my FANFIC Update Page 5(Rahul vrs Prem) - Page 3

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Mukti & Prem and Rahul are at their apartment and Rahul

Mukti: Gives his cell phone to him

Prem : is nervous he has tons of picture of Mukti on his cellphone but sees it was turned off

Prem: we cool?

Mukti : Rolls her eyes

New day

Mukti is at her office when the recetionist tells her that the company has changed the location of the deal to Mumbia and that the boss of the company would like to see you

Mukti: Prem ..tum

Prem: yes me

Mukti : Kya tum.....

Prem: Its been a year forget all of that anywaz im no loser like you too hold a grude after such a long time

Mukti is about to yell at him but stops..

Prem: Miss. Basanti i mean Deshmuck or Rahul or whatever we shall conclude our meeting in Mumbia well you know that the project is based their. Do u have any problem

Mukti: Yeah !! when i signed papers to do this contract it was going to be based here

Mukti: Choti Maa

Prena: Mukti your Baba really wants to see you and i think you should come back to Mumbia not just for this contract but because we all miss you.. and i have booked the tickets you and me and ofcource Pyara,Rahul will go first and Prem has some work here so he and sneha will come latter in the evening and

Mukti: Chotti Maa

Prena: not for me but for your Baba

Mukti : okay

At the airport Sneha and Mukti are hugging each other

Sneha: Where is your husband Rahul i wanted to see your choice

Mukti: he 'll br late this is pyara

Prena: their has been a mistake with the tickets you Pyara and prem will go first and than latter we will have to come

Mukti: But

Prem: I called Rahul he is cool with it

Mukti: okay

Prem and Mukti are in the plane togeather

Rahul arives at the airport and see Sneha and decides to take a chance

Rahul: hi

Sneha: do i know you she say it in anyonying way

Rahul: I dont know about that but i have seen you somewhere did you win the most beautiful women contest

Sneha(rolled her eyes)

He guyz i know it is kind of Dry but it will get intresting i am going to tell two thing right now

Rahul has a secret that he is afraid to tell Mukti about

Rahul ex girlfriend will show up thats all but i will get to that part again

Hey guyz i am nameing Prem and Mukti kids Krish
the credit for the name goes to sweety_14 😊

ok nice name so pls carry on and conti soon as u can

kl name
do count soon

good name!!! plz cont sooon as u can!!!

Sorry for the Delay Guyz
Thanks sweety_14 for editing my fanfic

Prerna comes and says to Sneha that this is Mukti's husband Rahul..

Rahul: looks at Sneha and than quickly says that now i remember i saw you in a picture with Mukti.

Rahul:moves his hand forward and says hi Im Rahul
Sneha shakes his hand and smiles... Rahul just looks into her eyes but than Prerna says that we will be leaving next flight and he lets go off her hand

Prem and Mukti are in the air plane and pyara is in the middle seat and is sleeping

Prem:Mukti mujhe tumse kuch puchna hai

Mukti: does not want to look in his eyes as she is afraid she would say something

Prem: Grabs her hand and than tells her to look into his eyes

Mukti does as Prem says... They both are looking into each other eyes...than .. Prem watch alarm goes on ...
Prem looks at his watch and than thinks of how mukti is married now.

Mukti: kya puchna (ask) hai?

Prem: tumne kya soch ker isska naam pyara rekha ( what were you thinking) .. I mean i know you were in labour pain....lekin pyara yeh kaysa naam hai?(what kind of name is this)

Mukti: nurse isko pyara bulati thi aur waise bhi iska naam krish hai pyara nahi (the nurse called him pyara his name is Krish)(thanks for the name sweety_14)

Prem is silent.. after a while Mukti goes to sleep and prem just looks at her Pyara wakes up Prem plays with him....

now for the kodak moment ... Mukti shoulder is on prem and pyara is in his lap...

Mukti and Prem arrive but cant find their luggage..Phone rings

Mukti: choti maa kya kaam hai
Prena : Mukti beta mah chari thi kai tum or Rahul ghar ek saath aao..
Mukti:leken chooti maa
Prena:apni maa kay liya itna to kar sak ti ho na (Cant you do this much for me)
Mukti:leken..krish...okay...

Mukti and Prem are waiting at the air port sneha prerna and rahul arrive...

Mukti Prem and Rahul Sneha set der foot in the house at the same time....

Baba:Mukti tu.. their are so many tears in his eyes he is speachless
Mukti and Rahul take arshirwad

Kasak tells Mukti i have a surprize.. she takes them to a room and its all decorated like it was someones wedding night as soon as Mukti turns on the fan their are flower petal every where

Rahul and Mukti look at each other with a confused look...

Next Episode: Prem and Rahul are fist fighting

no one like it 😭 I think i should stop writting