Pyar - the power of Love and Friendship - Page 2

arey wah! arey wah!! that was sooo good!! ab jaldi cont. karna, i am dying to see mr. prem's reaction!!! superb job krishi!!! 👏 👏

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an u spelled prem wroung its not pram its prem

Oops sorry! 😲 I will make the correction...

Thank's for pointing it out sweetazsugar. Ummm what is you're real name?

Krishi

Author's note:

This is a continuation from the last seen no brake. I had to go away sorry.

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Mukti is dragged away by Sammer and he tells her, "I never trained that part? How did you get it?"

Mukti smiles and says, "You need not train me for all this." Next she practically charms her way into Kumkum and Sumtih Wadwa's hearts.

"Mukti this is Mr. Sumit Wadwa and this is his wife Kumkum Wadwa." Sammer tell her. Mukti immediately responds, "Ashirwad dijia na," touching their feet, getting up she adds, "I can have victory only if I have the ashirwad and trust of my elders." When she says the word trust she looks meaningfully at Bajaj and Prarna who are nearby. They look down in same…

Kumkum and Sumith are very impressed and say, "Mukti you are such a nice girl you're mother should be proud of you." Mukti looks down modestly. Sumith asks out of curiosity, "Mutki what are you planning to do further?"

"Mr. Wadwa I am planning to pursue a carrier in music and also help my brother in the businesses as well. I can't let him face the burden all alone even I have a certain amount of responsibility towards the company." Both of them are impressed at her clarity of thought.

"You don't have to really, just sing for us that is enough for now." Sammer declares and excuses him self taking Mukti to intrudes to every one.

Kumkum tells Sumith, "Kithi achi ladki hai ya Mukti. Bilkul Sia ka thara…I want her to come and go every one will like her."

Sumith says, "We will make her do so."

Mukti continues to charm everyone around her with her sweet talk. Prarna and Bajaj move away to another end of the hall as they are not ready to face Mukti as yet. In the mean time Mukti sweeps every one off their feet, Pram who is drinking does not see Mukti. Suddenly when one of his buddies say something like, "Wow vo ladki sab ko carm kar rahi hai!" is when he turns around and sees who they are talking about. They are very close to the bar talking to Druv and Anthara who come there. He sees only her back and continues looking trying to remember were me met her. Sammer asks her, "Bachi you seem a bit tiered, come I will get you a soft drink." Mukti agrees and this is when she turns around and Pram sees her. He just feels the wind blow out of him when he sees her…her hair is left down casually and her eyes are clearly highlighted. He feels a clear attraction towards her but stays quiet. Sammer is ordering her a coke but Mukti interrupts and says, "Dav biay can I have an lime drink. I was not feeling very well since morning…lime is good for me in such cases."

"Anything for you baci - give her a lime drink." Sammer says. Just then some of the guys who commented on Mukti come over and ask him.

"Hay Sammer who is this girl yar? We have never seen her with you." Guy 1

"This is Mukti my sister." Sammer introduces her.

"Wow the now charmers are named Mukti Kapoor. Interesting." Guy 2

Prem listens to the whole thing but in silence. He gets another bear and drinks it in one swallow. Somehow looking at Mukti like this was hurting him…he wanted to be close to her but could not.

Seean two:

Pram just keeps drinking and looking at Mukti socialize. The camera focuses upon his face…tears seem to float in them. His memory goes back…the time when he mocked Mukti with Karan. The time when he had danced with her in Snaha and Sharath's party, how close he healed her at that moment so scared to even let her slip. The attack and how he felt pain when she fell down, the only time he bothered to get up and fight. How he felt lost that she had not come to see him…but when she did the way his inside set in a flame of happiness. The way she hugged him and also the way he tried to get a strait answer from her. Every memory went deep within his soul…the memory of Panchmashwar and their dance. How jealous he got when she spoke to those boys. Valentines day and his fear for her touch and at the same time longing for her…he remembered how he woke up for some reason that night and found her away form him and pulling her sleeping figure gently into his arms that night unable to bare the distance that had fallen between them. Watching her sleep like a baby that particular night in his arms. The next day morning when he just sat and kept looking at her before going away. The song Chu Kar Mara Man Ko is played in the barground…suddenly the whole place changes. The people in the party dim away and in a light Mukti is seen…

a magic setting came in as he saw himself dance with her. The flow of the wind likes magic in them as they danced with each other…the song was perfect for the two of them. He pulls her closer and a stand of her hair falls upon her face he reaches out to touch her. She disappears, the people become sharper. He understands it was all a dream nothing but a dream. The pain strikes across his face, his only consonance his drink.

Seen Three

Suddenly all the light's are turned out and the spot light is set on Sammer, holding a mike. "Ladies and Gentlemen today I had the pleasure of introducing my sister Mukti to most of you now I have the great pleasure of actually presenting to you her talent and her chosen path in a few minutes. The lights go out again and only the candles spread light, in that dim light Snaha looks for Mukti and notices she is gone. In the dim light a small sound is heard and grows louder, a guitar being played. The spotlight roams around and suddenly it stops near the pillar Mukti obvious to the light sits and plays the guitar. "She has changed her dress." Observes how these are the kind of clothes Mukti never wore and today she wore them as a performer.

The mike is attached to her, after playing the tune sings the song from the movie Koi App Sa (their them song) but after changing the words. When she does this she gets of from the place, goes down the stairs till she reaches down. Every one is amazed and just before she finishes the song she hands the guitar to someone and the D.J plays a strange beat and some girls and start makeing some dance moves when Mukti stands there for a few seconds. She dances and sings Sharara from Mara Yar Ka Shadi Hai and by the end of the song every one is clapping for her. When she finishes the performance finally Mukti takes a bow when everyone go wild. Prerna does not know if she should be proud or should be amazed. Anurag and Sam are awed by her performance, Pram seems to be the only one who is looking at her with a meanighfull look.

Krishi

WOW dat was brill 👏 👏
please cont soon

fantastic krishi!! i rly liked the way u described prem's emotions!! make prem regret more!! or better still make him JEALOUS!!!!!PLZ PLZ krishi!!! bye n take care!

wow gr8 scenes
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Part three:

Scean one

Mukti's performance revised a standing applause. Druv and Anthra were the first to congratulate her for her wonderful performance. Much latter came Snaha and Sharath when Sammer 'introduced' them to Mukti. "You performed very well." Snaha complimented her.

"Thank you Mrs. Guptha." Mukti answers somehow Snaha can't even work up the guts to tell her not to say so. Mukti on the other hand gives her a mean look but is sounding very polite. Snaha's eyes tear up but she fights back her tears and only smiles.

Mukti continues as though she never saw the tears in Snaha's eyes, "Suna ki aap aur Mr. Guptha bai ka saath kaam kar raha hia."

"Ji, we work on one of his projects." Sharath replied, finally coming out of the awe of the work Mukti just did. Sammer interrupts, "Mukti chalo, I want you to meet some people." He takes her and introduces her Mr. Bajaj, Anurag, Sam and Prerna. She acts cordially and coldly to them, this hurt them, she no more called them the way she would it was more like, "Sir and Mam" Prerna tried reasoning with her to call her choti ma again. The word she longed to hear now from the girls lips, just once and she could give her life for that. The whole time Pram's eyes were glued to Mukti.

"She has changed but she is still in pain, she is trying to hide it clearly." He thought, "She has been hurt by every one, Sharath, Snaha, Mother India, Daddy Cool, Dad Basu – Me." The last part comes with a certain stress but hesitancy. "Mukti might change her sure name and her self but still she is what she always was – a girl with lot of determination and strength to face the pain. Mukti kash kash is pal mai tari saath tha kash mai tuma apni baho mai la saktha tha kash Mukti." His eyes have pain but he gets up and moves away from the party.

Seen two:

Prem is loitering around aimlessly in the garden. Some how his mind does not keep away from Mukti and his past with her. Their relationship and the way it blossomed. The way he was attracted to her that night in Panchmashwar, in the disco. The way he healed her close to him self during the entire dance feeling a need for her at that very moment. The way his hands always found the right place in her body the moment he touched her. The softness of holding her close and rubbing his face through her hair when she was in his arms on the beach party. The touch that set his world apart, each time the 'excuses' of bumping into her, in the car when she had fallen over him. The shock and slow ignition of comfort between them and most importantly the way he would find excuses to increase the time with her for two or three seconds. After he fought with Shravan and Mukti pulled him away, the way he stopped for coconuts. Not that he was he was really thirsty or he really liked it…he just wanted to pull in a few seconds. The time when he practically killed Shravan when he asked if Mukti was one of those girls he would give as a bonus for a contract. His jealousy when she spoke to those boys and the kind of authority he healed when she was in trouble and he slapped her. Suddenly he heard voices, a girl and a boys, "I can't believe this tum na promis kia ki tum mara saath kuch waqth guzaro gi lakin jaisa tumhara bai aya, you are with him or you're mom. Only now I could get enough time to be with you."

A girl's voice replies, "Ara yar relax I will come with you besides I was about to ask you…" Prem turns around and the couple come to view. A heat ran down his spine, his mind was blocked of all thoughts. All he saw was the two of them. Karan stood there with Mukti, who was still in her performance clothes, he too looked very smart in a casual genes and a t-shirt. Some how way he was holding Mukti's hand in both of his did that made Prem feel uncomfortable. The cloudy expression on his face lit when Mukti gave the reply to his question – Prem observed. "I need to work on my music and I really need a place away from home and Sammer's business deals."

"Babes come on you are acting as though I am a paraiya mai tumhari apna hoon." Karan's statement drove Prem into a corner. Just then a new voice was heard, "Guys done flirting?" It was Shravan.

"Hay Mukti – god Karan is so lucky that you are not like his sister, it is very difficult not to get attracted to you." Mukti was like quick to answer.

"Who said I was you're sister?" Karan joined in the joke.

"Yes there needs to be no guilt get attracted to her all you want." Mukti laughed and so does Shravan. Littlie did they know the effect this would have latter on their relationship.

Seen three:

Prem moves away from there and goes home. Hopping a hot bath tub would console his wounded heart. "It won't I will throw in a few beers…" he decides. For hours he mixes the hot bath tub with the beer, each time his eyes could not forget Mukti and the divine beauty that she had. He recalled his own words, "Tum beautyfull ho, kuki tum andar sa beautyfull ho kuupsorath ho, aur vo ab tumhari chera par dika data hai." In the loneliness of his bathroom he said the words he could not say that day, "Usi kuupsurathi hai jis ka vajai sa ma tumpar attract hua tha. That is what made me like you." Suddenly the word stopped, "Like you…Like you…" his memory crossed across the contract fight and how he gave up the contract just for her. Not because she meant something for Mother India she meant something for him. Tears flowed down his eyes, "Mukti tum muja ithni achi kyu lagthi ho?"

Seen four:

Snaha and Sharath are going back and Snaha is crying, "She is like this to me because of what I did to her. Now I can't even be part of her sorrow or happiness. I deserve this." She thinks but stays quiet when Sharath asks her if she want to talk to Mukti. At home both of them go to their respective rooms and Sharath dwells in his guilt.

Krishi

Hay guys I hope I got the dilog right.

Krishi

superb!!! i loved the whole flirting between mukti-shravan-karan!!!! u r doing a fantastic job!!keep it up!!