my FANFIC Update Page 5(Rahul vrs Prem) - Page 2

Hey Guyz I will try and update it today but i am really busy right now Sorry 😊 & Thanks for your Patience and lovely Comments .......... ANy suggestions for a name .......

Recap : Prena Prem Mukti Rahul & Rahual are at Mukti house and Prena is playing with Pyara......

Sorry guyz but i am going to delay Mukti meeting her dad so i can add PM scenes

Prem pretends he has to go..

Prem : Mother India mujha jana honga ( Mother india i have to go)

Prena: Tik hai (okay)

Prena isn't even looking at Prem and is just playing with pyara

Prem leaves in anger.. he is walking outside and drinking beer and remeber all of the good times between him and mukti

Mukti sees tear in Prena eyes

Mukti: Chooti Maa ap mujse naraz ho na?

Prena : Mukt mai tujse naraz nahi hoon ...... wah sai bhi jo prem (she stops as rahul is there) tum khush ho na
(I am not angry at you and after what prem... Are you happy?)

Mukti: Main both khush hun ( i am very happy) Toh app roh ku rahi hoon (why are you crying)

Prena: Mujge chooti prem ki yadien agai liken phir Aparna or kom... she stops as she does not want to ruin muktis mood(I am remebered Prem when he was small... before Aparna.. Komo)

Prena: Sab parishan ho rahe ho gai... Mukti tum sath (Everbody is problelly worried.... u are comming)

Mukti: cuts her before she can say anthing and says No.

Prena: Tik hai Mukti liken mai hamisha tumhara wait karongi ( ok Mukti but i will always wait for you)

Prem notices that he forgot his cellphone at Muktis place

Thanks for the lovely comment they are a motivation next episode will have some PM scenes !!

oh thats really nice.ilike this .thanks 👏 👏 👏

Thanks Guyz for the comments 😊

wow dat waz gr8!......plz cont! 👏

oh wow it was fantastic plz con it

Sorry guyz for the delayed update i could not find my Fanfic my computer got messsed up and i wasnt comfortable writeing my fanfic on anther computer and it was my first week of my first ever Job!!!

Mukti was leaving her apartment and prem was heading to meet Mukti

Mukti is outside locking the door Pyara is on the stroller and Prem is right behind her but she does not notice yet

Pyara starts crying and Prem picks him up and Mukti turns around and points toward the Beer in his other hand.

Prem : Oh come on Basanti.. you haven't changed..

Mukti: Pyara or the beer

Prem: Ofcource the Beer and put Pyara back in the stroller

Mukti rolls her eye and is saying you haven't chan- and stops when she see that he threw the beer and picked up Pyara

Prem: The beer was finished anywaz.. Are you going anywhere

Mukti : too the roof the stars...

Prem (cuts her): oh forget the stars and is about to put Pyara down but Pyara starts crying

Prem and Mukti are on the roof right now and Pyara is holding their finger

Prem : Mukti when did you and Rahul get married ?

Mukti : Why do you want to know ? You and Debo and stops..

Prem : Me and Debo are engaged she had a miscarage

Prem: try to move his finger and Pyara crys.... he is just like you stuborn

Mukti : He went on his father he is just as naughty as him and his eyes are just beautiful

Prem: lost in the moment like yours he says but Mukti doesn't here she is buzy starring at Pyara and him and remembering old moments

Prem: u know what i thought i would never say this but i am sorry

Rahul comes up and prem moves back and now Pyara is holding on to Rahul and Muktis hand

Rahul: what are you doing here?

Prem : oh i forgot my cell phone

Sorry guyz i have to go but here is the next scene

Rahul is flirting with Sneha and Prem and Mukti are flying togeather to Mubia

I just started reading this today, It's great.. pls continue soon

wow its eally nice 👏 👏 👏 !!!plz cont soon!! 😊

wow this is a really interesting fanfic. i just started to read today and im already hooked. pleez cont soon yaar.