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Posted: 19 years ago
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awww
do count its soo gd
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that was sooo good as always!! ab aur tarief dosre part ke baad!!! šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘
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aaw ur really gud i like da way u've introduced oda drama in to it.
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Part 6:

Seen one:

Sakshi goes to Sammer's office, "Dav I have found the perfect partner for -"

"Mom I have told you I don't want to get married now." Sammer tells her not taking his eyes of his computer.

"For Mukti's first concert." Sakshi completes, he feels awkward. "You're friend Angath Kanna." Immediately a smile comes on his face. He makes a call to some one.

Seen two:

We see a hall and someone is coming down the stairs, there is a bounce in his step. Angath Kanna, a rock star and heart throb of many people, his mobile rings, the sight of the i.d Sammer calling brings a smile to his lips. "Hay buddy what up?"

"Angath I need you to do some work with me." Sammer says, "you know my sister wants to become a singer and well we are organizing her concert and we wanted you to perform in it along with her."

"Sammer I will meet you're sister see if she can sing and then I will let you know. Can you bring her to meet me around in three hours?" Angath asked.

"Sure – meet you at eleven." Sammer says, when Mukti walks in, after saying by he turns to Mukti.

"Mukti we have requested Angath to come for you're show but he will agree only after meeting you. Don't ask!" Mukti only nods she was impatient to know why Sammer had called her hear. "Now down to business, it was decided you are going to cut an album with our company and we are going to do it in an official manner, contract and all." Mukti nodded again. Sammer dials his assistant and asks her to bring the file. Mukti reads the contract carefully every single line and then signs it. Sammer too signs it and they shake hands, over it like professionals. Sakshi congratulates her and tells her to come along. Once outside she tells Mukti, "Good beta, you acted in a very business like manner I am very proud of you." Mukti only smiles, soon she is introduced to several people with whom she would have to work on the album for. Mukti is very cordial to all of them, the whole thing covers two hours when she fix when to work with her and other details.

Seen three:

Everyone is in Angath's music room were he is sipping coffee and analysing Mukti who is busy looking at his instruments and other items. "She is a very simple girl, nice dresser but not the dressed to kill type. Great top, plane and aqua blue with light blue – she is good with colour combinations. There is something bugging her that is clear. Poor girl who knows what she faced." Aloud he askes Mukti, "You seem to like my music collection?"

"Yes it has a mixture of new and old beets." Mukti observed. "You seem to like R.D Burman a lot."

"Yes…so let's test you're music." Angath declared. Now Mukti had to sing a few songs, "How about some nice happy song?" Mukti sings the song Dill Mai Jaga from Sur. Angath is very happy, then he asks to sing the song Paridasi from Kai Pyar Na Ho Jai, and feels mesmerized by her voice and even sings a duet with her, Gum Hai Kisi Ka Pya and feels satisfied with her. At the end he asks Mukti to come to the night club with him in a very casual manner. Sammer already informed Mukti of Angath so Mukti agrees, "What time should I be ready?"

"Seven." Angath tells her and shakes hands with her. Again carefully looking at her expression, somehow he does not find any excitement on his touch but acts very normal.

Seen four:

Angath walks in to Mukti's house surprised to see her ready and reading a magazine. "Hmm she looks very different in a skirt and top." Angath thinks, as he looks at her from top to bottom.




"Yellow looks nice on her…very good." Angath thinks again but pretends to have just entered and says, "Sorry, sorry, sorry. I hope I did not keep you waiting."

"No not very long. I was just reading through an article." Mukti answered.

"You look ready? Shall we go?" Angath takes her hand and again analysis her. Mukti seemed in different to the whole situation and let her self be dragged away. Once they reach the car Angath is chattering away and Mukti simply listens, "You know I always wanted to bring music into every persons life and well many a times I have not been able to do so…music some how has always been something close to my heart. It has the cure to every thing every wound every single pain in you're heart."

"You're right, music is like a drug that wipes out everything and gives you the greatest of relaxation when the pain is too much." Angath looks at her, she has gone through a lot of pain in her life.

Seen five:

Prem is drinking in the club when Angath and Mukti walk in he looks at them but stays were he is. Angath is signing autographs again looks at Mukti, she is too busy looking at some of the decorations but does not pay attention at all. She was busy looking at some other items there finally getting rid of the girls Angath takes her to dance after signalling something to the D.J, they dance for Salama from Doom. Angath is very impressed as she handles the whole thing with grace. "Wow Mukti, that was great. I am ready to work with you." He declares she thanks him. During dinner Angath tells Mukti, "You have a nice smile but it never reaches you're eyes…but today when you were dancing it did. I like you're smile a lot Mukti it reminds me of my best friend." Mukti only bushes by the compliments. Again Angath notices she does not seem to worship him or even see him like this big star her words startle him. "Angath muja jana kyu asa lagha hai I have got a very good friend in you." Prem who is not very far away has tears in his eyes when she shakes Angath's hand in agreement of friendship.

"So Mukti what shall I get you for the soup?" Angath asked.

"Tomato?" Mukti said hesitantly.

"With cream?" Angath added. "I like it too."

Soon Angath and Mukti find they have a lot in common and Angath sees that she is not at all interested in him in any other way than work. Prem on the other hand was watching Mukti and noticed that despite the fact that she was changing some how she did not let her self forget her past. She was with him but she did not trust him, she was friendly but not exactly his friend. Prem at that moment so desperately wanted her to be near him close to him just in his arms. Somehow he knew that this could never happen…when he silently looked at Mukti.

Krishi


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Posted: 19 years ago
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Wow it's Angad right i mean Iqbal Khan frm KYPH u know what i was actually imaging d whole thing while reading
Superb superb part after Angad's entry.Love u .U made my day i hope Angad is not playing a cameo in ur FanFic
Do continue soon šŸ‘
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cool fanfic yaar thanks for updating
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Chapter three: A Rock Star in Making

Part one:

Seen one:

After Angath agrees to work on the show the album is also developing in full speed. Mukti sings with several developing singers and some established, today was her fifth recording with Angath's friend Josh. The director, Navine and music director Prathap are waiting for Mukti and Josh to arrive. Josh arrives first and he already knew a lot about Mukti from Angath. "So were is the great singer…I have heard so much about her I cant wait for the rehearsal." Josh declared.

"You won't have to wait for long." Mukti said as she arrived. Josh got up and shook her hand. Prathap and Navine who knew her very already hugged her in a friendly manner. "All right both of you would have to sing the song from Aithiraz Ya Dil Tum. So 1 2 3

Both of them sing the first two lines but Mukti is asked to bring more emotion…she does then Josh is to bring in more beat…one take and both of them sing it very well. Navine is very happy, and everyone leave.

Seen two: Part one

Mukti goes to the rehearsal's for a dance practice…her chemistry with Angath is wonderful. Both of them strike out very well in their practices and when taking a brake, Angath talks about his idea to the event organizer regarding an idea. The whole thing is in mute but is seems like everyone like the idea. Sharath walks in and is looking for Mukti, when he sees her he goes closer to her and softly calls her, "Mukti." She turns around to find Sharath and is shocked. "Umm Muja pata hai ki kuja yaha aana ka koi haak nahi hai…"

"Tho yaha kyu aya – jao. Get out!" there is a venom in her voice and this catches the attention of a few people including Angath. Sharath looks down and goes away quietly. He does not even complete what he came to say to her. Sharath goes to his car and he too cries bitterly thinking about how much Mukti trusted him and how she tried to hide her own pain during his happiness of becoming a father. The way she always played around with him and how she had got him and Sneha together once they fell in love. The way she struggled underneath him when he rapped her, even though unconscious. The amount of pain she went through remembering the whole episode that she fainted. The pain and disbelief in her eyes when she knew the truth, sadly he could never she the kind of trust in her eyes ever again.

Seen two: part two

Mukti goes away to the dressing room for some privacy. The rape track is running in her mind and she is crying bitterly, she thinks of how much she trusted Sharath and joked with him. The shock and pain she felt when the truth came in front of her eyes…a hand was placed on her shoulder. She turned around to find Angath his eyes healed a comfort…some how she felt as though there standing was a person who could take care of her. Her eyes looked down to hide her pain. It did not escape Angath he hugged her tightly as she wept in his arms. Only one thing he whispered, "I know about you…cry you just cry out…I won't stop you." That is what Mukti did cried for some time in Angath's arms finally she broke free once the pain had subdued, it would never leave that both of them knew. They go to the main hall were everyone is looking at Mukti strangely but she shouts out loud clapping her hands, "All right people get back to work we have a dead line to meet." Everyone get back to work.

Angath and Mukti practice a lot and start having a wonderful time, their bond increases their chemistry.

Seen three:

After a tiered days work Mukti comes home yelling, "Kaka mari lia ak coffee…please." Just then someone hands her a coffee just the way she likes it, she sees the person and is shocked. "Mom you are back, don't you have some work?"

"How is the coffee?" Sakshi asks.

Mukti takes a sip, "Perfect ma." They sit on the couch and Mukti makes her self comfortable.

"How are the rehearsals going?" Sakshi asked. Mukti's smile faded, but only for a second.

"It went great ma, tomorrow we are going for a stage trial plane first and then with the whole dressing and everything you know." Mukti's smile fading was noticed by Sakshi.

"Kya hua, what is bothering you?" she asked.

"Sharath came there – I cried for some time…that is all leave it." Mukti got up and left for her room.

Seen four:

Next day morning, Kamini is doing puja at a temple and Sharath is standing there though mentally he is else were. His guilt is partially killing him and there is another part of him that is badly wanting to go and tell Mukti he still wants to be her friend…something he has no right to be. "I separated her from her family, because of me her father died and she did not bother giving a report to the police." When his thoughts are moving on that line he hears someone calling out to him. "Sharath."

Mukti stood there, some how her expression was unreadable. Mai yaha sirf ya kena ka lia aya ki kal ka baath mai ithni unchai par jaugi ki jo harkath tum na mara sath kia vo to dust ho jaya ga. Mai phir sa har newspaper mai augi lakin ak ladki jiski balathka hui ka naam par nahi balki ak rock star ka roop mai. Har akbar mai Mukti Kappor ka bara mai news hoga - dunia ki har kona mai meri awaz aur mari music suna daga.Aur han ak aur baath - jaha tum apni baap ki," she glances at Shilandar who looks down, "Mai apni naam aur kamiabi kud karva dunga. Isi rastha par ja kar mai apni badla lungi - jis kam tum mara sath kia. Lakin mera baba ka mauth ka lia...You will have to pay for it – you and you're whole family. Just wait and watch." She turns to leave but turns back again and says, "Aur han Sneha - my so called best friend ye saab deko, she flings a stack of paper at her face. "Meri concert ki sara promotion details. It is going be such a big hit and after that no turning back, vo confidence hai mari andar. Aur han plese kabi ya math kaho ki tum mari dosth thi." Saying so she goes away when Snaha drops down crying like a child, her mother (Kamini) holds her daughter close to her and lets her cry. Snaha has now become a beti, and acts like one, she weres western clothes and not sari's or chudidars. Even Shilandar and Kamini say she is their beti and not bahu.

Seen five:

Mukti is looking at the costumes for the concert and checking the green room to see if everything is all right. Someone comes from behind and yells "Boo!" Mukti gets scared and when she turns around finds Josh. "Hai how come you are hear? How did you know I was hear?"

"Because I told him to come." Mukti turns around to find Angath. "He is my best friend we are more like brothers." Mukti remembers Snaha but she is quiet, "We were discussing the way you sang yesterday…looks like someone has a lot of passion in them." Mukti rolled her eyes.

"No nothing like that…" just then the someone calls Mukti and she goes away. Josh and Angath pick up some coffees and they start discussing about Mukti. "Hay Angath what do you like most about Mukti?"

"Her eyes, they are very beautiful." Angath answered remembering the close step in the disco when he saw her eyes up close. "Totally agree but when she sings…my god I feel as though she worships music."

"She does. I asked her jokingly after the recording she told me." Josh explained to him.

They watch Mukti perform…the whole rehearsals move very well and everyone do a good job. After lunch they perform completely this time…again perfect.

Krishi
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hay guys the next episode, the concert alone...I am going to focus on it compleatly. I am hopping to post it in a few hours - I need to update Dark Shadows as well. Hope everyone like it.

Krishi
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Posted: 19 years ago
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rockstar ki baat ho aur angad na ho! aise to halat nahin !!!! i like the way your mind works (surprisingly similar to mine!!) so keep up the good work!
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All right guys, I am going to post the next part. This is compleatly the concert on stage alone...Lods of costume presentaion. Bare with me.

Krishi
Edited by shakthi258 - 19 years ago

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