti maa

prena- ha beta bol

mukti- prem ka fav color kya hai

prena- kyu

mukti- its a surprise

prena- blues

mukti- o.k bye

scene 5(prems house)
prem enters the hous and is surperised the lights r off candles r on the wallpaper is blue the atmosphere is soo soo romantic mukti walks downstairs wearing a hot orange churidar

prem- yeh sab

mukti- maina kiya tumhara liye

prem- all of a sudden kyu

mukti cames close to him and says

mukti- because i love u

they both hug and the song soniye from aksar is playing

o.k guys hope u like it and from now on i will only continue on this topic mukti- prem fan fic continued part 5 and hope u like it leave comments

Edited by kyahoganimmoka - 19 years ago

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mandy07 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow there such a cute couple why couldn't they be lik this in kzk hope they stay this way continue soon will be waitin 4 part 6
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Posted: 19 years ago
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man this is so good! continue soon! we r all waiting for part 6 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Scene 1(where left of yesterday)
mukti- prem know we can hug each other the whole day but usa pat nahi bhara ga
Then they finish dinner
Prem- o.k. tell me basanti how did u find out that I like blue
Mukti- well well think
Prem- oh no u didn't
They both say HA HA MOTHER INDIA

SCENE 2(SHIFTS TO BASU HOUSE PRENA)
Prena is lost in her thoughts they r sitting on the dinning table prena is remembering what mukti told her
"Choti maa u have 2 make every one hat me u have 2 then only r plan will succeed"
Sneha- mama main soch rahi thi ka we need to find out where mukti is don't u think
Prena- koi zarurat nahi I know
Sneha- to bata ya kahan hai who kaise hai bataya
Prena- prem ke ghar ma looking sad (pretending)
Sneha- who waha kya kar rahi hai
Prena- she is married to prem aur leaves
Sneha- shaadi she leaves the house anu tries to stop her but doesn't stop


Scene 3(prems house)
mukti- prem ma sneha ka Bara main soch rahi thi WO mujse both naraz hogi jab usa pata chala ga ka we got married
Prem trying to say something but is interrupted
Sneha-MUKTI
Mukti- are sneha tum
Sneha- tum apna ap ko samaj thi kya ho tum to both mama ka sath da thi thi na to ab kya huwa pyaar ka samna har gaye
Mukti feeling guilty say na n..ahi sne..ha w….o..hh actually
And looks at prem
Then suddenly both prem and sneha start to laugh mukti feels confused
Mukti- tum dono has kyu raha ho
Sneha- sorry mukti I was kidding and hugs her
Mukti- main samji nahi
Prem- main samja tha hu
And he tells her that sneha was in the plan since beginning but I didn't tell her about r marriage she didn't know I found u she knew about the shaadi plan but didn't know that I found u already
Mukti- sneha tum bhi na dhara diya
Sneha- laughs and say sorry but both maza aye tumhara chara dakhna liyak tha

O.k. guys continue later on this topic from now on only won't make 5 different posts for different chapter's o.k. keep checking

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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow tht was gr8 yaar plz count soon
Edited by sweetazsugar - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Mukti- u made me so so scared Sneha
Sneha- okay I said sorry well what is your plan
Mukti- says something in mute voice and then puts her hands out Sneha puts her hand on top and so does prem
Scene 2 (Prem's house)
Debo comes inside and goes up to mukti prem is not at home
Debo- hi mukti in a sad voice
Mukti- hi debo how r u
Debo- mukti I want to tell u something
Mukti- yeah go ahead
Debo- mukti where is prem
Mukti- he is at office
Debo- well I saw him somewhere else
Mukti- where looking confused
Debo- flashback " I was driving and I saw prem getting out of his car and going into a flat I was confused so I followed him then I saw he was talking to a girl saying
Prem- hi sweetheart
Girl- hi prem how r u and hugs him
Prem- I was missing u so much tesha
Tesha- me 2
Prem- well our plan is working
Tesha- yeah I can't believe u actually were able to fool mukti
Prem- yeah omg she actually believed me I mean a guy who broke her heart she believed him such a dumbo
Tesha- yeah but at least now she will make that prena and Anurag on her side and u will be able to get anu's property 2!
Prem- I know and I am so excited
Debo- that's what I heard them talk about (guys debo is not lying she actually heard prem say all this!)
Mukti- u can't be serious
Debo- I am not lying
Mukti- omg she is broken
She runs up to her room
Debo thinks " mukti I am so sorry I didn't want to tell u but if prem is cheating u u have a right to know plus I will help u if he is cheating u because I want to make up for all I did 5 years back"


Okay guys I know continued after a long long time but will continue this fan-fic only on weekends will try to continue on weekdays!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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ooommggg prem cheating??? 😭 plz cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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why did u make mi sweet heart cheat on Mukti?? 😭 😭 😭 newaiz itz nice.. plzz count. soon.. and plzz dun make Prem cheat on Mukti
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Posted: 19 years ago
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well its a twist to make the fan-fic interesting
😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanks for the great comments! 😛

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