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Posted: 19 years ago
#11
Prem impressed of Debonita 😭
Kool pls contiue soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#12
Part-6...Prem-diponika were sitting 2gether &

talking.mukti cumes there:hi!
Prem felt her presense as
a
desturbance. M:what r u guys
discussing about?shall i

join u 2? D:ofcourse,afterall
we r all 1 gang. M

wanted 2 talk sumthing,but
suddenly she caughs.she

cud'nt stop caughing. P
got fed up:just stop it

mukti.u r not well,then also
insted of taking rest u

want 2 talk?u desturbed us
also. M became sad:i'm

sorry..i felt lonely,thats why
i came here.u both talk

.i'll sit here simply.i won't
talk anything.

P:nonsense,if u r caughing
continuesly ,how can we talk

peacefully? better u go & tke
rest.go mukti.go..M

was embarassed:ok,sorry..she
goes.her eyes were filled
up
with tears.she loses her
control & cries. D tells

P:poor mukti!she felt
lonely,thats why she came here

2
spend sum time with
us.but....P:i shud'nt hav
behaved

like this. D:yes,afterall she
is sick. P regrets.

while M was crying &
walking,her leg slips & she

falls down.she sees a hand
extended 2 her.she looks

up.it was P.he had a small
smile in his lips.he

makes her get up.he wipes her
tears with his hand.M

smiles. P:i'm sorry
mukti….M:4 that did i tell

anything?u foolish guy...both
laugh.while the pepsi gang

except M was standing on
the ground,diponika's small

photo falls from P's
purse. D sees it:hey,1 photo

fell from ur purse. suddenly
P takes it. D:whose

photo is that? P hesitates
2 tell.he gets tensed.

Tushar:tell man. sneha:u've 2
tell prem. D

snatches the photo from his
hand. P:Deponika,don't look at

the photo. D:i'll look.
suddenly M cumes & snatches

the photo from D. WHAT
WILL BE MUKTI"S & DIPONIKA"S

REACTION WHEN THEY SEE THE
PHOTO?


sweetazsugar thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#13
Wow do count an is debo n prem goin to be together?
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Posted: 19 years ago
#14
do continue soon!
its really good!
i cant wait for the next part!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#15
Part-7....Prem gets tensed. Deponika:mukti,giv that

photo,lets see. Mukti:no,why do u
want 2 see it,if prem
is
not interested 2 show
us?don't hurt him. M gives
it
back 2 P.P was
relieved. the principal asks
2
get ready 4 the college
fest. later while all the

pepsi members were
there,M imitates the

principal.they were all
laughing & enjoying it.
suddenly

they see the principal cuming
from the back.tho Prem

sho sum actions 2 giv M a
hint about it,she won't

understand it. he
shouts:mukti!!! M was
shocked.

M & the principal
inside his room. P:whats this

mukti? M:i'm sorry dad. P:do
not 4get that i'm not only
ur
principal,but also ur dad.
she smiles.he also

smiles. the pepsi gang was
standing outside the room.
M
cumes out. Prem:u got nice
scoldings?

M:no,afterall i'm his pet.
P:ya..ya..so lucky...every1

laughs. They all r going 4 the
fest. P:guys,this time

like b4 our college shud win.
evry1 agree. every1 gets

inside the bus.P catches
seats 4 him & diponika.he

wants 2 sit with her. he waits
outside the bus 4

her.when she cumes he:get
inside D. D:ok..but seeing

sneha,he goes & sits near
her.P 's hopes were

shattered. Mukti enters the
bus with a funny smile:hi

everybody. seeing P,she
sits near him.P gets

irritated. P dreams of
D with him,while M

dreams of him with her:tum
paas aaye...they reach the

hostel.P wants 2 spend
time with D.so he gets

into the room where
M,D & S stay. D:why r u

here in this ladies' room?
every1 laughs.P gets

embarrassed:i'm sorry.i'm not
able 2 open my

shootcase.plz help me D.
D:ok..she goes with him 2

his room.D tries 2 open
it.P's fingers go thru

her hand.she looks at
P.then smiles. DID DIPONIKA

REALLY FALL 4 PREM?
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Posted: 19 years ago
#16
wow i hope debo isnt i luv wid prem an prem could start likein mukti
do count soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#17
Nice fan-fic this update sounded lyk KKHH!! 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#18
Part-8...Prem realises that it was only a dream.he

feels shy. Actually when Prem
asks Diponika 2 help him

open his shootcase,D:i don't
no whether i'll succeed or

not,but i'll try.
Mukti:opening a shootcase is
not a big

task.its so silly.i'll open it
prem. P laughs.P:u

won't be able 2 open it.i'm
sure. D:let her try prem.if

she wins in it..P:no way..but
M goes & opens

it.P was surpprised:u cud
open it? M was very

happy:ya..D:see,mukti is so
brilliant. when M goes

outother college boys tease
her:nice jeans girl.nice

hairstlye. R u a girl?or a
boy? plz tell yaar. M

cries & goes 2 prem P:whats
the matter mukti? she

tells everything. P goes 2
them:if u don't recoginse
a
girl,consult a dr & put
specs. then he goes 2 M.

M:u beat them with ur words
prem. thanks. P:they can't be


blamed completely.why can't u
walk like a girl? Keep ur

hair loose.start wearing
girls' dresses also. Prem

goes.M thinks about it.
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#19
Part-9....Mukti goes 2 Diponika who was sleeping.she
gets
up
with irritatation:what
mukti?won't u allow 2 sleep?


M:sorry diponika D
sleeps.Sneha gets up:whats the


matter mukti? M:i want 2 wear
salwar kameez. S:suddenly

how did u feel like wearing
it? M:oh no,will u able 2

giv 1 of ur salwar kameezes?
D with a smile:ok..
mukti

wears it & keeps open her
hair.in the nite she goes

searching 4 prem.she falls
down in darkness.M

screems.P who was resting
outside hears it:this is

mukti's voice.he searches 4
her & finally sees her &

helps 2 get her up. P:what r u
doing in this night? M:i

came 2 see u. P:in this
midnite? M:ya..2 show my new

appearance. P looks at
her:wow!now u look like a

sweet girl. M smiles:is
it? P:no doubt. D

searches 4 M.P sees
her coming.he takes M 2

backside.P:Deponika wil see us.
M smiles. P tells
in
his mind:when i see
diponika,my heart is beating
fast?
He
keeps M's head on his
chest. she was

shocked:why? P:can u hear my
heartbeats. M smiles.

P:its a symbol of luv. she
feels happy. M:ok bye..he

runs away. M goes back.
Diponika-sneha stare at her.

D:where were u in this
midnite. M:simply i went out.

D:don't u care 4 urself.don't
4get that this place is

unknown 2 us.what happened
2u.suddenly wore salwar...
S-D
go 2 sleep. while
the pepsi gang was

standing out,prem had a rose
petal in his hand:keep it
in
ur hand & wish 2 get ur
luv.we'll get. M:really?

Tushar,sneha,prem
wish.Mukti:prem,giv me a petal 2

wish. M closes her eyes
with the petal P gave &

wishes.when hopefully he opens
her eyes,she cud see only

Sneha S:others went.
M becomes upset. S:they think

that how a person can fall in
luv with a tom boy like u.

M:but now i wore
salwar ..nobody noticed it.
S:its ok.1

day they will realize that u r
also a sweet girl like

others.u'l get ur luv . M
smiles with lots of hopes.

suddenly she becomes dull.she
asks in her mind:prem,u

said that i look like a pretty
girl.but then also why

did u leave me alone?
sweetazsugar thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#20
Awwwww an yh i does sound like kkhh kl fanfic
do count

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