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Read Part 6 on Pg 10

Recap:Abhi-Mukti met Rohan a detective & talk abt Bajaj.Mukti is walking back 2 hotel wen 2 guys start troubling her & Mukti runs 4m there & they chase her.Mukti stops in wen a car's light falls on her face.

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D person gets out of car & shouts at Mukti telling can't she look & walk as she was walking in d middle of d road & tht did she got his car only.Mukti puts her hands down & is shocked 2 c Prem & so is Prem shocked 2 c Mukti.He says Mukti wat r u doing here at this hr of time & Mukti who is very scared is not able 2 say anything she just points her finger in a direction says they wen those 2 guys come there .Prem c's them & then back at Mukti.Those guys come where Prem-Mukti r standing & 1 guy says tht she belongs 2 them as they saw her 1st 2 which Prem says looking at Mukti lets go & turns back wen d other guy puts hands on his shoulder & says wats his prob if he wants they can just he knws wat r they referring 2 lets sort out this matter.

Prem turns back withdraws tht hand on his shoulder & says Mukti lets go 2 which d other guy says she isn't going anyware 2 which Prem says Mukti lets go wen d guy says he will also c where will this girl go 4m here & holds Mukti's wrist & god knws wat happ 2 Prem after tht.Prem holds tht guy's hand & says he will now c how does they 2 take her 4m here.Prem hits tht guy who falls rite on d ground while d other one gets a bit scared but then 2 tries 2 fight back wid Prem but Prem punches him on his stomach & he 2 falls on d ground.D 1st guy brings some rod & is abt 2 hit Prem wen Mukti screams Prem's name & Prem realizes & holds d rod & his cut which he had got wen he was picking d glass pieces gets further injured badly & v can c this & Prem then kicks him.Prem is abt 2 hit them wen they both plead Prem 4 their lives & tells him 2 4give them wen Prem tells them next time don't even show ur face on roads on Pacheshwar & get lost & they just run 4m there.

Prem looks at his cut & turns back looks at Mukti who is very scared even now & 4gets abt his pain.Prem approaches & Mukti touches her but she gets very hyper as she is not got over d incident still.Prem grabs her 4m both his hands & says Mukti,Mukti & shouts 3rd time very loudly & says Mukti wen she looks at him wid a fear which he c's in her eyes.Suddenly Mukti hugs him.Prem is surprised & thinks if he shd hold her after much hesitation he puts his both hands around her.Mukti realizes wat she is doing & frees herself away 4m Prem,d 2 have eye 2 eye contact wid each other meanwhile 'Kabhi Naa Sukoon Aaya' music is going on.Prem takes out his jacket which he is wearing & puts it on Mukti.He makes her sit in d car & goes & sits himself 2 & again they both have an eye 2 eye contact 4 2 secs.Prem starts d car.

Prerna is in room wen there is a knock on d door she goes 2 open it & is shocked 2 c Mukti standing outside tht 2 in such a condition her dress has a bit mud,she is crying & Mukti just hugs Prerna who says wat happ & how did all this happ wen Prem comes there.Prerna c's him & then looks at Mukti & gets up & says tht now he has fallen 2 such a level tht has started all such things & tht how cud he do anything like tis wid Mukti 2 which Prem says listen 2 me u r misunderstanding me 2 which Prerna says I m misunderstanding u,u d son whom I trusted on who cheated his father & took away his business,I m misunderstanding u wen Mukti come there & says Choti Maa who turns back & says wat 2 which Mukti says Prem did nothing infact he saved me & narrates d entire incident.Prerna turns back wid tears in her eyes but c's Prem has already gone 4m there.Prerna goes outside & c's Prem is walking off & d sad version 'Kasautii Zindagii Kay' plays in d background & Prerna rem how she shouted at him rite now.

Abhi comes 2 Prerna' room who is in a jolly mood wen he enters & says is every1 ready 4 dinner wen Abhi's eyes falls on Mukti & he approaches her & say Mukti wat happ 2 u wen Prerna comes there & says while returning 2 guys start troubling Mukti & tells d entire incident.Prerna says tht she scolded Prem alot 2day & told him many things.Abhi-Mukti look at Prerna then at each other wen Abhi gets up,comes up 2 Prerna & says tht she didn't do it purposely 2 which Prerna who has tears in her eyes leaves d room & goes outside.Mukti tells Abhi tht Choti Maa needs 2 b alone 4 sometime.

Abhi comes up 2 Mukti,sits on bed beside her & says r u feeling ok & then looks at d jacket & says whose is it wen she says 'woh,woh…' wen suddenly Abhi cells rings & he goes 2 receive d call.Mukti touches d jacket & tem how did Prem saved her 2day & d song 'Aitbaar jaahan mein koi kaise kare hai kispe,Is jahan mein pyar milta hai bahut mushkil se,Pyar kiya dhoka mila dil ro raha hai pal pal,Is tute dil ka ab kya kare shikva gila ab kisse kare,kisse kare,Kabhi naa sukoon aaya,Kabhi naa karar aaya,Jabse hai tumpe mujhko pyar aaya ' female sad version wherein Mukti rem d scene wen Prem fell on her at party,d dream sequence of Prem & she dancing on valentines day party & wen she saw Prem-Nayan 2gether tht nite meanwhile Prem rem d moments in which he fought wid Mukti their 1st meting at office followed by their dance at Pancheshwar & d scene wen he made Mukti sit in d car 2day & d song plays 'Maine ki khata tumko sataya afsoos hai mujhe har ghadi,Sochta hoon bate ab raat din tumse judi,Socha tha humne yehi yaad karonga tujhe na kabhi, Par kyun mujhe aisa pal pal lage tumhe bhool pana mushkil lage,mushkil lage,Kabhi naa sukoon aaya,Kabhi naa karar aaya,Jabse hai tumpe mujhko pyar aaya ' plays in d background wen he reaches outside his room door.

Prem inside & puts d lights on & turns back & says u its our very own KMH I mean Kabab Mein Haddi also called as Miss.Nautanki Nayantara sitting on d couch.Prem says wat r u doing here 2 which she says she came here just 2 c if he was ok & he wanted anything & tries 2 get closer 2 him 2 which Prem smiles & says tht even if he needs anything he wud get it on his own by himself & tht he doesnot need her 2 b wid him 24/7 like a governurse & tell him wat he has 2 do & how he has 2 do & tells her 2 just leave rite now & Nayan makes some eye moments & leaves in anger.

Abhi is on phone & says ok he will do tht 4 sure but since he is here & so is every1 else he will held d meeting wid K P Industries & K Channel over here in Pancheshwar itself in a day or 2 & till then if d person who was on other line wants he can contact his manager Mr.Sharma if he needs any help & can get in touch wid him as now he has his no & disconnects d call & comes inside & c's Mukti again lost in some thought & says tht y is it so wen Mukti turns around & says u said anything 2 which Abhi says 'Shukra hai' & tht atleast she realized even some1 else is present in this room.

Mukti says Abhi wen he says ok now u don't want 2 eat food otherwise she always use 2 b d 1st 1 who use 2 rush wen it use 2 b time 4 food.Mukti gives him an angry but a cute look & says me i use 2 do it wen Abhi says then who me 2 which Mukti says stop lying Abhi wen Abhi says I m not a lier 2 which Mukti stands up & says wat u mean I m speaking false infact wen they came 4 pinic over here tht time wid d college group bcoz of him they missed d bus bcoz he said tht he wants 2 eat food at d dhaba & thts y they missed d bus.

Abhi says ok ok he admits it was his mistake & tht he can never win 4m her wen he comes in debating on some topic & tht he knws she was debate champ since college days but tht doesnot mean tht she wud use this over him always & tht 1 day will surely come wen he some1 will win 4m her in debate & he wud b very happy & he is tht guy.Mukti says lets c wat happ & tht now can they go 4 dinner & tht she will go & bring Choti Maa.

Edited by Manoj_Tina fan - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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vah vah shruti its great yaar!!!! 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wah shruti kya baat hain-its great yaar 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow that was fab yaar i lloved it 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Read Part 7 on Pg 11

Recap:Prem saves Mukti.Prerna misunderstands Prem yet again.Abhi-Mukti have a sweet nok-jhok.Mukti leaves 2 call Prerna 4 dinner who is in garden.

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Prerna is walking in garden & rem wat happ wid Prem & how she shouted at him. Prerna rem some moments she spend wid Prem in her early days meanwhile 'Kasatuii Zindagii Kay' sad version is going on in background.Prerna says 2 herself y does it always happ tht wenever Prem is rite she doesnot believe him & 2day yet again she did d same mistake & tht she didn't even gave him an apportunity 2 speak or say his version of story.

Mukti comes there & says Choti Maa r u coming 4 dinner 2 which Prerna says she isn't hungry.Mukti approaches her & keeps her hand on her shoulder,Prerna turns around & has tears in her eyes.Mukti says it isn't her fault 2 which Prerna says tht it is all her fault & y does she repeat d same mistake again & again 2 which Mukti says tht sometimes 'waqt,haalaath' becomes like this tht they r not able 2 differentiate b/w wats true & wats false.Prerna looks at Mukti & says u r still waiting 4 him aren't u?

Mukti says Choti Maa v r getting late Abhi will b waiting 4 us & turns back 2 leave wen Prerna says u still love him & r waiting 4 him.Mukti turns around & says u knw Choti Maa I loved Prem a lot more than I did any1 else & I won't b able 2 fel like tht 4 any1 but now I don't have 'himat' now 2 go through d same pain in my life once again.Prem never loved me he betrayed me & broke my trust & tht she knws Prem & she can never b 2gether at any path of d road ahead in their life & tht their roads r separate now but then 2 she feels hurt somewhere down d heart wen she c's him in pain & she doesnot knw wether its d love which she has 4 Prem or something else.Mukti further adds in life there r those ?'s which have ans while few ?'s don't have an ans & she doesnot have an ans 2 this.Mukti wipes her tears & says anywayz leave tht I came here 2 take u 4 dinner & tht if u don't come along wid me then Abhi will just eat my head.Prerna smiles,wipes her tears & says lets go.

Abhi-Prerna-Mukti r having dinner wen Abhi says Choti Maa I can say 1 thing whichever part of d country a person goes he can never get d scent of his 'Matra Bhoomi' 2 which Mukti says 'Matra Bhoomi' ya phir 'Matra Khana' 2 which Abhi loks at her wid a frustration look 2 which he says wat u mean Mukti 2 which Mukti says looking at Prerna tht some ppl will never change & then looks at Abhi & tells him y is he doing so much 'Maska Polish' 2 which Abhi says tht he doesnot do such thing.Abhi-Mukti start fighting like kids.Prerna c's them & smiles & then says stop it both os u & tht u both just need an apportunity 2 fight 2 which Abhi says tht he is fighting on purpose,Prerna looks surprised & Mukti has a look as if she knws wat is he referring 2.Abhi says tht wen he was in London he use 2 miss India a lot & esp fighting wid Mukti & looks at Mukti who puts her head on other side as if she is angry.Abhi says tht he admits fighting wid Mukti day in day out he missed a lot & also Kheer made 4m Prerna's hand.Prerna says tht once they get back 2 Mumbai d 1st thing which she will do is going 2 make 'Kheer' 4 him 2 which Abhi says promise & puts his hand 4ward & Prerna puts her hand over his & says 'Paka Promise' Abhi-Prerna-Mukti all smile.

Prerna goes in her room after d dinner whereas Abhi-Mukti r walking 2wards their room talking wid each other.Mukti says tht till wen will they have 2 hide d truth 4m Choti Maa 2 which Abhi says few more days wen he gets a call on his cell.Abhi receives it its Rohan who asks Abhi can he come rite now he has 2 talk something imp 2 whiuch Abhi says ok he will b there in 15 min.Abhi tells Mukti tht Rohan wants 2 talk 2 him something imp so he will have 2 leave wen Mukti says shd I come along 2 which Abhi says tht no u stay wid Choti Maa otherwise she will def sense something is wrong 2 which Mukti says ok & Abhi leaves.

Mukti is abt 2 enter her room wen a man comes there its d laundary man & he gives Mukti jacket of Prem 2 which she says tht she told him 2 give tht in Room No.402 2 which he says he went there but no1 was there 2 which Mukti tells him ok I shall give it & takes it 4m his hand & d man leaves.

Mukti walks 2wards Prem's room she reaches outside d room door & then turns back 2 leave but then she gathers up some courage & knocks d door.Prem thinks its Nayan & opens d door & says I told u leave me alone wen he c's Mukti.Mukti says sorry I just came 2 give ur jacket 2 which Prem who is lost wen he c's Mukti says actually I thought it was Nayan,Mukti looks a bit hurt wen he mentions tht name.Prem notices this & invites Mukti in but she says Prerna will b waiting 4 her in room 2 which Prem says tht it is looking akward as they r talking 2 each other standing on door & if any1 c's this he wud look strange.

Edited by Manoj_Tina fan - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMGGGGGG SHRTIIIIII U TOTALLY ROCK GIRLLLLLL.. 👏 👏 👏

I JUS LUV TO READING THIS MORE 7 MORE 👏 👏 👏

THANX FOR DOING SUCH A FAB JOBBB 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow, shruti! it's getting better and better! nice yaar! 👏 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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well done mother india part 5 👏
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WELL DONE SHRTII 👏 👏 👏

AS USUAL ITS ROCKING.. 👏 👏

I JUST UPDATED IT TO DA PM CLUB FRONT PG 😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Read Part 8 on Pg 13

Recap:Prerna-Mukti have an emotional conversatiob followed by dinner where Abhi-Mukti fight like kids.Mukti goes 2 met Prem 2 return his jacket who invites her in d room.

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Mukti walks in Prem's room & c's his bed is in mess wid clothes scattered here & there.Mukti tells him he doesnot knw how 2 keep his room neat & tidy 2 which he says Miss.Basanti this is my room my bed I can do whatever I want & y r u talking like my wif.. wen Mukti looks at him & Prem realizes wat he was abt 2 say & stops.

Mukti looks down wen her attention goes on Prem's hand which got cut while saving her.Mukti asks him how did it happ 2 which he says nothing its just a small thing.Mukti says u haven't changed d bandage & d infection can spread & it wud b dangerous then 2 which Prem says he 4got & wat diff does it make 2 which Mukti says he makes a lot of diff wid anger which is more of concern in her eyes,Prem looks at her.Mukti says where is d 1st aid kit 2 which Prem says over there in 2nd drawer.Mukti takes out d 1st aid box & makes Prem sit down & starts removing d bandage & then cleans wid dettol his wound & blows air 4m her mouth over it & asks if its paining 2 which Prem who is just staring at Mukti says no it isn't.Mukti asks again is it paining 2 which Prem says no it isn't.Mukti looks up & d 2 have a staring at each other 4 few secs after which Mukti blinks her eyes & Prem comes back 2 reality.Mukti starts putting d bandage on Prem's hand very carefully & Prem's reaction on face changes as if he wanted tht d moment just stops over there & he cud go on staring Mukti.

Mukti says its done & now don't put water on this,wen u go 4 bath put a plastic over it & at any cost don't let it get wet & last but not d least take this pain killer wid water 2day b4 sleeping but not empty stomach & take it 2morrow also in morning,evening & nite d pain will reduce.Pren says can I ask u something 2 which Mukti says wat 2 which Prem says were u a nurse 2 which Mukti says wat??? 2 which Prem says so u r sounding like 1.Mukti raises her eyebrows & gives Prem a look meanwhile Prem smiles.

Mukti says I have 2 go now its already 2 late & asks him if he has taken a tetanus injection 2 which he says no I mean yes I mean no he 4got 2 which Mukti says I thought so,u 4got or got scared of injection 2 which Prem says he isn't scared of any injection but he hates 2 c hospital esp tht typical smell which comes 4m an hospital 2 which Mukti says a tetanus injection has 2 b taken.

Mukti calls up d reception & asks if they have any doctor in d hotel & its urgent 2 which she says yes they have 1 doctor but its 2 late 2 which Mukti says can u connect me 2 his room & d receptionist does so.Some1 picks up d phone on other line.Mukti says doctor I knw its very late but can u plz come over here its really urgent,there is a patient who really needs u wen Prem gets up & says no,Mukti keps her hand on his mouth & says c doctor he is yelling in pain meanwhile Prem is struggling.

Mukti says thanks doctor, ok u will b here in 10 min ok v r waiting & keeps d phone.Mukti removes her hand 4m Prem's mouth & Prem says Basanti wat do u think u r doing 2 which Mukti says I shd ask u this u knw 4m how much difficulty I was convincing d doctor 2 come here at this hr of nite its around 10 pm & 'sharif' ppl go 2 bed by this hr,Prem says nothing or I wud say somewhere is was liking Mukti all caring which she was doing 4 him & he didn't knw y was this happ wid him.

Mukti says now wen d doctor comes don't make any nuisance in front of him.There is knock on d door & its d doctor he chks up Prem & asks Mukti who did d dressing 2 which Prem says poitring at Mukti she did,Mukti says yes I did is there any problem 2 which doctor says no it isn't infact she has done it very perfectly as if any experienced person wud have do thts y he asked.Doctor says now I have 2 give him an injection & he takes it out,Prem gets a bit worried cing injection as he just hates it.Prem says I don't want any injection 2 which Mukti says doctor don't mind him he is telling all this just like tht u do ur work wen Prem says no I m fine I don't need it.

Mukti comes & sits besides Prem & says it's a precautionary measure & Prem looks at Mukti & says ok fine,Mukti smiles & so does d doctor who gives Prem injection.Mukti has kept her handd over Prem who holds her hand more firmly wen d doctor is giving injection.D doctor says itys done,Prem looks at Mukti who is looking down at her hand which Prem has hold firmly.Prem leaves her hand.D doctor says tht there is no need 2 worry now & Mukti thanks him 4 coming at this hr of time.

B4 leaving doctor says tht I must say Mr.Prem u have a very caring wife indeed she is very concerned abt u & u 2 look very cute 2gether quarelling.Prem-Mukti look at each other wen Prem looks at doctor nods his head wid a smile on his face & thanks d doctor 4 coming at this hr of time.D doctor leaves, Mukti wid some hesitation says I 2 shall leave Choti Maa will b worried abt me as I didn't told her anything.Mukti is abt 2 leave wen Prem says Mukti,she turns back.Prem approaches her & says thanks 2 which she says tht he helped her yesterday & she did d same 2day so there is no need 2 thanks her & leaves.

Mukti leaves & Nayan c's her coming out of Prem's room & approaches her & says Mukti wat were u doing in Prem's room or were u trying 2 steal him 4m me 2 which Mukti laughs & says tht there is no need 4 her 2 do such a thing & tht wen 2 ppl have love,understanding b/w each other no1 can separate them & tht d way she is saying abt stealing Prem 4m him then she wud just say 1 thing such thoughts come in mind wen a person is scared tht his/her love is going 2 go away 4m his/her life 4ever & moreover she can't fal 2 d level which she has fallen & says her next time b4 saying anything just rem these things & leaves.

Nayan is angry & says tht she won't let any1 come in b/w her & Prem & tht Prem belongs 2 her only & she wud c 2 it tht Prem-Mukti stay far away 4m each other & she wud do anything 4 tht.

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