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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hay everyone,

You will be happy to know from today onwards I am going to make every reader my Ginny pig. Read my fanfic and comment…best part, you are going to tell me if you can picture everything. So now I will describe the jewellery, clothes everything. You have to tell me were I have to improve, this way I improve my self for becoming a best selling author of my novel. Nice? I know I am very mean.

Krishi
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Posted: 19 years ago
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"Don't worry about that…we have the list of artists and the choreographer we are bringing him down from U.S. He is fresh out of dance school and very talented." Ragu informed Mukti, "Also a very jolly person."

"That is settled, so when can I have the artist list?" she asked.

"Right now." Yashmi opened her bag, and handed Mukti a list, she looked through it:

Angath Kanna

Rupraka Banergy

Qazi …

Josh

Abejeeth Sawanth

Mukti Kappor

Debojeeth

Kripa Sharma

Nathasa

Arpitha

"All ten stars have agreed?" she asked.

"Yes…this was the work I have been running around for the last few day. Practically living in these formals…" Yashmi commented.

"All right. So that leaves out the budget, hold on." Mukti called someone in the inter com and speaks (muted) she returns and says, "It is finalised. He will give it to us soon after lunch along with the prospective places we could approach for the settings."

Ragu kept looking at Mukti an thought, "She is wonderful and hard working, what an amazing person." aloud he says, "Mukti thank you we would have flipped with out you."

"Don't mention it at all Ragu, it is my project as well." Mukti told him, "My singing carrier would also get a huge boost thanks to this."

"You are right." Ragu and Yasmi shook hands with Mukti and they left.

Seen two:

Vishnavi is sitting in the office and Sammer walks in, "I have asked Mukti to take care of that project." he declared.

"Great…she will do a wonderful job of it." Vishnavi smiled at him lovingly.

"I know…hay one more week and they would have all the major things done." Sammer informed her.

Seen three:

Prem is now taken over K Channel from Anurag, and he has also got the contract for the concert and is very happy that he can work with Mukti up close. He smiles and spins around in his chair. Anurag just comes in, "Prem vo." His son gets up yelling "Dad Basu." And hugs him Anurag surprised hugs him back but is happy seeing is son so happy. "We got the contract from SNR who are working with Mukti on a large concert."

Anurag smiled, "Why are you so happy because you got the project or for working up close with Mukti?"

"Dad Basu! You know why…um tell mama I will me coming for lunch will you." Prem requested. Littlie did he know what he was going to face…

Seen four:

Everyone is in the meeting, the head is Ragu, left Navya then Karthick, right Yasmi, next to Yasmi is Prem, Mukti on the other end of the table then Snaha…followed by Sharath. "All right ladies and gentile men, thank you for making it hear," Ragu announces though trying to hold his disagreement of Prem's clothes. "shall we get down to work." All through the work Prem was watching Mukti who was too set up with work. Sharath too kept on glancing at her, some how he was lost in admiration to the woman who lost everything and rose to this level. Mutki was giving some suggestions and fixing a date for a press meet, when Ragu's phone rang. "Ragu do you want me to wait for you're call to end?" Mukti asked him coolly.

"Please this could be urgent," Ragu stepped out and spoke to some one, "Why did you call? I was in a meeting…" there is a pause, "All right I will inform Mukti don't worry we will be there." He came back and sat down "Continue Mukti."

"Sure…so as I was saying that this project needs to be given grate care…so we need the maximum amount of care should be given for details. Lighting, focus on certain points, also the clothes need to have much highlight after all Navya is taking a risk with them…and the press need to have the up most care, the catering service should be excellent." Mukti went on giving a list but the only person who could keep up with her speed was Sharath who jotted everything down and in a very fast manner. At the end he passed the note pad to her and asked, "Does this cover everything?" she looked at the list and handed it back, "Yes…"

"Don't worry – we will get the best people to do this work just like we are doing now." Ragu added confidently.

"I know…so is there anything else?" Snaha asked.

"No so shall all of us take leave we have our work." Prem asked and everyone got up except Sharath and Mukti. They hung around, Mukti because she was picking up her stuff, Sharath because he wanted to talk to her. When Mukti looked up she was shocked, "Mukti I wanted to congratulate you, you are doing a great job."

"Thanks Mr. Guptha." Mukti looked strait in his eye not sure what to make out of his words.

"I think you would have some work let me not hold you up…see you latter." Sharath went away.

Krishi

P.S How is it?

Edited by shakthi258 - 19 years ago
shakthi258 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#83
Guysss You are makeing me nervous now.

Krishi
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Posted: 19 years ago
#84
no mo krishi di!
it was great fantabulous!!!
i really like how well mukti's character is shaping up!
its great!
i love your descriptions too!
mukti's outfits and jewelry is awesome!
althoough i cant really see many of the pics!!
its really great...i loved this part!
cont soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Seen five:

Mukti is standing in front of the temple at home. She looks wonderful in a sandal brown chudidar. It has a strange gold work on the top and bottom and makes Mukti look like a goddess. She sets the raki plate and places two rakis in it, she does the preparations for raki and is taking the aarthi for the goddess Kali when Sammer and Vishnavi, Sharavan come there. Mukti does aarthi till they come there, Sakshi stands aside and watches what her daughter is doing. When they come Mukti gives everyone aarthi and prashad. After that she tells Sammer to stand with Vishnavi and takes the aarthi for him and ties the raki, feeds him the sweets and to Vishnavi but she objects, "Nahi babi. Aap dono ek hai…ek ka bagair dusra adura hai…aap ko bi ya rasam par involvement lana pada ga." Vishnavi stays quiet. Next Mukti does the same thing with Shravan and both her brother give her gifts. Shravan gives her a set of anklets with a lot of the sound making extras, "Shravan pehnao na?"

"Sure…" Shravan puts it on her feet. Sammer gives her a packet, Mukti looks confused. "Kolo ladli…" she does and looks shocked, "Baiya ya dress tho!"

"When we went shopping the other day but it was already sold. I gave the order for you ladli and got it delivered." Mukti smiles and hugs her brother.

Seen six: part a

All the girls put the raki on Tushar's hand but Prem refuses to even participate in this. They leave him, Tushar remembers how Mukti did a similar thing and last year but wipes her tears quietly. Prerna sees this and places a hand on his shoulder, "Tum aur Kasak apna pariwar ka galthi ka saza beeth raha ho. I am sorry beta."

Seen six: part b

"Mom aisa kuch nahi. Vo mai…rehena digyia." Tushar comforts her and goes away. At the same time in the wadwa house Aashika puts the raki on her brothers hand and gets the gifts when Mukti walks in wearing the very dress Sammer gave her, it is a beautiful red tops with a dark cream skrit. The top comes a bit below the dress and also has a cream duppata for it. "Mukti you look very pretty." Kumkum coments.

"Thank you anunty. Sammer gave this to me." Mukti tells her. Soon she is having breakfast with the wadwa's as she promised. After breakfast she leaves for the temple.

Seen seven:

Mukti is in a Krishna temple, someone touches her shoulder Mukti turns around to find Tushar and is shocked.

Krishi
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Posted: 19 years ago
#86
excellent 👏
continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 yaar ur a rly gd writter 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#88
krishi di that was mindblowing!
u know ur description is perfect u dun need any work on it at all!
the outfits u come up with r perfect...i wish i had them lol!
u have to cont soon!
but really the description is great i can really imagine it in my head!
👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Mukti looks strait into Tushar's eyes and he looks down guiltily, "Aank ko neecha kyu juka raha ho bai?" Tushar jerked up looking at her, "Galthi aapki parivar ka tha bai aap ki nahi. Mai chalthi hoon, by." Mukti went away leaveing a teary eyes Tushar.

Seen seven:

Aashika and Sia are arguing over some small matter, "Nahi Sia I know aunty does not put peppermint in milkshakes to get that taste. She puts something else I know…"

Sia is very jumpy, "Teek hai we will ask her when we go home all right?" Mukti does not pay real attention because her mind is set on her carear and development. She promised her self that she would go to such a hihgts that what Sharath did to her would become nothing. The only question now was how was she going to reach that hight?

Seen eight:

A open stage stands were a performer is dancing, (special apperence Bipasha Basu) for the song Tanha Tanha from Rangela, she gives a wonderful performance. Her magenta dress that consists of tights, a see though skirt, a sleeveless shirt. The way she moves and sings is very nice but looks like she is jumbling around the stage. After her comes another performer a man this time (special appearances Shan) who performs for the song Ishq Na from Ahistha Ahistha after that comes Mukti. She receives a standing applause just for entering the stage, she waves and all then suddenly goes to the respective places and dances for the song "Na Jani Kaha Sa Ayi Hai Na Jani Kaha Ya Gaigi Diwana Kisa Banagi…" dressed in a very simple black jeans and a yellow long top that is slightly tight. She does such a wonderful performance, everyone is awed by it. At the end of the show Mukti gets the award. "So Mukti are you ready to do this album?"

The judge ask, "Yes I am and I won't let you down."

(I don't know what the song is called can some one tell me what Movie is it, witch movie is it in)

Part two: The friend in need

Seen one:

Mukti starts working a lot and began creating tunes for her album, in such a time is when for an outside shot for her album (with Angath) she has to go out on a hilly area…she is seen jogging down a path when she trips and falls. She starts rolling down when suddenly a hand catches her and lifts her of with ease. She is not able to see who it is but she becomes unconscious. She opens her eyes, everything is hazy and a pain is there in her leg. More like a burning sensation, someone's hand keeps touching and does something she does not realize as she closes her eyes. Again she opens them…she finds her self in a cottage on a bed and a hot water basin with some cotton is set next to it. Mukti looks around and finds a man standing in front of a window. She clears her throat. The man turns around, his broad shoulders and muscular futures would have made every other girl faint (Authors Note: that is how many girls feel about John Abraham) but had no impact on Mukti, "Good you woke up, you are Mukti Kappor right?"

"Yes…um were am I?" Mukti enquired.

"You are in my cottage – at least the one I rented for my photography holiday." He told her, stretching out a hand introduced him self, "Hay Mukti I am Nandan Chopra." Mukti felt the name sound familiar and she thought of who it could be, "Don't strain you're head so much babes…Nandan Chopra, I am the in charge of Chopra publications, we are the one who print Society, People and Faction magazine sounds familiar." Mukti immediately recognised the name, it was a set of popular magazine with lots of information on fashion, gossip, stars and what not.

"Yes Mr. Chopra…" she began.

"Its Nandan Mukti not Mr. Chopra my god…now don't go all formal on me. I will get us some coffee then you can tell me what are you doing in Shimla."

Mukti and Nandan have coffee and she tells him about the shoot, suddenly he asks her a question, "Mukti do you remember Kailash?"

"Hmm the one who did a shot for Navya?" she asked.

"Yes…I am considering hiring him as my fashion photographer is he good to work with?" Nandan looks at her and Mukti smiles, "He is the best go for him. That reminds me I have a video shoot by."

Seen four:

Mukti gets ready for the 'marriage' shot, (this shot is when Angath and Mukti get married) she comes out dressed in a beautiful pink outfit with matching jewellery…her hands are decorated with a set of gold bangles with the extra jewellery the next one is a set of diamond bangs after that comes a set of pink bangles. On her neck in a diamond necklace set and earrings. They place a jewel on her forehead that is small and pined to her hair. Added to all of that is the make up…the women are putting on anklets on her legs, that is were the shot starts…the song janaman is played in the barground, when Mukti's eyes filled with shyness is seen. On the other side is seen Angath who is dressed in a white shirwani with red work and gold threading, he has a copper colour crumpled dupatta with the ends in maroon like his pyjamas and doing what ever needed rights with a large turban on his head. The song Janaman from Aryan is played in the barground…the screen has Angath and Mukti getting the things done when it dims a bit and on top of it comes many romantic pictures of Angath and Mukti. Their dance in the 'engagement', their dance in a rain…the time both of them accept their love, Mukti is dressed in a light lavender sari with a gold necklace, earnings and a watch on one hand are some matching bangles with out any extra hangings but a simple set. Angath is in a black tux, there is a step when Angath pulls Mukti around the waist and she turns around – a relationship changed for ever. After that seen comes a seen were Angath and Mukti are on a rock, she is tucked in his arms and paying with his fingers, she looks very wonderful in a yellow sleeveless tracks and Angath is in a black jeans and a faded white T-Shirt. Angath takes out a ring and places it on Mukti's right hand fourth finger, Mukti looks at him glassine eyed. "Yes."

The camera focuses back on the wedding, Mukti is being brought down and Angath keeps looking at her, she feels shy and sits down…all the rasams are done and Angath puts the sindur on Mukti's mang and he then puts the magalsuthra on her neck, that is when suddenly a shot is heard and Angath falls down healed by Mukti and her magalsuthra out of her neck and dies. Mukti cries cries and cries…'Zindagi Mai Koi' is heard in the barground.

Seen five:

A large screen is seen and Mukti is seen taking flowers to a samadi, with the name Tanjan Obroi written on it. Her yellow chudidar with the full sleeves cudidar but no bangles and very light make up more like 'nam ka wastha' that brings out her natural beauty. She places the red roses mixed with some white ones on it and a gust of wind is blown on her hair. She looks up and feels like someone is there, in a solid form is Angath. She reaches out but he disappears, tears fall from her eyes…a hand is placed in her back it is non other than the man who acted as Aashika's groom. He wipes her tears and Aashika too comes there, she is different in a shirt and jeans but a mangalsuthra is visible…the whole time the song. "Tere Bina Jiya…" is played. Mukti is seen lifting a child and cuddling it…the seen changes and everyone is seen in dancing in a party except for Mukti. She looks dashing in a simple mask that hides her eyes, a white based sari is drapped around her and she looks very beautiful, just then a man comes and asks for her for a dance. She agrees and they dance for Jaga Jaga, they get lost in each others eyes and he kisses both her and disappears. Suddenly appears again this time taking of his mask it is non other than Angath…they hug and everyone let out a cheer. The lights go on and everyone cheer and clap for Mukti and Angath who go on stage and take a bow holding hands. Josh and Karthick cheer their act.

Krishi

Edited by shakthi258 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#90
awesome!
i was sorta confused at first but i figured it out!
awesome though!
really i love their outfits...lol!

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