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wow!!! ur a gr8 writter yaar ..count soon
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Part three: The bonds of celebration

Seen one:

The record company throws a party for Mukti and Angath, and release of the album. The owner goes up on stage and says, "Ladies and gentlemen, I am proud to announce that we have brought two stars in one album, Mukti Kappor and Angath Kanna. The two K's of the music industry." Everyone laugh at his statement. "Now I would like the two of them to inaugurating this party." Both Mukti and Angath come up, Angath is dressed in the official black trousers and a jacket with a white shirt. Most of the buttons are open giving him a hot look. Mukti is dressed in a dress that has a spaghetti top that flows down into a v neck. It has the first part again set in a v shape reaching down to her till her feet a red shiny material. The rest of it starting slightly above her waist is the white top that stops at her waist, her skirt also white with a 'pleated' stitch giving it a vertical wavy look till her knees. A transparent white skirt comes on top of it making it till close to her ankles. Her hands for a change have only a gold watch and no bangles, but a knitted clothe bracelet. Her neck has a simple gold chain with a twisted up pendent in ruby and diamonds her earrings are the same as her pendent. Her face looks very present with light make up and her high heeled shoes make her look a bit taller. Angath gives her his hand she takes it and they go on stage he does not let her go immediately, but twirls her around slowly and kisses her hand very romantically. ON LIVE TV and the camera goes wild snapping away at the sight the owner smiles and asks them to speak about the album, "This album is about love and the love between two friends…it is also a wonderful video as well, do watch." Angath said, "The best part you have a look at Ms Kappor becoming Mrs Kanna kidding, what I meant to say is see her as a bride. A beautiful one." After the laughter died down Mukti said, "As far as the us ageing to this album is concerned I think the compliment goes to Josh – thanks a lot buddy." He gives her a flying kiss (two fingers thing) and Mukti smiles at him sweetly. The CEO gives the Champaign to Angath and Mukti who open it and start the party. They go of stage and Josh hugs Mukti, "I really feel happy that you are becoming so successful Mukti."

"Thanks buddy." Mukti hugged Josh back suddenly she says, "Tum?" she moves away form Josh. There stood Nandan in a black jeans, a violet shirt and a black jacket. Josh still has his hands on Mukti's waist, and hers around his, "Hi Mukti, it is very nice to see you again." Nandan tells her Mukti smiles and remembers that she did not introduce Angath and Josh, "O by the way these are my friends…"

"I know Josh and Angath – hi, I am Nandan Chopra." He extends his hand and Angath sakes it so does Josh. "Nice meeting you."

"Congratulations on the album." He tells the two of them, both thank him. Just then the D.J announces the next song is from the movie Shadi No. 1, Dill Nahi and Nandan asks Mukti for a dance. They dance for the song, he even pulls Mukti around and pulls her around a lot but nothing serious. Their pair looks nice Durv and Antara who are nearby keep looking at Mukti, "She is a very smart girl."

"Yes…but who is the man with her?" Antara asked.

"I don't know…come on lets go out for some fresh air." Druv pulled her away and she gave him a 'sharam nahi aatha' look.

Seen two:

Sakshi is walking up and down the hall and Vishnavi is stiting with Sammer looking at her, "Tumhari behen kya kahagi? Tum dono jantha ho na she is so busy aur aapki shadi par rehena chahagi na?"

"Par mom Mukti tho janthi hai…we asked her if she was free." Vaishnavi informed her and Sakshi looked lived.

"Ya pehela hi nahi batha saktha tha kya?" she asked when the two smiled.

Seeen three:

Angath and Josh are at Josh's home having a drink when Josh says, "Muja us Nandan ka bath par kuch ajeeb lagtha hay buddy."

"Kyu he seems nice…he is very good to Mukti and not to mention a gentleman." Angath said and looked at Josh. "You're point being?"

"He seems a bit too protective of her and now that her life has been tried on once…" Josh flinched at the thought of the incident. Angath patted his hand, "Chill she would be fine."

"My worry is more inclined towards Prem Prerna Sharma and Sharath Guptha." Angath told him, Josh nodded expressing his eyes too were on Prem.

Seen four: (Sagi of Sammer and Vaishnavi)

The room is decorated in a very renaissance kind of room and the people are still coming in, Druv is wearing a black jeans with a yellow shirt and a black jacket looking very nice. Next to him stood Antara in a red strap like dress that reached till her knees and healed tighter with a white belt at her waist, a simple silver chain and earrings made her look wonderful. Both of them were talking to Sammer. He is dressed in a dark blue trousers and suite with a white shirt, a few buttons is open and he looks very hot. The camera zooms around only to stop at Sakshi who looks very different in a mustered sari, next to her are Kumkum dressed in a green sari with lots of work and Summit in a dark brown trousers and jacket with a light brown shirt. "Kya hua achank sadi?" Kumkum asked.

"Mukti na complain karna dia…you know her…" the three of them laugh. "Helo aunty." Is hared and it is Karan, he looks very nice in a black jeans and a violet shirt with a striped black jacket. Kumkum studies him for a second and then asks, "Mukti na tara lia isa pasand kia?"

"Ji aunty, you know about us…she is my friend." Karan replied.

"Vo tho hai…" said someone from behind, Karan turned around to find Angath he looked dashing in a dark blue jeans a with a sea blue shirt and a white jacket. Josh looked more formal in a casual black set of trousers and jacket with a black shirt that is open till the end of his chest. Next to him was Angath in a bluish green jeans and jacket with a deep green shirt. Suddenly many girls look at the direction of the door, Ragu is standing there in a casual light brown trousers, jacket and a maroon shirt stood in the entrance next to Yasmi. She was go wonderful in a black dress with a mixture of halter neck and tank top. The neck goes pretty low and is healed only by two strings with the v-cut, with a zigzag skirt there is having a line of glitter on the top and bottom with a belt. She is wearing a simple diamond necklace set that looks very elegant on her. After they begin 'socializing' Sia, Akash and Vishnavi come there. Akash is dressed in his favourite black suet with a light blue shirt. Sia is dressed in a beautiful baby pink sleeveless shirt that has many beads work with a deeper shade of pink. There were trousers also in pink and a nice bracelet, and watch but only one person could not take his eyes of Vishnavi. Sammer, kept on looking at his 'fianc' who was dressed in a white top that had a short sleeve with a frills and set down on her shoulders. Her skirt is till her knees and strait not an umbrella type, she is wearing a diamond necklace and earrings. After smiling they too walk towards Sakshi but Sia starts looking for Mukti in the party only not being able to find her. Suddenly all the lights are turned of and just one spotlight is set, standing on top is Mukti, "Ladies and gentlemen, welcome to the engagement party of Sammer and Vishnavi. My brother and my sister-in-law. So…lets start with something…special to celebrate." She does look ready to celebrate.

Mukti's dress looked a work of art, the top was two parts. The smaller and longer one was yellow and was healed by a strip on her right shoulder till her waist. The other larger and shorter top was in a lavender shade was healed with a strap on the left shoulder and reached just till her waist, the neck looked like a very wide v neck, a gold looking cloth was folded and set neatly around her waist. After that a black skirt with silver work in the bottom that reaches till her knees. She wore only a simple gold necklace and earrings, with a watch, her fingers had a wonderful ring. Her shoes too were high healed giving her an elegant look. Pretending to think… "Kaisa?"

Krishi

P.S: Janna chahtha ho? Tho kaal pado! 😉

Edited by shakthi258 - 19 years ago
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ab plz kal kar dena ok
gr8 update 👏 👏
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Seen six:

"Kasa? Jabs ek aisa risha hai un dono ka beech? Jaha na koi sawal aur na koi jawab." She starts coming down the stares, "Ek rishtha jaha pyar ko naam par dua nahi dia, aur do hai ek…babi I welcome you warmly to become a part of the Kapoor family." Finally Viashnavi and Mukti hug, Druv asks, "Hay kya no gana?"

"Yes…gana hoga lakin, D.J tho play kia tho." She says and he plays the song Suna Suna and Vishnavi is pulled by Sammer into a close dance, Ragu comes and he asks her for a dance. He keeps looking at her but she is very distracted, someone tapps him on his shoulder, "Think I could cut in?"

"Sure…" he handed Mukti in his arms, she wispers, "Karan tum yaha?"

"Kyu nahi aasatha tha kya?" he wispers back placeing her arm on his shoulder and pulls her a bit closer. "Nahi mera mathlab tha…" she starts when he lifts his head up as though trying to ask god something but notices the candlear is about to fall and pulls her away. Luckily they miss the attempt because Karan saves her, everyone is worried but Mukti insists it was an accident (though knowing it was not an accident) and gets the party shifted some place else.

The next day morning Shravan walks into Mukti's room, she is soundly sleeping Shravan does not say anything and is about to move away when he notices a bottle of sleeping pills lying down near her, understanding he stretches his hand out and strokes her hair and leaves from there. [Flashback] Mukti is very frustrated and feeling helpless as she sits in the balcony the time shows that it is near mid night. A hand is placed on her, Shravan "Sorry vo kaam thoda deer hogaya."

"Its all right…mai samaj sakthi hoo chalo I will get you're dinner." She began.

"I already had, I am going to sleep…you are not feeling sleepy?" he asked her.

"I am going good night." She said and went away before he could return the greetings. [End of flashback]

Seen Seven:

Prem is eating more like playing with his food when Sharath walks in, "Kya hua?"

"Party mai…do you think it was an accident." Prem asked.

"Nahi but who is trying to kill her…I sware it is not me but who every is doing this is more than just an ordinary person. Who ever knew about this…I am getting worried." Sharath tells when Prerna walks in, she looks shocked. "Mama…vo."

"Chup bilkukl chup Sharath – I don't want a word from you." Prerna looked so angry that it seemed like she was going to blow up. "Meri beti ki jaan kathra mai hai aur tum…" she runs out.

Seen Eight:

Mukti is walking towards her car and Prenra's car comes there, she jumps out and goes to her and trys to hug her. "Mukti beta…"

Mukti coldly holds her hand out, "Enough Mrs. Prerna Bajaj agar aap agla baar is gaar ka andar atha hai tho mai watchman's sa kahu ki aap ko gaar ka bagar faink da. Got that." Prerna looks at her hurt but does not say a word because she remembers every word that was said to her and the way she was hurt and quietly moves away. In the car as she drove away she remembers how she hugged Mukti when she told her about Karan, the way Mukti came running to her when she figured out something was wrong. They way Mukti helped her with Prem, the way she always made her smile and most importantly the amount of love that was in her eyes at all times. "Beta I am sorry." was all she could whisper to the winds. There is a slow tune that is played in the barground.

Seen nine:

Mukti is seen rubbing her forehead and trying to relax. "Mai kaha jana wali thi…yes Sia ki gahr." Mukti goes to the car and drives away. She enters Sia's house and goes to Sia who is dressed in her house clothes (green cudidar) "Hay rock star…ready for breakfast."

"Starving what are we going to have?" Mukti sits down next to Akash and both of them have a havy breakfast – alu parata, dahi misti and what not.

Krishi

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That was amazing, very descriptive. 👏 👏 By the way who is ragu.
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Part four: New Heights

Seen one:

Mukti comes out of the shower in a pink bathrobe drying her hair, it is six in the morning and she is already up. She did not really jog because the dance keeps her fit now a days. Walking over to the c.d player and played the music, singing along with the bright song from Dill Jisa Apna Kaha Go Balla, when dancing someone comes up behind her. All the time Mukti has her back turned and keeps dancing. When she finishes someone applauds her she turns around and goes red. "Bai…vo." Sammer stood there in running tracks about to go out. "Seriously very nice you have nice rhythm and not to mention smoothness."

"Bai…how long were you standing there?" she asked.

"For some time – Mukti I have seen you dance before." He added.

"Not in a bathrobe!" she mumbled but he hared it.

"I am you're brother and I have seen you in you're bathrobe before too." He added and went out laughing. He came back running when she called him, "Kya hua?" she healed up two dresses, the first was a cream trousers with a dark maroon t-shirt with a few incoherent wordings the other was a grey pant with a black top. "Witch one?"

"What is you're plan today?" he asked.

"I have a recording at nine with Quazi after a breakfast at Dadi's place – Angath's." she added at the blank look on his face.

"Go for the cream and maroon and do you have time to join me for some coffee in the kitchen or is there any prior appointment nessisary?" Sammer looked at his sister. Studying her fetures that now glowed with a warmth and health she had come over the incident, her love and her pain. She did not even think of it now…still the hurt remained but her work gave her the opening she needed to forget. Now it was imposible for her to go shopping with out a croud around her for autographs. She had only one 'problem' now, she had not much time in her hands and an over load of work. But with her this was not an issue, she would pick up a holiday when she wanted, she proved it before. Brakeing out of his meditation he left the place.

Seen two:

Angath's dadi being the sweetheart she was always pampered Mukti, "Beta I made you're favorite alu parata and dahi to go with it," Mukti sat on top of the kitchen slab as Dadi fed her the food. Angath who was standing a bit away with a glass of orange juice rolled his eyes. "Dadi have you considered letting her eat by her self?"

"I like feeding her, now finish you're juice." Dadi smiled at him, though she did not know much about Mukti she liked the relationship she shared with Angath. That was more than enough for her, Angath the man who was normally very reserved and not very frank with everyone except his few friends Josh, Sammer, Vishnvavi and his brother Karthick now added to the list was Mukti. Angath on the other hand was studying her, she was becoming happy go lucky clearly, this was not a good sine. He could only hope she was not takeing drugs, for a fact alcohol was never in her menue. That he knew well.

Seen three:

Angath was walking Mukti to her car, she casually mentioned, "Bai and Sakshi were suprized at the changes in me." She had stopped addressing her mother as mama and stuck with Sakshi, "They even asked if I was takeing drugs." Angath caught his breath, "Some one else was also thinking so right – chill no. I am just satisfied with my work and I am getting my revenge the way I wanted to, develop so much that they become insignificant." Both of them sat on the car bonnet, "Look, Shilandar Guphta for a press meet needs to slog away organizing were as Mukti Kappor gets it done with a contract." Angath had to grin she had an attitude, "Shilandar Guptha gets his popularity and spotlight rather grabs once in five years with the elections – Mukti Kappor gets it with a mere show or even an appearance." Angath had enough he was rolling with laughter, "I don't know how will he react to you're attitude."

"The word is arrogance Angath but attitude is also accepted." Mukti laughed and hugged him, ignoring the fact that anyone who passed by the road had a complete view of them. Not to mention Prem who was driving by, somehow seeing Mukti, glancing at her hugging Angath made him feel insecure. He drove away but nether knew that he had seen them. Some how he had been disturbed ever since Mukti began moving away from him, more than that become close to many men. There seemed to be a parade of men now: Karan, Angath, Josh, Nandan, Shravan and now that Ragu. Clearly her brother needed to keep a check on her, she was not like this before ever. Now it seemed like she had several men practically eat out of her hand thinking he was the only person in her life. How did she manage it, so many times she had seen her with both Shravan and Ragu or Karan and Ragu some times even Angath and Josh or Angath and Shravan. All the men seemed to have a confidence of her loyalty but non of them had it at all. He wanted the old 'basanthi' not this Mukti Kapoor who was with one man after another. Still claiming to be 'single' for the media. How did she do it? Valentines day came in front of his eyes like a present happening, what happened to the girl in white skirt and a top with her hair tied up who proposed to him? Then again – she was now Mukti Kapoor, the girl who loved him was Mukti Deshmook. A sad tear crept near his eyes and he wiped it. The easy accusation he had made strung in his heart, 'slept with' when his Mother India was going out to get her back. They day she returned to say, "Vo mar chuki hai hamara lia."

Krishi

Edited by shakthi258 - 19 years ago
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lovely yaar oh dont make mukti too hard i feel sorry for prerna 😭
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continue soon n please don't make mukti hard on prena afterall prena was lik a mother 2 her
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[Authors note: Hay gusy in my rush I made a major error with the character casting, silly me, Sakshi I think would be better played with Kavya's mom from KavyaAnjali. Would it be all right?]

Seen four:

Ragu was in his room playing the song, Ek Ajnabi Haseena when Yasmi walked in. "Nice song, thinking of Mukti?" she asked him.

"Hmm no nothing in particular. Why did you state her?" he asked her reaching out.

"You seem to have quiet an eye for her." Yasmi tried to move away.

"I have a sense for beauty of any form, I appreciate her beauty like I appreciate you're beauty." Suddenly she felt uncomfortable as his eyes swept down her perfectly maintained figure in a grey track that revealed her figure.

"Stop talking like that you are scaring me…" She shifted a bit, but he pulled her closer.

"You are…and I admire that in you there is nothing you can do about it." he whispered and laughed.

"What ever, do you remember you have a meeting with Mukti Kapoor and Prem Shrarma? I can't come so you are on your own and do remember she is a professional no flirting." Yasmi leaned over him and took a file. "By."

Seen five:

Prem was sitting and waiting for Ragu and Karan to show up with Mukti, Snaha and Sharath. Mukti was clearly frustrated and was walking around the room. Snaha was quietly studying her, "Mukti…" Karan just walked in, "sorry but I got stuck in the traffic." Mukti gave him a cold look but did not say anything but wished Ragu a good morning, "Shall we start?"

"Yes – so I guess everything is fine so why were we called?" Prem demanded he did not really want to be hearing Ragu flirting with Mukti. He knew what he had to do, make sure the program was hipped up the show and get the stars interviewed and all. "One of the stars Kripa Sharma can't make it." Mukti said, plane as though it did not matter. Prem was not very femilear with this but he knew enough to guss that this could mean a lot of trouble. "So we have changed the plan and present the new singer, many changes would have to take place." Soon Mukti and Karan between them told the changes Ragu looked on for he knew the whole thing, he was hear for a mear formality. "I think there should be no issues?"

"No nothing at all…" Sharath said quietly.

"Meeting dispursed." Ragu declared and they left – Ragu left his mobile back, Snaha and Sharath had left. Prem took the opertunity to round up Mukti, "What the heck do you think of you're self? How are you mannageing the whole thing hun? Making every guy feel he is the only one?"

"What are you talking about?" Mukti demanded, she did not know what he meant.

"You're several boyfriends, Karan…Angath…Josh…Ragu and what ever is the name of that other guy." Prem went on and Mukti got it finally, she glared at him with the anger of her soul. "Shut up all right. All the boys you just mentioned are my great friends and nothing more."

"Really Ms. Kappor? Since when did you start going to night clubs with friends and since when have you're friends been hugging you?" Prem asked meanly. "I could see the way Angath hugged you, Josh hugged you their body language told me that…really Mukti I never thou-" having hared enough Mukti slapped him.

"Bass Mr. Sharma, now get out of my office – the only relationship we have is a working relationship." But he hared a distant, "Are you done Yudi?" Prem realized he just accused her but she stood there casually in that yellow knee length skirt with the jacket and the deeper shade of yellow shirt, an image of perfection. He stayed quiet, "For you're kind information all the men you just accused me of having as my lovers are my friends and nothing more. Now if you excuse me I have my life to live." an applaud was heard Mukti turned around Ragu stood there.

"That was wonderful Mukti sorry but I heard the whole thing and wonderful. Any other girl would have jumped up and yelled but you. You are cool as a cucumber." He bowed to her and said, "I salute you madam."

"Thank you, so what made you come back?" she asked, he picked up his mobile and showed it. After pocketing it they waited till Prem left, "Mukti I think it is him, he is the one attacking you."

"No…it is not him I know who it is and I have even shut the person up." Mukti said, something about her tone made it clear that it was all he could know. Mukti went away, her eyes had tears but she wiped them away. [Flashback] There is a heavy rain and Mukti walks alone into a building, seated on a chair is a girl hardly above Mukti's own age, a blond, "Listen Praduma that you are upset about you're brother. I know you hold me responsible that he is not with you right now, but I swear I did not know about the drug dealing in the concert. Nether did I know you're brother, for me he was just another dancer on stage. I did not ask him to deal with drugs nor did I ask the police to catch him. Fact is I did not even know of such an incident till you told me so, and now I have proof, a copy of you're brothers statement. He was dealing with drugs much before the time I entered the market read it, get it checked if you want." Praduma (played by Vrinda of ReMix) looked at her and then the paper, read them twice. Thought form some time and tears formed in her eyes.

"I believe you…it was just that…I was blinded. You won't tell anyone would you?" there was a despirecy in her voice.

Mukti smiles, "No never…listen I arranged for a job for you, go and work in Nanithal. You can raise you're self from there, take care." Saying so Mukti leaves. [Flashback ends.]

Krishi

Edited by shakthi258 - 19 years ago

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