my FANFIC Update Page 5(Rahul vrs Prem)

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Posted: 19 years ago
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This is an introduction if you guys like it i will continue...

Okay this starts when Prem is mad at Mukti for thinking that he was behind the person who insulted Doris.......

Mukti and him have to go for a trip.....

Too make it better Debo can not come ... she does this purposely so Prem and Mukti can get togeather ... Has she turned good???

In the car Mukti gives prem Rusgulla tells him sorry .............

He insults her like usual........On the highway prem car get stuck and they take a short cut and get lost and end up at a cottage, Prem sees rusuglla and is very hungry while mukti is looking at the stars he puts brandy on top of them mukti shares her russugla and the both are drunk Mukti yells at Prem for being an idiot .... and bladd ba they both yell and then prem pulls her closer they both spent the night Mukti realize what she has done in the morning but does not seem to cry she remember everything that happend Prem does not regret it either ............... Mukti think that he will say it was a mistake and they arguee again and he says he loves her they hug Mukti see that their ARE SOME rUSUGLA left and goes to eat before she can prem stuffs them into his mouth ............. Afterward the cottage owner comes shows the the way back and arranges for a Mechanic they share a cocnut..........

On their way back their is a party Debo their and somebody annouces that prem has finnally gotten his revenge ................................Prem is shocked Mukti crys and leave is very storng and Prem and her get into a fight and he says you dont believe the event happen on the day of the event Prena is kidnapped and Prem gives the credit to Debo although its because he thinks that Mukti still hasn't realized his love...........The whole thing that happened in the show is their except todays episode

Prem Agrees to Marry Debo the pundit is called and before Debo bribes the pundit and Prem sees this ....... Debo and Prems marriage is fixed and according to Debo wish the Pundit say that the marriage has to be this week if not they can not get married till after 2 years ( I will reviale the date later) Meanwhile Anurag get shot it is unclear who shoots him and he is fighting between life and death and he ask to meet Prem is emotional yet not they both remeber the Kites thing ......... Anurag tells Prem his life story and tell him not to ever think of himself as Gultiy(mistake)......... Some very emotional sceanes... Prem calls Anurag Dad and tells him that he made a miztke with Debo and it would be just like the time Anurag had to marry Komo.... Anurag tell him that he should tell everyone this... Anurag eventually survives.. Prem tells everyone although Prena agress and say that she wont force him to get married and than MOHNI & DEBO both infulence Anurag but are unabliable and go to BAJAJ agress with them ... and says that once the wedding is anouced Prem will get ... Prem comes to live in Basu house because Anurag is still on bed ress and request Prem & Prena and Prem says yes in a second ( He wants to be far away from Debo) ..

He tell Anurag about Debo and the Pundit talk Anurag thinks that Debo likes him too much ........ And he makes him promise and tell him about Mukti when he is drunk... and when he wakes up the next morning Anurag explains to him what is love some very emotional scences... Anurag is off bed rest and it the marriage day Prem does not show up he is completly Drunk ............... Everyone is embraced even Prena thinks that wrong he agreed for the mariage and insulting a woman like this is a paap .........................Anurag get Prem and tells him to realize his mistake but is not harsh like Bajaj and Prena .................... THen Prem moves back in Bajaj house but from then on he is the closest to Anurag he thinks of what Anurag told him and how he still loves Mukti.......................

Debo soons leaves as BAJAJ thinks a little space bteen them is good although Debo at first does not want to leave but does becz Bajaj tells her she can see over the businees in London and that will give her something she does not miss this golden opurtiunity..........

Their is a one and 6 months year leap

if u guyz like it i will continue......

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Posted: 19 years ago
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thats really Good PLZZZZZZ continue plzzzzz
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Posted: 19 years ago
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I really like it ...... continue 😊
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Okay well i have decided to be optimistick and continue for the two people who thought it was good thanks for thinkng that it my Frist ever Fanfic

Prem goes to Goa and their he sees Mukti. He runs after her and but he loose track of where she went. Mukti has seen Prem and is really worried. Coincedentally Mukti and Prem are working on the same project and when Prem goes for his meeting he sees Mukti he decides not to go in thier but cancel the meeting and follows Mukti.Mukti goes home and Rahul is their. Prem is asking the receptionist on which floor does Mukti live on and the Recptionist ask him to wait.

Meanwhile Rahul notices that Mukti has is tensed he ask what is wrong and she says that somebody from her family has seen her.. and she continues telling him that nobody in the family know about her child.

The bell rings Mukti goes to see who it is she see Prem and tells Rahul to tell him that she isn't their.

At first Prem believes Rahul but than he see Rahul and Mukti photo they are both hugging....... He leaves and think who is this Guy..........

Next Episode : Prena is holding Mukti child

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Posted: 19 years ago
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WOW great fan-fic please continue soon! i really liked it though its allitle fast and allitle confusing but thats allright the updates are great please ConTinUe SoOn!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey!

Pls... continue soon 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Well friends to clarify Rahul is her roommate and a really good friend ... he flirt with a lot of girls just like Prem

She explians to Rahul that when she was pregnant with Pyara( That the nick name of Prem and Her Son I need ideas for his real name) she had left home and never told anybody.. She says that she can never see anybody call Pyara things as she can not answer who is his father...

Meanwhile Prem at their Goa House

Prem: Mother India Mah aj Mukti sa Milha woh apsa milna chatti hai(I met Mukti today she really wants to meet you)........

Prena is shocked

Prems thinking: Mah janta ho ke mujge Juhte bol naa para ( I know i shouldn't lie but i had too)

Prena is happy and they leave to see Mukti

Meanwhile Mukti has fainted from stress and Rahul puts her on the bed.

Prena rings the bell since Rahul does not know that Mukti Chooti Maa he lets her in and Prem follows

Prena : Tum Kaun? Mukti Kah hain ( Who are you ? Where is Mukti)

Rahul: is tensed and thinks about Mukti and Pyara..

Rahul: Main Mukti kaa Husband hu!!! Ap Kaun ( I am her Husband who are you?)

Prem is shocked so is Prena........

Prena : Main Mukti ki Chooti Maa ( I am her chooti ma)

Rahul ask them to sit......

Prem mouth is opened for the next 3o seconds and he starts looking at Mukti and Rahul photographs all over their house.........

Rahul see that Mukti is awake now

Rahul : Woh Mukti Tumhari Chooti Maa or woh larka aya hai ( Your Choti Maa and along with their is guy)

Mukti is shocked tensed but heads toward the door to see them..

Rahul stops her

Rahul : Main na tumhari problem solved kar di hai..( I solved your problem)

Mukti : Kya (what)

Rahul: Main yeh juht kha kai tum mari patni hoa ( I told them that you are my wife)

Mukti Is about to faint and she yell at him..... but eventually agress to pretend that they are hudband wife

All three of them Mukti Rahul head out...

Prena is happy.. Prem pretends to be happy...

Prena gives Rahul ashirwad and pick up Pyara.....

Tommorrow : Mukti sees her Baba

Edited by msweet - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thanks for your Reply please suggest names for Prem and Muktis child
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thanks for the awesome update, please continue SooN!!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow cool yaar do continue it

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