Rishabh and Prerna Bajaj ff updated pg 22 - Page 6

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Posted: 19 years ago
#51
sammu dii keep up the smashng stories mann lol tuk me kinda long to read (i am a slow reader) but carry on..awww i could imagin prerna and her gussa 😳 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#52
plzzzzzzzzzzzz conitnue
i love you for writing this fanfic.
i think i am addicted to fanfic.............
plzzzzz continueeeeeeeee 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#53
yaaron i am almost ready with the next part. i love u guys for those wonderful, encouraging comments. thanks a lot. 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Rishi lifts Prerna's face, who was laying her head on his chest and crying. Rishabh looks deeply into Prerna's eyes and without saying a word just asks her to look deep into his eyes and see the unconditional love in his eyes that he has for Prerna. Prerna realizes that there is no man in the world who could love her as much as he does, Rishabh Bajaj.

Kunal is watching is parents looking deep into each other eyes, and he is loving it. He gives a cute smile and decides to leave, thinking that they will figure this out, just like they have been in these past 30 something years.

Kunal leaves the ward, both Rishi and prerna don't even realize that he left, they are lost into each other.

Rishabh finally breaks the silence, saying

R: prerna, tum ab tak mujhe samajh nahin payee. No matter how hard I try to forget you, or hate you, I never will be able to, hurt you, coz I love you and always will, whether you like it or not.

Prerna knows that her Rishabh is telling her the truth. He could never deceive her, and she couldn't deceive him either

P: yeh aap kya keh rahe Mr. Bajaj, whether I like it or not? Pehle appne mujhe Prerna Anurag Basu kaha aur ab, yeh, yeh kya ho kya gaya hai aapko. Aap sirf isliye mujhse naraz hai kyunki meine aapko sachayi nahin batayi? Lekin aapne itna bada sach chippaya mujhse. Kunal aap beta hai, kyun chippayi aapne yeh baat.
Ab kis aurat ke saath aapke najayas sambandh hai

Rishabh is getting aggravated he finally looses his cool.

R: Prerna!
Kunal mera hee nahin humara beta hai, Kasak ka judwaa bhai, jisse Komolika ne kidnap kiya tha. Aur jiski waijaise mujhe sab kuch chodd kar jana pada, taake mein humare bete ko mill sakoo, the son, who we thought we had lost, and who was away from us, for the past 26 years. Komolika had blackmailed me Prerna, I had no choice, but to leave the rest of the family jiski zimmedari tum mujhpar chodd kar gayi thi.

Akela ho chooka tha mein Prerna, Prem ne Komolika ke saath milkar poori property apne naam kar di. Zindagi mein pehli baar tumhara Mr. Bajaj haar gaaya tha, Komolika refused to give me any information about Kunal unless I gave her the property.

Meine tumhe dhoka nahin diya hai Prerna, nahin diya dhokha.

Prerna is shocked, she begins to hate herself for doing this to her love, she thinks she should have known better. Prerna recollects her first interaction with Kunal, in which she feels that she knows him and he is a part of her. She felt like her husband, Rishabh Bajaj and her are one when she saw kunal, she felt the same when she first gave birth to Kasak and Kunal and just didn't know that she also gave birth to Kunal.

Prerna is happy and has tears in her eyes of happiness, Rishabh who sees her happy, and is happy himself, pretends to be angry and when prerna looks at him she smiles and looks at him as if she is sorry what she has done, and wants forgiveness, she kisses her Rishabh's cheeks and

P: Sorry Mr. Bajaj, aap jaante hai I love you so much, that mein aapko kisike saath baatna bilkool bardaash nahin kar sakti. Aap mujhe maaf nahin karenge?

R: Nope, (he is just pretending to be too hard to get)

P: Mr. Bajaj, aap toh mujhe maaf karlenge, aap mujhse zyaada der ghoosa nahin rehsakte.

R: And every time u take advantage of this, every time.

Prerna looks at him lovingly…I am sorry mr. bajaj.
Rishabh smiles and opens his arms to her, she smiles and readily hugs him back, they are so in love.
She decides not to tell him the truth about her being in jail yet, she thinks that this will affect him more….coz its Sneha, the child who he loves more than his own.

Rishabh kisses her forehead and then asks her to ask for forgiveness to her son, Kunal.

P: haan, ab mere bete ki baari hai. Humaare bete ki, hope he forgives me, I was so mean to him. Mr. Bajaj he is just like you. Mujhe ehsaas tha ke woh mera beta hai, but just …

R:just couldn't go on without suspecting me haan? (he was being sarcastic)

She is at the door, she looks back and gives him a loving smile.

P: Mr. Bajaj aap phir se….mere bete se milna hai mujhe, we will carry on later.

R: go right ahead, he is my son, he has proved it too.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awwwww big up to you sammu dii 👏 its awesome lol(duno if ive said that before 😆 ) Rishu and prerna rockk keep it up sis waiting for then next part 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#56
haila sammu di i just read this like now.. haila i am amazed with ur talents.. it's really good jaan 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#57
Gr8 fanfic, keep up rockin, neways whaz ur name, ur id is too long to write 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#58
awww reepz and nimmu, u guys reading it? thank u so much yaaron, i love yall for this. i am glad u guys liked it.

ishk4u my name is samira peeps call me sam, sammie or sammu 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hehe dii i usually dont read coz reading puts me to sleep lol😆 buts its ur fan fic and on tellys top couple prerna-rishu 😛 n plus nethin related to shwetuu ive got to be there hehe lol 😉 😛 keeep it going sis loving it all 😃 😃 😃
Edited by reepz - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: reepz

hehe dii i usually dont read coz reading puts me to sleep lol😆 buts its ur fan fic and on tellys top couple prerna-rishu 😛 n plus nethin related to shwetuu ive got to be there hehe lol 😉 😛 keeep it going sis loving it all 😃 😃 😃

haila reepz i am with u for the sleeping part.. too much sleeping hurts my brain.. but jaan u wrote this fan fic so much pyar.. i had to read it.. and its great i will keep updating myself on the fan fic😳

Edited by Nimra_M - 19 years ago

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